Boy do we have all kinds of Would You Read It fun for today! Grab your Something Chocolate and settle in!
First off, we have the September Pitch Pick, and all 4 participants have revised their pitches with an eye to your wonderful comments, so this should be very interesting!
Melody Wants A Piano (PB)
When Melody returns from Grandma’s with a song in her heart, she wants a piano. Perhaps street singing, a baseball game, and a talent show will help her raise the funds to share her song with others.
Buff The Magic Dragon (PB)
Buff the Magic Dragon is afraid of EVERYTHING. But when his magic trick-gone-wrong lands the baby Princess Ponypants in the tentacles of Captain Meanie Bones Jones, Buff must swallow his fear to save her.
Once Upon A Toilet (PB)
Mr. Eubend, a plumber for King Fartsalot and Queen Piddle, was called away to an emergency in a neighbouring kingdom. En-route he finds he is in great demand.
Confessions Of The Tomato Turner (PB)
Peter proudly helps his mom in the family vegetable garden, but when he pulls up a baby tomato plant instead of a weed, Peter is torn between telling his mom and hiding the evidence in the compost pile.
Please vote below for the pitch you think is best and should get a read by editor Erin Molta! Voting will be open until Friday October 12 11:59 PM EDT.
Next, we have today’s pitch which is fun because it’s an early reader and we don’t get too many of those. Our pitcher today is Sidney Levesque, who is a former newspaper reporter and editor. She now works for a university and writes freelance. She is a wife and the mother of a toddler, and is enjoying dipping her toe into the great ocean of fiction!
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: Phantom And The Boneyard
Age/Genre: Early Reader
The Pitch: The Phantom awakens to find himself separated from his squadron and relocated to a military “boneyard” in the Arizona desert with other retired airplanes used for spare parts. But Phantom isn’t ready to retire and starts plotting his escape with the help of new friends before he, too, ends up in permanent storage with his “eyes” wrapped shut.
Sidney also asked to include the opening of her story, which I thought would be very fun to share 🙂 so here it is:
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?