Update February 19 – Sorry folks! We need more time to make our decisions between all these amazing entries! I will get the finalists up just as soon as I can!!!
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Valentinies rock
And so do YOU!
Hang onto your chocolate everyone! It’s time for . . .
The Third Annual Pretty Much World Famous
Valentiny Writing Contest!!!

Valen-tiny because the stories are not very long and are written for little people 🙂
The Contest: since writing for children is all about “big emotion for little people” (I forget who said that, but someone did so I put it in quotes!) and Valentines Day is all about emotion, write a Valentines story appropriate for children (children here defined as ages 12 and under) maximum 214 words in which someone is hopeful! Your someone can hope for something good or something bad. Your story can be poetry or prose, sweet, funny, surprising or anything in between, but it will only count for the contest if it includes someone hopeful (can be the main character but doesn’t have to be) and is 214 words (get it? 2/14 for Valentines Day 🙂 You can go under the word count but not over! (Title is not included in the word count.) If you are so inclined, you are welcome to enter more than one entry – just remember you’ll be competing against yourself 🙂 No illustration notes please!
Post your story on your blog between right now this very second and Wednesday February 14th by 11:59 PM EDT and add your post-specific link on the form below. There will be no Would You Read It or PPBF this week, so the post and the list of links will stay up for everyone to enjoy. If you don’t have a blog and would like to enter, you can simply copy and paste your entry in the comments section below. (Or, if you have difficulty with the comments, which unfortunately sometimes happens, you may email your entry to me and I’ll post it for you! susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com ) Please copy and paste your entry into the body of the email – no attachments! Please only post your entry ONCE! Either on your blog and the associated link list, or in the comment section of my post! Otherwise it gets confusing 🙂
The Judging: My lovely assistants and I will narrow down the entrants to 6-10 top choices depending on number and quality of entries (hee hee hee – you know how much trouble I have with the narrowing, so we’ll see) which will be posted here and voted on for a winner on Monday February 19th (or possibly Tuesday February 20th if the judges need extra time.) The winner will be announced by Friday February 23rd. (And there will be no WYRI or PPBF that week either so that everyone will have time to read and vote and so that we don’t confuse PPBF with announcing winners.) The dates of the judging/voting/winner announcements are subject to finagling depending on how much time the judges actually end up needing!
Judging criteria will include:
- Kid-appeal/Kid-friendliness – remember, this is a story for kids!
- Creativity in using hopefulness and success in making us feel the hopefulness!
- Valentine’s Day appropriateness – this is a VALENTINE story!
- Quality of story – we will look for basic story elements and a true story arc
- Quality of writing – use and flow of language, correctness of mechanics, excellence of rhyme and meter if you use it.
- Originality – surprise us with something new and different! 🙂
The Prizes: Oh, boy, do we have some GREAT prizes! I feel certain you are all highly motivated to compete for these!!!
– a PB manuscript read and critique from Nikki Garcia, assistant editor at Little, Brown!

Nikki Garcia
– a PB manuscript read and phone call critique with Nicole Otto, assistant editor at MacMillan Children’s Publishing!

Nicole Otto
– a PB manuscript critique from the superb multi-published award-winning author/illustrator Iza Trapani


http://izatrapani.com/blog
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– a PB manuscript critique (ms not to exceed 800 words please) along with a follow-up phone call if the author is interested from the lovely and talented Katey Howes, author of Grandmother Thorn (Ripple Grove Press 2017) and Magnolia Mudd and the Super Jumptastic Launcher Deluxe (Sterling Children’s Books 2018)
– a PB manuscript critique from the fantastic Lynne Marie, author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten – illustrated by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic, 2011), Hedgehog’s 100th Day of School – illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic, January 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play — illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Sparkhouse Family, 2018) and Moldilocks and the 3 Scares (Sterling, pending) . Her stories, poems, folk tales and crafts have appeared in many magazine markets, including Family Fun, Highlights, High Five, Spider, Baby Bug and more. She was a first-round panelis for 2016 Cybils Awards and again, in 2017. In addition, she’s an on-staff writer for Jon and Laura Bard’s Children’s Book Insider and a book reviewer. She lives on a lake in South Florida with her daughter and Anakin, their little Schipperke, as well as several resident water birds. She has offers both critiques and mentorships for writers. You can learn more about her at www.LiterallyLynneMarie.com
– a PB manuscript critique (non-rhyming please) from the wonderful and amazing Melissa Stoller, author of The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection: Return To Coney Island (Spork 2017)
– a signed copy of Charlie Takes His Shot: How Charlie Sifford Broke The Color Barrier In Golf (Albert Whitman 2018) from fabulous author Nancy Churnin accompanied by a terrific Teacher’s Guide (created by Marcie Colleen)
– a signed copy of Twinderella from Corey Rosen Schwartz AND a signed copy of The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection: Return To Coney Island from Melissa Stoller
– a copy of Laura Purdie Salas’s brand new book Making A Living Writing Books For Kids
– a copy of the 2018 Children’s Writer’s and Illustrator’s Market (it’s only February – still very useful!)
I can’t thank these authors and other industry professionals enough for their incredible generosity! Please visit their sites, buy and recommend their books and services to your writer friends and/or friends with kids, write them nice reviews on Amazon, GoodReads etc if you’ve read and liked their books, and show your appreciation to them in any way you can!
Now.
I’m afraid the time has come for my sample (because I would never ask you to do anything I wouldn’t do myself 🙂 )
Brace yourselves for mediocrity 🙂 (I recommend a large quantity of chocolate to get you through – perhaps a dump truck load or so?) and prepare for the return of Boris and Irma (who appeared in the inaugural Valentiny 🙂 )
A Hopeful Kind Of Valentine
(214 words on the nose!)
Three days before Valentine’s, Irma made her list.
“I will make 32 valentines!” she announced. “How many are you making, Boris?”
“Zero,” said Boris.
“Spoilsport,” said Irma. “I hope Norman’s not a spoilsport.”
Irma cut construction paper.
“Are you making pink hearts or red hearts,” she asked.
“Neither,” said Boris.
“Party pooper,” said Irma. “I hope Norman’s not a party pooper.”
The day before Valentine’s, Irma decorated. Confetti hearts and glitter flew everywhere.
Boris ignored her.
But then she said, “I hope Norman will be my Valentine.” She sounded so wishful that Boris looked at her thoughtfully. He had doubts about Norman.
Boris made a list.
On Valentine’s Day, Irma clutched her valentines. “I hope Norman will give me a valentine,” she told Boris on the school bus.
Boris worried.
Tears rolled silently down Irma’s cheeks all the way home. She went right to her room.
Boris went right to work.
At dinner, Irma sat with her eyes downcast and said nothing.
Although Valentine’s was stupid, Boris didn’t want Irma to be sad. If only his plan would work.
He set the pink-frosted, heart-shaped chocolate cake he had made in front of Irma.
“It’s not Norman, but Happy Valentine’s Day,” he said.
“It’s perfect,” said Irma, hugging him.
“Yuck,” said Boris, but he smiled.
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Everyone feeling better about their stories now? I should certainly HOPE so! 🙂 After that horror show you can post yours with certainty that yours is better! 🙂
I can’t wait to read all of yours! I’m SO looking forward to them! I hope there will be LOTS – the more the merrier! And there are still nearly 5 days to write, so you have time if you haven’t written yet. Feel free to spread the word to your writing friends as well. And your reading friends – parents, teachers, etc. The more people who read and enjoy your stories, the better!!! Also, have I mentioned the number of people who have gotten agents or sold manuscripts to editors based on the writing contest entries over the years? There are quite a few! One of these days I’ll figure out how many and do a blog post 🙂
So!
Contest Entrants, remember to add your post-specific link to the list below so we can all come read your awesome stories! (Post-specific means not your main blog url, but the actual url of the post that has your story in it – otherwise if you post again before the contest ends, your link will take readers… and judges!… to the wrong place!) Please allow a few minutes and possibly refresh your browser before deciding that your link hasn’t posted and adding it a second time or emailing it to me.
Eager Readers – click on the links in the list to visit the blogs and read the stories. And be sure to read the 76 fabulous entries posted in the comment section below!!!
Happy Valentines Week, Everyone! ❤
Scroll through the comments to find these wonderful stories!
- Victoria’s Valentine – Susan
- Victor’s Valentine’s Day Surprise – Sharmaine
- You – Jennifer B
- the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever – Erin
- The Lost Dog Dilemma – Chris
- Thank You – Katelyn
- Positively Paulina – Nancy
- A Day In The Life Of Cupid – Marty
- Rose And Tulip – M.S.
- The Valentine Monster Crash – Megan
- Valenswine – Susan
- Top Secret Valentine – Marie
- Tiny the Pony Wants to be Special – Kaye
- Grandma’s Cookies – Deborah
- This Will Be The Year – Sara
- Who Sent This Valentine? – Marie
- Hope In A Jar – Anne
- A Fur-Ever Valentine – Beth
- A Card With A Heart – Laura
- Upside Down Valentine’s Day – Ryan
- Not Alone – Amy
- Valentine’s Day Strike – Chambrae
- I Love Ewe – Kirsten
- A Valentine’s Day Adventure – Sarah H
- Adeline’s Hope – Carmen
- Snowy Owl Valentine Delivery – Kathleen
- A Valentine Snowman – Rebecca
- The Heart Art Contest – Marie
- The Right Valentine – Lauren
- The Red Envelope – Karen
- First Grade Love – Darcee
- Mama’s Purple Heart – Anne B
- Valentine’s Day With The Deli Family – Sandra
- Valentine-Making Time – Robin
- Unexpected Valentine – Brian
- The Valentine Tree – Jenny B
- Valentine Treat – Judy V
- A Purrfect Valentine – Mia
- Eliza’s Broken Heart – Anne S
- Porcupine’s Gift – Jim
- Hope’s Valentine – Nancy R
- Yellow And Blue Valentines – Marty
- Tootsie The Wonder Dog’s Valentiny Poem – Kathy
- Sakie’s Flock – Gayle
- Teddy’s Valentine’s Day – Deb
- Dear Daughter – Sandra S
- Mum’s The Word – Judy S
- Hope Floats – Jen B
- Charlotte’s New School – M.R.
- The Valentine Genie – Anne S
- Triple The Love – Brandi
- Emily’s Big Idea – Beth
- Red – Mary
- The Valentine Hat – Gwen
- Winston Wins! – Corine
- Bamboo Panda’s Special Surprise – Liz
- Oh No! Where Did It Go? – Mona
- Sweet Love – Christine
- You Rock! – Karla
- Picture Perfect – Tiffany
- Bunny Hugs – Nina
- Timberdoodle Valentine – Leigh Anne
- Valentine For Mom – Susie
- The Muddy Valentine – Karen
- Chocolaty Delight – Gina
- Valentine Handyman – Meg
- Daisy Power – Patricia
- Cupid’s Graduation Wish – Lucretia
- Huggle And Snug – Stephanie V
- My Valentine – Kurt
- Cupid’s Candy Craving—Marvin’s Valentine’s Surprise – Lucretia
- A Pirate Valentine – Ingrid
- Lily’s Leg – Stephanie K
- If I Gave A Witch A Valentine – Amber
- Bunnies’ Heart-Shaped Hopes – Jen R
- Grumble’s Best Valentine’s Day Ever – Katrina
Fun, fun, fun. I love your story, Sus. And I love you. SWAK!
Thanks, Rob 🙂 Love you too 🙂
My link isn’t there. I tried three times. A sign? I believe it is.
Oh, gosh! Thank you SOOOO much for letting me know! I screwed up something, but I think I fixed it? Hopefully??? Do you mind refreshing your browser and letting me know if your entry shows up for you now… as well as the others? MWAH!
All fixed, Sus.
Yay! Thanks so much, Rob!!! ❤
It appears I submitted my story twice. Mistake! Sorry!
No worries, Brooke! The file was messed up and I had to fix it. I hope it’s working properly now! And I think I’ve removed your extra link… one can only hope 🙂
Thank you! : )
Victoria’s Valentine
By: Susan Schade (213 words)
Miss Meg was everyone’s favorite teacher.
She always smiled, sang songs about math, and shared pictures of her puppy.
Every student wanted to give her a special Valentine.
Victoria made a huge heart cookie.
She carefully mixed ingredients and baked it until golden.
She decorated it with creamy frosting and delicate sprinkles,
and placed it in a box with a bow.
The box barely fit through the door.
The others carried creative cards and colorful cardboard hearts.
But she brought the only cookie.
Victoria hoped hers would be the greatest gift.
The room roared with chattering children unpacking their things.
Bryce’s backpack slid to the floor, spilling books everywhere.
Victoria hurried to help and caught the corner of the cookie box.
The box landed with a crash.
She peeked into the package.
Her present was in pieces.
Victoria’s heart was crushed.
Miss Meg arrived, and the kids took their seats.
Victoria blinked back tears.
She did not have the greatest gift.
Miss Meg smiled and swooned at the wonderful things the children had made.
Victoria sadly handed her the box.
When Miss Meg looked inside, she grinned and whispered to Victoria,
“I love this because I can share it with the class.”
As they ate, everyone agreed that Victoria gave the greatest gift.
So sweet! I love the turning something tragic into something joyous.
Thank you!
I love the line, “Victoria’s heart was crushed,” right after her heart-shaped cookie is broken. Perfect!
Ahhh, tragedy turned into tasty treats. 🙂 Nice! I wish you well with this story.
Poor Victoria! How wonderful that Miss Meg could find a solution so that everyone could see how great Victoria’s gift was! Good luck Susan! Liz
Sweet!
Great ending. So sad that it crashed as Victoria was being helpful, but I agree that it is wonderful that Miss Meg did an awesome job turning tragedy into a triumph. Wish you you the best of luck.
Love the description of Miss Meg–the kind of teacher every child deserves. Love the double entendre of “Victoria’s heart was crushed.” Best wishes!
Love this sweet story. Maybe a crushed heart isn’t so bad?!
Sounds like my kind of teacher. Sweet story.
Way to turn crumbs and crying into the greatest gift! These kinds of things happen so many times, a thoughtful response can keep a child from being crushed. Nicely done.
Oh, the heartbreak of having something you’ve worked so hard for not turn out as you’d hoped! Poor Victoria, just trying to be helpful! I can see why Miss Meg is everyone’s favorite teacher – she knew how to turn a tough situation into perfection! Thanks so much for this sweet entry, Susan, and for joining in the contest fun!
Sweet entry, Susanna!
Thanks, Pat 🙂
Tons of emotion in this sweet story with a happy ending 🙂
good luck to you!
ENTRY POSTED FOR SHARMAINE
Victor’s Valentine’s Day Surprise
by Sharmaine Bernard
It’s Valentine’s Day and Victor is anxious. He made cards for all his friends. Some have heart shaped chocolates inside. Some have xoxo pictures with sweet messages. Some cards have pink lollipops taped to the outside. Others are hearts with a smile on the inside and outside.
Victor smiled as he gave each friend their card. His classmates also exchanged their Valentine’s Day cards, taking turns trading candies and special messages, but Victor didn’t receive any Valentine’s Day cards or sweet candies. Victor was hopeful, but as the final Valentine’s Day cards were handed out and he still receive any, he was sad.
Maybe, I will receive cards at lunch, Victor thought. Victor went to lunch. No cards. Maybe, I will receive cards on the school bus, Victor thought. Victor got off at his bus stop. No cards. Did all my friends forget me? Maybe, they put them in my backpack, he thought. He checked every pocket and pouch. No cards.
As Victor opened his front door, he heard a roaring, “SURPRISE, HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY.” Victor’s mom made a heart shaped cake with “We love You,” written on top. His friends hadn’t forgotten him. Victor’s Valentine’s Day was the best-ever. He realized, love is the best gift of all.
Everyone likes to be remembered. Sweet story. I wish you well with it.
Thank You very much 🙂
Always delighted to see a happy ending! Those surprise parties can be a little nail-biting until the guest of honor hears the word “surprise”! Good luck in the contest Sharmaine! Liz
Thank you 🙂
A Valentine surprise party! Very original and suspenseful. So glad Victor got a happy ending. Best of Luck with this story.
Instead of giving in to growing disappointment, Victor continued to have hope. Glad all his friends recognized and rewarded his optimism. Best wishes!
Yes, love IS the best gift of all! Lovely story!
Love a happy ending! Very cute story.
Love is the key element on which we can build everything else, I think. Just like this story.
I’m so glad sweet, thoughtful Victor wasn’t forgotten on Valentine’s Day, Sharmaine! That would have been so sad! Hurray for friendship and love! Thanks so much for joining in the contest fun!
YOU
(214 words)
By Jennifer Broedel
Our first day together, my stomach did flips.
My eyes lit with sparkle. Your name crossed my lips.
I thought of our future, of serving you tea,
the afternoon snuggles, how loving you’d be.
I hoped you would like me. My heart felt a tug
the moment I cuddled you close, in a hug.
To love you felt easy. I carried you home.
We frolicked through meadows, decided to roam
the long way across spots where I used to play.
It used to be lonely, but now, since that day,
I don’t need to wonder or have to pretend
how cozy a playtime can be with a friend.
You’re expert at fort-building, kind as can be,
a guardian angel who listens to me.
You keep all my secrets and treasure my hopes.
You share in excitement, and guide me through mopes.
You fill up the holes that appear in my dreams.
You show me that nothing is hard as it seems.
You make me feel brave, hold my hand in the dark,
You tickle my funny bone, send up a spark
up through my belly and into my heart.
But what’s really special, the very best part
of all the adventures that we’ll ever share?
You’ll always be with me. My Teddy, my bear.
Aww! I love that! I have a blanket that is to me like that Teddy Bear is to the protagonist. Well, done.
awwww, So sweet. I wish you well with this story.
Great rhyming story! A sweet dedication to the all-important Teddy. Good luck! Liz
Jennifer, what a very sweet tribute to a Teddy Bear. Best of luck.
Wonderful description of a forever friend. Best wishes!
Such a tender story of friendship! Nice job on the rhyme as well!
I love your Teddy Bear rhyming story. It’s so obvious how much Teddy is loved.
Very sweet! I thought it would turn out to be either a puppy or a teddy bear. 🙂
Oh, teddy. I love this ending. Have you read the new book, Introducing Teddy? I think you’d like it!
I love your rhyme and the story is a classic. Good luck!
Aw! We all have a special place in our hearts for our teddies or similar, don’t we? 🙂 Loved the drawn out suspense of waiting to see who “YOU” were! Great job with rhyme/meter. Thanks for a sweet entry, Jennifer! 🙂
ENTRY POSTED FOR ERIN
the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever
By EK Prichett
Robin marched in circles around the nest, eager and excited.
It was Valentine’s Day, and Robin had made the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever – for Snowball.
Robin worked all week long
snipping hearts out of red craft paper,
smooshing pink stickers onto the hearts,
gluing the stickered hearts to posters,
and attaching the posters to large wooden stakes.
Everything was ready for the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever – for Snowball.
Robin rose early that morning, ready for the surprise.
MEANWHILE…
Snowball yawned
stretched
and grinned from ear to ear.
It was Valentine’s day, and Snowball had made the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever – for Robin.
Snowball had stayed up late
collecting bits of dried grass,
gathering small twigs,
hoarding tiny snippets of red craft paper that littered the ground,
and assembling it all in a heap.
Everything was ready for the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever – for Robin.
Snowball was exhausted after so much hard work,
but paced back and forth, in anticipation of the surprise.
LATER THAT DAY…
Robin flew out from the nest, feather’s fluffed….
Snowball shot out the door, watching Robin soar overhead…
“HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY!”
“WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE?”
It was the most amazing fantastic special Valentine ever. For both of them.
Cute story; two hearts on the same track. I wish you well with this.
Aww… two friends who want to make the best Valentine’s Day ever for the other. Sweet! Good luck! Liz
Cute story of two Valentine sweethearts. Good luck.
Robin and Snowball clearly understand that preparing an amazing fantastic special surprise is as much fun as receiving one. Best wishes!
Two friends with the same idea…a fantastic special Valentine! Very cute story!
What a great friendship. Nicely done.
Two such thoughtful friends. One can hope to have a friendship like this in real life.
Love the time, effort and thought these two friends put into making Valentine’s Day special for each other, Erin! Although I must admit, I was expecting a different ending for a cat and a bird 🙂 Thanks for a lovely, sweet entry and for joining the contest fun!
The Lost Dog Dilemma, by Chris Eboch
“There’s a dog in our yard!” Xavier said. “Can we keep him?”
“His owner probably misses him,” Dad said. “Try to find his home.”
“But he’s so cute and wrinkly!”
“I’m sure his owner loves him,” Dad said.
Xavier sighed. “I can put up some fliers.”
Later, Xavier said, “No one called about the flyers. So can we keep him?”
“It’s only been an hour,” Dad said. “Have patience.”
“But he’s licking my face,” Xavier said. “He likes me! His breath smells like bell peppers.”
“You’re likable,” Dad said. “And lick-able. But remember his owner who probably misses him? Maybe the neighbors know who owns him.”
Xavier sighed. “Okay, I’ll walk him. Maybe someone will recognize him.”
At the park, someone had dropped a sandwich. The dog left the bread and ate the limp lettuce and tomato, then ate a flabby carrot out of the garbage!
“A dog who likes vegetables?” Xavier said. “I know someone with lots of vegetables!”
Xavier returned home alone. “He’s the grocer’s dog. Pumpkin is a vegetarian because he’s allergic to meat. Strange dog, but really cute. The grocer gave me a thank-you gift!”
Xavier held up a brown bag. “Vegetables! He said I can visit Pumpkin any time. And now I have lots of ‘dog food’ for him!”
I love this! Such a creative idea that the dog likes vegetables and is allergic to meat. Well done!
This is a nice story. I wish you well with it.
Adorable story. I’m sad for Xavier, but glad he found Pumpkin’s home and that he can visit Pumpkin any time! Good luck Chris! Liz
Unusual dog for sure. I wonder if the allergy or the name came first? Good luck.
The grocer finds his lost dog, Xavier gets a new friend, and Dad doesn’t get stuck cleaning up the yard . . . sounds like a happy ending for everyone. Best wishes!
Even though Xavier didn’t get to keep the dog, I love that they are now friends and he can visit him! Nice story!
Hahhhaaa! Of course, the grocer’s dog would love vegetable! Nice original twist!
Such a cute story, Chris! I can so relate to Xavier hoping that he’ll get to keep the dog, and how hard it is to be patient – an hour feels like forever! 🙂 I’m glad they found his home, though, and what a interesting idea to have a vegetarian dog! Thanks so much for joining in the contest fun!
Sorry, Susanna. I mistakenly posted Sela and Cecil twice. Can you fix that for me please? And thank you for hosting this great contest!
Rose
THANK YOU (203 words)
As we swung back and forth, we laughed and we smiled.
But then the mood changed, because of one child
“Can you open your eyes any wider?” she asked.
I didn’t know how to respond, I just gasped.
Her blue eyes stared at me, under golden blonde hair.
Did she know how this hurt? Did she even care?
So when I got home, I talked to my mom.
I knew she could tell me what had gone wrong.
“But what did she mean?” I asked through my tears.
My mom started speaking, and easing my fears:
“She just doesn’t know how different families can be.
And how our family was made – love made us we.
When you were a baby, we adopted you
And we couldn’t love you more than we do.”
As I grew older, people sometimes would ask
Questions about me, my parents, and my past.
I’d take a deep breath, and I’d let them know,
“I love both my parents, because they helped me grow.”
Now that I’m a mom, I can proudly say,
“Thank you, blue-eyed girl, for your question that day.
I’ll teach my son to be accepting and kind
And to see everyone with an open mind.”
Beautiful! I love the theme of adoption and the child understanding she is the parents child whether she looks like them or not. Well done.
It’s nice to read adoption stories. I with you well with this.
Typo! Sorry. * I wish you well with this.
Love your story of love! Good luck Katelyn! Liz
Nice rhyming story on adoption. You did so much in such a small space. Really thought provoking. Best of luck.
Lovely message about love and acceptance. Best wishes!
Such a important theme! A lovely story. Best of luck!
A lovely story about adoption and acceptance. Thank you!
Lovely story, Katelyn! So important for all kids to realize that love and family comes in all shapes, sizes and combinations – there’s no one right way 🙂 Thanks for your sweet entry, and for joining in the contest fun!
Whoops! Mine is a very similar theme to yours, Susanna! Great minds think alike?? 😉 Bean & Jilly send Boris & Irma a virtual chocolate moon pie!
ENTRY POSTED FOR NANCY
Positively Paulina by Nancy Montoya
POP
“What?
“Oh, that is Positive Paulina popping problems away”, answers Nancy.
Paulina says, “Positivity pops problems away. If you think and feel positive, you will act positive and be better”.
“I am worried about my test ”, cried out Willie
Paulina grabs Willies hand she says,
“Let’s try it together. Close your eyes, take a deep breath, say,
I will do my very best.”
Willie says, “I will do my very best.”
Pop
Worrisome Willie becomes Willful Willie.
Nancy yells at Paulina,
“My best friend is mad at me,”
“Hold my hand and think friendship.” Paulina says.
“She will forgive me”, thinks Nancy
Pop
Negative Nancy becomes Nice Nancy.
“I won’t be forgiven. I broke my brother’s toy.” says Dan.
“Let’s try,” says Paulina
With closed eyes, Dan says “ I will tell the truth, it will be ok”.
Pop
Doubtful Dan becomes Dutiful Dan.
One day Paulina loses her favorite giraffe. She searches under the bed, peeks inside her boots, even inside the garage. Nothing.
Paulina becomes Pouty Paulina.
Her friends want to cheer her up.
They make a heart shaped card with a fun picture of a giraffe.
Pouty Paulina finds the gifts. With glitter rain surrounding her, she reads, “You are a GREAT friend.”
POP
Pouty Paulina became Positive Paulina!
In the turning of a thought …. 🙂 I wish you well with this story.
You even got a refrain into such a short story. Nice job. Good luck with this story.
Who can argue with Paulina’s attitude? Positivity pops problems away! Best wishes!
Positivity can really turn things around…especially for Pauline! Fun story!
With a pop, things can chance from pouty to positive. Thoughtfulness can have that effect on people.
I wish we could all POP ourproblems away. Fun story!
Love Paulina’s positivity and how much she helps her friends! And then when she needs them, they are there for her too! Lovely message, Nancy! Thanks so much for joining in the contest fun!
ENTRY POSTED FOR MARTY
A Day in the Life of Cupid (204 words) by Marty B.
Cupid plopped into his chair. What a day.
His wings ached from the miles he’d flown.
His bow arm throbbed.
He’d shot a record number of arrows, replenishing his supply over and over.
He just HOPED he’d spread enough love among the creatures of the planet to make a difference.
It was a task dear to his heart, even though it left him exhausted.
He flipped on the tv just as the news came on.
The announcer was saying,
“Newsflash: Astonishing events took place today.
Dogs, cats, birds, and mice were observed playing together in the park. No hissing, no growling, no biting or scratching.
Bullies were seen handing out Valentines to their classmates and assisting teachers and students in the classrooms.
Brothers and sisters shared toys without being asked. No grumpy words. No thoughtless behavior. No squabbles or bickering.
Laughter was heard in all corners. No raised voices or harsh sounds.
Love seems to have taken over the day!”
The news continued, but Cupid no longer heard.
He was fast asleep, a smile on his face.
His work was done………at least until the effects of those arrows wore off.
Or maybe, just maybe, they never would!
Then he’d consider retiring.
Cute story! We can “hope” the arrows’s effects will never wear off. 🙂 I wish you well with your story.
Thank you, Lynn!
What a great story. I too hope the effects would never wear off. Let’s hope Cupid stays around for a long time! Best of Luck with this story. 🙂
Thanks for your comments, Maria.
Couldn’t agree more with your conclusion. The world would be a better place if Cupid would keep shooting those arrows. Best wishes!
Appreciate your thoughts, Deborah. Thank you!
If only Cupid’s arrows brought permanent effects! Clever story!
Thanks for taking time to comment, Judy. It’s great to get feedback!
I hope Cupid never retires. Unless, of course, a successor is named…..
If only those arrow effects never wore off! Wouldn’t the world be a better place! I’m glad Cupid’s superhuman efforts paid off, at least in the near term 🙂 Thanks for a lovely entry, Marty!
ROSE AND TULIP by M.S. Nass 196 words
In a floral shop, not far away…
Little Rose lived. Little Tulip lived across from her.
They had a secret.
Rose loved Tulip.
Tulip loved Rose.
Everything was wonderful −
until Valentine’s Day.
“Get ready for today,” said a Carnation.
“What’s happening?” asked Rose.
“It’s Valentine’s Day,” said a Gardenia.
“What does that mean?”
“No one will be left. We’ll all go to different homes.”
Tears wet Rose’s stem. Panic rose in Tulip’s heart.
Soon, a family walked in. A little boy said, “I like that rose. She’s little.”
No-ooo. Tulip thought as he watched Rose get rolled and wrapped.
Soon, a woman came in and a girl pointed at Tulip. No—ooo thought Tulip.
Tulip was wrapped, rocked and rolled too.
When Rose arrived at her new home, the boy said, “Happy Valentine’s Day.
You’re the best teacher ever.”
When Tulip arrived at his new home, the girl said, “Happy Valentine’s Day..I love
you.”
Slowly, Tulip was unwrapped in his new home amidst chocolates and candy.
“Rose?” Tulip quivered.
“Tulip?” Rose’s heart leaped.
Mrs. Sanchez put them in the same vase–so close they could Hug.
Valentine’s Day is the best, they agreed.
awww, so sweet. I wish you well with this story.
Thanks, Lynn.
What a sweet story. Glad they ended up in the same vase together. Good luck.
Thank you Maria.
Love your unique characters and the happy ending. Best wishes!
Thanks Deborah.
What an emotional roller coaster until finally Rose and Tulip are reunited! Great job!
Thank you Judy.
Love this. so cute!
Super cute! Good luck with this
So lovely and original. Thank you!
I love that Rose abd TUlip end up together. Sweet!
Aw! What a sweet, sweet story, M.S! Love the original POV of the flowers, and so glad they got a well-deserved happy ending! Very nice 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in the contest fun!
The Valentine Monster Crash
By Megan Walvoord
212 words
Once there was a monster named La La. The biggest, scariest monster in Fangville.
She was so scary in fact, none of these monsters wanted to be around her. Her gnarly grin made them run away. She would cry herself to sleep because she was so lonely.
One day she received an invitation to the Valentine Monster Crash. There would be contests for crushing, scaring, crashing and eating.
The day of the V.M.C. she was so excited. She worked all day sharpening her fangs, brushing her fur and picking out the perfect accessories.
La La stomped from her house to the town hall decorated with heart shapes recycled from the last city they frightened. She took a deep breath and entered the hall.
At first, the other monsters seem to step away as normal, until she entered all of the contests.
La La earned first place in crushing buildings and conquered the scare machine by scoring 100 percent.
She scored the in the top three in crashing cars and gained second place in eating boxes of chocolates.
When the scores were tallied up there was no denying La La was the grand champ. The monsters lifted her up and paraded around the hall. La La was the most monster of them all.
That’s quite a feat! Cute story. I wish you well with it.
Thank you!
This is cute. Good for La La. Wish you luck with the story.
Thank you!
Even monsters need love. Best wishes!
Thanks!
La La was a talented monster and rocked the V.M.C! Good luck with your story!!
Thank you!
Now, I can’t get that song out of my head. Oh well…the monster crash is funny, and will be loved by kids who can’t get enough of the destructo action. And that’s quite a few!
Thank you for the kind words. Ha, ha the Monster Bash song popped into my head too when I was titling the story. Maybe someone will make a Monster Crash song too! My son was the inspiration for this story. He told me he wanted a story about a monster and named the monster La La after his beloved blanket.
That’s awesome! I bet he loves your story. He’ll have this present from you forever!
Poor lonely La La! I’m glad she was finally recognized and appreciated for her monsterliness 🙂 Just goes to show, we all have something to offer! Thanks so much for a fun, original entry and for joining in the contest fun, Megan!
VALENSWINE
(208 words) by: Susan Schade
Signs were posted all over the farm,
“Spoil your sweetie with a picnic brunch on Valentine’s Day.”
Percy was taking Piper for pancakes, hoping for a perfect day.
But already, it was not going as planned.
He searched for colorful flowers,
but only found green clovers.
Piper smiled and said, “How lucky!”
He complimented her lovely snout and bristly hair,
And offered her his hoof to walk to the gate.
But he tripped, stubbed his toe, and landed with an embarrassing squeal.
At brunch, they were shocked to see so many couples.
They were hogging all the tables.
Percy hoped the wait wouldn’t be long.
They tried reading the menu, but it made them too hungry.
They tried walking around, but Piper was wearing heels.
They considered leaving, but they REALLY WANTED pancakes.
FINALLY, a table was ready.
Percy noticed a family waiting with grunting and restless piglets,
and gave them the table.
Piper pecked him on the cheek.
“Even if we wait all day, there’s no pig I’d rather be with.”
They held hooves until their new table was ready.
The day hadn’t turned out as planned, but it was perfect.
Percy smiled at Piper as he ordered,
“We’ll take the platter of pancakes please, NO BACON!”
🙂 No bacon, indeed! Cute story. I wish you well with it.
Aww, Percy is such a character and a good heart. Love these two pigs. No Bacon, indeed. 🙂 Best of luck.
Percy and Piper sound like a match made in pig heaven. Best wishes!
Love your porcine puns! Turned out to be a perfect day for Percy and Piper! Such a cute story! Wishing you the best in the contest!
That’s one polite pig. And yes, definitely no bacon! Very sweet story.
Snicker, snicker…No bacon. It would be quite disconcerting to be presented with a relative on my plate. Some punny lines in there, too. Well done!
I love it! All the puns make it fun! Good luck!
Aw! What a sweet piggy couple, Susan! Love the title! 🙂 and I think Percy and Piper are delightful! Thanks for another fun entry!
Top Secret Valentine
By Marie Hoy-Kenny (214 words)
Cat walked into the Trading Post. Mouse was hanging a string of hearts behind the counter.
“I need a gift for my secret Valentine friend,” Cat whispered. “Can I swap my bowl for a tag to match his collar?”
“Certainly,” Mouse said. He put the bowl away and wrapped the tag up in pink paper.
Cat rushed outside.
A few minutes later, in walked Dog. “Can I trade my collar for that dish?” he said. “I hope my secret Valentine pal will like it. It‘ll look nice with her bowl.”
“Hmmm.” said Mouse. “Of course.” He put Dog’s collar away and wrapped the dish up in heart print paper.
Dog left Cat’s gift outside of her door and rang the bell. He hid to watch her open it.
“A dish!” she squealed. “Pretty like my old bowl.”
When Dog got home, there was a present on his step. He ripped the paper. “This awesome tag would’ve matched my collar!” he exclaimed.
Cat watched gleefully and raced away before Dog could catch her peeking.
That night, while Cat and Dog were sleeping, Mouse snuck into Cat’s house and left her bowl beside her new dish and tiptoed into Dog’s house and placed his collar beside his new tag. “Happy Valentine’s Day,” he whispered and smiled.
Very reminiscent of The Gifts of the Magi by O’Henry. I really like your ending for this story. I wish you well with it.
Thanks so much for your comment, Lynn. I did do a twist on “The Gift of the Magi.” I absolutely love that story.
Yeah, I thought of the gift of the magi as well. Love Mouse’s heart. Good Luck.
Thanks so much. 🙂
Clever twist on the O’Henry tale. I loved that sweet little mouse secretly set everything right! Good luck with your entry…very cute!
Thanks so much for your comment 🙂
Cute story! I love the twist on Gift of the Magi, and for some reason I also particularly like the details about the pink and heart print wrapping paper.
Thanks, Leah! I really appreciate your kind commment. 🙂
This was so sweet. Love your twist on The Gift of the Magi.
Thanks so much! 🙂
How unusual for a mouse to broker a romance between a cat and dog. Very nice!
Thanks so much 🙂
SWeet Mouse! Nice story.
Oh wow! An animal valentine gift of the magi! Love it, Marie – so cute! But I especially love that Mouse takes matters into his own hands for a happier ending! Thanks for a lovely entry!
Oink! Oink! Oink! This is GREAT! Thank you for such a story.
“hogging all the tables…” I’m still laughing!
Tiny the Pony wants to be Special
by Kaye Baillie
214 words
Tiny was not like the horses at the castle.
They outran him,
out-pranced him,
and leaping … forget it.
To top it off, every day he heard …
“Ooh la la. Look at my stallion.”
“My filly is soooo fantastic.”
“Horses are totally cooool.”
But would Silver Girl ever find him a teensy bit special? Sigh.
Finally he had an idea.
Tiny picked the prettiest blooms, wrangled those stems together,
strutted his fancy schmancy headgear, but …
Silver Girl was too busy admiring her knight’s new armour.
Tiny practiced his moves.
He whistled a catchy tune.
Then tap danced his tiny pony heart out. But …
Silver Girl raved over her prancing horse pals.
Tiny needed a real show stopper.
Think, Tiny, Think.
“I’ve got it!” Make way, horse faces.
Tiny flew across the moat,
landed with a splash,
then did backstroke with crocs and eels.
Wait — what! Crocs and eels! Yowee!!
Tiny needed to think outside the square.
What could he do?
While the whole castle watched the weekly parade,
Tiny waited till it finished,
then …
PONY RIDES!!
“My turn.”
“Me next.”
“Tiny is the best.”
Tiny was mobbed, adored!
He was …
exhausted!
Tiny was not like the horses at the castle.
But to Silver Girl,
he was very special indeed.
So glad the pony found his special purpose. Nice story and I wish you well with it.
Thnaks, Lynn! I appreciate you reading my story.
Poor Tiny. Glad the croc & eels didn’t finish him off. Glad he figured out how to get recognition. Best of luck.
Thanks, Maria. I like the croc and eel scene. 🙂 Glad he found his way out.
I love the voice of your character Tiny horse! So glad he found a way to be special. Lots of luck in the contest!
Nice way of turning an outsider into a beloved. Good luck!
First of all, how can you not love a character named Tiny the Pony?! 🙂 Love how hard he tries and how persistent he is, never giving up until Silver Girl realizes how special he is! Thanks for a delightful entry, Kaye!
Grandma’s Cookies
By Deborah Bence Boerema (210 words)
Acrid smoke filled his nostrils as Frankie swiped at hot tears. He slammed the cookies into the trash can and banged the empty baking sheet on the counter. After taking some deep, calming breaths, he resolved to try the recipe again. He hoped for better results this time.
Frankie put a stick of butter in the bowl. As the mixer whirled, he slowly poured in the sugar, just like Grandma had showed him. He cracked two eggs, hoping he didn’t drop in any shell pieces. Then he added the vanilla, flour, and other ingredients.
Frankie rolled out the dough, hoping he got it thin enough. He cut out dozens of hearts with the cookie cutter Grandma had given him. He watched them bake until they were the color Grandma called honey blonde. He spread the cooled cookies with pink frosting and packed them into a box tied with a red bow.
Frankie carried the box to Grandma’s home. When he knocked on the open door, she looked up from her bed. He handed her the box and said, “Happy Valentine’s Day, Grandma.”
“Why Frankie, you made my favorite cookies,” Grandma smiled.
Frankie let out a breath he hadn’t realized he’d been holding. Grandma’s awareness was everything he had hoped for.
Yes, that awareness gets to be very important; sweet story. I wish you well with it.
Thank you, Lynn.
Touching story. Love Frankie’s character. Good luck.
Thanks, Maria.
Always tough to get Grandma’s cookies to taste the way Grandma makes ’em! Frankie’s determination is admirable. Nice story!
Thanks, Judy. When it comes to ingredients, no one can match Grandma’s love!
Really lovely, Deborah. Makes me wish I was able to visit my grandmother for Valentine’s Day. Of course, I would have to bring her chocolate babka instead of cookies ; )
Thank you, Jenna. Chocolate babka sounds like a great Valentine treat!
Great job Deb. Best Wishes :0)
Thanks, Aileen!
I love how hard Frankie wants to get it right for Grandma so she’ll remember, very sweet.
Thank you! Frankie’s situation is very near to my heart right now.
This reminds me of my mom and the grandkids. Such a sweet story. Thank you!
Thank you, Jilanne!
Very touching. Best wishes!
Thanks for reading, Nancy!
What a sweet story, Deborah! You perfectly captured Frankie’s frustration caused by how desperately important it was to him to get these cookies exactly right. And isn’t it amazing how often things that have been treasured parts of the past help those suffering from memory loss to be able to ground themselves and remember. Thanks for a lovely entry!
Thanks for your kind words, Susanna. And thanks, as always, for hosting another fun, challenging writing contest.
Thanks for another fun contest, Susanna! These are becoming part of my holiday traditions 🙂
This Will Be The Year
By Sara Gentry
214 words
This will be the year.
Gerald thought that every year. But this year, he had a three-step plan. Articulate. Decorate. Participate.
“Good morning, Gerald,” said Mrs. Jenkins.
“Good morning,” answered Gerald. “I’d really like a valentine this year too.”
“Here’s hoping you have a wonderful Valentine’s Day,” she said with a smile.
Next, he made a giant heart from paper confetti to let everyone know he was in the Valentine Spirit.
When kids decorated boxes for their valentines, Gerald also participated. On his small box, he stamped a heart of paw prints. He saw a lot of teddy bears and puppies on valentine cards, so it seemed a great idea.
Yes, this will be the year, he thought.
“You may hand out your valentines,” announced Mrs. Jenkins.
Kids bustled around the room. Gerald waited for someone to drop a valentine in his box. As kids returned to their seats, Gerald slumped down. Ignored again.
He saw Hope Wilkerson talk to Mrs. Jenkins and point in his direction. Mrs. Jenkins smiled and nodded.
Hope walked toward him.
Gerald rose up.
“I brought you a cupcake,” said Hope.
Carrot cake – his favorite!
“I also made you a valentine,” said Hope, handing him a red heart-shaped card.
To Gerald the Gerbil,
Happy Valentine’s Day!
Your friend, Hope
Cute surprise ending! 🙂 I wish you well with this story.
Thanks!
Nice ending. I was rooting for Gerald. Nice twist for him to be a gerbil. Good luck.
Thanks!
Gerald is a gerbil…did not see that coming. Love the twist ending! Fun and uplifting story!
Thanks!
I firmly believe that class pets should be included in class parties. Gerald’s three-step plan showed real initiative on his part. Glad that Hope made him feel included. Best wishes!
Thanks!
Good for Gerald the Gerbil! Love the surprise, happy ending!
Thanks!
I’m so glad that Gerald was remembered. And with carrot cake! Perfect!
Thanks!
I’ m so glad it was Gerald’s year! Very cute!
Thanks!
Very cute story, Sara! I admit, I was fooled! I didn’t guess Gerald was a gerbil! But when I went back and re-read, the clues were there, cleverly laid! Nice job! I’m glad Gerald finally got a Valentine cupcake! 🙂 Thanks for an original, fun entry, and I’m so glad you enjoy the contests and are making them part of your holiday traditions! 🙂
Who Sent This Valentine?
By Marie Hoy-Kenny (213 words)
See this valentine? From my secret friend?
Well, I’m going to get to the bottom of who sent this to me and when I find out I’m going to give him or her a great, big hug.
Suspect #1: Was it you?
You look a little suspicious but you’re right, we just met, making it highly unlikely.
Suspect #2: Monkey
She’s definitely my friend. But is she my secret friend? Let’s examine her printing. No, it’s not like the writing on my card at all. It can’t be Monkey.
Suspect #3: Lion
He and I go way back. But look, he’s writing his cards out now, he always leaves it until the very last minute. I doubt it’s him.
Suspect #4: Tiger
Look at this, his writing looks similar to the writing on this card. Look at the rocket ships on my card, Tiger loves rocket ships.
It must be Tiger! Tiger, are you the one who sent me the Valentine’s Day card? You’re not? Then whodunnit?
Hey, do you know? Well then who? You noticed a footprint. Where? On the card? Oh it was Parrot? Ah, I should have known!
Happy Valentine’s Day, Parrot! Thanks for the card.
I’m such a skilled detective. Oh you? Well I guess you helped a bit.
Clever Valentine mystery! Fun way to involve the reader. Best of luck in the contest!
Thanks so much, Judy!
I enjoyed your suspect list. Glad the mystery was solved. Best wishes!
Thank you, Deborah!
Cute! Lots of interaction there with the reader. I wish you well with this story.
Thanks, Lynn. I appreciate that. 🙂
Very clever. I can picture a kid getting involved in solving the mystery!
Thanks so much for this nice comment, Leah. 🙂
Clever mystery Valentine. I enjoyed your story, it was fun following along.
Thanks very much for your comment. 🙂
This is an ingenious way to involve the reader and create a Valentines’ mystery. Awesome job doing it in so few words! Best of luck!
Thanks for your kind comment! 🙂
Now here’s an unusual entry. A puzzle to be solved. Nicely done!
Clever, fun story, Marie! Love the clues and how you let the reader join in the detective work! Glad the Valentine mystery got sorted out! Thanks for another great entry!
Susanna, I love your Boris! What a great, curmudgeon of a brother! Love the sweet ending. 🙂
Thanks, Maria 🙂
Hope in a Jar
By Anne Lipton
214 words
“I hope we don’t have to make valentines this year,” said Sam. “I hate hearts and glitter.”
“Oh,” said Jin. “I love hearts and glitter.
“I hope we have a week of snow days,” said Sam.
“I hope not,” said Jin. “The parade is on Friday.”
“What parade?” asked Sam.
“The Chinese New Year parade,” said Jin.
“Isn’t it a little late for New Year’s?” said Sam.
“It’s the Lunar New Year,” said Jin. “The lion dances are my favorite.”
Sam gulped. “Real lions?”
Jin laughed. “No, but there’s a dog parade because it’s the Year of the Dog. Do you want to come with me?”
“Sure,” said Sam. “I like parades. And dogs.”
The colorful parade of dogs, dancers, and drummers marched through town.
“Gong Hey Fat Choy!” Jin handed Sam a red envelope with gold coins. “They’re chocolate. And eight is a lucky number.”
“I thought seven was a lucky number.” Sam grinned. “But I’ll take eight!”
Sam handed Jin a jar with a little toy dog glued inside the lid. “Happy New Year!”
“What’s this?” asked Jin.
Sam shrugged. “Call it a New Year’s Valentine. Or Hope in a Jar.”
“A New Year’s Valentine? I like that.” Jin shook the jar, and hearts and glitter snowed over the little toy dog.
Anne, what a fun way to combine the two holidays! I love the image of “hope in a jar.” Best of luck!
Thanks, Maria.
A very fun and interesting story combining both Valentine’s Day and the Chinese New Year! Best of luck in the contest!
Thanks, Judy.
Hope in a jar, I like that idea. Nice story. I wish you well with it.
Thanks, Lynn.
Great concept, I love the idea of Hope in a jar!
Thank you!
I just love the idea of hope in a jar for the new year. In addition to good luck, good fortune, and long life. And the last image of a snow globe in action is cool.
Thank you, Jilanne!
I love this and it’s a craft that kids could do too! Good luck!
You get me. 😊
So fun and I can see it as a craft for kids too! Good luck!
Thanks, Nancy!
Unique and inspiring with great characters. I love the ending ( and the beginning). A great story.
Thanks, Corine!
Nice story, Anne! Love the combination of Valentine’s and Chinese New Year, and loved that you used hope both for and against things. The image of the hearts and glitter snowing over the little dog was lovely! Thanks for an original and entertaining entry and for joining in the contest fun!
Thanks, Susanna!
A Fur-Ever Valentine (214 Words)
Cleo licked her paw and smoothed her fur for the tenth time. She wasn’t a kitten anymore, but it could still happen.
A family with three loud little boys passed by the banner reading “Adopt a Valentine”. Cleo shrunk back against the wall. Not them.
She returned the stare of a round lady with thick glasses. The lady smelled like so many other cats it made Cleo’s fur stand up a little. No way.
Cleo batted at the shiny red hearts taped to her fence and waited.
“Awww, look. She’s playing with the decorations!” The little girl was barely big enough to bend over the fence, but she smelled good. Maybe?
The girl held out her hand and waited for her. Cleo liked that.
“The sign says that her name is Cleo,” said the girl’s mother.
The little girl smiled. “Hi, Cleo! I’m Molly. You’re a pretty kitty,”
That was a good start. Cleo walked over to the edge of the pen and gave Molly’s hand a little bump. “She’s friendly,” Molly said, petting Cleo’s back.
“Can we take her home, Mommy?”
Cleo wrapped herself tightly around Molly’s arm and rubbed her nose against her hand.
Molly’s mother laughed. “I think that’s a yes, sweetie.”
Cleo purred. She was going to her fur-ever home.
This a a very sweet story. So glad Cleo found a fur-ever home and a special Valentine! Wish you good luck with this one.
Love your sweet story of pet adoption. Always wonderful when animals can find their “fur-ever” home! Good luck in the contest!
It’s always lovely when a good home is found for a little critter. 🙂 I wish you well with your story.
I’m a such a sucker for kitties find a home stories. Sweet!
I’m glad Cleo got to pick her valentine girl!
Sweet story and fun title.
Cute story, Beth! I love that Cleo got to do the evaluating and deciding as much if not more than the humans 🙂 When she gave Molly’s hand a little bump that was the perfect description of what cat’s do! Cleo and Molly seem to be a purr-fect match 🙂 Thanks for a great entry!
A CARD WITH A HEART
(183 words)
By Laura Sealey
A card with a heart was for sale in a store,
his message a promise to love and adore.
Behind him his envelope watched in dismay
as nobody chose him for Valentine’s Day.
He fumed “All the humorous cards have it made.”
So rubbed out his heart and then drew on a spade.
Then took back his ink (something cards often do)
and wrote a new message that said “I dig you”.
No luck, so he tried “You’re the dip to my fry”,
“The pea to my carrot”, “The cream to my pie”.
The envelope watched from the back of the shelf
and thought “you are perfect, just as yourself”.
Then one day a child dropped the card on the ground
then put him back facing the wrong way around.
He finally looked in his envelope’s eyes
and wrote her a message to her great surprise:
“Do you believe in true love at first sight?”
She wrote back “I do, with all of my might”.
They knew they were destined, like birds of a feather,
then somebody grabbed them and bought them together.
So glad card and envelope were chosen and ended up together. Clever story! Best of luck in the contest!
Very cute story! I wish you well with it.
Adorable! So clever and funny! Good luck!
This was so cute. Your rhyming was very clever. I really enjoyed reading this.
What a sweet story. I enjoyed the different characters. Good luck.
Now this is interesting. A card and an envelope, pining away for each other. Nicely original! And I love “the cream to my pie.”
This is fantastic! Great rhyme, love, and being yourself!
Fun rhyme!
What a sweet, clever story, Laura! I would never have thought of a love story between an envelope and her card – very creative and nicely written! Thanks for a wonderful and entertaining entry and for joining in the contest fun!
Go Melanie! Great story of community involvement. Good luck.
A Valentine Snowman
211 words
Lucy rolled a gigantic snowball across her front lawn.
Down the street, Brady huddled in his snow fort and watched her.
Lucy’s best friend, Maren, snickered. “I bet he’s going to give you a Valentine.”
Lucy started on the next snowball, not quite as big as the first. “I hope NOT!”
Maren sang, “Roses are red, oranges are juicy, did you hear that Brady LOVES Lucy?”
“Yuck!” Lucy kicked the snowball with her boot.
“I hope he gives you a Valentine because I’m going to tell our whole class about it tomorrow,” Maren said.
Brady kept to himself at school, so the other kids called him weird. The last thing Lucy wanted was a Valentine from the weird kid.
After heaving the second snowball on top of the first, Lucy rolled the last one.
With the final snow ball done, she lifted it up . . . but couldn’t quite make it.
“Maren, help me! It’s going to fall!”
Two gloved-hands helped to push it on top.
Lucy turned around. “Thanks Mar –.”
Brady grinned and handed Lucy . . . a Valentine! “That’s an awesome Valentine snowman.”
After Brady left, Maren laughed, “I cannot wait for school tomorrow.”
Lucy smiled. “Me, too. I hope you tell everyone about my Valentine.”
I’m glad the valentine from Brady turned out to be a good thing for Lucy in your sweet story. Best of luck in the contest!
A Valentine snowman, great idea. I wish you well with this story.
Upside Down Valentine’s Day
(185 words) by Ryan Roberts
Mr. and Mrs. Turtle rushed to the Valentine’s Day party.
“We’re going to be late!” said Mr. Turtle.
“We’re going to be fine,” said Mrs. Turtle.
They plodded up a hill. The party was just over the top, but- drats!
Flop, tumble, plop!
Mr. and Mrs. Turtle rolled down the hill and landed on their backs.
“Great. Now we’ll never make it to the party,” said Mr. Turtle.
“Everything will be okay,” said Mrs. Turtle.
The sun dipped down in the sky, and the sound of a waltz drifted over the hill.
“The party’s started without us!” said Mr. Turtle.
“But isn’t it beautiful?” asked Mrs. Turtle.
There was nothing else to do, but listen to the music and stare at the sky turning purple, then pink, then red.
“A Valentine sky,” said Mr. Turtle.
“Indeed,” said Mrs. Turtle.
“There you are!” said a voice, and Raccoon appeared at their side. “I’ve been looking everywhere for you.” Raccoon righted the turtles.
“We’d better get going,” said Mrs. Turtle. “We’ve missed most of the party.”
“Actually,” said Mr. Turtle, “I don’t think we missed a thing.”
Awww…I love that the M&M Turtle made the best of their predicament and still enjoyed a lovely Valentine’s Day! Really nice story, Ryan! Best of luck!
So sweet. I wish you well with this story.
Very sweet story!
Ryan, what a great story. Perfect ending, full of love and appreciation. Best of luck! 🙂
Spoken like a true introvert, and one who enjoys being in the “now” of life. Makes me want to go lie on my back, look up at the sky, and listen to the sounds surrounding me. i love this!
Love this, Ryan! What a pair the Turtles are! They complement each other perfectly – opposite attract 🙂 I love Mrs. Turtle’s penchant for making the best of everything and appreciating the beauty on offer, and how that gently works its way over to Mr. Turtle! Thanks for a heartwarming entry!
It only takes one person with an idea to start to make a change. Nice story!
Not Alone
(208 words) by Amy Frost Davidson
It’s written in pencil, and it’s kind of smeary. But it was in my coat pocket at the end of recess, and it wasn’t there this morning, so I know it’s meant for me. But who put it there?
It’s written on pink construction paper that came out of the classroom scrap paper bin. During quiet math work time, I pretend I need to sharpen my pencil, and I see a piece with a torn shape that looks just like the paper in my coat pocket.
It says, “I get sad about my dad, too.”
I don’t know how anyone in my class could know about my dad. I try not to show that I’m sad. But sometimes, I let myself cry a little behind the metal walls of the bathroom stall. But where it mostly gets to me is in the cafeteria, where the noise of the entire fourth grade rushes through my ears so I can’t really hear anyone at all, and I feel so alone.
I look up from my worksheet to the hunched heads of my classmates. One of them is sad, too.
And deep in the pocket of my coat is a little slip of paper that tells me it might be okay.
Definitely a story of hope. I wish you well with it.
Very touching and tantalizing. I would love to see where this went if you expanded it to a picture book. Good luck!
So much heart and emotion in this story. This would make a great PB or MG novel! I wish you luck!
So tender and sweet. I love the image of that note lying deep in the child’s pocket, like knowledge deep in the heart.
Oh my goodness, Amy! What a poignant story! And isn’t it so true that in those moments when things are hard it helps so much to you’re not alone. Nice job conveying emotion. Your last line was very effective! Thanks for a lovely entry!
Valentine’s Day Strike
By Chambrae Griffith
It’s Valentine’s Day, YUCK!
All that smooching, and hugging, and lovey-dovey shenanigans make me queasy!
And pink, BLECH! Why does everything have to be pink?
You won’t catch me turning all mushy gushy or going googley eyed, I’m going on strike!
I refuse to accept a single Valentine.
No cards, no candy, no flowers, NO pink!
I sent out a memo.
Hopefully everyone read it.
Mom did because at breakfast my pancakes were not pink hearts, but plain old circles.
At school everyone’s desks were adorned with pink mailboxes waiting to be filled with disturbing declarations of love. But PHEW, not mine. Miss Marks got my memo.
And after school, when everyone’s arms were so stuffed with Valentine’s they could hardly walk, I skipped all the way home.
So far so good. No cards, no candy, no flowers, no…
DING-DONG.
He didn’t get the memo!
KNOCK-KNOCK
Doesn’t he know he’s about to ruin the most perfect Valentine’s ever? I slide the memo through the crack and wait for him to leave.
DIIIIIIING-DONG!
I turn the knob, “I DON’T want ANY Valentines!”
“I know, I brought you this.”
He hesitates then holds out his hands.
It’s not mushy-gushy, frilly, or pink… an un-Valentine? It’s perfect!
He’s perfect!
Next Valentine’s we’re sending out a memo… together.
(214 words right on the nose!)
Now that’s pretty sweet. I wish you well with it.
Great to find a soul-mate who hates pink, too. Nice story. Best of luck with it.
Great minds think alike! Fun ending to this story!
Yay! An “UNvalentine.” And I love the didn’t you get the memo, part. Funny!
Hahaha! Love the un-Valentine, Chambrae! And you definitely left me dying to know what he held out! Was it just his perfect hands to hold hers? or did he give her an actual item of some kind???!!! Thanks for an creative and entertaining entry!
Lovely. I wish you well with this story.
ENTRY POSTED FOR KIRSTEN E
I Love Ewe
‘Look Barbara, a Valentine’s card! For me!’
Truly splendid, lovely ram
I hope you will be mine.
I know we’d get on, oh so well
Please be my Valentine.
‘Someone really likes you, Barry.’
‘I know. But who?’ ‘Maybe it’s Dolly. Or Nancy, she’s always following me around.’ Barry frolicked off. Someone loved him. Life was sweeter.
For a while. ‘But who loves me, Barbara?’
Oh, Valentine who loves me so
I know not who you are.
Please meet me here under this tree
Don’t love me from afar.
When Barry returned to the tree Barbara was there already.
I am too shy to show myself
I may not take your fancy.
I’m rather plain and not too smart
A hint: I am not Nancy!
‘Did you see her, Barbara?’
Come on my ewe now don’t be shy
I’m sure we’ll be a fit.
This time please wait under the bridge
Don’t leave a note and split.
When Barry got to the bridge Barbara was there already. ‘Barbara?’
‘Maybe you should forget your Valentine, Barry. You probably wouldn’t fancy her. She is plain and shy and not too smart. Just like me.’
‘Just like you, Barbara? You’re smart and beautiful. And nice shy. Just like you is… perfect!’ ‘Barbara, will you be my Valentine?’
Awww, Cute story! I wish you well with it.
Thanks Lynn))
Fun, mysterious valentine story with such a sweet ending. Best of luck with this story.
It’s always the one you least suspect! Nice ending to a sweet story!
Thanks Judy))
Ha! This story makes me feel sheepish. I think Barry and Barbara are meant for each other. Baaaaaa…..
Thanks Jilanne, I think so too 🐑
Aw! Barry and Barbara – such a c-ewe-t couple! I knew it was Barbara! I’m glad Barry turns out to love her as much as she loves him! Thanks for a sweet entry, Kirsten!
Thanks Susanna) And a big thanks for running this competition. It’s my first year but I loved doing it, the topic, the word count and the deadline so will definitely be back next year.
ENTRY POSTED FOR SARAH H
A VALENTINE’S DAY ADVENTURE
By Sarah A. Hetu-Radny
Sammy awoke on February fourteenth, looked out the window, and grinned. “Sis, we’re in luck, there’s snow on the ground. We can go on a special adventure!”
“Okay, Sammy.”
“Take this spray bottle,” Sammy instructed, marching towards the front door with a container of pink water.
“Sam, you can’t go outside in this storm.”
“But Mom, I need this snow to make my fort!”
“You can go out when the sun returns.”
“Sammy, I want adventure.”
“I have an idea, Sis. Follow me to the basement.”
CLANG! BANG!
“Sam, you can’t build like this, even down here in the dust.”
Sam sighed.
“I want adventure,” demanded Sis.
“Let’s search for ideas in the closets.”
THWUMP BUMP!
“Sam, you can’t cover the carpets with this clutter.”
Sam groaned and pulled his hair.
“Sammy…adventure…?”
“Sis, think! We must use our imagination. There has to be an adventure in here somewhere…. I know, to the bookshelves! You can pick from this pile.”
“I like the pink one, the one with the frog, the one with dragons, the one with kisses -”
“I will read all of these books to you! We will go on many adventures.”
“I love you, Sammy.”
“You’re my favorite adventure partner, too, Sis.”
“This one first!”
“Okay. Now, listen….”
(212 words)
What’s not to love about adventures in picture books! Wishing you well with this story.
Oh, the adventure they’ll find in books! Fun story. Good luck.
Reading books beats the cold and snow every day in my opinion! Nice story! Best of luck!
Ah, the many places where adventures can be searched for and found. Books are a favorite!
Nice job, Sarah! Books are always the greatest adventure, aren’t they? You can be stuck inside physically, but never in your imagination! Thanks for a fun story!
ENTRY POSTED FOR CARMEN
Carmen Castillo Gilbert, PhD
ADELINE’S HOPE
(180 words)
¡Hola! Hello!
I’m Adeline Grace and I’m a month old.
I’m part of a special family of top ‘A’ girls and women.
I hope I grow up to be like them.
Mami Angela, my mommy, works in a company that makes body parts for people who need new knees and hips.
Prima Alejandra, my cousin, does gymnastics. She can tumble and is good on the balance beam. She has won many medals.
Prima Ana Gabriela studies in France. She hopes to improve the world environment.
I hope I grow up to be like them.
Tía Ana-Ramona and Tía Allison are counselors. My aunts help many
with their problems. They love working with people.
Tías Abuela Ana Ramona and Anayansi, my great-aunts, speak English and Spanish and help others communicate in those languages.
I hope I grow up to be like them.
A – artistic
D – determined
E – eager
L – loving
I – imaginative
N – neat
E – educated
ADELINE!
However, right now all I’m hopeful for is that someone will walk into my nursery and change my diaper!
Love,
Adeline
First things first! Funny ending. Wishing you well with your story.
Gotta have your priorities. Fun story, best of luck with it.
She has great role models to guide her! Love the ending! Best of luck!
Oh, such a funny twist. Get that diaper changed and then think about the future, LOL.
Haha, Carmen! Your last line made me laugh 🙂 Love the ambition of this little “A” girl – from humble beginnings in diapers grow wonderful things! 🙂 Thanks for an original and creative entry!
ENTRY POSTED FOR KATHLEEN
Snowy Owl Valentine Delivery
by Kathleen Mazurowski
An announcement landed near Pip’s nest.
Wanted: Strong Snowy Owls to Deliver Valentines
Apply at the North Tundra Nest
by February 13th.
“I want to deliver Valentines!” said Pip.
“Maybe next year,” said Gramowl.
“Your feathers aren’t snowy yet. You need to build up your wing flapping first.”
Pip looked at his feathers, still brown and gray. Pip flapped his wings, getting better,
but… and he still needed a nap.
“I don’t want to wait a year.”
Valentine’s Day was a week away so Pip got right to work. He started by doing ten sets of wing flaps. Then, grab and pulls with his feet and talons.
“Not bad, “ said Pip. “Now to stay awake longer.”
Pip increased his exercises every day and tried to stay awake longer. He was getting stronger, but his white feathers were not to be found.
On Valentine’s Eve, February 13th, Pip fell asleep. He slept for a long time.
Gramowl flapped her wings in a frenzy.
“Pip, wake up! The Snowy Owl Valentine Delivery needs you! Several of the owls have the flu.”
Pip got up, fluffed his feathers, and noticed that a few white feathers had started.
“I am going to deliver Valentines!” said Pip as he flew to North Tundra Nest.
“Happy Valentine’s Day, Gramowl!”
Fun ending to this story; I wish you well with it.
Yeah for Pip, he got his wish. Love your “Gramowl.” Good luck with this one!
Pip worked hard…he deserved a chance! Good for him! Best of luck!
This is how Harry Potter valentines get delivered, right?
Good for Pip, pursuing his dream! I’m sorry the others got the flu, but glad Pip got his chance to be helpful and prove himself. Very Harry Potter with the owl delivery 🙂 Thanks for a fun entry, Kathleen!
ENTRY POSTED FOR REBECCA
(this entry was originally posted above and accidentally got deleted so I’m reposting it!)
A Valentine Snowman
211 words by Rebecca Thill
Lucy rolled a gigantic snowball across her front lawn.
Down the street, Brady huddled in his snow fort and watched her.
Lucy’s best friend, Maren, snickered. “I bet he’s going to give you a Valentine.”
Lucy started on the next snowball, not quite as big as the first. “I hope NOT!”
Maren sang, “Roses are red, oranges are juicy, did you hear that Brady LOVES Lucy?”
“Yuck!” Lucy kicked the snowball with her boot.
“I hope he gives you a Valentine because I’m going to tell our whole class about it tomorrow,” Maren said.
Brady kept to himself at school, so the other kids called him weird. The last thing Lucy wanted was a Valentine from the weird kid.
After heaving the second snowball on top of the first, Lucy rolled the last one.
With the final snow ball done, she lifted it up . . . but couldn’t quite make it.
“Maren, help me! It’s going to fall!”
Two gloved-hands helped to push it on top.
Lucy turned around. “Thanks Mar –.”
Brady grinned and handed Lucy . . . a Valentine! “That’s an awesome Valentine snowman.”
After Brady left, Maren laughed, “I cannot wait for school tomorrow.”
Lucy smiled. “Me, too. I hope you tell everyone about my Valentine.”
A valentine snowman – how nice! I wish you well with this story.
Great story. Not just the combination of snowmen and Valentines, but “not judging a book by its cover.” Well done. Good luck.
Way to take the air out of the mean girl tactics and turn it in a positive direction. Love it!
Cute story with very believable kid characters, Rebecca! I’m glad Brady surprised Lucy and that she appreciated him 🙂 Thanks for your creative entry!
Thanks for such a fantastic contest, Susanna. I can’t stop thinking about Valentine stories! This is my third (and final) entry.
The Heart Art Contest
By Marie Hoy-Kenny (214 words)
This Valentine’s Day, Kate hoped to win The Heart Art Contest. The winner got a beautiful trophy.
“Can I work on my picture?” Kate asked, after she finished her math.
“Yes,” said Mrs. Baker. “Gigi is making one too.”
Gigi was the new girl who sat behind her. Kate turned around. Gigi had drawn two girls on swings and hearts in the sky. It was good but maybe hers could be better.
Kate drew hundreds of hearts and roses and colored them extra carefully.
On Valentine’s Day morning, Mr. Bert’s voice boomed over the P.A. “Now, the winners of the Heart Art Contest.”
Kate squeezed her eyes shut and crossed her fingers.
“In third place, Carlos.”
Carlos yelled, “Horray!” from the classroom across the hall.
“In second place, Kate.”
Kate tried to smile.
“In first place, Gigi.”
Kate had never seen Gigi grin so widely.
Mr. Bert took a photo of Carlos, Kate and Gigi with their winning entries. Gigi held her trophy.
Kate looked at Gigi’s picture again. One of the girls in it had a blonde braid, like Gigi’s. She looked at the other girl in the picture. She had brown pigtails, like her own.
“Would you like to play with me at recess?” Kate asked Gigi.
“I’d like that,” Gigi said.
A lovely way for a friendship to begin. I wish you well with this story.
Thank you, Lynn.
What a sweet story of a budding friendship. Good luck.
Thank you, Maria.
I like your sweet story of a picture perfect friendship! Best of luck!
I appreciate you kind comment, Judy. 🙂
What a sweet start to a new friendship!
I like the way competitors become friends. A sweet thing to see happen.
Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship, Marie! Maybe Kate didn’t win the contest, but if she gets a new friend that might be even better 🙂 I’m glad you’ve found Valentine stories so inspiring! Thanks for joining in the fun! 🙂
The Right Valentine
By: Lauren Neil
Austin’s heart was racing, butterfly wings beating against a cage.
He checked his bag again. The 97th time.
They were all there.
Twenty red cards, labeled, each in it’s proper place.
One pink card peeked out of the bunch.
He fumbled his bag closed.
He didn’t have to give it to her.
There were few spare red cards, just in case.
And he could always give her one of those.
But he *wanted* to give her the pink one.
Butterflies again.
Ms. James let all of her students in at once.
Chaos! A stampede!
Cards shoved, squashed, squeezed into the paper bag mailboxes on their desks.
Austin delivered the red cards to his classmates.
One.
By.
One.
Until only the pink card remained.
He was nervous, yes, but there was something else. He felt…bright, like a light. Hope lit him up. And a smile slowly spread across his face.
This was it.
His eyes sparkled as he put the pink card on her desk.
She smiled, opened it, and read the words he’d asked his mom to write:
“I know 1 + 1 = 2.
But can you teach me to read, like you?”
Ms. James put the card down and smiled.
“Of course Austin. I would love to.”
Awwww, that`s a little guy who`s going places. I wish you well with this story.
Thank you for taking time to read and comment Lynn! I really appreciate your kind words. 🙂
Such a sweet card for a teacher. Nice ending twist. Best of luck with this story.
Thank you so much Maria! I’m so glad you liked the twist ending. 🙂
I really enjoyed reading this story and like your surprise ending. Very well done.
Thank you so much for your kind words! 🙂 This was a fun one to write.
Nothing a teacher likes more than a student who wants to learn. Such a sweet story with a surprise ending! Nice job!
Oh thank you so much Judy! I hoped everyone would like the twist (and not see it coming) so your comment makes me really happy. 🙂
What a super card for the teacher. Nice twist at the end. Good luck!
Thank you so much for your kind words – so appreciated! 🙂
Aw, a teacher’s valentine. So sweet.
Thank you so much for your kind words Jilanne! It’s so encouraging! 🙂
Yay for the teacher!
This was a fun one to write – I thought the twist might get people! 🙂
Great job depicting the Valentine stampede and Austin’s nerves, Lauren! I love how you set us up to think he’s agonizing over a girl he likes when in fact he’s getting up the nerve to ask for extra help learning to read. Cleverly done! Thanks for joining in the Valentiny fun 🙂
Thank you Susanna! This was a fun prompt to write to, and I always enjoy reading everyone’s entries. 🙂
The Red Envelope
by Karen Koepcke Morgan
214 words
“Maybe today will be the day!”, Liam shouts as he slams the gate behind him. He tears down the long driveway to the box standing at the end.
He swings the door open to find an array of envelopes and colorful, glossy pages.
None have his name on them.
Liam dejectedly trudges back up the drive and through the front gate.
The next day, Liam zooms out the door when he hears the mail truck rumbling down the road.
He even beats the mailman to the box.
“Anything for me?”
The mailman rifles through the stack and shakes his head.
Liam takes what the mailman offers and tromps back up the driveway, with his head hung low.
Another Day. Liam is filled with hope.
But, sadly, nothing for Liam.
Another day passes.
And, another one.
Nothing for Liam.
Nothing for Liam.
“Today is the day!” Liam proudly announces, “I feel it down to my toes!”
Liam runs.
He speeds.
He stops.
He opens.
He peers inside.
Liam sees something red sticking out from the pile.
Liam pages through the stack, with the speed of a race car careening around the track.
There is his name written in familiar loops and curls….on an envelope filled with hearts.
“Hooray! At last!”
A Valentine from Grandma.
Love those valentines from Grandma. I wish you well with this story.
Oh the anticipation! Glad Liam got his valentine. Good Luck.
I’ve had that same feeling when I see a card in the mail (instead of just bills!) 😉
Good luck in the contest!
Such anticipation waiting for Grandma’s card! Good luck.
Grandparents are pretty important people in small ones’ lives. This is a sweet story. Thank you!
Lovely job showing Liam’s roller coaster of hope and disappointment, Karen. Writers (of all people) are very familiar with that cycle of emotion while awaiting mail, whether snail or e 🙂 I’m glad Liam finally got his long-awaited red envelope from Grandma. Thanks for a wonderful entry!
First Grade Love
By Darcee A. Freier
(214 words)
Gracie loved first grade and learning to read. She loved her teacher and playing with Jane. But Gracie did not love Morris. Morris poked her with his pencil. He talked to her during quiet time. He chased her and Jane on the playground.
“He likes you,” said Jane.
In February, the class covered the bulletin boards with hearts. “Remember to give a valentine to each student,” said Mrs. Wright. Gracie hoped Morris wasn’t listening. She did not want a mushy card from Morris.
Gracie dropped hints. She decorated her bag purple. Morris hated purple. Gracie announced, “I hate valentine cards,” whenever Morris was near. She passed a note to Morris. “No valentine, please.”
On Valentine’s Day, Gracie watched as classmates dropped cards and candy in her bag. She plopped a purple card in Morris’ bag. But she gave Jane a valentine and chocolate.
After school, Gracie opened her cards. Jane’s said, “You are my fairy best friend.” Gracie munched candy hearts. One big envelope was left. Inside was a picture of Morris and a red heart, signed, “Love, Morris.” “Noooo!” Gracie could never go back to first grade!
Wait…. She looked again. The name after “To” was “Jane.” She stuffed the heart back in the envelope and skipped all the way to Jane’s house.
Seems her hoping worked. I wish you well with this story.
Oh, those boys! Funny ending. She did get her wish. Good luck.
Funny twist at the end! Poor Jane! 😉 Best of luck in the contest!
Oh puppy love. Love the ending so funny! Good luck.
The case of the mistaken valentine. What a relief for Gracie. Sweet story!
Lovely job showing the emotions of first graders, Darcee! What lengths won’t we go to to avoid unwanted love 🙂 And I love that Gracie didn’t end up changing her mind because she didn’t get a valentine from Morris – I’m glad she was happy to give the valentine to Jane 🙂 Thanks for a fun entry!