The 3rd Annual Halloweensie Contest – aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!!

Eye of newt and toe of frog!  It’s finally time for

The 3rd Annual HALLOWEENSIE CONTEST!!!!!

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The Contest:  write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (title not included in the 100 words), using the words spooky, black cat, and cackle.   Your story can be scary, funny or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words (you can count black cat as one word) and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people 🙂  [Note: of you choose to use cackle as a verb, any form is acceptable – cackles, cackled, cackling…]

Post your story on your blog between now and Thursday October 31st by 11:59 PM EDT and add your post-specific link to the list below.  There will be no Would You Read It or Perfect Picture Books this week, so the post and the list of links will stay up all week for everyone to enjoy.  I hope everyone will visit everyone and you’ll all get your friends and relations to visit, read and enjoy too!  If you don’t have a blog and would like to enter, you can simply copy and paste your entry in the comments section below.  (If you have trouble, and alas, people sometimes do, just email your entry to susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com and I’ll post it in the comments for you!)

The Judging: my lovely assistant and I will narrow down the entrants to 3 (hee hee hee – you know how much trouble I have with only 3, so we’ll see) top choices which will be posted here and voted on for a winner on Monday November 4th.  The winner will be announced with Would You Read It on Wednesday November 6th.  If we get more than 20 entries, I will post 6 finalists and give prizes for 1st through 3rd.

The Prizes:

First Prize is a PB Critique from the amazing Corey Rosen Schwartz, author of The Three Ninja Pigs, Hop! Plop!, and the forthcoming Goldirocks, Ninja Red, and What About Moose? AND a copy of Linda Ashman’s new Nuts And Bolts Guide to Writing Picture Books (your choice of e-book or PDF)!  The winner will also be incredibly famous and able to boast that he or she won The Halloweensie Contest… and that is not something most people can say! 🙂

Second Prize is a PB manuscript and query letter critique from talented author Heather Ayris Burnell, author of Bedtime Monster.

Third Prize is a set of personalized signed picture books just in time for the holidays – Charlotte Gunnufson‘s Halloween Hustle, Tiffany Haber’s The Monster Who Lost His Mean, and Amy Dixon’s Marathon Mouse (perfect timing because NYC Marathon Sunday is next weekend!)

Please join me again in thanking these very generous authors for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books for holiday purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N or anywhere else if you like them, or supporting them in any other way you can dream up 🙂

I’m actually a little amazed (and worried) because the inaugural Halloweensie Contest, won by Cathy with Untitled was postponed due to 2 feet of snow – which around here is unusual for the end of October.  The 2nd Annual Halloweensie Contest, won by Julie with Hallow’s Eve was delayed and interfered with by Hurricane Sandy!  So fingers crossed we don’t get any wild weather this year!

Now then.  Time for my sample entry which I provide both because I wouldn’t ask you to do anything I wouldn’t do myself, and because in case anyone is worried about the quality of their entry they have only to read my abysmal attempts to be filled with confidence that their’s is MUCH better!

So without further ado:

A Witch For Spooky (100 words)

Spooky was a black cat with no witch.
Things just never worked out.
Grimelda’s potions were too stinky for his delicate nose.
“Scram!” said Grimelda when he kept sneezing.
Hauntabelle flew her broomstick like a maniac.
“Scat!” said Hauntabelle when he got broomsick.
Armathystle’s cackle made Spooky run and hide!
Spooky had almost given up when he found Serena.  She was very small, but she didn’t smell bad or fly fast or cackle.
“You can be my Pookie,” she crooned (which was close enough!), and she carried him home in a candy-filled plastic pumpkin.
Spooky had a witch at last!

and, to provide one in rhyme (kinda storta :))

Spooked! (100 words)

A pirate, a witch, and a gypsy queen
Went trick-or-treating one Halloween.
Away past the farthest edge of town
To the ramshackle home of Farmer Brown.
Up the dark lane where no one dared.
The gyspsy queen said, “We’re not scared!”
A spooky shadow loomed ahead!
“Relax,” said the pirate.  “It’s just a shed.”
“Eeeek!” shrieked the witch as she danced about.
“Something touched my leg!  Look out!”
“It’s just a black cat.  Come on, let’s go.”
But then came a sound they didn’t know.
Cackle-cackle!  “It’s witches on the loose!”
And they ran helter-skelter from the Farmer’s goose!

Everyone feeling better about their stories now?  I HOPE so! 🙂

I can’t wait to read all of yours!  I hope there will be a lot – the more the merrier!  And there are still 4 days to write, so you have time if you haven’t written yet.  Feel free to spread the word to your writing friends as well.

Remember to put your post-specific link (not your general blog link or people will find the wrong page if you post again before the contest is over) in the list below!

Happy Writing and Happy Halloween!!! 🙂

Don’t miss 19 entries in the comments section from Megan, Pia, Linda, Michele, Stacy, Laurie, Kathy, Patricia, Eileen, Nancy, Pam, Pat, Kristen, Teresa R., Teresa S., Suzy, Tracy, Heather, and Karen!  (Marcie is now on the link list at #15, Jackie is now on the link list at #33 – she has a brand new blog!, Laura S is on the list at #40, and Deirdre is on the link list at #52.  I hope I’ve caught all the doubles, but there may be a couple more.)

538 thoughts on “The 3rd Annual Halloweensie Contest – aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!!”

  20. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    What fun…this is a really unique twist on the Halloween story…glad Little Witch is going to get to have fun and not worry about keeping clean.:)

  22. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Super Halloween story (my 5-year old grandson's name is Jeremy and I can just see him, clutching the flashlight, calling, 'mommy, mommy, come help me!!!!'. Brave young man in your story…facing his demons, I mean, friends.:) Wonderful tension and satisfying ending.:)

  23. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Hi Suzy…so nice to meet you! Hurray for Black Cat who proved his worth.:) Love Principal Frankenstein and all the characters at Spooky School!

  24. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    So very glad you put it up here as well, Dierdre. I read it on your site but couldn't find a place to comment. Maybe I just didn't see it.
    This was a totally spooky scary story…the end of quite chilling and I loved the repetition of 'on the spookiest night of the year'.:)

  26. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    So true…I don't see well…and sometimes I have to ask for it to be changed several times…and it is even worse. I do understand that people want control over who comments on their blog…but I've been blogging for 3 years now with WordPress and have never had an unwanted comment get past their filters…WITHOUT using capcha.

  27. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    So glad Bitsy's wish came true.:) And lucky Bitsy…living where there are always smiling faces.;) Great story, Teresa! And Black Cat is a really creative name for a town in a Halloween story.:)

  28. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Oh my gosh…that is terrific…especially the repetition and the ENDING…'snatch him, catch him, stir him in'…shades of Hansel and Gretel. Love this one.:)

  29. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Eileen…i've often wished I could know what a particular dog or cat was thinking…now, thanks to you, I do.:) This was lots of fun…good for cat…who takes it all in stride.:)

  31. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Hi Kathy…nice to meet you! This is so very good…great rhythm and perfect Halloween setting. I LOVE the slimy icky sticky goo!

  32. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Oliver Toliver…that is too perfect. You MUST write a picture book with that character!!!! This was fun…I thought of Puss in Boots when you described Marty…and what a twist at the end.:)

  35. Vivian Kirkfield says:
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    Pretty sure I commented on your blog, Linda…but, just in case, I'll add one here. AWESOME! and lots of fun. “Witches shrieked on broomsticks sleek”…yes, great language and imagery.:

  39. Jackie Wellington says:
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    You are right. Yesterday I attempted to write a rhyming Thanksgiving story. Let's just say, I have a long way to go.

  40. Deirdre Sheridan Englehart says:
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    Vivian,
    Thank you for your comments, I am just getting my website started and still trying to figure it out! I am glad you liked the spooky story!

  45. Heather Greene says:
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    Thanks Susanna! I've never shared any writing before, but have always wanted to. Thanks for the opportunity, and the kind comments.

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