The 3rd Annual Halloweensie Contest – aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!!

Eye of newt and toe of frog!  It’s finally time for

The 3rd Annual HALLOWEENSIE CONTEST!!!!!

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The Contest:  write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (title not included in the 100 words), using the words spooky, black cat, and cackle.   Your story can be scary, funny or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words (you can count black cat as one word) and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people 🙂  [Note: of you choose to use cackle as a verb, any form is acceptable – cackles, cackled, cackling…]

Post your story on your blog between now and Thursday October 31st by 11:59 PM EDT and add your post-specific link to the list below.  There will be no Would You Read It or Perfect Picture Books this week, so the post and the list of links will stay up all week for everyone to enjoy.  I hope everyone will visit everyone and you’ll all get your friends and relations to visit, read and enjoy too!  If you don’t have a blog and would like to enter, you can simply copy and paste your entry in the comments section below.  (If you have trouble, and alas, people sometimes do, just email your entry to susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com and I’ll post it in the comments for you!)

The Judging: my lovely assistant and I will narrow down the entrants to 3 (hee hee hee – you know how much trouble I have with only 3, so we’ll see) top choices which will be posted here and voted on for a winner on Monday November 4th.  The winner will be announced with Would You Read It on Wednesday November 6th.  If we get more than 20 entries, I will post 6 finalists and give prizes for 1st through 3rd.

The Prizes:

First Prize is a PB Critique from the amazing Corey Rosen Schwartz, author of The Three Ninja Pigs, Hop! Plop!, and the forthcoming Goldirocks, Ninja Red, and What About Moose? AND a copy of Linda Ashman’s new Nuts And Bolts Guide to Writing Picture Books (your choice of e-book or PDF)!  The winner will also be incredibly famous and able to boast that he or she won The Halloweensie Contest… and that is not something most people can say! 🙂

Second Prize is a PB manuscript and query letter critique from talented author Heather Ayris Burnell, author of Bedtime Monster.

Third Prize is a set of personalized signed picture books just in time for the holidays – Charlotte Gunnufson‘s Halloween Hustle, Tiffany Haber’s The Monster Who Lost His Mean, and Amy Dixon’s Marathon Mouse (perfect timing because NYC Marathon Sunday is next weekend!)

Please join me again in thanking these very generous authors for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books for holiday purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N or anywhere else if you like them, or supporting them in any other way you can dream up 🙂

I’m actually a little amazed (and worried) because the inaugural Halloweensie Contest, won by Cathy with Untitled was postponed due to 2 feet of snow – which around here is unusual for the end of October.  The 2nd Annual Halloweensie Contest, won by Julie with Hallow’s Eve was delayed and interfered with by Hurricane Sandy!  So fingers crossed we don’t get any wild weather this year!

Now then.  Time for my sample entry which I provide both because I wouldn’t ask you to do anything I wouldn’t do myself, and because in case anyone is worried about the quality of their entry they have only to read my abysmal attempts to be filled with confidence that their’s is MUCH better!

So without further ado:

A Witch For Spooky (100 words)

Spooky was a black cat with no witch.
Things just never worked out.
Grimelda’s potions were too stinky for his delicate nose.
“Scram!” said Grimelda when he kept sneezing.
Hauntabelle flew her broomstick like a maniac.
“Scat!” said Hauntabelle when he got broomsick.
Armathystle’s cackle made Spooky run and hide!
Spooky had almost given up when he found Serena.  She was very small, but she didn’t smell bad or fly fast or cackle.
“You can be my Pookie,” she crooned (which was close enough!), and she carried him home in a candy-filled plastic pumpkin.
Spooky had a witch at last!

and, to provide one in rhyme (kinda storta :))

Spooked! (100 words)

A pirate, a witch, and a gypsy queen
Went trick-or-treating one Halloween.
Away past the farthest edge of town
To the ramshackle home of Farmer Brown.
Up the dark lane where no one dared.
The gyspsy queen said, “We’re not scared!”
A spooky shadow loomed ahead!
“Relax,” said the pirate.  “It’s just a shed.”
“Eeeek!” shrieked the witch as she danced about.
“Something touched my leg!  Look out!”
“It’s just a black cat.  Come on, let’s go.”
But then came a sound they didn’t know.
Cackle-cackle!  “It’s witches on the loose!”
And they ran helter-skelter from the Farmer’s goose!

Everyone feeling better about their stories now?  I HOPE so! 🙂

I can’t wait to read all of yours!  I hope there will be a lot – the more the merrier!  And there are still 4 days to write, so you have time if you haven’t written yet.  Feel free to spread the word to your writing friends as well.

Remember to put your post-specific link (not your general blog link or people will find the wrong page if you post again before the contest is over) in the list below!

Happy Writing and Happy Halloween!!! 🙂

Don’t miss 19 entries in the comments section from Megan, Pia, Linda, Michele, Stacy, Laurie, Kathy, Patricia, Eileen, Nancy, Pam, Pat, Kristen, Teresa R., Teresa S., Suzy, Tracy, Heather, and Karen!  (Marcie is now on the link list at #15, Jackie is now on the link list at #33 – she has a brand new blog!, Laura S is on the list at #40, and Deirdre is on the link list at #52.  I hope I’ve caught all the doubles, but there may be a couple more.)

538 thoughts on “The 3rd Annual Halloweensie Contest – aahhhrrrooooOOOOO!!”

  1. teresa m.i. schaefer says:
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    A Grim Concoction
    Eye of newt, toe of frog, dip them, trick them from the bog.
    “Stir them, stir them,” cackled Grim. “Stir them, stir them, stir them in.”
    Spooky cat, big black bat, snitch them snatch them just like that.
    “Stir them, stir them,” cackled Grim. “Stir them, stir them, stir them in.”
    Lizards, gizzards, flys and snakes. What will this concoction make?
    “Stir them, stir them,” cackled Grim. “Stir them, stir them, stir them in.”
    “We want treats, not tricks,” said Jake.
    “Here's my bag — make no mistake. Candy treats please place them in.”
    “Snatch him, catch him, stir him in.”

    Hi Susanna, I don't have a blog, but this looked like too much fun to pass up. Thanks for the opportunity, Teresa M.I. Schaefer

  2. Beth Stilborn says:
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    I don't know if anyone else has had trouble getting to Patricia Nozell's Two Orange Pups & the Spooky Stew, but here's the trick you need to know to get to the treat that is her poem/story: When you click the link, if it does to you what it did to me, you'll get a WordPress Sign-in page. Look at the very bottom. You'll see the words “Go back to “Wander, Ponder, Write.” — Click on that, and you'll get to Patricia's blog. You won't be disappointed!!!!

  9. disqus_bENDymTlMv says:
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    haha! Entered, such as it is… What a GREAT challenge. It's so hard to be brief, but I think it really challenges you to TELL a story, not SHOW a story… Loved it Susanna.

  10. Rosi says:
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    Sure wish I had time to write one. Sooooo busy this week with visitors and packing for a workshop next week. I have time to read some though.

  12. Susanna Leonard Hill says:
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    ENTRY POSTED FOR TERESA

    Boo, Bitsy! (100 words exactly)

    You might think a town named Black Cat would be a spooky place. Instead, it was always cheerful, even on Halloween.

    Just once, Bitsy wanted to hear a cackle instead of giggles, and see scary, instead of smiley, faces on pumpkins.

    Just once, Bitsy wanted to be scared!

    This year, dark clouds gathered on Halloween night. A storm rolled in. Lightning flashed; thunder roared.

    Zap! Sparks flew; the lights went out.

    Bitsy screamed. A cat hissed next to her. As Bitsy screamed again, the lights came back on.

    Bitsy ran back into the house laughing. She finally got her wish!

  16. Susanna Leonard Hill says:
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    My goodness! I guess Bitsy did get her wish! Just the right amount of scary to be fun! 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in the contest all the way from the other side of the world. I think the contest has reached new heights when it can lure you in from vacation 🙂

  21. Susanna Leonard Hill says:
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    Hi Teresa! I'm so glad you joined in the fun! This is delightful. I love the repetition of “Stir them, stir them, stir them in” and I think my favorite line is “Snitch them, snatch them just like that” followed by the end – very spooky! I'm thinking Jake may have knocked on the wrong door 🙂

  29. Susanna Leonard Hill says:
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    Ooh! Can't WAIT to read your entry, Meg! I'm so glad you had time to write one! And this is a good exercise for us PB writers, isn't it? We're always trying to figure out how to tell a story in as few words as possible 🙂

  40. Jackie Wellington says:
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    This was AWESOME (singing in my Oprah voice). I love rhyme, rhythm, and flow. This was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

  44. Clarbojahn says:
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    I can't believe how many comments and how many stories there are now! And I don't think I ever commented on your story. I love it as all the rest. The variety and joy of this contest is amazing. Thanks for having it, Susanna!

    I think everyone is having fun! Happy Halloween! 🙂

  45. Deirdre Sheridan Englehart says:
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    Hello, I am putting my entry here also, because I am not sure if my link will work since it is the first thing I put on my new weebly site.
    http://a-story-to-tell-me.weebly.com/untitled.html

    The Spookiest Night!

    by Deirdre Sheridan Englehart

    On the spookiest night of the year, Sorcha heard a
    cackle in the distance, she turned to see a black cat slink by. Goose bumps
    filled her arm. Her footsteps echoed as she stalked into the spooky graveyard, guided
    by the full moon. Taking five steps, she turned, counted eight headstones finding
    her own grave. Glancing at the inscription, “The Come Back Kid” she remembered a Halloween night many years
    before… Sorcha cackled, picked up her black cat and crawled into her grave spreading
    the cool black dirt around her like a blanket. On the spookiest night of the
    year.

  48. Susanna Leonard Hill says:
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    Sorry to be a stickler about spooky, but I didn't specify that in the original rules and there are around 60 entries already that stuck with spooky, so I don't want to be unfair. So glad you're enjoying the contest! And nice to meet you 🙂

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