The 8th Annual Halloweensie Contest aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!

***Update November 12th***
We’re pretty close to having the finalist list, but even if it was ready in a couple hours, that wouldn’t give enough time to vote today and I have previously scheduled blog posts for Tuesday Debut tomorrow and Would You Read It Wednesday on Wednesday, so the finalist list will be posted on Thursday November 15th.  Apologies for the delay, but there were a LOT of good entries and the judging process has been harrowing! 🙂 

***Update November 5th***
So sorry everyone but the other judges and I need more time – my fault not their’s.  Work deadlines, family needs, and 234 wonderful entries from you guys that all deserve careful and thoughtful consideration mean that I’m just not able to post finalists today.  I will get them up as soon as I possibly can but I think Wednesday or Thursday is likely.  Sorry for the delay!

Wool of bat and howlet’s wing!  It’s time for . . .

The 8th Annual Halloweensie Contest!!!!!
~ for children’s writers ~
aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!!!!!

halloweensie-pumpkin

The Contest: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in the 100 words), using the words shiver, cauldron, and howl.  Your story can be scary, funny, or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people 🙂  (And yes, I know 100 words is short, but that’s part of the fun and the challenge!  We got 235 fantastic entries last year, so I know you can do it!)  Also, you may use the words in any form – e.g. shivery, cauldrons, howling, whathaveyou 🙂  NO ILLUSTRATION NOTES PLEASE! (And yes, you may submit more than one entry if you’re so inclined 🙂 )

Post: your story on your blog between right now this very second and Wednesday October 31st by 11:59 PM EDT and add your post-specific link to the list below.  There will be no Perfect Picture Book or Would You Read It posts for the duration of the contest so the links will stay up for everyone to visit and enjoy.  If you don’t have a blog and would like to enter, you can simply copy and paste your entry in the comments section below (please include your byline, especially if your posting handle is something like AwesomeWriter92 so I can identify you.)  If you have difficulty posting in the comments, which unfortunately sometimes happens, you may email your entry to me at susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com and I’ll post it for you.  Please place your entry in the body of the email including your title and byline at the top – NO ATTACHMENTS!
Please Note: although you are welcome to submit more than one entry, please only post each entry ONCE!  If you post it on your blog (preferred method) everyone will come visit you and you’ll make new friends! 🙂  If you don’t have a blog, post it in the comment section below.  If you’re unable to post, please email me with your entry and byline in the body of the email.  Please DO NOT post on your blog, and in the comments, and send me an email to post.  It makes things confusing!
P.S.  Although I try to stay glued to my computer 24/7 I am sometimes forced to leave my desk.  If you haven’t commented on my blog before, your comment won’t show up until I approve it.  It may take a little while if I’m away from my desk.  Likewise, if you send me an entry to post, I promise I will do it as soon as I can!

The Judging: in a grueling marathon over the following days, my devoted assistants and I will narrow down the entrants to 3 top choices (hee hee hee – you know how much trouble I have with only 3, so we’ll see) which will be posted here and voted on for a winner on Monday November 5th (sooner if possible, later if necessary!)  The winner will be announced on Thursday November 8th, good lord willin’ and the creek don’t rise 🙂  If we get more than 25 entries, I will post 6 finalists and give prizes for 1st – 3rd.  If by some chance we get the kind of turnout we’ve had the past couple years, I may post as many as 10-12 finalists and I’ll probably end up giving everyone a prize 🙂  But we’ll cross that bridge when we get to it!

Judging criteria will be as follows:

  • 1. Kid-appeal! – These stories are intended for a young audience (ages 12 and under), so we’re looking for stories that children will enjoy and relate to.
  • 2.  Halloweeniness – the rules state a Halloween story, so it must be crystal clear that the story is about Halloween, not just some random spooky night.
  • 3. Quality of story – entries must tell a story, including a main character of some kind and a true story arc even if it’s tiny 🙂  Entries must not be merely descriptions or mood pieces.
  • 4. Quality of Writing: check your spelling, grammar, punctuation etc.  If you’re going to rhyme, give us your best 🙂  Overall writing quality and use of language are also important.
  • 5. Originality and creativity – because that is often what sets one story above another.

The Prizes: (it is currently 1:40AM and I’m at the stage where I’m going to make mistakes, so I will finish posting the prize list properly in the morning.  Apologies for the delay!)

First, the amazingly awesome prize I promised!

– Skip The Slushpile with Editor Hannah Lambert of Little Simon!!!
The lucky winner of this prize will get to place the picture book manuscript of his/her choice directly into editor Hannah Lambert’s hands!  (In case you are wondering, Hannah is the editor of all 4 of my books in the WHEN YOUR… series.)  Hannah will read the manuscript and then send you an email to let you know she’s read your story.  She will include a brief mention of something she likes, and something you can work on. (Not a full critique.)  Of course what makes this prize so incredible is that if you send her a really, really good manuscript the dream could come true! 🙂 So good luck to whoever wins this!  Hannah is particularly interested in mss with a very low word count, and always has an eye out for excellent holiday stories.
(with thanks to Tania Guarino for thinking up the idea of skipping the slush pile!)

– several picture book manuscript critiques from amazing critiquers (details to come – I need to spread my generous volunteers out over 3 contests, so, planning…)

 – 2-Pack of Personalized Signed Picture Books by the lovely and talented Tania Guarino, author of MEET THE QUACKERS (Spork, 2017) and GARDEN PARTY: A COUNTING ADVENTURE (Spork, 2018)
tania-guarino_1_orig Quackers Garden Party

– a personalized signed copy of NOT SO SCARY JERRY by the wonderful and gifted Shelley Kinder

shelley-kinder_orig   Jerry

– Bundle Of Books – assorted PBs, MGs, YAs (details to come) – generously donated by KidLit411

– an e-pub or PDF copy (winner’s choice) of Linda Ashman‘s Nuts And Bolts Guide To Writing Picture Books. OR paperback of Ann Whitford Paul’s Writing Picture Books: A Hands-On Guide from Story Creation to Publication.

Please join me again in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N or anywhere else if you like them, or supporting them in any other way you can dream up 🙂

Now then.  Time for my sample entry which I finished at 1:30 AM and provide because I would never ask you to do anything I wouldn’t do myself.  Also, in case anyone is worried about the quality of their entry they have only to read my truly horrific attempt to be filled with confidence that their’s is MUCH better!

Tricky Witches (100 words)

On a dark All Hallow’s night,
Shivering with cold and fright,
Tiny trick-or-treaters dare
To approach the witches’ lair.
Past the lighted edge of town
Black-cloaked witches stand around.
Something sticky, thick, and hot
Bubbles in their potion pot.
“Come and get it!” witches lure.
“It’ll warm you up for sure!”
Ghostly howls warn, “Stay away!
Don’t be fooled by the bouquet!
Cauldron’s contents might smell sweet,
But that’s trickery, not treat!”
Little candy-hunters flee!
Plan has worked out perfectly.
Witches cackle gleefully,
“Now there’s more for you and me!”
Final check, the brew is done.
“Fresh hot chocolate anyone?”

Now then, darlings!  Is everyone feeling better about their way-better-than-that! stories?  I certainly HOPE so! 🙂

I can’t wait to read all of your entries!  I’m so looking forward to them!  I hope there will be a lot – the more the merrier!  And there are still nearly 5 days to write, so you have time if you haven’t written yet.  Feel free to spread the word to your writing friends as well.  And your reading friends – parents, teachers, etc.  The more people who read and enjoy your stories, the better!!!

Contest Entrants, remember to add your post-specific link to the google form below so we can all come read your awesome stories!  (Post-specific means not your main blog url, but the actual url of the post that has your story in it – otherwise if you post again before the contest ends, your link will take readers… and judges!… to the wrong place!)

Eager Readers – just go along the list of links, click on them, and enjoy the stories!

Happy Writing and Happy Halloween!!! 🙂  🎃

And don’t miss the 122!!! fabulous entries that are posted in the comments below!  (Unfortunately I can’t make links to them, but please scroll through and read and comment for the talented authors!!!)
1. When The Shivers Moved In – Kaye
2. Luna’s Mysterious Costume – Sara A
3. Pet Cemetery Picnic – Corine
4. Fright Night Stew – Dee
5. Halloween Night – Karen
6. Belinda’s Broken Brew – Keatley
7. Mummy’s Mess – Diana
8. New Halloween Cauldron – Kathleen
9. There Was An Old Witch – Dianne
10. Trick Or Treasure – Anne
11. A Seedy Story – Connie
12. The “Wolf” At The Door – Charlene
13. Halloween Sleepover – Pat
14. Little Cauldron’s Halloween Surprise – Ingrid
15. A Halloween Bite – Debora
16. Who Needs – Joan
17. Cauldron Conundrum – Danielle
18. Pete And Re-Pete – Heather
19. Stitchy Witchy Brew – Jennifer B
20. The Lost Boys – Michael
21. Full Moon Rising – Michael
22. Truly Boo – Mary
23. The Last Piece – Carrie
24. One House Left – Tara
25. Mission Halloween – Monica
26. The Family Resemblance – Debora
27. One Chilly Halloween – Debora
28. Skellie Ton’s Encounter – Laura
29. Monster Vacancy – Laura
30. The Halloween Ball – Sylvia
31. Mrs. Tank’s Pennies – Jennifer M
32. Midnight Feast – Becky
33. Halloween Prize – Kirsten
34. Three Pig-Witches – Su
35. The First Corner – John
36. Potion Commotion – Jennifer Bu
37. If You Can’t Beat Them… – Linda
38. A Brew For You – Diana
39. A Horrid Witch’s Brew – Erin
40. Halloween Stew For Two – Anne B
41. A Halloween Scene – Michelle K
42. The Skeletons On Halloween – Michelle K
43. Wolfie’s Pumpkin – Joan
44. What’s Cooking? – Jill
45. Halloween Friends – Kay
46. Not This Halloween! – Carmen
47. A Calm Halloween – Jessica
48. Festival – Beth B
49. School Screams – Lu
50. It’s Only Pretend – Jill L
51. The Candivore – Jill L
52. Shiver, Cauldron And Howl – Lisa
53. A Bite Of Soup – Megan
54. The Gathering – MaryLee
55. Are You Sure? – Jim
56. A Halloween Haiku – Michelle K
57. Festive Feast – Jamie
58. Halloween – Amy
59. The Best Night For Little Ghouls – Beth S
60. Trouble – Bonnie
61. H-A-L-L-O-W-E-E-N K-I-D-S G-E-T C-A-N-D-Y – Michelle K
62. Opposite Day: A Halloween Scare – John
63. Midnight Fright – Patricia
64. Trick Or Treat – Linda
65. Snap Apple Fright – Corine
66. Worst Costume…Never – Rich
67. Witch’s Welcome – Elaine
68. Fright Fight – Nannette
69. The Halloween Ship – Laura B
70. A Gold Wand For Wanda – Laura B
71. Safe – Dawn D
72. Stage Fright – Michelle Kl
73. Dusty Bones Has No Guts – Andrea
74. Who’s The Scariest? – Mona
75. Chef Crone – Diana
76. Calling All Witches! – Anne S
77. Halloween Dinner – Sara G
78. Tis The Season(ing) – Judy
79. Itchy, Itchy, And Twitch – Patricia
80. A Witch Is In The Kitchen! – Jeannie
81. Avocado And Toast – Rebecca
82. The Scary Costume – Karen
83. Trick-or-Treat – Amy B
84. Three Little Pumpkins – Karen
85. Oh Drat! – Kathy
86. Witchy, The Transylvanian Sheepdog – Karen
87. Fright School – Lucretia
88. Ghosts, Witches and Wolves, Oh No! – Amy R
89. Grandma’s Secret – Susie
90. Transylbirdia – Debbie
91. Little Bat’s First Halloween Journey – Linda
92. Mischief Night – Tania
93. The Scariest Night Of The Year – Susie
94. Pumpkin Sky – Cassandra
95. Halloween Punch – Gyeong
96. Winifred Waited – Gail
97. The Night Of The Candy – Jennifer H
98. Untitled – Anna
99. Untitled -Ella
100. The Question Of The Cat On The Pumpkin At Hallowe’en – Jane
101. The Halloween Scheme – Susan
102. A Witch Can Switch – Nancy
103. Guess Who – Mia
104. Little Wolfs Howlween – Beth
105. Gordie Goblin’s Potion – Jen
106. Bubble Bubble – Jen
107. The Missing Treat – Cheryl
108. Stir The Pot – Linda S
109. No Bones About It – JC
110. Trick-Or-Sweet – Lauren
111. Spooky Spies II: The Spookening – Samantha
112. Halloween Surprise – Linda B
113. Last Halloween – Susan V
114. Eat Up Your Carrots – Susan V
115. The Creepy Cupcake CATastrophe – Karen G
116. No Chocolate For Dogs – Shae
117. Double, Trouble, Bubble… – Deborah A
118. Tricky Halloweensie Velvet – Virginia
119. The Sleepy Pirate – Jennifer C
120. Three Little Witches – Debbie V
121. Courageous Cauldron Queens – Katrina
122. One Sweet Halloween – Darcee

836 thoughts on “The 8th Annual Halloweensie Contest aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!

  1. writestuff99 says:

    No Bones About It (100 Words)
    By JC Kelly

    No bones about it, Charlie Skelton was forgetful.

    A shiver went up his spine when he realized he’d misplaced something very important.

    Momma was going to howl!

    He had been carving a jack-o-lantern on his porch, and didn’t realize anything was was missing until the witch next door beckoned him with her craggily finger…
    and he couldn’t stand up.

    Charlie slowly hobbled next door, and his eyes nearly fell out of their sockets…
    the witch was stirring her cauldron…
    WITH HIS FEMUR!

    “I found this in the driveway, “ she said kindly. “Let’s put you back together so you can go trick-or-treating.”

  2. picturebookplaydate says:

    TRICK-OR-SWEET
    by: Lauren Neil
    69 words

    Reese’s bragged
    Black licorice sagged.
    And Nerds were rat-a-tat romping.
    Sweet Tarts shivered
    Snickers bickered
    And Skittles were spit-spat stomping.
    Hershey’s howled
    Milk Duds growled
    No one was in a good mood.
    How could they be? It was Halloween.
    And they were the cauldron of food.
    Escape was needed.
    Warnings unheeded.
    The lesson was fast and grim.
    Better to be one of many.
    Than alone on the cauldron brim.

  3. Samantha Altmann says:

    Spooky Spies II: The Spookening

    In front of Jackson a witch carried a cauldron. Behind him a werewolf howled. Twelve months earlier Jackson had figured out that the jack-o-lanterns were spies for Santa; filing reports to the big man on the naughty and nice. Jackson just had to finish the school Halloween parade. Then he could finally put his plan into action.

    Jackson ran home, checked his jack-o-lantern’s positioning and waited outside, shivering. Jackson’s neighbor Steven crested the hill and they locked eyes. Soon enough, Santa would hear reports of Steven bullying Jackson for dressing up as a ballerina.

  4. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR LINDA

    Halloween Surprise

    By Linda Boyden ©2018

    On a dark and creepy night,

    bats zoomed across the inky sky.

    Black cats shivered on tiptoe prowls,

    Pale ghosts sighed and goblins howled.

    Vampires hissed down alleys and streets,

    while witches stirred their cauldrons bleak.

    But I lurked in the shadows, not frightened or addled

    and turned the tables with my scariest cackle:

    “BWA-HA-HA! AND BOOOO TO YOU!”

  5. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR SUSAN

    Last Halloween by Susan Valli

    A Wolf sat down on the end of my bed,

    And softly began to howl.

    Mum! I shouted, ready to run,

    As I noticed his dripping jowl.

    The wolf meanwhile was examining me,

    Choosing which limb to tear.

    A noise was heard! Wolf under the bed

    Mum mounted the stairs!

    In she walked with cauldron and broom,

    And witch’s pointed hat.

    I shivered and wondered who would go first

    Me or mum’s horrible cat.

    I felt a soft nose nuzzle my hand

    I knew I had a friend

    Under the bed in wolf’s clothing

    Who’d protect me to the end.

  6. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY #2 POSTED FOR SUSAN

    Eat up your carrots! by Susan Valli

    Halloweeny, my friend Queeny,

    Dressed up as a parrot.

    Wanting to look scarier,

    I dressed up as a carrot.

    Scary you may ask yourself?

    It may seem pretty tame.

    If I really tell the truth,

    I felt pretty much the same.

    That was until party time

    When everything went viral

    Queenie weirdly sprouted wings,

    I began to spiral.

    All our friends began to howl.

    I began to shiver.

    Enter cauldron (held by witch)

    Which turned into a river.

    Down we floated, lit by ghosts,

    Whatever would await me?

    Queenie who was once my friend,

    Squawked and then she ate me.

    • Susanna Leonard Hill says:

      No doubt things run amok on Halloween! But who’d’a’thunk Queenie would eat her friend?! That’ll teach kids to dress up as vegetables! 🙂 Great rhyme and original story, Susan! Thanks for another fun entry!

  7. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR KAREN

    The Creepy Cupcake CATastrophe
    By Karen M. Greenwald

    “You did WHAT?” Mummy started unraveling.

    “I…uh…said we’d make 300 cupcakes for tomorrow’s Howl-o-ween party…?”

    Outside a cold wind whipped, shivered, and whined.

    Inside, it suddenly felt hotter than a witch’s cauldron.

    “Molly, why didn’t you tell me before Midnight?!”

    Mummy looked quite mad.

    Ebony the cat hid.

    Molly and Mummy baked, iced, and yawned until all 300 cupcakes lined the table.

    “I’m sorry, Mummy. Next year I’ll only bring napkins!”

    “Then I forgive you.”

    Mummy hugged Molly and then the two tired “zombies” climbed into bed.

    If only Ebony had gone to sleep…

    (Based on a true story!)

  8. Shae Pepper says:

    No Chocolate for Dogs- By Shae Pepper

    Shiver me timbers, Biscuit. You’re a great pirate!
    Hoooowwwwllll….
    Poor Biscuit.
    Dressing up every year he went door to door.
    But no chocolate for dogs.
    Awww… it’s ok… We’re going for a walk.
    His boy gave him a bucket.
    “Hrumph” grumbled Biscuit.
    No chocolate for dogs.
    He walked outside with his boy.
    Little witches with cauldrons, robots with bags.
    Everyone was looking at him, he was ready for pats, nothing more.
    I know, I know, thought Biscuit.
    No chocolate for dogs.
    Clunk. Clunk. Clunk.
    Bacon treats for Biscuit!
    When bacon’s around,
    No pup cares that there’s no chocolate for dogs.

  9. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR DEBORAH

    Double, Trouble, Bubble…
    By Deborah L. Allmand

    Double, double toil and trouble;
    Watching the cauldron bubble.
    Boiling eyes of newts, with howlet’s wing,
    And Skittles to give the brew zing.
    Three tiny witches add lizard’s leg and toe of frog,
    Plus adding jelly beans and tongue of dog.
    Time for cauldron to boil and bake,
    When done sprinkle with scales of snake.
    Cool it with baboon’s blood,
    Then the charm is done and good.
    This makes the candy giver, shiver and
    Pour more candy in your quiver.

  10. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR VIRGINIA

    Tricky Halloweensie Velvet
    by Virginia Rinkel

    The chestnut kids were ready for Trick or Treat.

    They had their costumes, masks and

    Moms gave velvet bags with special love,

    To keep kids honest till they got home.

    The moon was out and everyone shivered,

    and bags brimmed with munchie goodies.

    “We’ll just have one piece.

    No one will know,” one said.

    “EEEOOOWWWEEE”!!!

    My bag’s a cauldron! he howled.

    “Mommy’s boy didn’t wait did he, “ her words he remembered.

    All Mom’s helped now.

    For candy to last all year.

    Beware of velvet turned inside out.

    It just might be you have a “Halloweensie Bur Bag INSIDE.”

  11. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR JENNIFER

    The Sleepy Pirate
    By Jennifer Hope Chmelka

    On All Hallows’ Eve,
    The Cauldron sailed
    across the tumultuous sea.
    BOOM! CRACK!
    Thunderclaps and lightning
    stirred Pirate Pete from his slumber
    in the crow’s nest.
    “Shiver me timbers!”
    He wobbled across the yard.
    “Batten down the hatches!” ordered Captain Crest.
    BOOM! CRACK!
    Into the billowing sail,
    Pirate Pete fell…
    asleep.
    “Stow the sails!” ordered Captain Crest,
    rousing the drowsy mate.
    Downward,
    he tumbled.
    The Cauldron swayed.
    Rats scurried.
    Swords and skeletons
    slid and slammed,
    starboard to port.
    So did Pirate Pete.
    “Owww!” he howled.
    BOOM! CRACK!
    “All hands on deck!” ordered Captain Crest.
    Where’s Pirate Pete?”
    BOOM! CRACK!
    “Zzzzz…”

  12. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR DEBBIE

    Debbie Vidovich
    Making Room for Rhyme Critique Group
    94 words

    Three Little Witches

    In a pitch black forest, over white hot flames,
    three little witches stir a cauldron, chanting names.
    Mesmerized, bewitched by bubbling, burping goo,
    with gurgles, pops and splatters, it’s a dangerous brew!

    Add a newt, and fly, a salamander eye,
    Shiver!!! Plus a moldy liver with a stye.
    Listen as they drop, slip-slap-slop in the pot.
    Witchy noses crinkle, gulping down the rot.

    Glowing neon yellow, feeling very strange…
    Poof! Three little witches watch each other change.
    Now three little werewolves, running as they howl
    for Halloweensie candy, grumble, fight and growl!

  13. Katrina Swenson says:

    Courageous Cauldron Queens
    by Katrina Swenson
    100 Words

    We’re heading to the forest now!
    Tonight on Halloween
    Lucille, me, plus Maggie make three
    courageous cauldron queens.

    We’re almost to the forest now!
    Breezes blast our ears.
    Lucille shivers, Maggie quivers
    and I say, “Onward, dears!”

    We’re finally in the forest now,
    prepared to boil our brew.
    We’ll wildly dance to magic chants
    and stir our spooky stew.

    But first we’ll howl at the moon
    Before our witchy snack–
    Barmy bat! Do you hear that?
    The forest’s howling back!

    We’re fleeing from the forest now!
    We scatter! Zigzag! Zoom!
    Lucille, me, then Maggie, all three
    safely in my room!

  14. Darcee Freier says:

    One Sweet Halloween
    By Darcee A. Freier
    97 Words

    Sylvie wiggled into her cupcake costume. BLING! Pink and purple sprinkles lit up. Perfect.
    Sylvie didn’t like scary. Or dark.
    She was the opposite of Mack and Mariel. They loved haunted houses and witch’s cauldrons, goose bumps and shivers crawling up their spines.
    Wanting to be brave, Sylvie had agreed to trick-or-treat with them.
    She trudged next door with her sprinkles flashing.
    KNOCK! KNOCK!
    A big, white puff answered.
    “Trick-or … What are you?” Sylvie asked.
    “A marshmallow,” said Mack.
    “And I’m the hot chocolate,” said Mariel.
    Sylvie howled with laughter. Halloween was going to be sweet.

  15. Traci Bold says:

    Susanna, I love all of your stories! They put us writers in the spirit of writing, encouraging us to give it a shot. Thank you for your continued encouragement and fantastic blog posts! You rock. 🙂

  16. DianaLynn Gibson says:

    Thank you, Susanna and all the amazing people working with you on this faculousncontest! I can’t believe all the different stories that could be woven with those 3 little words! Totally AMAZING!
    I wrote a short quatrain in honor of all of the writers who entered and for all those totally exhausted after Halloween. Enjoy this tidbit!

    The Aftermath

    Whooo needs a drink after Halloween Eves?
    Whooo needs some wine with the magic it weaves?
    Sneak in my door with your little brown jug,
    We’ll write witches curses and sip some sweet glug.

    • Susanna Leonard Hill says:

      It is my pleasure, Diana, Johnell, and Julie, and that of those who help me! I love the creativity and community that emerge with this contest! I’m just sorry it’s taking me so long to judge this time – too much other stuff going on! But thank you for “The Aftermath”! That is PERFECT! 🙂

    • Corine Timmer says:

      I agree too with the sentiments above. Thanks, Susanna. It’s amazing that you are are giving feedback on all the entries. I think we all understand that it’s taking longer. So many wonderful entries to read and judge takes time. Thanks for another wonderful Halloweensie 🙂

    • Patricia Finnegan says:

      Hahaha:-) By the time Halloween is over, adults can definitely be looking for some way to unwind – I enjoyed your poem, DianaLynn.

      AND a great big, howling Halloween “Thank you!” to Susanna for organizing this contest and also for taking the time to write a thoughtful comment for every entry. The contest was fabulous fun!

  17. Susanna Leonard Hill says:

    ENTRY POSTED FOR SUSAN – LATE AND NOT IN THE COMPETITION, BUT JUST SO EVERYONE CAN READ AND ENJOY! 🙂

    The Trick by Susan Halko

    We scurried to the last house. An old woman sat on the porch.

    “Trick or treat,” we sang.

    “No more treats,” she snapped.

    But then she smiled. “How about a trick?”

    I shivered. Miles smirked. “Sure!”
    I shot my brother a look. He didn’t catch it. His eyes were on the bony fingers motioning him to a large cauldron.

    “In here,” the woman said.

    Miles looked inside. “It’s empty!”

    The woman howled, “In here!”

    Miles and I climbed into the pot. Then we heard a girl laugh. We looked up. “Thank you!” she said. And Happy Halloween!”

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