βοΈDeck the Halls! βοΈ Light the menorah! βοΈ Fill the Kikombe cha Umoja! βοΈ
It’s time for the . . .
12th Annual Holiday Writing Contest

~ for children’s writers ~
Continue readingβοΈDeck the Halls! βοΈ Light the menorah! βοΈ Fill the Kikombe cha Umoja! βοΈ
It’s time for the . . .
12th Annual Holiday Writing Contest

~ for children’s writers ~
Continue readingA few days ago, we had to pretend Saturday was Friday to accommodate the Perfect Picture Book post (because someone was behind schedule… not naming any names π). Today, we are pretending Wednesday is Tuesday so we can squeeze in an extra Tuesday Debut. It’s all about time management. Or something… π
Continue readingWelcome to today’s edition of Tuesday Debut, everyone!
I realized, as I’m in the habit of introducing authors here as “Debut-esses”, that today’s debut is only the 3rd man to be presented in our series so far. Out of 105! (The others being Matthew Lasley way back at #12, and John Bray, #97, in case you’re interested π) I guess that’s an indication of how much more prevalent women are in the world of picture book writing!
This publication journey is also interesting because the author and illustrator submitted as a team, which is pretty unusual.
So, without further ado, I’m delighted to present Royal Baysinger and his debut picture book, KASANOVA – LOST IN LOVE!
Continue readingOkay. So technically it’s not Friday. Too much to do the last few days! But I didn’t want to miss the chance to share this lovely book in the last Perfect Picture Book Friday post of the year!
Continue readingGather βround, my friends.
Plump up your pillows.
Burrow into your blankets.
Wrap your hands around a gently steaming mug of sweet hot chocolate.
All comfy and cozy?
Lovely! Itβs time for a heartwarming story.
Continue readingHello, my friends!
It’s Tuesday Debut Day once again!
If you haven’t voted for your favorite HALLOWEENSIE CONTEST FINALIST yet, you still have until 7 PM Eastern this evening! Please hop over HERE and vote – we need all the votes we can get to break ties!
Thanksgiving is behind us and the holidays are coming which is just perfect for today’s debut picture book, THE GIFT SHOP BEAR, and debut author/illustrator Phyllis Harris, who has graciously come by to share her journey to publication with us (including a glimpse of her lovely work space which will have you all goggle-eyed with envy π)
So let’s meet Phyllis and have a look at this sweet holiday book! She is kindly offering a giveaway copy (US residents only) so if you leave a comment on this post, you could be a winner!!!
GIVEAWAY WINNER DRAWN DECEMBER 6 – ELEANOR ANN PETERSON!
THE GIFT SHOP BEAR
Author/Illustrator, Phyllis Harris
WorthyKids/Hachette Book Group
Published 10/26/22
Fiction for ages 4-7

All year long, Bear watches from his spot in the attic as the seasons change, waiting for the first snowflakes that signify Christmas is coming. You see, at Christmastime, Bear gets to join his special friend, Annie, in the festivities in her grandma’s gift shop. But this year is different–the gift shop is closing and Bear’s future seems uncertain. Will Bear see Annie and Nana again?
SUSANNA: Thank you so much for joining us today, Phyllis! We are thrilled to have you and your beautiful debut picture book which is so perfect for this time of year! Where did the idea for this book come from?
PHYLLIS: I was babysitting my granddaughter when she was 3 or 4 years old and we were looking through her motherβs old toybox and came across her old teddy bear. She immediately felt so sad for this bear because her had been left alone in this dark box for all these years with no one to love and care for him. At that moment, I knew I had a new story idea!
SUSANNA: How long did it take you to write this book?
PHYLLIS: The story idea came about when my granddaughter was 4 and it was just published last October when she was 8 years old so it took about 4 years to publication. However, that also included finding and signing with my agent, Adria Goetz and then us working through edits to prepare it for submission. Once it went out on submission it took 10 or 11 months before we got the offer.
SUSANNA: Did you go through many revisions?
PHYLLIS: The actual writing process included many rounds of revisions with the help of my critique partners. Also, it didnβt start out as a Christmas book. The original setting was a book store but when I realized the store would be closing, it was too depressing to have a book store go out of business so I changed it to Nanaβs Gift Shop closing because of her retiring which made for a much kinder plot and thatβs when I realized it had to be a Christmas book!

Phyllis’s gorgeous work space and her work buddy, Brinkley. (Named after the dog in her favorite movie, YOUβVE GOT MAIL. π
SUSANNA: When did you know your manuscript was ready for submission?
PHYLLIS: I knew it was close to being ready when I got the interest of my agent on a Twitter contest. That gave me the boost of confidence I needed and then after I signed with her, we tweaked it a bit more before it went out on submission.

Phyllis working in her art studio
SUSANNA: When and how did you submit?
PHYLLIS: My goal was to be an author/illustrator of picture books, so when I had a few stories ready in book dummy form, I decided to try some of the Twitter contests. I entered #PBPitch and #FaithPitch since one of my books was faith based. Fortunately, I had some interest from a few agents and an editor and thatβs when my agent first showed interest in my faith-based book and wanted to see what other books I had to offer so I sent her the book dummy for THE GIFT SHOP BEAR and she loved it. She didnβt offer representation right then but gave me the invitation to send her more once I had more to offer. Eventually a year or so later, I did have more to offer and after getting interest from 3 agents, I decided Adria Goetz was the perfect fit for me.
SUSANNA: How long after you found out about your book going to acquisitions (if you did) or after you submitted were you told it was a βyesβ?
PHYLLIS: We got an email from Peggy Schaefer, Associate Publisher of WorthyKids, asking if it was still available on June 10th and then were told it was being submitted to the next acquisitions meeting and we got an offer July 22.
SUSANNA: When did you get “the call”, which these days is more likely to be βthe emailβ? (Best moment ever! π)
PHYLLIS: It truly was the best moment ever! My agent called with the news of the offer and I remember seeing her name come up on the caller ID and trying not to lose it when I answered. She had previously shared with me via email that it had gone to acquisitions but I also knew that lots of books go to acquisitions and donβt end up getting acquired so I was trying to prepare myself for whatever the outcome would be.
Peggy Schaefer, Associate Publisher at WorthyKids had shown interest the previous year but couldnβt make an offer then because they werenβt ready to start acquiring for their new list yet and she didnβt want to hold me up in case I had other interest. I had illustrated several books for WorthyKids over the years, including ON CHRISTMAS DAY by Margaret Wise Brown and MAVERICK AND ME by Katherine Schwarzenegger so I already had a wonderful relationship with them as an illustrator.
I also had a request for a revise and resubmit from Little Brown during the submission process and even though I didnβt get an offer from them, I feel like the book became even better because of the revision request.
SUSANNA: How long was it between getting your offer and getting your contract to sign?
PHYLLIS: We got the offer in July and signed the contract 5 months later in December.
SUSANNA: How did you celebrate signing your contract?
PHYLLIS: My husband had purchased βgoodβ champagne previously and was saving it to celebrate my debut offer as author. He thankfully had confidence in the story, too. We shared that bottle with our daughter and son-in-law and of course our granddaughter had the non-alcohol version. π
SUSANNA: Was the contract what you expected in terms of advance, royalty percentage, publication timeline, author copies etc.?
PHYLLIS: This is when it is so helpful having an agent who has your best interests in mind to handle all of the negotiations. Adria is so wonderful at getting the best possible terms for her clients and is so knowledgeable about all involved in the contract.
WorthyKids offered very fair terms and I was pleased with their final offer.
SUSANNA: What was your experience of the illustration process like?
PHYLLIS: Since this was my debut as author- illustrator, this was unique experience for me.
I had submitted a book dummy with all of the illustrations roughed out so I already had the overall vision for the book in place. I eventually added a few new illustrations and a new cover design to fit in with any new edits but overall, the art ideas did not change too much. I then went on to create each piece in final art form where I used traditional materials such as watercolor and some charcoal pencil and then scanned them in and added digital touches. Normally, art directors want to do the scans in house but since I had worked with this publisher before, they were aware that I provided quality scans and so they trusted the final files regarding the resolution, etc. Many artists donβt have good enough scanners to be able to do this so it may vary for others.

text and illustration copyright Phyllis Harris 2021, Worthy Kids

SUSANNA: Did you get to see advance reviews from Kirkus, SLJ, etc? What was that like?
PHYLLIS: This was one of the only disappointments besides having my book launch during a pandemic. I didnβt get any book reviews from Kirkus, SLJ or Horn. Possibly because it was a Christmas book from a smaller publisher.
SUSANNA: How long did it take from offer to having the first copy in your hand?
PHYLLIS: My book was actually published a lot quicker than most in traditional publishing these days. Since I was both author and illustrator and it was a Christmas book, once we worked out the schedule, I started working on final art during the peak of the pandemic which was so wonderful to have something to work on while in lock down. If possible, the publisher wanted to fast-track it if I were comfortable with the schedule and I was. I didnβt want to wait another entire year for its release so I buckled down and got it accomplished.
Even with the pandemic shipping problems, which delayed my release date by 3 weeks, I had my first author copy about one year after I got the offer. The initial print run was 11,000 which I thought was great for a first-time author.
SUSANNA: What kind of marketing and promotion has your publisher done for this book?
PHYLLIS: I was assigned a marketing team for my book and we had several zoom meetings talking about their strategies and plans for the marketing. They did a virtual booth at Picture Book Palooza, hosted by School Library Journal where I answered questions via live chat.
They reached out to bloggers and influencers from lists that I provided and posted on social media.
They also provided these fun activity sheets! https: //www.hachettebookgroup.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/08/Gift-Shop-Bear-Activity-Sheets-2.pdf
SUSANNA: Describe any marketing/promotion you did for this book.
PHYLLIS: I was planning on doing a book tour but because of the pandemic most book stores were not allowing in-person book signings. I have to admit, that was pretty disappointing.
I created a book trailer and posted it on youtube and shared it on social media. You can see it here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1AaRKWlsPik I also reached out to local newspapers and TV stations and was so excited that the KC STAR did a feature article.

SUSANNA: How long was it between the time you started writing seriously and the time you sold your first picture book?
PHYLLIS: Probably about 3 or 4 years. I dabbled with the writing for over 25 years but because I was so busy and invested with the illustration side of books, I never took the time needed to work specifically on my craft of writing. That is my one regret, that I didnβt take the time to really work on my writing craft, earlier.

The first time Phyllis saw her book on the shelves at a Barnes & Noble! π
SUSANNA: What is the most important/helpful thing you learned on your way to publication? (Or what is your most helpful piece of advice for up and coming writers?)
PHYLLIS: If you want something bad enough, you have to put in the time. Take the writing workshops. Go to conferences. Find critique partners. Read, read and read more. Especially the kind of books you want to write. And most importantly, start writing, even if you feel it isnβt very good. We all have terrible first drafts and book ideas that remain in the drawer but the more we write, the more likely one of them will be the ONE that gets us going in the right direction. And you are never too old to dream a new dream! I am sixty, and I am just getting started!

Website: https://www.phyllisharris.com
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Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/phyllis.harris2
Twitter: https://twitter.com/PhyllisHarris
SUSANNA: Phyllis, thank you so much for stopping by today to share your journey to publication! We are all so grateful and wish you the best of luck with this and future titles! Readers, if you have questions for Phyllis, please post them in the comments below and if she has time I’m sure she’ll respond!
You may purchase Phyllis’s book at:
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– purchasing their books
– recommending their books to friends and family
– recommending their books to our children’s teachers and librarians
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– suggesting them as visiting authors at our children’s schools and our local libraries
– sharing their books on social media
– reviewing their books on Goodreads, Amazon, Barnes&Noble, and other sites where people go to learn about books.
Thank you all for stopping by to read today! Have a lovely, inspiration-filled Tuesday! Maybe today is the day you’ll write your debut picture book π
Missed any previous Tuesday Debuts? Check them out!
Christy Mihaly – Hey! Hey! Hay! A Tale of Bales And The Machines That Make Them
Jessie Oliveros – The Remember Balloons
Beth Anderson – An Inconvenient Alphabet: Ben Franklin And Noah Webster’s Spelling Revolution
Hannah Holt – The Diamond And The Boy
Laura Renauld – Porcupine’s Pie
Annie Romano – Before You Sleep: A Bedtime Book Of Gratitude
Melissa Stoller – Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush
Sherry Howard – Rock And Roll Woods
Kate Narita – 100 Bugs! A Counting Book
Vivian Kirkfield – Pippa’s Passover Plate
Laura Roettiger – Aliana Reaches For The Moon
Matthew Lasley – Pedro’s Pan: A Gold Rush Story
Natalee Creech – When Day Is Done
Margaret Chiu Greanias – Maximillian Villainous
Wendy Greenley – Lola Shapes The Sky
Danielle Dufayet – You Are Your Strong
B.J. Lee – There Was An Old Gator Who Swallowed A Moth
Cathy Ballou Mealey – When A Tree Grows
Pippa Chorley – Counting Sheep
Sandra Sutter – The Real Farmer In The Dell
Jill Mangel Weisfeld – Riley The Retriever Wants A New Job (self pub)
Kathleen Cornell Berman – The Birth Of Cool: How Jazz Great Miles Davis Found His Sound
Eleanor Ann Peterson – Jurassic Rat
Sarah Hoppe – Who Will? Will You?
Marla LeSage – Pirate Year Round
Stacey Corrigan – The Pencil Eater
Shannon Stocker – Can U Save The Day?
Nadine Poper – Randall And Randall
Christine Evans β Evelyn The Adventurous Entomologist
Karen Kiefer – Drawing God (religious market)
Dawn Young – The Night Baafore Christmas
Heather Gale – Hoβonani: Hula Warrior
Ciara O’Neal – Flamingo Hugs Aren’t For Everyone (self pub)
Theresa Kiser – A Little Catholic’s Book Of Liturgical Colors (religious market)
Lindsey Hobson – Blossom’s Wish (self pub)
Kirsten Larson – Wood, Wire, Wings: Emma Lilian Todd Invents An Airplane
Valerie Bolling – Let’s Dance!
Janet Johnson – Help Wanted: Must Love Books
Heather Kinser – Small Matters: The Hidden Power of the Unseen
Kelly Carey – How Long Is Forever?
Mary Wagley Copp – Wherever I Go
Nell Cross Beckerman – Down Under The Pier
Claire Noland – Evie’s Field Day: More Than One Way To Win
Sharon Giltrow – Bedtime, Daddy!
Gabi Snyder – Two Dogs On A Trike
Lisa Katzenberger – National Regular Average Ordinary Day
Teresa Krager – Before Your Birth Day
Lindsay H. Metcalf – Beatrix Potter, Scientist
Nancy Roe Pimm – Fly, Girl, Fly! Shaesta Waiz Soars Around The World
Jolene GutiΓ©rrez – Mac And Cheese And The Personal Space Invader
Julie Rowan-Zoch – Louis (picture book illustration debut!)
Janie Emaus – Latkes For Santa
Amy Mucha – A Girl’s Bill Of Rights
Melanie Ellsworth – Hip,Hip…Beret!
Rebecca Kraft Rector – Squish Squash Squished
Gnome Road Publishing (publishing house debut)
Sue Heavenrich – 13 Ways To Eat A Fly
Julie Rowan-Zoch – I’m A Hare So There (author/illustrator debut)
Nancy Derey Riley – Curiosity’s Discovery (author/illustrator self-published debut)
Moni Ritchie Hadley – The Star Festival
Sita Singh – Birds Of A Feather
Ann Magee – Branches Of Hope: The 9/11 Survivor Tree
Amanda Davis – 30,000 Stitches: The Inspiring Story of the National 9/11 Flag (nonfiction)
Jennifer Buchet – Little Medusa’s Hair Do-lemma
Michelle Vattula – The Stalking Seagulls
Christine Van Zandt – A Brief History Of Underpants (nonfiction)
Candice Marley Conner – Sassafras And Her Teeny Tiny Tail
Becky Scharnhorst – My School Stinks!
Darshana Khiani – How To Wear A Sari
Ana Siqueira – Bella’s Recipe For Success
Kate Allen Fox – Pando: A Living Wonder Of Trees (nonfiction)
Jenna Waldman – Sharkbot Shalom
Karen A. Wyle – You Can’t Kiss A Bubble
Rebecca Mullin – One Tomato (board book)
Cynthia Argentine – Night Becomes Day: Changes In Nature (illustrated with photographs)
Karen Greenwald – Vote For Susanna: The First Woman Mayor (nonfiction)
Anne Appert – Blob (author/illustrator)
Dianna Wilson-Sirkovsky – James’ Reading Rescue
Karen Condit – Turtle On The Track (hybrid publishing)
Renee LaTulippe – The Crab Ballet (picture book poem)
Amy Duchene – Pool Party (collaboration/co-writing)
Kimberly Wilson – A Penny’s Worth
Candace Spizzirri – Fishing With Grandpa And Skye
Carrie Tillotson – Counting To Bananas
Patrice Gopo – All The Places We Call Home
Rebecca Gardyn Levington – Brainstorm!
Jocelyn Watkinson – The Three Canadian Pigs: A Hockey Story
Shachi Kaushik – Diwali In My New Home
Carrie Sharkey Asner – Blueberry Blue Bubble (self published)
Gela Kalaitzidis – Ozzie & Prince Zebedee (author/illustrator)
Caroline Perry – The Corgi And The Queen (nonfiction)
There are witches in the air,
Evil spirits everywhere.
Creepy monsters walking by.
Pumpkin moon up in the sky. . .
Halloween is so spooky, isn’t it?
WHAT???!!!
Are you suggesting it’s not Halloween anymore?
Are you asserting that this is nonsense, and that Thanksgiving has come and gone, and it’s snowing where you are, and you’re putting up your holiday decorations and wondering what the twinkle twinkle little bat is going on around here?
Ok.
It’s possible that this post is a teensy bit late in coming.
But better late than never, I always say!
And I hope you agree because, at long last, it’s time for you to see who the 2022 Halloweensie Contest Finalists are and vote for your favorite!
The 12th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest!!!

~ FINALISTS! ~
We’ve got an interesting mix this year. There were a LOT of entries about snakes and slugs (not surprising, given the “slither” requirement), quite a few “First Halloween” stories, lots of “costume decision” stories, an unfortunate number that were really mood pieces or lists that, while nicely written, were not stories, a few that didn’t use all the required words, one that didn’t use any!, several (sad face) with proofreading errors that prevented them from being finalists because it didn’t seem right to choose one with mistakes when there were other good stories without mistakes, more spooky/creepy/icky ones than usual, and more for the 9-12 age group than usual, and quite a few with a nice non-fiction-y element. . . In short, so many wonderful stories, as always! You are all so talented! We love the ones we chose, but we also loved a lot of the ones we didn’t or couldn’t choose.
If you didn’t make the finalist list, I don’t want you to feel bad! It doesn’t mean you didn’t write a good story! It’s VERY hard to tell a great story in 100 words. There is a LOT of competition. Out of 240 entries, 226 did not make the finals, so you are in excellent company. And don’t lose heart. A lot of you will be on the Honorable Mention Lists in a few days. The judging is always the part I hate π There are always so many more I want to choose… But a contest is a contest, and so we have to try, to the best of our ability, to select the cream of the crop. I’m sure, despite our best efforts, there may be some we didn’t choose that you think we should have, and some we did choose you think we shouldn’t have. But we really tried to make good choices. We looked for originality and that little extra something that makes a story stand out.
And for those who didn’t make the cut, you still practiced your craft, wrote good stories, met writing requirements, wrote to a deadline, and increased your writing experience. You produced good work that you were brave enough to share in public. And you hopefully have a strong basis to build on that may allow you to expand and polish your story into a magazine piece or a picture book when you’re not constrained by the contest parameters. So bravo, and congratulations to everyone!
The 14 finalists are listed below. We have a mix of stories for younger and older children, some in rhyme and some in prose, some funny, some lovely, some downright creepy – all fabulous!
Please read them all, choose your favorite, and vote for it in the poll below by Tuesday November 29th at 7PM Eastern. (I do have a Tuesday Debut scheduled that day, so this post will drop from the top of my blog page, but I will be sure to include a link to this finalist/voting page so it’s still easy to find!)
Please feel free to share the link to this post on social media – the more readers and voters the better! Every one of these entries deserves to be read by as many people as possible. But I ask that you please not troll for votes! The contest is supposed to be based on merit, not a popularity contest based on who has the most followers or can talk more people into voting for their story. If you are a finalist, please do not say you’re a finalist or mention your entry by name or number. Encourage people to come read and vote, and let them make their own decisions. As judges, we make our selections blind. The names are all removed so we make our choices based solely on the story so we can remain unbiased. In fact, as of this writing, I still don’t know who wrote the stories on this list. You can bet I’m going to go look right after I post!
So read, enjoy, vote! π
1. RAINFOREST HALLOWEEN
The weeds were thick. The branches, slick.
But Howard vowed to play a trick
by sneaking up behind Doreen
to frighten her on Halloween.
Heβd slither near, unseen, unheardβ
a streak of color, faintly blurredβ
using stealthy camouflage,
then shock her with a βBOO!β barrage.
He scurried, on his tree-top chore,
high above the valley floor
and spied her on a banyan trunk.
A terrify-your-friend slam dunk!
What a treat! That very night
he gave Doreen a spooky fright.
AHHhhh!
Yes, Howard the chameleon scared sweet Doreen the gecko.
But after Howard hollered βBOO!!!ββhe fainted, from the echo.
BOOooo-ooo-ooo!

2. THE FRIGHTFUL FUGITIVE
Beneath a full and pumpkin moon,
I flew to trick-or-treat,
when, from the corner of my eye,
I spied a heap of meat.
I shivered as it stared at me,
wide eyes without a face,
a creature with no place on Earth.
It came from outer space!
With body like a cometβs tail,
legs like a centipedeβs,
it slithered through the unkempt field
to jump me from the weeds.
A skeleton creaked up just then,
gave me a bony hug.
βYouβve found my brain and spine!β he said
and took that scary slug.

3. A SHADY HALLOWEEN
It was Halloween, and Sun was fuming.
βMoon has all the fun!β huffed Sun. βI can be spooky. Come play, ghosts, goblins, and ghouls!β
But all Sun got on this bone-chilling holidayβ¦
was festive foliage and boisterous birdsong.
BORING.
βSun,β whispered Moon, spying the sulky star. βHow about a daytime treat?β
Sun beamed as Moonβs shadow masked her rays, untilβ¦
all was dark!
Witches flewβ
WHOOSH!
Skeletons danced the monster-mashβ
RAP TAP!
Black cats pranced on tip-toeβ
MEOW!
Ghosts haunted the Halloween Bashβ
WooooOOOOOOooooo!
Thenβ¦
Sun slithered out.
βBOO!β
Spooky creatures everywhere agreedβ
Sunβs scare eclipsed all other Halloweens!

4. SSSSSSCARY!
I didnβt mean to SCARE her,
but I guess thatβs what ghosts do.
As ghosts go, Iβm not scary.
I simply whisssspered,
βBoo!β
I mean, itβs Halloween night,
so, I SLITHERED up the walk.
I wriggled up the steps and
adjusted my ghost-sock.
My tongue flicked out and rang the bell.
I gave a fangy grin.
My scaly tail held out my bagβ
βLet trick or TREAT begin!β
She gasped.
She squealed.
She dropped the bowl.
She fainted dead away.
Who knew a sock with two eyeholes
could scare someone this way?

5. HALLOWEEN NIGHT LIGHT
A candle in a pumpkin sees
the sun set out of sight.
Then tilts its flame near windows cut
to free the candleβs light.
Its glow will guide the ghouls and ghostsβ
some scary, others sweetβ
by casting beams upon a path
for all to trick-or-treat.
βStay bright tonight!β The candle chants
behind its pumpkinβs face,
while waxy droplets slither down
and puddle at its base.
It droops. It stoops. But still, it shines
βtil night has come and gone.
Then sighs triumphant threads of smoke
into the light of dawn.

6. TRICK-OR-TREAT, SHOES TO EAT
Itβs a Halloween party!
Ruff, ruff. Roo!
No shoes on the carpet means . . .
Front-door treats for me!
I must have one. Or two. Or ten!
Nobodyβs looking. I gotta go fast.
Crawl. Slither. Roll over.
Dash!
Princess slippers.
Baseball cleats.
Gopher loafers.
Pirate boots.
How to choose?
Sniff. Lift. Wag.
Drool!
Ruff, ruff. Roo!
Surfer sandals,
Ballet flats.
Scary sneakers.
Fairy clogs.
I want them ALL!
βPuppy, no!β
Uh-oh.
I need treats to-go.
Aha!
Gotcha, kitten heels.
The purrfect pair.
Jump. Gallop. Zigzag.
Scoot!
Under the bed.
Trick-or-treat, shoes to eat.
Ruff, ruff. ROO!

7. HALLOWEEN IS MAGIC
βItβs Halloween!β Witch Wanda screeched.
βAnd I canβt scare up tricks or treats!β
βThe cauldronβs cracked.β
βMy potion burned.β
βIβm out of bats and three-eyed worms.β
So Wanda flew into the night,
And gathered things to give a fright.
Ten slithery snakes,
Two warty toads,
A shrew that had a runny nose.
βYippee!β she cried, βWhat spooky fun!β
βCanβt wait to see those kiddies run!β
But when they spied Witch Wandaβs βtreatsβ,
Excited children filled the streets.
They hugged the snakes.
They cuddled the shrew.
Now Wanda runs a petting zoo.

8. SCARY GOAT SCAM
Billy and Maribelle thought it unfair
that the Halloween treats were not evenly shared.
Bored with their thistle and grass-loaded diet,
βOh Candyβ sighed Billy, βIβm eager to try it.β
They made themselves costumes to scare the town silly,
smeared mud on their beards and tossed hay willy-nilly.
They covered their horns, pinned their beards tightly down
and with eyes glaring brightly they clomped into town.
The villagers fled as their fear slithered out,
scattering treat bags and candy about.
The goats quickly gobbled the treats left behind,
βNot badβ Billie said, βBut these bags taste divine!β

9. SAPLING’S HALLOWEEN
Sapling was scared.
October was nearly over,
and still she had no costume.
On October 1st,
Maple proudly primped in his pumpkin colors.
By mid month,
Oak fetchingly flaunted her firefighter red.
Sapling grew green with envy.
βDonβt worry,β Hickory whispered
through his fur-brown mask of foliage.
βMother Nature will make sure youβre ready for trick or treat.β
Hickory and his brothers were the three bears.
On Halloween Eve, Sapling swayed slightly.
A cool breeze slithered through her leaves.
She held onto hope.
When the sun rose on Halloween,
Saplingβs costume was complete.
Sapling, the young Ginkgo, was Goldilocks.

10. MIDNIGHT SNACK
Slither, Slither.
Tiptoe, CREEEEAK.
shh.
The moon is bright.
Itβs time to sneak.
Down the hallway.
Stop to see.
zzzz.
The coast is clear.
I smirk with glee.
βTwas a night of
costumed fun.
oooOO.
With bags of treats
the night was done.
Now I creep and
Tiptoe light.
grrrr.
A shadowβs there!
I freeze with fright!
Stepping slowly,
Then a whirl!
phew.
Itβs just the dogβ¦
βYou scared me, girl!β
In the kitchen
hidden high.
mmm.
I reach the snacks
βSuccess!β I sigh.
Then I heard a
great big SNAP!
AHH.
βI caught you Dad!
You like my trap?β

11. A MARTIAN’S HALLOWEEN
A tiny spaceship landed with a rumble and a roar
So Timothy, a Martian boy decided to explore
Zombies, witches, scary creatures slithered down the street
Traveling from door to door, they shouted βTRICK OR TREAT!β
Suddenly, poor Timothy felt frightened and alone
βThis Earthly kind of holiday just isnβt in my zone!β
An alien, dressed up in green, peculiarly appeared
βYouβre looking lost. Iβll get you home,β she gladly volunteered.
She found his spaceship just in time. He knew she saved the day.
Then she reached inside her sack. βHave a Milky Way.β

12. PUMPKIN PRIDE
One tiny pumpkin sat on the vine.
βGrow, Pumpkin, grow,β chanted Witch.
When scary bugs slithered close, Ghost shouted βBoo!β
βGrow, Pumpkin, grow,β chanted Ghost.
Mummy watered during four months of sunshine.
βGrow, Pumpkin, grow,β chanted Mummy.
Cool weather came; Pumpkin stopped growing.
βPumpkinβs perfect!β said Witch, Ghost, and Mummy.
βLetβs bring him to the contest at the Trick-or-Treat Fair!β
Carved pumpkinsβ¦ Warty pumpkinsβ¦ Tasty pumpkinsβ¦
But no pumpkin beat Pumpkin.
Witch, Ghost, and Mummy beamed with pumpkin pride
Their precious Pumpkin won grand prize β
WORLDβS HEAVIEST PUMPKIN
FUN FACT: The Guinness World Record for heaviest pumpkin is 2,702 pounds.

13. THE SWEETEST TREAT
Itβs Halloween! Come one and all!
Slither, scurry, climb and crawl β
gather round the bright full moon.
Children will be coming soon.
As they swarm the darkened streets,
calling out their βTrick or Treats!β
weβll lurk nearby, our eyes aglow,
making sure our tails donβt show.
Once theyβre candy-full and sleepy β
numbed to all thatβs scary, creepy β
leap out from our hiding place
and lick the children β just a taste.
The sweetest tasting child will be
the one we eat on Halloween!

14. CANDY NIGHT
Costumes on,
grab your gear,
Candy Night is almost here.
Sun is set,
route is mapped,
we wonβt leave one house untapped.
Trick or treat,
check the haul.
Chocolate! Gummies! Eat them all.
Wrapper pile,
empty tote,
taffy slithers down my throat.
Not enough.
We need more!
I know somewhere we can score.
Candy out,
down the road,
now weβve hit the motherlode.
βJust take one?β
I think not.
Ditch the sign and grab the lot!
Lights come on,
time to run!
If my mom finds out, Iβm DONE.
Just a scare,
so we think?β¦
Doorbell footage has us linked.

PHEW! So there you have it! Good luck choosing just one of those amazing stories!
Please vote for your favorite in the poll below by 7PM Eastern Tuesday November 29!
The Winners and Honorable Mentions will be posted on Wednesday November 30 (because running into December would just be a bridge too far! π€£)
I can’t wait to see who you all choose as your winners!
Tune in Wednesday!!! ππ§ββοΈπ»π
Guess what time it is?
I realize, of course, that I have yet to post the Halloweensie Finalists. They are coming! I promise! Hopefully in a few days. What a perfect storm of downright insanity the last few weeks have been!
BUT
Time waits for no one, so I have to get the Holiday Contest Guidelines up so you have a couple weeks to write your entries!
Which brings me to the fact that someone (besides me) is in BIG Trouble!

This Dastardly Duo is charged with:
In short, they have been Very Bad Dogs!
Why, you ask, am I bringing this Wickedness to your attention?
Well, I’ll tell you!
As we enter the Holiday Season, there is always an emphasis on Holiday Parties, giving gifts, being kind to others, doing good deeds, sweetness and light., but . .
DUHN! DUHN! DUHN!
. . .what about the Bad Guys?
Because you know they’re out there, wreaking havoc whenever, wherever, and however they can! One look at that WANTED poster will tell you that!
It’s an outright example of Mischief and Mayhem! Tomfoolery! Skulduggery!
Exactly the kind of misbehavior you should be keeping in mind when you sit down to write your entry for the . . .
12th Annual Holiday Writing Contest

~ for children’s writers ~
The Contest: Β Write aΒ children’s holiday storyΒ (children here defined as age 12 and under) about a Holiday Bad Guy – think along the lines of The Abominable Snow Monster (aka The Bumble), Heat Miser/Snow Miser, Burgermeister Meisterburger, the Winter Warlock, The Grinch, Scrooge, etcβ¦, but make up your own – someone you can have some fun with! An elf who laces Mrs. Claus’s cookies with Argu-mint so that everyone who eats them starts fighting! A Candle Kidnapper who holds all the candles for ransom just before Hanukkah! A pair of zebra gangsters who dress up as reindeer, planning to sneak onto Santa’s team and then steal the sleigh and keep all the toys for themselves! A taciturn girl who is found responsible for removing lights and ornaments from all the village displays…but turns out to have brought them to the Nursing Home to cheer the residents. Anything and everything you can think up – the badder the better π
Your story may be poetry or prose, silly or serious or sweet, religious or not, based on Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Winter Solstice, New Year’s or whatever you celebrate during the Holiday Season, but is not to exceed 250 words (I know! So much freedom after the Halloweensie Contest π ) (It can be as short as you like (the judges will be grateful π , you are welcome and encouraged to write shorter, but no more than 250! Title not included in word count.) The field is wide open! Have fun! The more creative the better! No illustration notes please. (And yes, if you feel compelled to submit more than one entry you may, just remember you’re competing against yourself!)
Post: Your entry should be posted between 12:01 AM EST Friday December 9th and Sunday December 11th at 11:59 PM EST, and must be posted in the comment section of the Official Contest Post which will go up here on my blog on Friday December 9th. That post will remain up for your reading pleasure until I post the finalists. There will be no regular posts (Tuesday Debut or Perfect Picture Book) for the duration of the contest so everyone will have plenty of time to visit and enjoy. If you have trouble commenting, you can email me (we’ll go over this part in more detail on the December 9th post! π ) but do not email me any entries before the opening of the contest on December 9th! They will not be accepted or read!
The Judging: My lovely assistants and I will narrow down the entrants to approximately 12 finalists. Due to the nature of life at the moment I am not going to hazard a guess as to when the finalists will be posted – they’ll be up as soon as I can get them up.
Judging criteria will be as follows:
The Prizes!: Oh WOW!!!
βοΈ Rhyme & Meter Self Study Course β Renee LaTulippe RenΓ©e M. LaTulippe is the author of The Crab Ballet (Cameron Kids/Abrams, 2022) and Limelight: Theater Poems to Perform (Charlesbridge, 2024) and has poems published in many anthologies including No World Too Big, Night Wishes, School People, National Geographicβs The Poetry of US, One Minute Till Bedtime, Poems Are Teachers, ThankU: Poems of Gratitude, and A World Full of Poems.

βοΈ Ask Me Anything Zoom Chat with Sandra Sutter, author of THE REAL FARMER IN THE DELL (Spork, March 2019) and STAN’S FRIGHTFUL HALLOWEEN (Spork, September 2020) and the Owner/Publisher/Editor of Gnome Road Publishing)

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (author, illustrator, or both) from author/illustrator Julie Rowan-Zoch author/illustrator or I’M A HARE, SO THERE! (Clarion Books 2021), illustrator of LOUIS (written by Tom Lichtenheld, Clarion Books, 2020) and illustrator of NOT ALL SHEEP ARE BORING (written by Bobby Moynihan, G.P. Putnam’s Sons Books for Young Readers, September 2022)

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (written/Zoom) OR Ask Me Anything 1 hour session about author websites from author and website creator Stacy Jensen (stacyjensen.com – currently undergoing revision), author of BEFORE I LIVED HERE (coming Fall 2024 from Neal Porter Books)

Author and website creator Stacy Jensen
βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (fiction) fromΒ Melissa Stoller, author ofΒ SCARLETβS MAGIC PAINTBRUSHΒ (Spork 2018),Β READY, SET, GORILLA!Β (Spork 2018),Β THE ENCHANTED SNOW GLOBE COLLECTIONΒ (chapter books) (Spork 2017),Β SADIEβS SHABAT STORIESΒ (Spork, 2020) andΒ PLANTING FRIENDSHIP: PEACE, SALAAM, SHALOM

βοΈ 30 Minute Ask Me Anything Zoom Chat AND Signed PB from Janet Johnson, author of HELP WANTED, MUST LOVE BOOKS (Capstone 2020), BRAVER THAN BRAVE (Capstone, July 2022), and A BAD CASE OF THE ALMOSTS (Capstone, December 29, 2022)

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique and Zoom Chat (especially STEAM) from Sue Heavenrich, author of 13 WAYS TO EAT A FLY (Charlesbridge 2021) and many nonfiction books for older kids.

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Penny Parker Klostermann, talented author of THERE WAS AN OLD DRAGON WHO SWALLOWED A KNIGHT (Random House 2015) and A COOKED-UP FAIRY TALE (Random House 2017) as well as the forthcoming SPIDER LADY: Nan Songer and Her Arachnid WWII ArmyΒ (Astra/Calkins Creek 2025) and another as yet unannounced π

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Roxanne Troup, author of MY GRANDPA, MY TREE, AND ME (Yeehoo Press, March 6, 2023)

βοΈ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Rosanne Kurstedt, author of KARATE KID (Running Kids Press, September 2019) and AND I THINK ABOUT YOU (Kids Can Press, September 20, 2022)

βοΈ 30 Minute Ask Me Anything with Rebecca Gardyn Levington, author of BRAINSTORM! (Sleeping Bear Press, 2022), WHATEVER COMES TOMORROW (Barefoot Books, Mar 7, 2023), I WILL ALWAYS BE…(HarperCollins, Spring 2024), and AFIKOMAN, WHERE’D YOU GO? (Penguin/Rocky Pond, Spring 2024)

βοΈ Ask Me Anything Zoom Chat and signed book from Cindy Schrauben, author of THIS COULD BE YOU (Cardinal Rule Press, April 2022) and the just announced HANK’S CHANGE OF HEART (scheduled for February 2025 from The Little Press)

βοΈ Signed copies of LISTEN (Simon & Schuster/Paula Wiseman Books July, 2021), COUNT ON US (Barefoot Books, September 20, 2022), and the new TWO DOGS ON A TRIKE board book (Harry N. Abrams, October 18, 2022) – 1 prize 3 books from author Gabi Snyder

βοΈ 15 minute AMA with Teresa Robeson, award-winning author of QUEEN OF PHYSICS: How Wu Chien Shiung Helped Unlock the Secrets of the Atom (Union Square Kids 2019), TWO BICYCLES IN BEIJING (Albert Whitman 2020), and the forthcoming CLOUDS IN SPACE: THE NEBULA STORY (scheduled for Spring 2024 from Candlewick/MIT Kids Press)

βοΈ A signed copy of SLEEPY HAPPY CAPY CUDDLES (Page Street Kids, October 18, 2022) by Mike Allegra AND a signed copy of DIWALI IN MY NEW HOME (Beaming Books, September 27, 2022) by Shachi Kaushik


Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! π
So! Butt in chair! Snack and beverage near to hand! Writing implement ready! Mischief-making, Mayhem-creating Thinking Caps on!
One. . .
Two. . .
Three. . .
WRITE!!!!!!!
Welcome to Tuesday Debut, Everyone!
Today I’m thrilled to introduce Caroline Perry whose debut picture book is exceptionally timely. THE CORGI AND THE QUEEN, releasing today, was written and in production long before the sad event of September 8, 2022, but with the Queen’s passing this lovely book is an uplifting tribute to her and her beloved dogs.
The Corgi and the Queen
written by Caroline Perry
illustrated by Lydia Corry
Godwin Books/Macmillan
publication date 11/22/22

Even a monarch needs a best friend and Queen Elizabeth II found one in a corgi pup she named Susan. From princesshood to queendom the pair forged an unbreakable bond, with Susan even participating in Elizabethβs wedding day and joining her on honeymoon with Prince Philip. Over the course of her remarkable seventy-year reign the Queen had more than thirty corgi companions, and almost all were direct descendants of her cherished Susan.
SUSANNA: Welcome, Caroline! Thank you so much for joining us today. We’re really looking forward to hearing about this book! Where did the idea for it come from?
CAROLINE: Everyone knows that the Queen adored corgis, and that she had many corgi companions throughout the course of her life. Iβve been a journalist for many years so I always look for the βwhyββwhat was it that made Elizabeth love these dogs so much? What was the defining moment or relationship that formed this incredible attachment? When I started my research it wasnβt long before the βahaβ moment struck. The story of the young Princess Elizabeth and Susan was utterly enchanting, and it answered the βwhyβ quite succinctly!
SUSANNA: How long did it take you to write this book?
CAROLINE: Many months! I really immersed myself in the story, researching Queen Elizabethβs young life in particular. Susan was by Elizabethβs side for so many of the defining moments in her lifeβduring World War II, when the princess served in a womenβs regiment; when Elizabeth married Prince Philip; when her beloved βPapaβ, King George VI, died, and when she was crowned Queen at the age of 25. Susan was also there when Elizabeth gave birth to her first child, who is now King Charles III. I really sought out the βheartβ of the story, and for me, this was Susan being hidden in one of the carriages Elizabeth and Philip rode in on their wedding day, and Susan joining the newlyweds on honeymoon. From here, the rest of the story flowed very naturally as the βheartβ is like the bookβs North Star.
SUSANNA: Did you go through many revisions?
CAROLINE: I always thought that the concept of a story βfinding youβ was a myth but in this case, it grabbed hold of me and wouldnβt let me go. Of course I had several critiques on the manuscript, and I made many edits along the way, but the version in the book is not hugely different from my original draft. This story really let me know how it wanted to be written!
SUSANNA: When did you know your manuscript was ready for submission?
CAROLINE: When I knew that it was a story that I would love to read to my children! As itβs a longer picture book, I had also asked for βbeta readsβ from a librarian, and from some older elementary-aged kids (not friends, who will always tell you that your work is great, even when it isnβt). The feedback I received was, overwhelmingly, βwe want this to be a book, so please make sure that it becomes one!β At this point I knew that it was ready to be sent out into the world.
SUSANNA: When and how did you submit?
CAROLINE: I submitted the manuscript to a handful of agents. Allison Remcheck at Stimola Literary Studio replied very shortly after she received it, and she asked if we could set up a chat. She was so enthusiastic about the book, and I loved her personality and the way that her vision for the book was exactly aligned with mine. I knew that she would be the perfect partner so even though I had interest from another agent, I was absolutely delighted to accept Allisonβs offer of representation!
SUSANNA: How long after you found out about your book going to acquisitions (if you did) or after you submitted were you told it was a βyesβ?
CAROLINE: We got an expression of interest from my editor, Laura Godwin, a day or two after the manuscript had been subbed. This was in December, when publishing pretty much shuts down, so I knew that nothing would happen over the holidays. In early January we were told that the manuscript was going to acquisitions, and on Friday of that same week, the offer came in!
SUSANNA: When did you get “the call”, which these days is more likely to be βthe emailβ?Β (Best moment ever! π)
CAROLINE: I will never forget βthe callβ as it happened on what had been an incredibly difficult day. My husband works as a travel agent, and his business was decimated by the pandemic. On this particular day weβd had some really bad news and I was trying very hard to hold it together for my three young kids, who were all being homeschooled at the time. A local playground had just re-opened after many months of closure so I took the children there, hiding my sadness behind oversized sunglasses (and a mask, of course). When my phone rang and I saw my agentβs name on the screen, I think the world stopped spinning on its axis for a moment or two. Allison told me that we had an offer, and this time my tears were happy ones!
SUSANNA: How long was it between getting your offer and getting your contract to sign?
CAROLINE: It was six months between accepting the offer and signing the contract.
SUSANNA: How did you celebrate signing your contract?Β
CAROLINE: Takeout pizza with my kids, and a glass of something fizzy when they went to bed!
SUSANNA: Was the contract what you expected in terms of advance, royalty percentage, publication timeline, author copies etc.?
CAROLINE: Iβd spoken to a few published authors before my contract arrived so I knew roughly what to expect from a Big 5 house. My agent is brilliant at negotiating and this is an area where good agents are worth their weight in gold. Book contracts are long, complex and wordy and I was very grateful to have her deal with that side of things!
SUSANNA: Can you tell us a little about the editorial process?
CAROLINE: My editor didnβt request any specific changes. We made some tweaks but there were no significant revisions. Laura had a wonderful vision for the book and she loved the story as it was, which was incredible!
SUSANNA: What was your experience of the illustration process like?
CAROLINE: Before Lydia was brought on board I was shown some of her sample sketches. Within seconds of laying eyes on her work I said, βyes!β I absolutely loved her illustration style and I felt so lucky to have an opportunity to work with her. A few months after signing the contract I got to see some of Lydiaβs rough sketches, which really blew my mind! I only had a couple of very minor suggestions for changes, which the editor agreed with, but I honestly couldnβt have been happier with the work that I saw. About six months before publication I received a printed ARC in the mail, and seeing mine and Lydiaβs book laid out, with the text and stunning color illustrations, was an experience I will never forget.
I donβt think I included a single art note in this manuscript! As itβs a biography, I knew that the illustrator would want to do her own research into the aesthetics of the people and places in the book.
SUSANNA: Did you get to see advance reviews from Kirkus, SLJ, etc? What was that like?
CAROLINE: I actually stumbled across my Kirk-us review by accident! I was very happy to see that it was positive. And I just found out that I got a lovely Booklist review, too!
SUSANNA: How long did it take from offer to having the first copy in your hand?
CAROLINE: My publication date was brought forward twice so I was lucky to get it earlier than I had anticipated! It was only 23 months between offer and βon saleβ which is a pretty short timeline in picture book publication.
I donβt actually know how many copies are in the first run printing!
SUSANNA: What kind of marketing and promotion has your publisher done for this book?
CAROLINE: Theyβve sent digital ARCs to book bloggers and reviewers, and liaised with various trade publications. They sent out a press release and set up an interview withΒ People.comΒ that was picked up by Vanity Fair and a host of other news websites!Β

SUSANNA: Wow! That is amazing! Describe any marketing/promotion you did for this book.
CAROLINE: Iβve really thrown myself into the book promo! Lydia Corry and I worked together to make a book trailer. We shared some very emotional moments in the aftermath of the Queenβs death, when we had to change the trailer text to past tense. I have also printed bookmarks and stickers (designed by the amazing Lydia!) and I learned how to design and print posters, vinyl signs, headers for bags of dog treats, and an array of materials for an event called βSoCal Corgi Beach Dayβ. I hired a booth, set up some really fun photo props, and offered a βWheel of Paw-tuneβ spin for people who pre-ordered the book. It was a LOT of work but so much fun, too. I got to cuddle dozens of corgis, and speak to some wonderful people who love the breed as much as the Queen did. I have also designed a website, set up author accounts on Instagram and TikTok, and become something of a whiz on Canva! Iβve organized interviews and podcast chats, and arranged a few book signing events in Los Angeles. Iβm really excited about those!
SUSANNA: How long was it between the time you started writing seriously and the time you sold your first picture book?
CAROLINE: Iβve been writing professionally for the entirety of my adult lifeβI had my first piece published in a national British newspaper during my second year at college. I submitted an article (via fax!) to an editor and it was published, but with someone elseβs byline. When I contacted the editor to gently point out the mistake I was offered an unpaid internship by way of an apology, and I grabbed that opportunity with both hands. I started at the very bottom of the chain, cleaning out filing cabinets, picking up editorsβ dry-cleaning and delivering mail to senior journalists. It was very high-stress environment with long hours with no time for mentorship but I always made myself useful, staying later than I needed to, and I let all the editors know that I would be more than happy to cover any event that nobody else wanted to go to. An arts editor finally agreed, and allowed me to review a very obscure play in a tiny theater above a pub in North London. I havenβt stopped writing since!
In terms of picture book writing, I started in earnest way back in 2014, when my eldest child was four. I was reading so many picture books to him, and I just fell in love with the genre. I was curious to see if I could translate my writing skills to the picture book format so I devoured the contents of my local libraryβs picture book shelves and wrote, wrote, wroteβ¦ I had a couple of ideas which became manuscripts and I sent one out to half a dozen agents. I got a champagne rejection from one of these agents, but the rest were bog-standard form passes. Once the initial stings had subsided I realized that I had made that classic βnew writerβ mistake: Iβd just gone out too soon. I hadnβt found critique partners yet, and the story Iβd queried was cute, but it wasnβt new or fresh enough to make it stand out. I took all of this on board and stepped back for a while to deal with some life βstuffβ, and to have my younger two children! All the while, I continued reading picture books as if it was my job to do so. I returned to PB writing seriously in 2018, when my youngest kiddo was two. I signed up for Susannaβs (brilliant!) course, joined the 12×12 community, and found some fantastic critique partners. It took me around 18 months to write and develop three manuscripts that I believed were query-ready. If you include my βgapβ, itβs been an eight year journey.
SUSANNA: What is the most important/helpful thing you learned on your way to publication? (Or what is your most helpful piece of advice for up and coming writers?)
CAROLINE: Gosh, so many things. Iβve learned that you need rhino hide skin to cope with all the rejections. You need the patience of a dozen saints, as publishing moves very slowly (even more so since the pandemic). And even if you think youβve written the best manuscript of all time, you need to KEEP WRITING! I also think that all up and coming writers should console themselves with the fact that there is a βsliding doorsβ element to this business. Talent and great ideas are, of course, paramount, but sometimes itβs also about landing in the right inbox at the exact right time. Itβs really hard to know what a particular agent or editor is looking for at any given moment, or to second-guess what they need to fill a hole in their lists. They might just have signed someone who wrote a book with a similar theme yours, or perhaps theyβll pass on your manuscript as theyβre allergic to dogs, or donβt like lyrical books, or theyβve got too many titles with animal protagonists? Rejections arenβt always personal, or a judgement of the quality of your work, sometimes it really is just the market at that precise time. Also, I would caution authors against writing to trends, as by the time your manuscript has landed you an agent, and then been considered by an editor, and gone through the (often lengthy) acquisitions process, itβs likely that that trend will have passed, or that the market will be saturated with books written by people who had a head start on that zeitgeisty idea. Write what you know, and write with your 4-8-year-old audience in mind. Will they find your manuscript interesting? Informative? Moving? Hilarious? What is it about your book that will make it stand out on a crowded display, and compel a customer to spend $18.99 (plus sales tax!) on it? Itβs a very competitive market, so read hundreds of recent picture books (yes, hundreds, or however many your library has in stock!) Make use of the βbook requestβ feature, most libraries are very accommodating when it comes to acquiring titles that users suggest, and see what has caught editorsβ eyes in the past three years or so. βClassicβ books are wonderful, but many of them would never be published today. Bear this in mind when youβre reading for research.
SUSANNA: Anything else you’d like to share about your book’s journey from inspiration to publication?
CAROLINE: Itβs been a long journey and I have definitely allowed imposter syndrome and feelings of βcompare/despairβ to take up residence in my head sometimes. The best way to banish these thoughts is to keep writing, keep improving, and keep going! I have dreamed of seeing my name on the front of a book since I was a new reader myself, and I still canβt believe that Iβm lucky enough to be a published author.
SUSANNA: Well, published you are! And by the looks of it, you’re off to a great start! Thank you so much for sharing your journey to publication with us, Caroline. I know we all learned a lot. And I speak for all of us when I say best of luck with this and future titles!

Author Caroline Perry
Website: www.carolineperryauthor.com
Twitter: caro_perry
Instagram: @carolinelperry
TikTok: @carolinelperry
SUSANNA: Readers, if you have questions for Caroline, please post them in the comments below and if she has time I’m sure she’ll respond!
You may purchase Caroline’s book at:
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– purchasing their books
– recommending their books to friends and family
– recommending their books to our children’s teachers and librarians
– recommending their books to our local libraries and bookstores
– suggesting them as visiting authors at our children’s schools and our local libraries
– sharing their books on social media
– reviewing their books on Goodreads, Amazon, Barnes&Noble, and other sites where people go to learn about books.
Thank you all for stopping by to read today! Have a lovely, inspiration-filled Tuesday! Maybe today is the day you’ll write your debut picture book π
Missed any previous Tuesday Debuts? Check them out!
Christy Mihaly – Hey! Hey! Hay! A Tale of Bales And The Machines That Make Them
Jessie Oliveros – The Remember Balloons
Beth Anderson – An Inconvenient Alphabet: Ben Franklin And Noah Webster’s Spelling Revolution
Hannah Holt – The Diamond And The Boy
Laura Renauld – Porcupine’s Pie
Annie Romano – Before You Sleep: A Bedtime Book Of Gratitude
Melissa Stoller – Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush
Sherry Howard – Rock And Roll Woods
Kate Narita – 100 Bugs! A Counting Book
Vivian Kirkfield – Pippa’s Passover Plate
Laura Roettiger – Aliana Reaches For The Moon
Matthew Lasley – Pedro’s Pan: A Gold Rush Story
Natalee Creech – When Day Is Done
Margaret Chiu Greanias – Maximillian Villainous
Wendy Greenley – Lola Shapes The Sky
Danielle Dufayet – You Are Your Strong
B.J. Lee – There Was An Old Gator Who Swallowed A Moth
Cathy Ballou Mealey – When A Tree Grows
Pippa Chorley – Counting Sheep
Sandra Sutter – The Real Farmer In The Dell
Jill Mangel Weisfeld – Riley The Retriever Wants A New Job (self pub)
Kathleen Cornell Berman – The Birth Of Cool: How Jazz Great Miles Davis Found His Sound
Eleanor Ann Peterson – Jurassic Rat
Sarah Hoppe – Who Will? Will You?
Marla LeSage – Pirate Year Round
Stacey Corrigan – The Pencil Eater
Shannon Stocker – Can U Save The Day?
Nadine Poper – Randall And Randall
Christine Evans β Evelyn The Adventurous Entomologist
Karen Kiefer – Drawing God (religious market)
Dawn Young – The Night Baafore Christmas
Heather Gale – Hoβonani: Hula Warrior
Ciara O’Neal – Flamingo Hugs Aren’t For Everyone (self pub)
Theresa Kiser – A Little Catholic’s Book Of Liturgical Colors (religious market)
Lindsey Hobson – Blossom’s Wish (self pub)
Kirsten Larson – Wood, Wire, Wings: Emma Lilian Todd Invents An Airplane
Valerie Bolling – Let’s Dance!
Janet Johnson – Help Wanted: Must Love Books
Heather Kinser – Small Matters: The Hidden Power of the Unseen
Kelly Carey – How Long Is Forever?
Mary Wagley Copp – Wherever I Go
Nell Cross Beckerman – Down Under The Pier
Claire Noland – Evie’s Field Day: More Than One Way To Win
Sharon Giltrow – Bedtime, Daddy!
Gabi Snyder – Two Dogs On A Trike
Lisa Katzenberger – National Regular Average Ordinary Day
Teresa Krager – Before Your Birth Day
Lindsay H. Metcalf – Beatrix Potter, Scientist
Nancy Roe Pimm – Fly, Girl, Fly! Shaesta Waiz Soars Around The World
Jolene GutiΓ©rrez – Mac And Cheese And The Personal Space Invader
Julie Rowan-Zoch – Louis (picture book illustration debut!)
Janie Emaus – Latkes For Santa
Amy Mucha – A Girl’s Bill Of Rights
Melanie Ellsworth – Hip,Hip…Beret!
Rebecca Kraft Rector – Squish Squash Squished
Gnome Road Publishing (publishing house debut)
Sue Heavenrich – 13 Ways To Eat A Fly
Julie Rowan-Zoch – I’m A Hare So There (author/illustrator debut)
Nancy Derey Riley – Curiosity’s Discovery (author/illustrator self-published debut)
Moni Ritchie Hadley – The Star Festival
Sita Singh – Birds Of A Feather
Ann Magee – Branches Of Hope: The 9/11 Survivor Tree
Amanda Davis – 30,000 Stitches: The Inspiring Story of the National 9/11 Flag (nonfiction)
Jennifer Buchet – Little Medusa’s Hair Do-lemma
Michelle Vattula – The Stalking Seagulls
Christine Van Zandt – A Brief History Of Underpants (nonfiction)
Candice Marley Conner – Sassafras And Her Teeny Tiny Tail
Becky Scharnhorst – My School Stinks!
Darshana Khiani – How To Wear A Sari
Ana Siqueira – Bella’s Recipe For Success
Kate Allen Fox – Pando: A Living Wonder Of Trees (nonfiction)
Jenna Waldman – Sharkbot Shalom
Karen A. Wyle – You Can’t Kiss A Bubble
Rebecca Mullin – One Tomato (board book)
Cynthia Argentine – Night Becomes Day: Changes In Nature (illustrated with photographs)
Karen Greenwald – Vote For Susanna: The First Woman Mayor (nonfiction)
Anne Appert – Blob (author/illustrator)
Dianna Wilson-Sirkovsky – James’ Reading Rescue
Karen Condit – Turtle On The Track (hybrid publishing)
Renee LaTulippe – The Crab Ballet (picture book poem)
Amy Duchene – Pool Party (collaboration/co-writing)
Kimberly Wilson – A Penny’s Worth
Candace Spizzirri – Fishing With Grandpa And Skye
Carrie Tillotson – Counting To Bananas
Patrice Gopo – All The Places We Call Home
Rebecca Gardyn Levington – Brainstorm!
Jocelyn Watkinson – The Three Canadian Pigs: A Hockey Story
Shachi Kaushik – Diwali In My New Home
Carrie Sharkey Asner – Blueberry Blue Bubble (self published)
Gela Kalaitzidis – Ozzie & Prince Zebedee (author/illustrator)
Wow! We haven’t had a Perfect Picture Book Friday in a while, due to Halloweensie.
(In case you’re wondering, all evidence to the contrary, the Halloweensie judging is well underway and we are close to posting the finalists. With a little luck, I’ll get them up before it’s time to post the guidelines for the Holiday Contest, but the way things have been going in my world lately, it’s anyone’s bet! π)
Anyway, anyone who has been posting Perfect Picture Books regularly and has books to add, please feel free to put them on today’s list!
I have a lovely book to share with you today, just in time for you all to run out and purchase one as a holiday (or pre-holiday) gift for any wee folks you know π
OR, leave a comment on today’s post between now and Thursday, November 24 (hey! that’s Thanksgiving – easy to remember! π) and you could be the lucky winner of a copy of this sweet book! (US residents only)
GIVEAWAY WINNER DRAWN NOVEMBER 25 – PAT TILTON!!!

Title: Happy Birthday, Christmas Child!: A Counting Nativity Book (Board Book)
Written By: Laura Sassi
Illustrated By: Gabi Murphy
Publisher: Paraclete Press, October 2022
Suitable For Ages: 1-4
Themes/Topics: Christmas Story, counting
Opening:
“One stable on a busy hill
with only ox and donkey ’til…
Tap, tap. “Hello?” Two heads appear.
“The inn is full. Can we stay here?”
“Yes, of course!” squeak three small mice.
“It’s rustic, but the view is nice.”

Brief Synopsis: This is the Christmas Story, told simply in lovely rhyme, with plenty of things for youngest readers to count.

Links To Resources: Today we have a wonderful activity straight from the creative author herself!
Play a HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHRISTMAS CHILD Matching Sticker Game
by Laura Sassi

After enjoying the book, little ones might be ready for this book-themed matching game from the free downloadable βHappy Birthday, Christmas Childβ activity kit. The sticker templates for the game are found on page six. NOTE: You might also enjoy the other resources there, including cupcake toppers, coloring pages, number sheets and a complete party plan!
Directions: (photos above and below)


Why I Like This Book: You have probably guessed (since this is at least the 3rd or 4th… or maybe 5th? book of Laura’s that I’ve reviewed for PPBF π) that I am a devoted Laura Sassi fan. This newest book is no exception! It tells the Christmas Story in a way that is accessible and appealing to youngest readers. The story takes us to the stable where Mary and Joseph are welcomed by the animals and eat a simple meal of bread and figs. The baby kicks and moves, reminding everyone that it will soon be born. The joyous angels proclaim the birth and send the shepherds hurrying to greet the newborn babe. Simply told in lovely rhyme, the whole story is presented in a way that is true to the bible’s telling but written for youngest readers to enjoy, with things to count on every page along the way – from 1 stable to 10 tiny toes. π
I hope you enjoy it as much as I do π

Author Laura Sassi
Visit her website!
Laura Sassi has a passion for telling stories in prose and rhyme. She is the author of multiple books for young children including the best-selling Goodnight, Ark (Zonderkidz), which was a 2015 Christian Book Award Finalist; Goodnight, Manger (Zonderkidz); Diva Delores and the Opera House Mouse (Union Square Publishing), which was a 2021-2022 Iowa Goldfinch Award Nominee; Love Is Kind (Zonderkidz), which was a 2020 Anna Dewdney Read Together Award Honor Book; Little Ewe: The Story of One Lost Sheep (Beaming Books), Bunny Finds Easter (Zonderkidz), Happy Birthday, Christmas Child (Paraclete Press), her new counting board book, and coming in 2023, from Paraclete Press, My Tender Heart Bible and My Tender Heart Prayer Book.
For the complete list of books with resources, please visit Perfect Picture Books.
PPBF folks, please add your titles and post-specific blog links (and any other info you feel like filling out π) to the form below so we can all come see what fabulous picture books you’ve chosen to share this week!
Have a wonderful weekend, everyone! π
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