Woo-hoo!
It’s Would You Read It Wednesday!
Let’s get this party started, shall we?
I motion that we begin with Something Chocolate!
Scout (who must still be known as Skunk Dog but is getting better) seconds the motion, and Jemma thirds it, so the motion carries!
Help yourselves to chocolate cupcakes with cream cheese icing! (That way we get vegetable – from the cocoa BEAN – and dairy and protein from the cream CHEESE. I am nothing if not concerned for your health and well-being, so I try to make sure we cover as many food groups as possible :))
Now then, I’ve got the September Pitch Pick ready to go and it’s only October 9th! (Yes, it’s really me, and no, I am not feverish, nor is my mind being controlled by aliens… although that’s what I would say if my mind were being controlled by aliens, so I guess you never know… :))
So without further ado, let’s have a look-see at our new and improved pitches and vote for the one we think deserves a read by editor Erin Molta!
Here are our contenders:
#1 Kirsti
Upside Down In Frown Town – PB ages 3-8
Where Sam lives, smiling is frowned upon. But, no matter what he tries, he can’t wipe the smile off his face. Even a frowning contest doesn’t make a frowner out of Sam. When he can’t change himself, he decides to change the town instead.
#2 Kathy
The Garden Disaster – PB ages 4-7
#3 Wendi
The Superhero Rejects – MG
Morphus is ashamed that his superpower is turning into lame objects like paper clips, rubber bands and light bulbs. At ZITS (The Zapdor Institute for the Training of Superheroes), he and the other Superhero Rejects are relegated to practice their pathetic skills in the old gym in the basement. When the nefarious Scorpius attacks the school and puts everyone upstairs into a hypnotic trance, Morphus and his band of rejects might be the only ones that can save them!
#4 Donna
The Lightbulb And The Lab Coat – PB ages 8-12
Thomas Edison befriends an orphaned robin, who provides him with companionship and inspiration as he faces a tight deadline to deliver the first incandescent light bulb. As tests are feverously conducted to find the right bulb filament, the industrious robin shows him that the answer was right under his nose all the time!
Please cast your vote below for the pitch you feel most deserves a read by Erin by Sunday October 13 at 11:59 PM EDT. Thank you all so much!
Today’s pitch comes to us from Linda, who has visited us a couple times before (WYRI #79 – Twitch (MG) and WYRI #72 – The Good For Plenty Bibs (PB) and WYRI # 60 – Alpha Bitty (PB) – did I miss any Linda? :)). Linda is a former gifted and talented teacher and the author of a number of books including the multi-award winning picture book, The Blue Roses. Please take a moment to visit her website at www.lindaboyden.com.
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: Proberta Gerber And The Terrible Mess
Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)
The Pitch: Once upon a time Proberta Gerber once had a purple and pink bedroom; now all she has is a terrible mess. Dad wonders why? Big brother Arbuckle helps: “Clean one thing at a time. Start with your bed.” Proberta can’t find it. She blames the mess on the Dust Bunnies who live in her closet, but Mom says, “Stay there until it is cleaned, young lady.” Sniffling, Proberta makes a special wish for help. And who appears? The REAL Dust Bunnies who help, but not in the way she thinks.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
Linda is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I just got the final proofs for the Crock of Charms Anthology project I participated in (along with a few devoted readers from this blog :)) and I am looking forward to seeing it in print! I will share full details when they are available, hopefully by early December 🙂
Have a wonderful Wednesday, everyone!
Ready, set, WRITE! (or read, or teach, or go play on the swings, or whatever happens to be on your agenda today :))
I think this is a very cute idea for a picture book. Love the dust bunnies as characters. Just from the pitch it feels like the story needs some tightening. And I can see this story as one where she peels off the layers. Her room was at first a glorious pink and purple. Now it was pink and purple and . . . then she left x here, y there, and of course, there's the gym stuff, and her crafts, and . . . she's building on the mess till her mom blows her stack, clean it up! And then she needs to figure out the how. And of course, the bunnies help and layer by layer she unravels the mess. It sounds like this one could be a sure winner. Best of luck!
Thanks so much for chiming in for Linda, Robin! Very helpful 🙂
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