Would You Read It Wednesday #372 – Beach Sand Waves (PB)

Darlings!

Here we are in a whole brand new year!

Happy, happy to you all!

Let’s just dive right into Something Chocolate and start things off with a decadently delicious glass of Whipped Hot Chocolate to celebrate!

Whipped Hot Chocolate

Divine, isn’t it?! Slurp, slurp! ๐Ÿ˜Š

I hope you’ll indulge me for one moment to share my new book with you since it had it’s birthday yesterday ๐Ÿ˜Š

written by Susanna Leonard Hill, illustrated by John Joseph, published by Sourcebooks

I enjoyed writing this book to celebrate grandmas of every kind in every place – each one so special to her grandchildren in her own unique way. And John did such an amazing job with the illustrations! I hope you’ll like it if you get a chance to take a look at it.

Here’s a sneak peek at a couple of the pictures ๐Ÿ˜Š

text copyright Susanna Leonard Hill 2021, illustration copyright John Joseph 2021, Sourcebooks Wonderland
text copyright Susanna Leonard Hill 2021, illustration copyright John Joseph 2021, Sourcebooks Wonderland

Can’t everyone appreciate a grandma who helps her defeat dragons? ๐Ÿ˜Š

Now then, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from Aundra whom you will remember from November with her pitch for Gregory The Garbage Truck. Aundra says, “I am a middle school special education teacher and mother to a 4 year old and 2.5 year old.”

Here is her pitch:

Working Title: Beach Sand Waves

Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)

The Pitch: BEACH SAND WAVES is a 600 word picture book about a child who is willing to endure the thing they hate most to get to be with what they love.

Everyone loves the beach, but Morgan. Sand: Itโ€™s like glue. Itโ€™s everywhere. And there are bugs. Morganโ€™s day at the beach is nothing like a day at the beach, but to get to what Morgan loves more, first SAND. #wndb #nonfiction #pb

So what do you think?  Would You Read It?  YES, MAYBE or NO?

If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest.  If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Aundra improve her pitch.  Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome.  (However I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful.  I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)

Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks!  For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on Would You Read it in the dropdown under For Writers in the bar above.  There are openings in January, so you could get your pitch up pretty soon for helpful feedback and a chance to have it read and commented on by editor Erin Molta!

Aundra is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch!  I am looking forward to actually getting a copy of DEAR GRANDMA to hold in my hot little hands! I think my copies might come today. . . fingers crossed!

Have a wonderful Wednesday everyone!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š