Would You Read It Wednesday #320 – Lane Makes Mama Smile (PB)

Hey there, Peeps!

I don’t know about you, but I feel like I’ve been working like the proverbial beaver this week and have nothing to show for it except that it’s already Wednesday and I’m still on Monday’s to-do list!

Uh… and that might be last Monday’s now I come to think of it! 😊

It’s possible my to-do lists are too long!

Because, to be fair, I have done Many Things!…it’s just that the list seems to grow at the same rate it shrinks, so it never gets any shorter!

Luckily, I know the answer:

Something Chocolate!

My brother gave me this card for my birthday a few days ago (which just proves we’re related 😊 ):

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So you can feel totally virtuous as you dig into today’s Dirty Chocolate Chip Cookies – perfect for springtime! – and 100% healthful!

Dirty Chocolate Chip Cookies

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Recipe (including helpful video) HERE at Cookies & Cups

Mmmmm!!!!!  Salad-y! 😊😊😊

(you really cannot go wrong with chocolate chip cookies with crushed Oreo in the dough, rolled in Oreo crumbs to bake!)

Now then, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from Sarah, who you know pretty well by now from many previous pitches 🙂  Sarah says, “I am an Optometrist, mother, and lover of the outdoors. I live in NH with my husband and two children. I love to paint in my free time, when I’m not writing.”

Find her on the web at www.sarahheturadny.com

 

Here is her pitch:

Working Title: Lane Makes Mama Smile

Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 5-8)

The Pitch: LANE MAKES MAMA SMILE is about a boy who wants to make his eighth birthday special.  His mama’s depression seems to be getting in the way.  Lane finds a clever way to succeed, and he realizes that his mother is still capable of much love.

So what do you think?  Would You Read It?  YES, MAYBE or NO?

If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest.  If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Sarah improve her pitch.  Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome.  (However I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful.  I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)

Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks!  For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on Would You Read it in the dropdown under For Writers in the bar above.  There are openings in June, so you have time to polish your pitch before putting it up for helpful feedback and a chance to have it read and commented on by editor Erin Molta!

Sarah is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch!  I am looking forward to FINISHING MY TO-DO LIST!!!

Ah! Ever the optimist!  One can hope, right? 😊

Have a wonderful Wednesday everyone!!! 😊