Okay. I know I failed on the chocolate front last WYRI when I was away on vacation, so let’s just start right out with that, shall we? I won’t keep you waiting a second longer!
I have the perfect chocolate delight for the summer heat which also happens to be perfect for breakfast because it’s a legitimate breakfast item! Are you ready?
FROZEN HOT CHOCOLATE!!! YUM 🙂
Ah! How refweshing! 🙂
Now, let’s get right to WYRI!
Today’s pitch comes to us from Lisa who says: A little about me. I’m a former elementary school social worker, mom of two, and have recently made writing my full time job. Two years ago I wrote my first picture book and just this past fall I decided it wasn’t going to do any good sitting on my computer. I began taking classes, reading craft books, attending conferences and workshops and just writing, everyday, writing. The original story is long gone but at last count I’ve got 42 other drafts and ideas jotted down. Oh yeah, and about four or five ready to go manuscripts. I have worked with kids my entire adult life and I feel strongly that this is the avenue in which I am meant to reach those little hearts and minds at this time in my life. On a random note, I’m a big fan of chocolate covered gummy bears. 😉
(Chocolate-covered gummy bears? She’d my kind of gal :))
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: That Tommy Thompson Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 5 and up) The Pitch: Just a girl???? Abigail Richmond was not about to let “that” Tommy Thompson ruin her day. In fact, she has just enough confidence combined with a dash of sass that allows her to prove she can do anything she puts her mind to, just like some other famous women in history. Luckily, she also has the smarts to know what she shouldn’t do.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Lisa improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read Itor on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above. There are openings in August (GULP!) so we could really use some new pitches! Send yours for your chance to be read by editor Erin Molta!
Lisa is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I am looking forward to seeing who wins the 4th of July Secret Mystery Contest!!! If you haven’t voted, please go HERE. It’s a very tight race so we need all the votes we can get!
Now, before I let you go, I have a quick little blog hop item. My friend and fellow horse lover, Robyn, who blogs over at Robyn Campbell, just asked me to participate in this “blog hop interview.” Naturally I said yes, since Robyn is my pal 🙂 The idea is, she sends me a bunch of questions of which I can answer as few as 4 or as many as all of them (don’t worry, I’m going with Option A – short and sweet for the time-challenged!). At the end, I tag three other writers, who will in turn answer their choice of the same interview questions on their blogs next week.
Here are las preguntas (I hope you’re admiring my splendid accent :)):
1. What are you working on right now? 2. How does it differ from other works in its genre? 3. What experiences have influenced you? 4. Why do you write what you do? 5. How does your writing process work? 6. What is the hardest part about writing? 7. What would you like to try as a writer that you haven’t yet? 8. Who are the authors you most admire? 9. What scares you?
Alrighty then. I shall proceed with the answering. Skipping right over the first 5… 🙂
6. What is the hardest part about writing? For me, there are two hardest parts: finding enough time and shutting up my inner editor. Time is an issue because I always seem to want to do more things than actually fit into a day. The inner editor problem has to do with perfection. Sometimes I’m so afraid to write something that isn’t good enough and thereby ruin a potentially great idea that I can’t seem to write anything at all. Other times, I spend so much time on page 1 that I never get to page 2! 🙂
7. What would you like to try as a writer that you haven’t yet? Well, this is a little bit cheating because I have tried it (very unsuccessfully!) but I would like to try writing a YA novel. I would also like to try my hand at some non-fiction.
8. Who are the authors you most admire? Why did I pick this one? What was I thinking? This is an impossible question because there are so many. But I love Joyce Sidman’s way with words. I love Oliver Jeffers’s ability to tell wonderful picture book stories with humor and also equally successfully to tell ones that are sweet. I love anything Sarah Dessen. And I think Patrick Ness knows how to tell a riveting story. I could go on indefinitely, but I’ll stop 🙂
9. What scares you? Not being good enough. Also competitive eaters who can eat 69 hot dogs in 10 minutes. That is VERY scary!
Thanks for reading! And please check out Robyn’s answers. Feel free to leave her a comment (read pleasepleaseplease leave her a comment because she is tons of fun:)) and let her know you hopped over from my blog.
Feel free to stop by their blogs today if you don’t already know them, and definitely next week when they post!
Oh and one more thing: I just found out my guest post with Sarah Forrest at Easy Read went up today. It’s about helping kids who struggle with reading find the fun in it (I have a M.A. and M.Ed in Counseling Psychology and Special Education of Children With Learning Disabilities, and before I wrote full time I helped kids with dyslexia learn to read.) Sarah would love some visits, and perhaps if you have a child who struggles with reading or know someone who does the post could be useful and you could share the word of her blog.
And now, after that detour :), please leave your comments for Lisa below and cast your vote for your favorite story in the 4th of July Contest!
I hope you all had a fabulous, sparkly, red, white and blue 4th of July!
So what’s new?
How’s the family?
Read any good books lately?
I guess I don’t really have much to post about today…
OH!
Wait a second!
What was I thinking?
Today’s the day you’ve all been eagerly awaiting!
The day I tell you that…
… yesterday I got to have waffles with the one and only awesome Mike Allegra! over at his blog!! and if you haven’t had a chance to read it, you should go check out his post!!! Click HERE and show him some love 🙂
But seriously, folks, I know what today really is. It’s FINALIST DAY for
TheFourthOfJulySecretMysteryWritingContest!
WHO ATE THE BLUEBERRIES???!!!
As always, the decision as to who should make the cut was agonizing. This contest was a particularly tricky assignment for those who chose to take it on, and everyone did such an amazing job. I mean, a secret or mystery? Set on 4th of July? In 400 words or less? What was I thinking? That is not a challenge for the faint of heart! So I think every single person who entered a story deserves a round of applause and a nice fat slice of apple pie (it’s American) a la mode (your choice of ice cream) 🙂 You are all winners just for participating and I thank you all for your bravery in putting your stories out there for all of us to read. I know it’s scary. But every single one of you should be proud of the job you did, and we are all grateful to you for providing such wonderful and enjoyable entertainment!
***APPLAUSE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE*** (This is the part where we’re all cheering for YOU! :))
The decision was so difficult that I roped in an extra assistant judge. Thank you SO MUCH, Extra! (you know who you are, but I never divulge the identity of my assistants, so everyone else will just have to wonder :))
Much as I’d like to give a prize to everyone, I’m not that well off. So we will have to content ourselves with 7 okay sorry 8 finalists. Their stories are below, and you now have the chance to read them (or re-read them) and vote for your favorite – the one you think should be declared the winner!
Before I present the finalists, though, I’d like to give special mention to a couple of people.
First, Honorable Mention to Robyn Campbell for her wonderfully creative twist on the almost-not-signing of the Declaration Of Independence Lenny To The Rescue, Julie Rowan-Zoch for her fantastic A Puddling Mystery, Heather Dent for her dog’s eye view in BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!, and Teresa Robeson for her delightful Who’s Katy (which was my 10 year old nephew’s favorite :)).
Second, a great big fireworks display of congratulations to our two under-12 entrants, Erik (Facts Are Stubborn Things) and Brianna (Who Is In The Flag Costume)!!! Seriously! The adults who entered had a hard time with this contest, and these two kids showed us all up 🙂 Congratulations to you both for your terrific stories, and there will be a little something special for you if you email me 🙂
Now then. There’s no more putting it off. Time to read the finalists and choose a winner. Please cast your vote by Thursday July 11 at 6 PM EDT.
Ready?
#1 Birthday Presents For America
One July day, while our cousins were visiting, my mother announced we needed to plan a birthday party. “A birthday party? For who?” asked George, my older brother. “For America!” she said. Mom explained that our country was turning a whopping 237 years old. She said we needed to bring presents to the party. If we didn’t know what kind of present to give America, Mom suggested we read some history books. The six of us got busy. My three cousins, Madison, Adam and Jackson, headed to the library. George disappeared into the garage, and I went to the kitchen. My younger brother, Thomas, stayed in his room. I worked all afternoon on my present. I sifted flour. I rolled out dough for a crust. I added filling and baked my pie in the oven with Mom’s help. My cousins returned from the library. They said their presents were ready. But I didn’t see any presents. George skipped into the house with an empty crate. What kind of gift is that? Thomas was still in his room. I peeked inside. But he wasn’t making anything. He was playing with his turtle. I strutted back to the kitchen. I just knew my gift would be the best. It was time to show our presents to the whole family. Madison suggested we vote who would go first. We each wrote down a name. Madison tallied our votes. “Actually,” she giggled, “I win because my present to America is preserving democracy by conducting an election!” Adam went next. He asked us to hold hands and bow our heads. He said a prayer for America, and he gave thanks for the right to practice a religion. Then Jackson walked up to our grandfather and saluted him. He thanked him for protecting America during the war and for keeping us safe. Grandpa’s blue eyes shined. George turned over his crate and stood atop. “That’s my soap box!” he said proudly. “My gift to America is my right to make a speech!” I was next. I divided my apple pie into six pieces – one for each child. “My present is the gift of equality!” I said in between bites. Finally, it was Thomas’ turn. He led us into the backyard and set his beloved turtle loose. “My gift to America is freedom,” he said. We took one more vote. We decided Thomas’ present was the best.
#2 Fishing Boat To Freedom
“We’re having a 4th of July party tomorrow, class,” said Mrs. Evans. “A secret will be shared. So today, I want you to write about what freedom means to you.”
JeeSoo thought about her new freedom in America with foster parents and her own secret—to become an American.
At recess, JeeSoo asked Anna, “How do you become an American?”
“Maybe you have to recite the Pledge of Allegiance perfectly,” said Anna.
JeSoo stood tall with her hand over her heart and recited it.
“I don’t feel like an American,” she said.
JeSoo asked Isaac, “How do you become an American?”
“You have to meet the president,” he said.
JeSoo didn’t think she could travel to Washington, D.C.
“How do you become an American?” she asked Abbie.
“I think you have to be born in America.”
JeSoo sighed. She could never be an American.
Back in class, JeeSoo looked out the window. The sky became the topsy-turvy sea. She saw her small fishing boat with her parents and another family who escaped North Korea lost in the storm. Up and down, up and down. A huge wave came crashing, and they all fell into the icy water. Only JeeSoo had survived.
JeeSoo wrote: Before I came to America, I had no freedom. I worked in the rice paddies. We had little money. I ate once or twice a day.
Only two outfits hung in my closet—one for summer and one for winter. My father worked for the Great Leader of our country until he became too sick. They fired him, and we had little choice but to escape out of North Korea. We sailed on a fishing boat to freedom.
JeeSoo remembered being lifted out of the water, so soggy and weak, onto the U.S. Navy ship. And a wonderful soldier and his wife had become her foster parents.
JeeSoo hurried home and told her foster mom about the party.
“I know, Sweetheart,” she said. “I’m helping.”
The next day JeeSoo’s eyes widened as she read the banner: Congratulations, JeeSoo! American flags hung around the room.
“On July 4th you will become an adopted American citizen,” said her foster mom. The class cheered.
Outside the sky no longer looked like a stormy sea. She saw hues of red, white, and blue.
“I’m proud to become an American,” she said.
#3 Harold’s Hat
The day was here! Finally!
Parades!
Hot dogs!
Swimming!
Fireworks!
Oh, and there was also The Hat.
Harold could hardly think of The Hat without saying, “Mwah-ha-ha!”
He’ll show that Betsy Lominzer, that’s for sure.
Last year Betsy wore a special Fourth of July hat to the town parade – a nice one that had flashing lights and a cup holder for her lemonade.
Harold asked if he could try it on and she said no. Not even for one teeny, tiny little milisecond.
“Fine,” thought Harold. “I’ll show you next year.”
And, well…Mwah-ha-ha!
The Hat took Harold six months to build. He kept it out of harm’s way in his closet.
At least he thought he did.
It must be out of harm’s way in his toy box.
Hm.
Out of harm’s way in his dresser?
Um…
Under the bed? Behind the hamper? In the closet again, just to make sure?
“MOOOOOOOM!”
“Whaaaat?” Mom was trying to light the barbecue.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the red, white and blue glitter, and the flashing lights, and the siren, and the cup holder?”
“No,” she replied. “Where on earth did you get…? ”
“DAAAAAAAD!”
“Too loud!” Dad was pouring chlorine in the pool.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the battery powered waving flag action and the cannons that shoot sparks?”
“You have a hat that shoots sparks?” Dad asked. “That could be a fire haz–”
“BIIIIIIILLY!”
“Ba!” Billy was sucking on his foot.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the megaphone and the solar powered jukebox that plays a medley of Sinatra songs when you push a red button on the brim?”
“Do-be-do-be-do,” Billy said.
Wait. That wasn’t Billy.
Harold followed the do-bes to Sparky’s doghouse and found him swooning to Sinatra’s crooning.
The hat was safe and sound.
“Good boy.”
Off to the parade! Off to find Betsy Lominzer! Mwah-ha-ha!
But…well…Betsy’s hat had improved a bit since last year.
It had improved quite a lot, actually.
“Wow! Can I try on your hat for just one teeny, tiny, little millisecond?” Harold asked.
“No,” Betsy Lominzer replied.
“Fine!” thought Harold. “I’ll show you next year.”
In an instant, Harold’s mind filled with new and exciting ideas. A bigger hat. A better hat. The Best Hat Ever.
His lips curled into a smile.
“Mwah-ha-ha!” he said.
#4 The Missing Fourth
The Fourth of July was missing.
When people in Blueville flipped their calendars to July, the 4 had been cut out.
The mayor ran out of Town Hall. “The town’s bunting has been bagged!”
The Celebrations Committee exploded, “The fireworks have all gone up in smoke!”
The bandleader cried, “Someone’s marched off with the instruments!”
“We must call a Town Meeting!” said the mayor.
“We need to collect money for more fireworks!” said the Celebrations Committee.
The band leader sang, “Seventy-six kazoos… nope, it’s just not the same.”
They ran around, tearing their hair. “What can we do?”
The kids huddled together. “What we need to do is find who did it,” said Tommy.
“And bring the Fourth back!” said Jennifer.
“Like all the Star Wars fans say, ‘May the Fourth be with us’!” said Jack.
“Not May, July!” said Debbie. She’d never seen Star Wars.
“We need to look for clues,” Jack said. “Things can’t just vanish.”
“We need to find a motive,” Tommy said. “Why would anyone steal the Fourth of July?”
“Everybody likes the Fourth of July,” Debbie said.
“Not everybody,” said Jennifer. “People who don’t like fireworks. Or parades. Or noise.”
“AHA!” They all said together.
They sneaked down the street where the band would have played. They went over the hill where the fireworks would have been.
“Look!” said Tommy, pulling a trombone case from under a bush.
“And see this!” Debbie said, waving a sparkler in the air.
“And a bag full of 4s from the calendars!” said Jack.
Jennifer put some bunting on like a cape.
“You kids get away from my stuff!” yelled Old Man Mudgeon. His cur, Snarly, grrrrred.
“It isn’t your stuff, it belongs to Blueville!” they said. “Why did you take it?”
“It’s too dang noisy. Every year those fireworks and the band just about knock my ears off.”
“I can fix that,” said Tommy. “Wait right here!”
He ran all the way to the store. “Do you sell earplugs?”
“Turnips taste better, but yup, here are earplugs.”
Tommy raced back to Old Man Mudgeon and gave him the earplugs.
So Old Man Mudgeon lived silently ever after, and Blueville turned back into Red, White and Blueville every Fourth of July.
#5 Mouse’s Missing Magic
Mouse bustled up her path and waved to her neighbor, Skunk.
She had so much to do before tonight!
Mouse threw a party every Fourth of July.
She invited her closest friends.
She served lots of yummy food.
But most of all, Mouse made her magic brew and splashed the night sky with sparkles and glitter and brilliant colors.
“This should be the best batch of magic yet.” She chuckled. “I’ve added extra sizzle to the swizzle.”
Mouse stepped into the kitchen and gasped.
“My pot of magic brew is missing!”
Mouse spotted smudges on the floor. They glowed.
“Footprints! The thief must have spilled some brew.”
Mouse followed the glowing prints outside. They led past Mole’s burrow.
Mouse knelt down and called, “Hellooo!”
Mole poked his head out of the hole. “Yes?”
“Have you seen my pot of brew?”
Mole blinked. “It’s gone? Oh, dear!” He climbed out. “I’ll help you search.”
Mouse and Mole continued the hunt.
“The footprints are fading,” said Mole.
Mouse’s heart pattered. They must find her magic! She could never make another batch in time for the party.
The trail wound past Squirrel’s tree.
Mouse looked up and called, “Excuse me!”
The leaves trembled and Squirrel peeked out. “Yes?”
“Have you seen my pot of brew?”
Squirrel’s tail twitched. “It’s missing? Oh, no!” He scampered down. “I’ll help you search.”
So Mouse, Mole and Squirrel continued the hunt.
But the footprints finally faded away.
Mouse sighed. “What will I do?”
Rustle. Rustle.
“What’s that?” she whispered.
Rustle. Rustle.
“It’s coming from that bush,” said Mole.
They crept forward and peered around the bush.
“The magic brew!” said Mole.
“It’s Skunk!” cried Squirrel.
“Why did you take my brew?” asked Mouse.
Skunk hung her head. “Because I’m lonely. Nobody invites me to parties. Every year I watch your Sky Show from my yard.” She sniffed. “I thought if I had the magic brew, maybe I could throw my own party.”
Mouse said, “I’m sorry I didn’t invite you, Skunk.”
“I’m sorry I took your brew,” she said. “I’ll bring it back.”
“We’ll help!” said Mole and Squirrel.
The friends carried the pot to Mouse’s home just in time for the party.
When it grew dark, Mouse splashed the night sky with sparkles and glitter and brilliant colors.
“The swizzles really sizzle,” said Skunk. “It’s the best batch yet.”
“And the best party, too!” said Mouse.
#6 Guessing Game
Maggie sat on a tall stool in her kitchen, watching her mother. She was very, very bored.
“Whatcha doing?” she asked her mom.
Her mother dropped blueberries and strawberries into cups of vanilla yogurt. “Making a treat for the picnic,” she said.
“What picnic?” asked Maggie.
“I can’t tell you,” whispered her mother. “It’s a secret.”
“A secret?” whispered Maggie. Maggie loved secrets! She was very, very good at figuring out secrets. “What if I guess it?”
“I suppose that will be all right,” said her mother.
“Is it a picnic for all of us?” asked Maggie.
“Yes,” said her mother. She picked up a baseball cap with an American flag on it. “Don’t let your brother leave without his hat.”
“Aha!” said Maggie. “So we’re going somewhere for the picnic!”
Her mother nodded.
“But why?” asked Maggie. “It must be a special picnic. Is it a party?”
Her mother smiled. She collected blue paper plates and put them in the picnic hamper. “Put these cups in there, too, please.”
Maggie stacked red plastic cups inside the hamper.
Maggie’s dad walked into the kitchen. “Is everything ready for the picnic?” he asked.
“We’ll need the extra-big blanket,” said her mother. “The one with stars and stripes on it.”
Maggie sat on her stool, thinking of the secret. What kind of party could the picnic be? Last week, her softball team had a party. But that was the last team party of the summer.
“And don’t forget the cupcakes!” called her mother.
Cupcakes! “Is it a birthday?” asked Maggie.
Her mother smiled again.
A birthday! Maggie thought of her grandparents and her best friend and even her next-door neighbors. But she did not think any of them had a birthday today. She jumped off her stool and walked to the wall calendar. “Let’s see,” said Maggie. She looked at the month. “July,” she read. She looked at the dates. “1, 2, 3, 4,” she counted. Maggie crossed her arms and thought and thought.
“Time to go,” said her dad.
But she had not figured out the secret yet! Her family started for the door with the hamper, the blanket, and the cupcakes.
Who has a birthday on the 4th of July, wondered Maggie.
“Wait,” said Maggie. She followed her family outside. “I know the secret! It’s America’sbirthday party!”
Her mother laughed. “How did you ever figure it out?”
#7 Who Ate My Hotdog
Every Fourth of July, my entire family comes over for a barbecue. Usually, it’s a lot of fun. This year, there was a serious problem. Somebody ate my hotdog.
It was there one minute, and then it was gone. I left it to get a root beer. When I came back, there were only some crumbs from the bun.
“Who ate my hotdog?” I asked.
Dad said he’d been grilling the whole time.
Mom said she ate too much of Aunt Rosie’s pasta salad and was already full.
It was probably Peter. It was the sort of thing my older brother would do.
Nope, it wasn’t Peter. He’d been helping Uncle Fred get the fireworks set up on the dock.
Could grandpa have done it? There’s no way grandpa would steal my hot dog. But wait, is that ketchup on the corner of his mouth? I always eat my hotdogs with lots of ketchup.
“Grandpa did you eat my hot dog?”
He chuckled. “No, my boy, I ate my hotdog, not yours. But I think I might know who did.”
He pointed a long shaky finger toward the picnic table. Who was he pointing at? Cousin Sally? Then something caught my eye. A hotdog was moving across the table. It inched its way along the red and white checkered table cloth. It went past the potato salad, past the watermelon, past the corn on the cob until it fell to the ground.
I peered into the shadows under the table and then I saw the guilty party. Our dog, Jack, gobbled up the spoils of his sneaky theft.
Well, at least I knew who ate my hotdog. The only thing to do now was to ask dad for another one. I made my way back to the grill. Dad gave me another hotdog. I covered it with ketchup. I sat at the table and was about to enjoy my first bite when I realized something awful had happened.
Someone drank all my root beer!
#8 Mixed Messages
Sweat rolled down Alex’s neck as he laid the blankets on the lawn. He wanted everything to be perfect for the fireworks show tonight. “Hey Alex, I’ve got a message for you.” It was Alex’s next-door neighbor. He was carrying lawn chairs back and forth between the two yards. “If you’ve got a cold, then your mom made you itchy and your grandpop is freezing.” “What is that supposed to mean?” asked Alex. “No idea, but that’s what my little sister said to tell you.” Alex went in search of little Lola. He found her parading through the grass waving her teenie American flag. “Lola, what were you supposed to tell me? I’m feeling fine and my Pop-Pop is in the house.” Lola wrinkled her nose, thinking hard. “If you’re hot and cold, then your mom may be itchin’ and your grandpop is freezin’. Or somethin’ like that. If you don’t believe me, ask your daddy.” Alex left Lola looking for lightning bugs and headed for the patio. He found his dad cooking the last of the hot dogs on the grill. “It’ll be dark soon. Ready for the fireworks?” he asked. “Almost, Dad. The neighbors said you had a message for me?” “Oh yeah. If you’re hot and cold, then Mom may be in the kitchen, and your Pop-Pop is freezing. It doesn’t make any sense to me, but that’s what your Grammy yelled from the porch. Maybe you should go ask her.” Alex dragged himself up the porch steps. He was sure he must be melting. This was the hottest Fourth of July he could remember. Grammy was sitting on the porch swing, hoping to catch a breeze. “Did you get my message, Alex? Your mom said if you’re hot, there’s cold lemonade in the kitchen, and isn’t it nice your Pop-Pop is freezing. Though how he can be, in this weather, I’ll never know.” “Thanks, Grammy,” said Alex. “I’ll bring you a glass of lemonade when I come back.” But Alex was still confused. He shuffled through the front door, expecting to see his Pop-Pop bundled under a quilt. Instead he spied a note from Mom. It said:
Gone to the store to buy more sparklers. If you’re hot, there’s cold lemonade in the kitchen and ice pops in the freezer. Be back soon. Love, Mom
Again, please cast your vote by 6PM EDT on Thursday July 11, and thank you all so much for participating, reading, and voting! These contests couldn’t happen without all of you!
Please tune in Wednesday for Would You Read It, and Friday for the announcement of the contest winner!!!
I am so excited about this! I look forward to these contests so much because so many wonderful, talented writers contribute such fantastic stories! I can’t wait to read what you’ve all come up with this time!!!
The Contest: Write a children’s story, in poetry or prose, maximum 400 words about the 4th of July in which a secret is revealed or a mystery is solved! You may choose any 4th of July setting you like: country, city or small town, sleepaway camp or vacation, with family or friends or all alone, at a parade, a picnic, a fireworks show or a bonfire, in the middle of the woods or in a country where the locals don’t celebrate 4th of July. Your secret or mystery doesn’t have to be anything earth-shattering. It could be who took Granny’s award-winning Fourth of July cherry pie? Or what did Robin tell Sarah who told Olivia who told Gracie about Anna in cabin 7? Or where did the flags for the parade disappear to? Or why doesn’t Becky Sue want to go to the fireworks show? Or what Old Mrs. Hootenspiegal knows about the mayor! Just as long as a secret or mystery of some kind is revealed or solved by the end.
Post: Your entry should be posted on your blog between Monday July 1 at 12:01 AM EDT and Friday July 5 at 11:59 PM EDT, and your post-specific link should be added to the link list below which will remain up through Sunday July 7 (no Would You Read It on Wednesday July 3… and although the post will remain up through Sunday to give everyone plenty of time to read and enjoy, the entry list will be closed at midnight Friday so we have time to judge). If you don’t have a blog but would like to enter, please copy and paste your entry into the comments on this post by midnight Friday July 5th. (If anyone has trouble commenting, which unfortunately happens, please email me and I’ll post your entry for you!)
TheJudging: My lovely assistant and I will narrow down the entrants to five (or possibly a couple more :)) finalists which will be posted here on Monday July 8 for you to vote on for a winner. The vote will be closed at 6 PM EDT on Thursday July 11 and the winner will be announced on Friday July 12.
ThePrizes!: The first place winner will receive (I am not making this up!) a picture book manuscript critique from Simone Kaplan!!!!! Yes, THE Simone Kaplan!!! I wish I knew how to put that up in lights and make it all sparkly! 🙂 Simone Kaplan has been editing children’s books and magazines for over 20 years. She was an editor at Henry Holt and Company, and then a Senior Editor at HarperCollins. More recently she has worked as a consultant to various authors, illustrators, and publishing houses. She also runs a wonderful website called Picture Book People(where you can sign up for her free newsletter among other things.) A prize like this makes me wish I could compete in my own contest! 🙂 If we get more than 15 entries, we will place through 3rd. If we get more than 25 entires we will place through 5th. Additional prizes will include: – a $50 Amazon gift certificate – a picture book manuscript critique from yours truly (a $75 value) – the writing craft book of your choice (up to $30 value) – a place in Making Picture Book Magic (my online PB writing course) (a $99 value)
Here is my sample (and I will admit this was a REAL challenge for me! I’ve never tried writing a mystery before (as I’m sure you’ll be able to tell!), so that was hard enough, but fitting it into 400 words nearly killed me! In fact, I didn’t quite manage, but it was past my bedtime. I had to cut so much out to get it near the word count that I’m not sure it even makes sense anymore 🙂 Be forewarned this may qualify as the worst story I’ve ever written – that’s what happens when you over-schedule and write at the last minute! 🙂
The 4th Of July Parade
Lola longed to lead the Crumb Creek 4th of July Parade.
But Granny crashed her motorcycle and broke her arm, and it looked like there would be no 4th of July Pie this year.
“Never mind the parade,” said Lola. “I’ll help you bake.”
“Fiddlesticks!” said Granny. “I can bake pie with one hand tied behind my back!”
Lola gave her a hug. “I’ll be your other hand right after tryouts.”
“Knock their socks off, Sugar-Pie!” said Granny.
At tryouts, the boys hopped on YankeeDoodlePony one after another. Lola hated to admit it, but they were pretty good riders.
When it was her turn, Lola rode her best.
Afterwards George said, “You won’t win.”
“I have just as much chance as you,” said Lola.
Henry said, “You’re too small.”
“I’m the right size for YankeeDoodlePony,” said Lola.
Billy said, “You’re not a boy. Yankee Doodle was a boy.”
Lola had nothing to say to that.
“This year, the leader will be Lola!” announced Mayor Fluffbottom.
Billy had nothing to say to that.
George stuck his tongue out at Lola, but she was too happy to care.
“They picked me, Granny!” Lola sang, rolling piecrust while Granny picked one-handed through seventeen quarts of blueberries.
“I knew they would!” said Granny.
By bedtime, fifty pies cooled on the counters.
“How will you get these to the Village Green without your motorcycle?” worried Lola.
“I’ll figure a way,” said Granny. “Sweet dreams, Sugar-Pie. Big day tomorrow!”
In the morning Lola raced to the barn.
“Hey!” said Billy. “YankeeDoodlePony is gone!”
“What?” Lola gasped.
George and Henry smirked.
“What did you do with him?” demanded Lola.
“Nothing!” the boys insisted.
The parade started in thirty minutes!
Lola had to find YankeeDoodlePony!
“Help me look for him!” she begged.
They searched high and low, but YankeeDoodlePony was nowhere to be found.
Lola discovered hoofprints and wheel tracks on the driveway.
“It looks like someone drove a pony out here, but he’s long gone. I guess I won’t be leader after all,” Lola said miserably.
Clip-clop-rattle-rattle.
YankeeDoodlePony came down the road at a smart trot pulling a little cart. Granny drove one-handed!
“Sorry I’m late, Sugar-Pie! Had to deliver the pies!”
Lola turned to Billy, Henry and George. “I’m sorry I thought you hid YankeeDoodlePony,” she said.
“That’s okay,” said Billy.
Lola hopped aboard YankeeDoodlePony
George handed her the flag.
Then Lola rode out to lead the 4th of July Parade.
She sat tall and straight and proud.
YankeeDoodlePony pricked his ears and pranced.
The American flag waved its stars and stripes in the hot breeze.
The crowd along the sidewalk cheered.
And afterwards, there was 4th of July Pie for everyone!
Now then! That was quite spectacularly awful! So I hope it will fill you all with confidence, because I know you can all do better than that!
CAN’T WAIT to read your stories!!! Don’t forget to add your post-specific links below, or copy and paste to the comment section! Look for Sidney, Sian, Pam, Michele, and Brianna’s stories in the comments.
I know my blog has gone to the dogs this week 🙂 Skipping regular posting days – quel horror! 🙂 And (I realize this borders on treason) no chocolate today because I don’t have any.
But that’s because I’m here…
…staying here…
yes, that is Princess Blue Kitty herself! 🙂
…among the beach plum blossoms….
…with the likes of this little guy in the front yard…
… and my crew of miscreants :)…
…technically on vacation and hanging out with the fam. (Which means limited work time, so I apologize for any disruption you may be experiencing. One person reported having to resort to a calendar without my blog posts to remind them what day it was – so very sorry! – things will be back to normal soon :))
Meanwhile, so that you won’t have too much blog withdrawal, we have a regular WYRI Wednesday starting with Straight From The Editor for the May Pitch Winner.
You will remember that Sian won the May Pitch Pick with this pitch for Thirsty For Words (PB ages 4-8):
Benedict the Vampire likes nothing more than snacking on a tasty noun. He’s on a rampage, gobbling up ‘words, whispers, songs and shouts’ until the city is silent. Who can stop him? Something furry lurking in the sewer could have the answer….
Here are editor Erin Molta’s comments:
This sounds intriguing.
But in order to really snag an editor’s interest you might consider expanding just a tad on the furry creature. Is it a battle of the parts of speech? Does the furry creature relish verbs and likes nothing more than impaling and spearing and stabbing hungry vampires . . . That would provide an hook that is somewhat unique for an editor.
As always, I find Erin’s insight very helpful and I hope you do too!
Now, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from Alicia. Alicia is a writer new to children’s books, mom of two, who wishes she were a little craftier. You can follow her at aliciafinnnoack.com, where she blogs about books and writing, and on pinterest, where she keeps tabs on fun kid activities: http://pinterest.com/carmilla222/
Working Title: Granola Bars For Dinner Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 3-7) The Pitch: Quentin is a kid who loves granola bars and wishes he could eat them all the time, even for dinner! But when Quentin discovers he is tired of all the regular granola bars at the store, he decides there is just one thing to do: make a new kind of granola bar. A kid-friendly recipe (for pizza granola bars) will be included.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Alicia improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read Itor on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above. There are openings in August so we’re about ready for some new pitches! Send yours for your chance to be read by editor Erin Molta!
Alicia is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I am looking forward to the 4th of July Secret Mystery Writing Contestwhich will be starting on Monday!!! So exciting! I hope I get an idea and write my sample by then 🙂 and I can’t wait to read all of yours! In case you somehow missed the details and would like to join the fun for a chance at fabulous prizes, hop over HERE and check it out!
We’ve got a busy day, so I hope you ate your Wheaties!
Except, when you think about it, Wheaties aren’t chocolate, so they are really not an appropriate choice for Wednesday.
I know! How about some chocolate cereal?
Okay, no.
That will simply not do at all.
I’m sorry. It looks like dog kibble. And much as I love my dogs I do not wish to share their breakfast. Not to mention, that doesn’t look anything like real chocolate should look.
I tried to go the truly healthy route with cereal, but I just can’t do it.
Put that away and let’s break out the Snickers 🙂
Ah! That’s MUCH better. Now we’re ready to get down to business!
First, Straight From The Editor for our April winner, Pam.
You will recall her pitch:
Flood Dogs (Picture Book ages 5-8)Based on a true story, FLOOD DOGS tells of a girl, her two dogs, and the flood that comes between them. As Cadence fears the fate of her dogs, she must also face the devastation of her town and home. When she finally reconnects with her beloved pups, Cadence is overjoyed to discover just how much she still has.
And here are editor Erin Molta’s comments:
I am intrigued by the pitch for your story.
I offer just a few minor tweaks and I suggest thinking about a pithier title. Since Katrina and the Hurricane Sandy flooding, there are a lot of stories such as this coming in and something a tad catchier might help pull this one up from the pile. Also the last sentence would probably work better if you were more specific. Instead of how much she has—what about something like how much love, how much XXX she still has . . .
I wish you the best of luck with this!
As always, I find her insight very helpful!
Next, I am happy to announce the winner of the May Pitch Pick.
And the winner is…
… SIAN with her pitch for Thirsty For Words (which was originally The Word Thief.)
Congratulations, Sian!!! Your pitch has already been sent to Erin for her thoughts. And congratulations to all our other pitchers for great story ideas, wonderful pitches, and thoughtful improvements based on reader feedback. You all did an excellent job. Good luck with your stories!
Now, onto today’s Would You Read It. Phew! Anyone need another Snickers?
Today’s pitch comes to us from the lovely Elaine, who we met in April with her pitch for Giant At The Gym. In case you don’t remember her, Elaine isa Mom of two, wife of one, mom to three furry kids and second grade school teacher.
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: The Chase Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-7) The Pitch: A bored little boy stares at the moon, moaning about being bored while missing the stunning excitement that’s unfolding around him – pirate cows, zombie ice skaters, mummy librarians… If only he’d look down instead of UP. THE CHASE is a humorous picture book that explores the common childhood experience of what appears like the moon is following them, and turns it on its head.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Elaine improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read Itor on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above. There are openings in August which isn’t that far away, so we’re about ready for some new pitches! Send yours for your chance to be read by editor Erin Molta!
Elaine is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I am looking forward to being able to take my daughter to the airport at the crack of dawn on Friday without feeling guilty for not paying attention to Perfect Picture Books, since we are now on summer hiatus. I will also take this opportunity to let you know that I will be mostly away from my computer next week, so don’t be shocked if the blog is a little bare and I’m not around visiting you all. But don’t worry! Would You Read It will still be up next Wednesday… assuming I write the post before I leave 🙂
No seriously 🙂 I spent the weekend at the inaugural 21st Century Children’s Non-Fiction Conference. It was fantastic and I highly recommend it. (And Joanna – I got to meet Bo Zaunders who created The Artist Mortimer! Everyone see Joanna’s post HERE) (Oh, and I also got to meet the lovely and talented Laura Purdie Salas and she signed my copy of A Leaf Can Be for me!) (Oh, and I also got to meet Karen Robertson who is starting a course in how to create apps. She was a wonderful speaker and very nice, and if any of you are interested, go check it out HERE… but here I go digressing.) The POINT is that I find I’m very behind with work and family after abandoning both for nearly three days… shocking 🙂
So today, instead of a proper blog post, I give you this little gem. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do 🙂
Kurt Vonnegut, Author of Fiction and Satire, Explains Story Shape
What’s your favorite story shape? Classic, circular, cumulative, parallel, time-line, question and answer etc… or one of Kurt’s? 🙂
Have a magical Monday everyone, whilst I try like mad to catch up! 🙂
P.S. I hope you’re all working on your July 4th stories for the upcoming Writing Contest – I of course have not even started thinking about mine!
P.P.S. I hope you are all noticing with jaw-dropping amazedness the incredible brevity of this post! Apparently getting way behind is what it’s takes to make me short-winded 🙂
I just want you all to know that whilst you’re going about your business like normal people, I am babysitting the Wild Kingdom. Just look what’s been in our yard this week!
First, an enterprising Snapping Turtle came to the foot of our back porch steps, made her nest, and laid her eggs!
So of course now I’m guarding the nest from raccoons and skunks… and my dogs! I want those baby turtles to hatch! Then I think I’ll have to escort them down to the water… which is not very near at all… I don’t know what their mama was thinking!… because I don’t want them to get picked off by predators on their journey, and apparently everything thinks baby snapping turtle is tasty! Approximately 9 weeks ’til Hatchday according to some site we googled 🙂
Then, our friend the bear came strolling by to see if perhaps we had carelessly left the bird feeder hanging around (we had not! because although it’s lovely to see him from inside the house, we don’t really like to encourage him to hang around.)
Yes, that is our back porch railing. Sorry the picture is a little blurry – I took it through the glass because the dogs were barking their heads off and hurling themselves at the French door and I thought it best if they didn’t tangle with Blackie 🙂
So given the theme of the week, I decided to celebrate the last day of Perfect Picture Books before summer with an appropriate title. I was torn between 2 books, both by Marion Dane Bauer. I chose Baby Bear Discovers The World for obvious reasons, but The Cutest Critter is equally good if you care to check it out!
Title: Baby Bear Discovers The World Written By: Marion Dane Bauer Photography By: Stan Tekiela Adventure Publications Inc, 2006, Factual Fiction with great photos
Opening: One fine spring morning Baby Bear said to his mama, “Mama, I’m a big bear now. It’s time for me to go out and discover the world. Then he kissed his mama so she would know he meant business.”
Brief Synopsis: From the jacket: “Follow Baby Bear’s excursion into the big world as he tries to prove his independence, wandering closer and closer to places he doesn’t belong. Using twin cubs and the assistance of a handler, Stan [the photographer] succeeded in getting all the photos for this book from the cubs’ natural reactions to their surroundings. His ability to capture everything from their inquisitive faces to actually tumbling from a log is delightfully documented.”
Links To Resources: Everything you need is right here! The back of the book has a section on bear facts – characteristics, activity, diet, cubs, and hibernation. It also has a section on how the book was photographed, and another section of “outtakes and bloopers” photos – SO CUTE! 🙂 You can also go for a walk and look for signs of animals – paw prints, nests, etc. City or country, you’re likely to discover some fun things, just like Baby Bear 🙂
Why I Like This Book: I just absolutely adore wildlife photography. This book combines a fun story about learning independence with exquisite photography of lots of animals besides the bears along with the surrounding flora. It’s fun just to look at the pictures 🙂 The outtakes and bloopers photos are also tons of fun and make the experience of the book even better. Wait until you see the picture of Baby Bear licking a mouse 🙂
I’m sad that this is our last week of PPBF for the summer, but I think we can all use a little break to refresh and refuel and come back better than ever in the fall. I haven’t yet decided what I might put in in place of PPBF… I may not put anything. I could use a little more writing time, so perhaps for the summer I will blog twice a week… I don’t know – we’ll see 🙂
Meanwhile, if anyone is looking at any spare time this weekend, let me remind you all of the upcoming 4th Of July Secret Mystery Writing Contest! First prize is a picture book manuscript critique from the one and only Simone Kaplan, so start knocking those ideas around! 🙂
Have a great weekend, everyone! PPBF bloggers, please leave your last *sniff* post-specific link for the summer *sniff* so we can all round out our summer reading lists! (Here’s hoping the Simply Linked List will work this week! :))
Happy Wednesday, Everyone! I hope you are all having an excellent week so far!
We’ve got two things on the agenda today – the May Pitch Pick and today’s Would You Read It. Luckily, we’ve got something delicious and chocolatey to fortify us 🙂
Yum! Chocolate Cream Pie! 🙂
Please help yourselves to as many slices as necessary to fuel you for the morning 🙂
Now then. Let’s start with the May Pitch Pick. We had 5 terrific pitches. The pitchers all took your generous counsel to heart and have revised their original offerings. Please read the pitches below and then vote for the one you feel deserves a read by editor Erin Molta!
#1. Jesse Daydreamer (YA/Sci-Fi) Dr. Edwin Wallace has found the answer to one of science’s great mysteries – deja vu, revealing a clue to his visions. But as they fade with age, could the exceptionally gifted 17 year old Jackson Cooper unlock the answer to harness their premonitions for the good of mankind? When Jackson is taken by a secret military agency, he will need to rely on the bond of new found friends to help him fight his way back home.
#2. James Story Bored (MG)
The narrator has a problem. Too many of the stories on his bookshelf have changed. Humpty Dumpty is not on his wall but in a recipe for chocolate cake. The old lady who lives in a shoe is now the old lady who lives in nice cozy house with a big screen TV. And the tortoise is missing. The hare has nobody to race against. But those problems are not as important as the narrator’s major concern. Where is the 8 year old writer who made all those story changes?
The narrator sighed ‘why are books so complicated?’
#3. Rita Nobody Loves Roberto A. Tailbottom (PB)
Robbie Tailbottom is concerned only about his next meal, but when he finds out that other animals are in trouble this rat becomes a hero.
#4. Kimberly Bonjour, Remy! (PB) Six-year-old Remy loves adventure—just so long as it never leaves the garden. So she hesitates when her parents surprise her with a trip to Paris. How can she leave all of her favorite things? It might take some convincing, but if Remy will leap into the new and wonderful Parisian culture she might just learn that beauty and her favorite things can be found in many places. They just might have different names. #5. Sian The Word Thief (PB) Benedict the Vampire likes nothing more than snacking on a tasty noun. He’s on a rampage, gobbling up ‘words, whispers, songs and shouts’ until the city is silent. Who can stop him? Something furry lurking in the sewer could have the answer…. Please cast your vote for your favorite pitch by Saturday June 15 at 11:59PM EDT.
Now, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from the lovely Heather who says, “When people used to ask me what I wanted to be when I grew up I answered, “A children’s book author and illustrator.” As I grew older I thought that was too unrealistic so I majored in sociology and started working for a small business. However, I recently decided to chase that childhood dream, and started writing! Hopefully this dream comes true!”
(And I just have to sneak in with my 2 cents and say I think she’s well on her way 🙂 She wrote a terrific entry for the In Just Spring Contest, and if you go to her blog you’ll get to see some of her fabulous art… including a picture of the cat who lived in the flowerpot :))
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: The Cat Who Lived In The Flowerpot Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 3-7) The Pitch: Tristan the cat lives in the flowerpot between apartments 7 and 8. He loves his human neighbors and they love him. There was just one problem. NO PETS ALLOWED! One day the strict landlady swings by for a surprise visit and discovers Tristan. He finds himself in danger of losing his flowerpot home and the neighbors he loves.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Heather improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read Itor on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above. There are openings in July so we’re about ready for some new pitches! Send yours for your chance to be read by editor Erin Molta!
Heather is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I am looking forward to seeing who wins the May Pitch Pick. I have a feeling it’s going to be another tight race!
It’s that time again!!! Writing Contest time!!! Yippee-aye-oh-hurray!!!
I know none of you got a wink of sleep this weekend, waiting for the contest announcement, so I won’t keep you waiting another second 🙂 (Plus, I want to give you all plenty of time to get your entries written in case you have plans during Fourth of July week… write now, you’ll be all ready to go and can settle in when you have a few minutes here and there to read all the wonderful entries as they come in with your kids and families! :))
TheFourthOfJulySecretMysteryWritingContest!
WHO ATE THE BLUEBERRIES???!!!
The Contest: Write a children’s story, in poetry or prose, maximum 400 words about the 4th of July in which a secret is revealed or a mystery is solved! You may choose any 4th of July setting you like: country, city or small town, sleepaway camp or vacation, with family or friends or all alone, at a parade, a picnic, a fireworks show or a bonfire, in the middle of the woods or in a country where the locals don’t celebrate 4th of July. Your secret or mystery doesn’t have to be anything earth-shattering. It could be who took Granny’s award-winning Fourth of July cherry pie? Or what did Robin tell Sarah who told Olivia who told Gracie about Anna in cabin 7? Or where did the flags for the parade disappear to? Or why doesn’t Becky Sue want to go to the fireworks show? Or what Old Mrs. Hootenspiegal knows about the mayor! Just as long as a secret or mystery of some kind is revealed or solved by the end.
Post: Your entry should be posted on your blog between Monday July 1 at 12:01 AM EDT and Friday July 5 at 11:59 PM EDT, and your post-specific link should be added to the link list on the official Fourth Of July Secret Mystery Contest post which will go up on my blog on Monday July 1 and remain up through Sunday July 7 (no Would You Read It on Wednesday July 3… and although the post will remain up through Sunday to give everyone plenty of time to read, the entry list will be closed at midnight Friday so we have time to judge). If you don’t have a blog but would like to enter, please copy and paste your entry into the comments on my July 1st post by midnight Friday July 5th. (If anyone has trouble commenting, which unfortunately happens, please email me and I’ll post your entry for you!)
TheJudging: My lovely assistant and I will narrow down the entrants to five (or possibly a couple more :)) finalists which will be posted here on Monday July 8 for you to vote on for a winner. The vote will be closed at 6 PM EDT on Thursday July 11 and the winner will be announced on Friday July 12.
ThePrizes!: The first place winner will receive (I am not making this up!) a picture book manuscript critique from Simone Kaplan!!!!! Yes, THE Simone Kaplan!!! I wish I knew how to put that up in lights and make it all sparkly! 🙂 Simone Kaplan has been editing children’s books and magazines for over 20 years. She was an editor at Henry Holt and Company, and then a Senior Editor at HarperCollins. More recently she has worked as a consultant to various authors, illustrators, and publishing houses. She also runs a wonderful website called Picture Book People(where you can sign up for her free newsletter among other things.) A prize like this makes me wish I could compete in my own contest! 🙂 If we get more than 15 entries, we will place through 3rd. If we get more than 25 entires we will place through 5th. Additional prizes will include critiques, gift certificates and signed books. (Details to come.) So put on those thinking caps and start bouncing those ideas off the wall! Your story could win you a fabulous prize, but win or not, you can be certain your stories will be read with appreciation by LOTS of readers! 🙂 Have a marvelous Monday everyone! 🙂
I know it’s Perfect Picture Book Friday and I’m supposed to lead off with that, but two quick things first.
1. Just a reminder that next Friday, June 14, will be our last PPBF until September, as we go on summer hiatus. I will miss it, but I need the time to update, and also to do some other things… like write!… and finish cleaning out my basement! 🙂
2. It’s NATIONAL DONUT DAY!!!!!!! So have one on me, even though I don’t usually serve snacks on Fridays 🙂
Now then. My Perfect Picture Book for the day:
Title: Mrs. Armitage Queen Of The Road Written & Illustrated By: Quentin Blake Peachtree, September 2003, Fiction
Suitable For Ages: 5-8
Themes/Topics: fun, friendship, making the best of things
Opening: “One morning, Mrs. Armitage came downstairs and found a letter on the doormat. She read it to her faithful dog Breakspear. Dear Anastasia, Because I am buying a new motorcycle, I won’t need my old car anymore. I would like you to have it as a present. It’s parked outside. Here are the keys. With love, Your Uncle Cosmo“
Brief Synopsis: When Mrs. Armitage receives an old jalopy as a present it doesn’t look particularly exciting, but she is ready to give it a try. She sets off with her faithful dog. Mrs. Armitage has her own style of driving, however, and before long the old jalopy is dropping parts left and right. What to do? Nothing stops Mrs. Armitage!
Links To Resources: I didn’t find any actual links, but here are a few activity suggestions:
discuss what it means to be queen of something, like “queen of the road” then have kids think up what they’d like to be queen (or king) of. Why would they like to do that? What special clothes might they wear? What special accessories might they have? What special things might they do?
Write your own story, individually or as a group, in which someone is the queen (or king) of something. Illustrate it.
Mrs. Armitage’s car loses part after part after part until, though it maintains its function, it looks very different than it stared out. Choose a vehicle and draw it the way it’s supposed to look. Then draw it again seeing how much you can take away so that it can still do it’s job but it looks entirely different.
Read the other Mrs. Armitage books, all equally entertaining 🙂
Why I Like This Book: LOVE Quentin Blake’s delightful illustrations and sense of humor and fun! Mrs. Armitage is a delightfully quirky character who just makes you wonder what she’ll do next. Just wait until you see who she meets up with and what her car looks like by the end 🙂
Have a great weekend, everyone! And tune in Monday for the July Contest announcement and the revelation of the fabulous prize! 🙂 (Wish me luck thinking up the contest parameters over the weekend and feel free to share ideas in the comments if you have any :)) PPBF bloggers be sure to leave your post-specific link in the list below!
Susanna Leonard Hill 
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