Would You Read It Wednesday #176 – Barnabas The Noisy Ninja (PB)

Avast, me hearties!

We’ve got a piratically fun pitch up today.  But first, a word from our sponsors…

For anyone who is interested (well, and I guess even if you’re not interested… :)), Graduation Weekend was a success.  Everyone from our family who was supposed to graduate did – quite impressively, I might add 🙂  And some family members were in attendance in all necessary locations.  We took “divide and conquer” to a new level.  After all that planning, agonizing, traveling, etc, I can’t believe it’s over!

In other news, I’m heartbroken to report I found out yesterday that Punxsutawney Phyllis is going out of print 😦  After a ten year run, apparently her time is up 😦  I will have to horde as many copies as I can find!

I most definitely feel the need for Something Chocolate after such news, as I’m sure you all do too!   And I have recently heard (much to my delight) that eating chocolate cake for breakfast can help you maintain (or regain) a healthy weight.  I don’t know who thought this plan up, but I’m all for it!  I have long suspected this to be the case.  So let’s have cake!

I feel slimmer and healthier already, don’t you? 🙂

Today’s pitch comes to us from Jason who says, “My inspiration came in part from the many students with Autism I have taught during my 14 years as a special education teacher. I am a member of SCBWI along with a few critique groups out here in Western Massachusetts, where I live with my wife and 5 year old daughter.  When it’s not below freezing outside, I love to grill.  (My new favorite is bacon wrapped pork tenderloin, which is as incredible as it sounds.)”   

Here is his pitch:

Working Title: Barnabas The Noisy Ninja
Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)
The Pitch: Barnabas has pirate fever.  He loves to wear buccaneer boots, sing sea shanties, and shout avast at passing strangers.  Unfortunately, he lives in Ninjaville, where silence is golden and pirates are most certainly not welcome.  Exasperated by his piratical nature, his parents enroll him in Ninjagarten, hoping Sensei can tame his ruckus raising ways.  Barnabas, however, has other plans.  After enlisting his fellow ninjalings during recess, Barnabas leads them in a mutiny.  But when the things get out of hand, Barnabas must reign in his ruckus crew.

So what do you think?  Would You Read It?  YES, MAYBE or NO?

If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest.  If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Jason improve his pitch.  Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome.  (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful.  I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks!  For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above.  There are openings in October so you’ve got a little time to polish up your pitches and send yours for your chance to be read by editor Erin Molta!

Jason is looking forward to your thoughts on his pitch!  I am looking forward to seeing how that chocolate cake eating plan works and figuring out how many copies of Phyllis I can grab before they’re gone forever!  For which I will no doubt need chocolate sustenance.  It’s the Circle of Chocolate.  A lot like the Circle of Life, but yummier 🙂

Have a wonderful Wednesday, everyone!!! 🙂

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