Can it be?
Only three more days until the opening moment of HALLOWEENSIE???!!!
I cannot wait!!! – despite the fact that I have been so busy with other projects that I haven’t given even one second’s thought to my sample entry! It’s going to be another down-to-the-wire situation, I’m afraid.
But just you guys wait until you see what the big prize is! You’re going to keel right over!
Let’s just say, you’re going to want to put your best effort forward because this is a prize you’re going to want a real shot at!
Now that you’re DYING to know what the prize is and I’m certainly not going to tell you until Saturday morning when the contest post goes up (MWAH-HA-HA, she laughed evilly 🙂 ) let’s talk September Pitch Pick.
Please read through the pitches below, which have been revised thanks to your helpful input, and choose the one you think is best and most deserving of a read and comments by editor Erin Molta. Then vote for your favorite in the poll by Sunday October 28 at 9PM Eastern. I realize that Halloweensie will already be underway, so to make sure you remember to read and vote you might want to do it before the weekend!
#1 – Katie E – ENOUGH – PB ages 4-9
Elpis is an uncommon thing. With feathers sparkling, she spreads hope. Amicus and his friends play in her brilliant cascade. Until… Moros swoops in, throwing deep, deep shade. The children flee and Elpis sputters. Moros preens and gloats as gloom settles in. Elpis nearly sinks. Until… Amicus and his pals demand a return to joy. Their stubborn spirit buoys Elpis – and everyone else – because stepping up with hope is enough.
#2 – Katie W – THE ADVENTURES OF LOU AND BARLEY – PB ages 3-6
When Lou leaves his stuffed stegosaurus in the pouring rain he and his dog, Barley, set out to rescue him. Braving giant waves, outsmarting hungry alligators, and battling a monstrous T-Rex, the determined pair discover even imaginary adventures can be fun!
#3 – Lily – GARDEN BED – PB ages 2-4
In Garden Bed, a rhyming picture book targeted to ages 2-4, a parent and child tuck each vegetable in for the night, helping the child to become sleepy too. Tomato, cucumber, parsley, eggplant, kale, purple potato, lettuce, carrots and peas are lulled to sleep by the refrain: Sleep, sleep, my dear one,
#4 – Sarah – NO SHOES STANLEY – PB ages 4-8 (formerly titled MARSTER SHOES)
While mostly human, like mom, Stanley has his dad’s huge Martian feet. This wasn’t a problem when they lived on Mars, where Stanley enjoyed the feeling of being barefoot every day. But Earth’s rules aren’t Mars’ rules, and Stanley must try to come up with a creative shoe solution for life in a new world. Not one to follow the crowd, Stanley’s answer involves a twist.
It’s always a tough choice, but do your best! Something Chocolate awaits as your reward 🙂
Thank you for voting!
Since Halloween is right around the corner, and this is our last WYRI before it, I wanted something Halloweenie for our Something Chocolate today. I thought this Reese’s Pieces Peanut Butter Chocolate Lasagna fit the ticket pretty well 🙂
Reese’s Pieces Peanut Butter Chocolate Lasagna
YUM! Doesn’t that look scrumptious? I am totally having seconds!
Now then, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from Sarah whom you will remember from last month with her pitch for MARSTER SHOES who says, “I am an Optometrist, mother, and lover of the outdoors. I live in NH with my husband and two children. I love to paint in my free time, when I’m not writing.”
Find her on the web at www.sarahheturadny.com
Here is her pitch:
Working Title: The Punching Ballerina
Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)
The Pitch: KC is a boy with identity questions, who wishes to express himself via ballet. Mom is hesitant to acquiesce, encouraging karate for self-defense instead. After various attempts to learn ballet on his own, KC dresses as a ballerina for school, thereby inciting a group of bullies. KC reacts in his own way, leaving the situation with new-found confidence in who he is, as well as a potential friend.
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Sarah improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on Would You Read it in the dropdown under For Writers in the bar above. At this point, I think we’re full for WYRI until after the holidays, but there are openings in January, so you have plenty of time to polish your pitch before putting it up for helpful feedback and a chance to have it read and commented on by editor Erin Molta! Reserve your spot in the new year today!
Sarah is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch! I am looking forward to being struck with inspiration for a Halloweensie sample entry that will delight you all! Failing that, I’m just hoping to write something down before I go to sleep Friday night/Saturday wee hours of the morning!
Have a wonderful Wednesday everyone!!! 🙂