Good morning, my friends!
It’s Monday!
It’s Monday!
That means it’s writing fun-day!
Grab a pen
and come join in!
We’ll all be published one-day! ๐
I made up that song just for you!ย You can sing it to “It’s raining, it’s pouring!” hehehe ๐ It can be like our fight song ๐ Rah! Rah! Rah!
Now let’s jump in to Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Week 6!

Mix ‘n’ Match Mini is a 7 week writing challenge for anyone who needs a little boost or a little encouragement to get writing. . . or maybe just a little fun during this bizarre stay-at-home spring!
You get to write your own story, enjoy and be entertained by everyone else’s stories, and get yourself in the running for some awesome prizes (please see the end of the blog post for a list of all the prize goodies!)
To be eligible for the prize drawing you must enter all 7 weeks.
For a full description of the challenge or to add your Week #1 entry, please go HERE (Week #1)
To add your Week #2 entry, please go HERE (Week #2)
To add your Week #3 entry, please go HERE (Week #3)
To add your Week #4 entry, please go HERE (Week #4)
To add your Week #5 entry, please go HERE (Week #5)
Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Writing Prompt #6 for Week of June 15:
So far we’ve played with characters, setting, and emotion (or a combination, depending on where your random choosing landed you), with nursery rhymes and point of view, with a picture prompt, fun names, and a plot point, with fairy tales taking place in a new setting, and with “How To” ๐ย This week we’re going to get right into the young child mindset! Behavior and choices tell us a lot about personality and character!
Begin with:
I (or Name) only/always eatย __________!
(first or third person, present or past tense – either is fine)
OR
I (or Name) never eat __________!
(first or third person, present or past tense – either is fine)
and choose a Simile from Column A, a Food from Column B, and/or a position from Column C to fill in the blank!
| Column A – simile | Column B – food | Column C – position |
| Like a pig | Peanut butter (or nut-free alternative ๐) | Upside down |
| Like a bird | Things that are orange | On the floor |
| Like a horse | Things that are square | In his/her treehouse |
So your story might begin:
I always eat in my treehouse!
or
Dumpling never ate like a pig!
or
Zoe only ate things that were orange, and she only ate them on the floor!
- Stories can rhyme or not – totally up to you!
- You can go under or over 100 words if you want to – also totally up to you! – 100 is a guideline
- If you’re deeply inspired by another simile, food, or position that is not on the list you can use that instead – as long as you write a story as outlined above – the purpose here is inspiration and to get you writing!
- For simplicity’s sake (and to aid skimming readers who might be interested in a particular thing) please be sure to put the simile, food, and/or position you chose at the top of your entry along with your name and word count.
Here is my little just for fun sample ๐
Just Like Mom (27 words – can you believe it? from ME?!)
position – upside down
Smidge always ate upside down.
A choice that made other folks frown.
But his mom only smiled
At her bottoms-up child.
“Monkey see, monkey do,” she’d expound!
Okay ๐ I took a few liberties using “expound”! ๐ย I’d better leave the limericks to Marty, who has done one every week of the challenge so far!
Now come join the fun! Get some writing done! Encourage your kids (or students) to give it a try! Or just have a good time together reading what other folks have written!
Ready, set, WRITE! ๐
(And remember, for full details on the 7 week challenge you can check HERE)
(And if you need to motivate yourself scroll down to see all the amazing prizes you could win!!! ๐)
Check out the Week #6 stories!
(apologies for the delays in updating this week – family situation)
I Only Eat Like A Llama – Jamie Bechtelheimer (only, like a llama)
Marigold Eats Orange – Candice Marley Conner (only, things that are orange)
Eating With Gigi – Dawn Young (only, things that begin with P, treehouse)
Neater Eater – Cupcake The Dog (never, like a pig)
Polly’s Peanut Butter Passion – Patricia Nozell (only, peanut butter)
Drip Drop Plop – Brenda Whitehead (only, way up high, on the floor)
Doodle Dot – Cindy Boyll (like Minnie Mouse, dots, everywhere)
Charlie’s Cheesy Choices – Deb Buschman (like a cow, cheese, in the barn)
Lulu – Rose Cappelli (always, foods that begin with L)
Untitled – Colleen Murphy (never, in the stable)
Penny Never Ate Upside Down – Barbara Renner (never, upside down)
Geometric Eating – Deb Sullivan (only, foods that are square)
Ralphie Eats Like A Bird On The Floor – Ashley Congdon (always, like a bird, on the floor)
I Do NOT Eat Like A Bird – Sue Lancaster (like a bird, in my treehouse)
Annabelle Always Eats Chips – Susan Inez (always, like a pig, upside down, treehouse)
King Frederick The Square – Matthew Lasley (only, foods that are square)
Like A Bird – Dot Anson (only, foods that start with C, like a bird)
Limerick For Week 6 – Marty (only, foods that are square)
Milo Slurps – Sarah Meade (only, through a straw)
Stop And Roll – Linda Schueler (foods that are square)
There Was A Young Lass – Jill Lambert (never, like a pig, orange, upside down)
Dahlia’s Dilemma – Leslie Denkers (only)
A Bird Like Petunia – Michelle S. Kennedy (always, like a bird, seeds, on the floor)
Untitled – Kay DiVerde (like a bunny, things that are orange, on the floor)
Meredith, Meal Time Scientist – Sara Ackerman (always, like a scientist)
Untitled – Shariffa Keshavjee (always, like a bird)
Seafood Diet? – Rebecca Gardyn Levington (only, seafood)
I Only Ever Eat Things Beginning With C – Tracy (only, things beginning with C)
Tink Eats Like A Bird – Mary Van Beuren
Peter Liked To Eat Like A Pig – Lily Erlic
I Always Eat Summer – Kristy Roser Nuttall (always, summer)
I Always Eat upside Down – Corine Timmer
Follow The Rules! – Penny Adler (never, like a pig)
Henrietta – Susan Schipper (like a bird, things that are round, upside down)
You Are Invited – Di Litwer (pig, orange things, treehouse)
Try It In Reverse – Elizabeth Meyer Zu Heringdorf (treehouse)
Gabi The Dog Eats Carrots – Susan Krevat
Santa And His Beans – Two Limericks – Liz Kehrli
I Only Eat Things That Are Square – Ugo Anidi
Jim? JIM! – Jess Murray (always, like a bird)
Carl Eats Like A Pig – Amy Flynn
I Only Eat Things That Are Square – Alicia Meyers Kelly
Oakley Only Eats Quirky Food – Katie Schwartz
Afternoon Snack – Mia Geiger (eat, bird)
Upside Down Blu Eats Things That Are Orange – Ketan Ram
Jay The Bird Boy – Lauri Meyers (like a bird)
Untitled – Heather Hatch (only, peanut butter)
PRIZES & PRIZES OF ALL SHAPES AND SIZES!
When it comes time for prizes, names of all those who completed the challenge will be drawn randomly and matched with prizes drawn randomly until we run out! ๐
Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, suggesting them for school visits, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! ๐
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Writing Journal (x10)

Scythe by Neal Shusterman

I Only Eat Like a Llama (95 words; simile โ like a llama)
Mama, for breakfast I only want leafy green llama food.
Because today Iโm a llama and I eat like llamas do.
And because youโre my mama, you must eat like a llama, too!
No, no, no, you canโt use a fork or a spoon!
Donโt worry Mama Llama, Iโll show you how itโs done.
Stretch your neck down the plate and eat, eat, eat.
Now stretch your neck up tall and high.
And last, open your mouth super wide.
So when you chew, chew, chew, I can see all the leafy greens inside!
Ha! This is VERY kid-centric. I think you nailed it perfectly! Especially with the chewing with the mouth open, lol
Intriguing Llamas!! ๐
How fun. How many Mamas would actually join in?
Who doesn’t love a story with open-mouth-chewing!? Hilarious.
I love your choice of a llama and the role reversal that the child encourages the parent to eat leafy greens!
Haha, reminds me of the time I was instructed on how to eat like a dog (my boys were both pretending to be puppies…). Well done!
Delightful, Jamie! I can totally picture the child demonstrating how it’s done! And I think that really is how llamas eat (although the one in my book was eating cereal out of a bowl – but definitely face first, no spoon! ๐)
Fun! Love that ending image and the repetition.
Great, but gross last line!
Hey, at least he’s eating his greens! LOL
This story has kid-appeal. Fun!
I can so see a toddler doing this.
Oooh, Susanna. This one was tough! Loved your example though and the ditty up top!
Marigold Eats Orange, Things that are Orange, 67 word count
Marigold only ate things that were orange! Tangerines, satsumas, pumpkins, so yum! Cheese puffs and papayas (even butternut squash!) would make her mouth water. Orange juice was divine, carrot juice was delish.
But there was one thing sheโd never had on her dish.
On vacation at the beach, she saw the setting sun.
Marigold licked her lips. โNow thatโs a giant cookie thatโs almost baked and done!โ
(Apologies for the horrific meter and incomplete rhymes! lol I didn’t intend for it to be poem-ish)
A cookie as big as the sun! YES! That is my kind of snack. And yes. This IS poem-ish. Meter, rhyme, whatever. It was very easy to read.
Poem-ish was a fun way to write!! ๐
This read like a poem, and I loved the image of the sun as a cookie. It reminded me of the picture book about the moon cakes.
Very cute! The sun reminded me of “Kitten’s First Full Moon” where the kitten thinks the moon is a bowl of milk. If only there were a sun-sized cookie! Yum!
Marigold is a girl after my own heart, Candice, because the idea of a cookie as big as the sun sounds pretty lip-smackin’ good to me! ๐
Fun! I love the name Marigold and all the examples of orange foods.
Love the idea of the sun as a cookie.Wonderful image!
So creative! “Marigold licked her lips” brings out her personality and she is serious about that cookie!
That’s really cute. I think you got all the orange foods, and I love the sun cookie that’s almost baked.
I wonder how the sun will taste?? Fun story!
I love your take on orange. It makes one realize there are lots of orange items around! Fun.
Love that you used the word “satsumas”. Very original!
Your poem-ish story was great, Candice! Love the ending!
Great twist at the end!
week 6 EATING WITH GIGI 69 words
Gigi loved food that began with โPโ.
She would only drink sugary tea.
Pizza, pomegranate, peas, and pie,
eating in her treehouse way up high.
Pretending to be a tiny bird,
her friends thought she was quite absurd.
Next weeks food would begin with โIโ.
So much fun in the month of July.
Gigi was happy, as happy can be
way up high in her tall tall tree
Yes, Gigi. You do you.
Gigi, is such a cute idea! ๐
Gigi enjoyed quite the perfect feast in her perch! And I enjoyed your poem!
I love that Gigi has her own way of doing things, Dawn, and that each week she chooses a new letter to categorize her food options! Since her name is G-G maybe she should spend extra weeks eating foods that begin with G! ๐
Cute! I like the image of happy Gigi eating in her tree.
Fun!
This is adorable!
Ice cream next weeks!
So cute, Dawn! Gigi is such a colorful character! I can see this continuing on with other letters. You did so much in only 69 words. Well done!
Thanksโค๏ธ
I like Gigi. An adorable story.
Love the line, “Pretending to be a tiny bird, her friends thought she was quite absurd.”
Prompts: Never / Like a pig / 100 words
Neater Eater
By
Cupcake the Dog
I never eat like a pig. My tiny mouth has a bit of an overbite. I nibble at my kibble and sip at my water. When offered a treat, I delicately taste it and carefully consume it without making a mess at all.
Certain humans might say my food flies, my water splashes, crumbs cover the couch, drool drips everywhere, and chewing is optional. But that is clearly not the whole truth.
Send Help
By
The Roomba
My bin is bursting, my brushes are broken, my rollers arenโt rolling. Iโm pretty sure thereโs a cookie in my motor. Iโm waving the white flag. Send help.
I’m sure the cookie in poor Roomba’s motor is not from you, Cupcake, because it’s clear you are the neatest pup and never a pig! Please let Mom know that I loved your entry.
Cupcake sounds a bit like our pet!!!! ๐
Haha, oh the notes I could have gotten from my Roomba…
Very clever!
Obviously you are a tidy eater, Cupcake, because spewing crumbs might waste some of the delicious food! And I KNOW you would never be one to waste even a crumb of cookie! ๐ Love that the Roomba sends up the white flag ๐
Ha ha! I love this perspective.
This is so much fun! I love your word choices and funny twist.
What a unique take, including Cupcake and Roomba’s POV! LOL funny!
I love Cupcake!
Susanna, LOVE your limerick!! You’ve set the bar high for this week. I need to get crackin’ ๐
I am not in your league, Marty ๐ but I look forward to what you’ll write this week!
Susanna, I love your inspiring song, your entry, and especially this week’s prompts!
Pollyโs Peanut Butter Passion (97 words; like a parrot, peanut butter)
Polly always pecked at peanut butter like the parrot whose name she bore. She began each day with peanut butter pancakes and preferred peanut butter pie each evening. Particular passions included peanut butter paired with pasta, pizza, popcorn, pretzels, and sometimes plum preserves. But never with pickles!
Then one day, Pollyโs parents searched the pantry and discovered that the last pint of peanut butter had disappeared. As Polly shrieked, โPolly want peanut butter,โ her parents paused and proposedโฆ
pureed pumpkin.
Now, Polly starts each day with pumpkin pancakes. And sometimes she pecks at pureed pumpkin withโฆ
pickles!
True confession: I stocked up on peanut butter at the start of the pandemic, but I never eat it with jam or pickles or even pureed pumpkin.
Ahhh, amazing alliteration! Love it!
Alliteration was great!! ๐
Perfection, Patricia! ๐
Whew! Say that 5 times fast! I never realized there were so many P words. Fun.
I am glad Polly could be so flexible!
โค๏ธI love your alliteration. Good job!โค๏ธ.
This made me smile! I love both peanut butter and pumpkin, so I can relate. Fun alliteration throughout!
Being a peanut butter fan, happy to see this amazing array of peanut butter “go withs”. And I agree, pumpkin is a good alternative ๐
This was so fun to read. I loved the alliteration.
Very clever! Love the alliteration!
Love your limerick Susanna! I’ll be sad when these challenge prompts are over–so fun! ๐
DRIP DROP PLOP (on the floor, 96 words)
by Brenda Whitehead
It used to be
That I would eat
Sitting way up high.
DRIP. DROP. PLOP.
It just made mommy sigh.
Then I ate
In a chair
Just like mom and dad.
DRIP. DROP. PLOP.
It just made daddy sad.
Then I ate
Sitting at
A table sized for me.
DRIP. DROP. PLOP.
I just canโt help it, see??
Now I eat
On the floor
(Thereโs a wipe-clean mat).
NO. MORE. DROPS!
Mom and dad like that!
But when I see
My little pup
Sad about no drops,
DRIP. DROP. PLOP.
(But mom, he cleans it up!)
OMG this is SO CUTE, Brenda! I love that the child gets lower and lower, and I love the ending! Nice job!
Very cute! I can see her getting closer and closer to the floor (and the dog).
Very child-like. Sweet ending!
Perfect ending!! ๐
โค๏ธSuch a cute concept!โค๏ธ
This is delightful! Great title and fun voice. I can picture the cute ending, too.
Thanks so much, everyone! This story may or may not be a picture into my own life… HA!
So cute! Love the ending!
Amazing, Brenda! i love the DRIP DROP PLOP refrain and the ending. So cute!
A sweet story with a great ending. When I was little I used to give our poodle all the food I didnโt want under the table.
Terrific story! I love the progression from high to low.
Here we are on number six! Where did the pandemic time go? Thanks for pushing us into a little creativity.
Doodle Dot
(like Minnie Mouse, dots, everywhere)
Cindy Boyll
Doddle Dot always wore polka dots everywhere.
Just like Minnie Mouse, even dot bows adorned Doodle’s hair.
Artist Doddle doddled dots on all her creations. โItโs pointillism,โ she declared.
And Doddle loved dot food: peas, carrot rounds, full moon cookies, hamburgers and M&Mโs.
โThese are dots, not circles,โ she insisted, even though she was wrong.
Yes, Doddle was committed to her dots.
One day, however, she gasped as she spotted the houndstooth pattern.
There was no going back.
Love Doodle’s obsession with her dots, Cindy – especially “pointillism” and her list of “dot foods”, and love her insisting even when she’s wrong – so kid! You’re ending made me laugh out loud! ๐
Doodle dDt ..Very creative! ๐
I love polka dots, just like Doddle. I can imagine her surprise when she spotted (love it) the houndstooth pattern. Well done.
So now what will she eat?? And will she change her name?
opps..should say Dot….
I enjoyed this creative story! Very fun.
โค๏ธLove it! So cute.โค๏ธ
I love this; all the dots and that you got pointillism in the story! I’m wondering what will happen with houndstooth? A trip to the SPCA?
Wow, love your dot food and the reference to pointillism–so unique!
Great story! I wonder what she’ll do with the houndstooth pattern?
These prompts have kept me writing and focused. Thanks so much Susanna!!!
CHARLIEโS CHEESY CHOICES
144 words, simile-like a cow, food-cheese, position-in the barn
By Deb Buschman
Charlie only ate cheese, in the barn, with Ester.
His brother said Charlie ate like a cow.
โI donโt eat like a cow. They donโt eat cheese, they make it,โ said Charlie to Ester.
Ester licked Charlie with her long cow tongue.
Charlie ate gouda for breakfast,
cheddar for lunch,
cheese curds for a snack,
and pepper jack for dinner.
Then one day his mother presented him with broccoli.
Charlie turned up his nose. Ester ate it.
Hmmm! If Ester likes it? Charlie grabbed a hunk of cheddar and put it on the broccoli.
โYumm!โ said Charlie.
Then his mother gave him an apple.
Charlie turned up his nose. Ester ate it.
Hmmm! If Ester likes it? Charlie grabbed a hunk of gouda and put it on the apple.
โYumm!โ said Charlie.
Then Charlie sat down in the barn andโฆ
ate like a cow.
Certainly lots of cheesy choices !! ๐
This is fun and cute! I like the alliterative title and how Charlie improves all of his foods with cheese. I relate. ๐
I can see this as a picture book. Great story!
This is just silly (with some bad rhyme), but it was fun thinking outside the box. I appreciate the freedom to go with what moves us and get creative juices flowing, without having to make sure it’s polished to perfection.Thanks, Susanna!
Lulu (83 words Lulu always ate things that started with “L”)
Lulu only dined on lemons,
A few lentils or a leek,
And only in the lobby
Of the Lakeview Park boutique.
To expand her dining options
Luluโs mother tried a lime,
Lemongrass and lobster
Lightly seasoned with some thyme.
Lulu would have none of it
โTil one day she found out
That a leek is like an onion
With a little bit of clout.
Now Lulu dines on octopus,
Olive oil and okra,
In Oberlin, Ohio
Where sheโs changed her name to Oprah.
So cute ! Loved this! ๐
Fun! I love how Lulu changed from all Ls to all Os. The ending made me smile, as well as “a leek is like an onion with a little bit of clout.”
Excellent word play!
โค๏ธSuch a fun rhyme, well done!โค๏ธ
This is silly FUN! Great job!
I love this. Great fun!
Hahahahahaha! Very clever!
Ha, ha, very cute! Rhyme is good too!
I apologize for being a copycat, but I have another project on my mind, so I just wrote a limerick as well.
There was once a young rider named Mable
who would never eat meals at the table.
Since her mom had the notion
she had lost her devotion
she would dine with her horse in the stable.
Excellent. I’m envious of writers who can pop out a limerick so quickly. Well done.
Thank you! They are fun to compose!
Lovely limerick!
Thank you Sarah!
Hooray for limericks! This one is fun ๐
Thanks!
This is a great limerick!
Thanks Linda!
๐ Fun
Thanks!
Great job, Colleen! It makes a great introduction and I can see it going on for several more stanzas.
Thanks Jill.
Excellent limerick!
Thank you!
This was a hard assignment. That’s why this little ditty makes no sense at all:-)
Penny Never Ate Upside Down
By Barbara Renner
71 words
Penny never ate upside down.
She tried it once; but she felt like a clown.
The juice came out of her nose;
The cookie crumbs got stuck in her clothes.
Until one day her mother did bake
A delicious pineapple upside-down cake.
Whereโs the pineapple; whereโs the cherry?
Penny didnโt know, but mother seemed quite merry.
For when she turned the cake upside down
The pineapple and cherry became the crown.
Fun! I love the ending line.
A very funny story!
Fun!
Terrific ending!
Susanna – Your just for fun sample was awesome (and inspiring ๐
Geometric Eating (32 words)
food – things that are square
I only eat things that are square.
Itโs a challenge, but I like a dare.
So give me some bread,
Or some Cheez-Its instead,
Iโll eat โtill the cupboards are bare.
Cheez-its Wow!!! ๐
They were the first thing that came to mind when I thought of a square food (my husband lives on them!)
Fun! Lots of tasty square-shaped foods.
Indeed! Thanks for reading it, Sarah!
A delightful limerick!
Thanks so much for reading it!
Love it!
Thanks Linda!
Love this!
Thanks so much Michelle!
Fantastic!
Many thanks Diantha!
RALPHIE EATS LIKE A BIRD ON THE FLOOR
(like a bird; on the floor)
by Ashley Congdon
WC:136
My Dad always says, “Ralphie, you eat like a bird. Your little brother eats more than you.”
My Mom always says, “Ralphie, why are you eating on the floor? There’s a chair right next to Ethan.”
I get it! I always eat like a bird and on the floor! I just eat what I can and where I like to eat. But . . . I’ll let you in on a secret, little brother.
I eat like a bird to save room for dessert. I eat on the floor just in case I don’t like the food too much and it “accidentally” falls on the floor. I can’t eat it off the floor!
I’ll never eat like a pig or in a chair like my little brother. But He will learn some day and join me on the floor.
So fun, Ashley!
Thanks for reading!
Great combination of prompts! Love it!
Thank you. Inspiration from real life ๐.
Older brother definitely has his own style, Ashley! I agree with him about leaving room for dessert! Ralph needs to move in with Brenda’s DRIP DROP PLOP MC above! ‘-) Nice work!
Thanks for reading Jill. I didn’t have to look too far. The story is based on my two boys and it’s very like them ๐.
Great story!
Thank you!
I do NOT eat like a bird
(149 words, ‘like a bird’ and ‘in my treehouse’)
Mum says I eat just like a bird,
However, thatโs not true.
Iโve looked at how a bird eats,
And thatโs not what I do.
A bird pecks down in dark brown earth,
And plucks a juicy worm,
Then takes the worm into the sky,
All while it writhes and squirms.
The bird flies to its birdhouse,
So far up in the tree.
Then gulps the worm straight down its throat,
As quickly as can be.
Oh wait, I hear mum calling now…
Itโs time to have my lunch.
I take it to my treehouse,
(The only place Iโll munch).
I pluck a juicy noodle,
From gravy, dark and brown,
I hold it high up in the air,
It squirms. I gulp it down.
Yes, Mum says I eat like a bird,
However, thatโs not true.
Iโve looked at how a bird eats,
And that’s not what I do.
This one made me smile! And cringe a little at the worm-like juicy noodle. ๐
I’ve always questioned the expression “eat like a bird”, but now I see how it could be true. Super story!
So fun! I like how the ending goes back to the beginning!
Wonderful, Sue! Perfect rhyme and meter and I really like the way the MC stuck to her guns about her eating habits. Good job on the EWWW factor!
Excellent story! I love the image comparing the noodle to the worm.
Annabelle Always Eats Chips
(WC: 90 ‘like a pig’, ‘upside-down’, ‘treehouse’)
Annabelle always eats chips
Like a pig, for thatโs what she is.
She points out her snout,
And sucks a chip out
Of the bag, then dunks it in dip.
Sometimes she gets rather silly.
She dances and prances around.
When she finds the chip bag,
to her treehouse, sheโll drag it,
and eat those chips while upside down.
Potato chips are this pigโs favorite.
Be it Lays brand or Pringles, who cares?
A noise from the bag
gets this pigโs tail to wag.
But sadly, she never does share.
This is based on a real pig friend named Annabelle, who does indeed like chips!
That’s so cute. I can see her.
Cute and fun! I love the last section and image of the pig’s wagging tail.
Too bad she doesn’t share. I love chips too. Great story!
Very cute. Great images of Annabelle and her chip bag.
This cracks me up! What a fun one Susan! And Annabelle sounds a lot like me with eating chips- I have a hard time sharing them!
Oh, that Annabelle! What a precious character she is! In only 90 words you painted such a picture of her, Susan! The last stanza is my favorite. Wonderful!
I love the first turnaround – I was expecting a story about a messy little girl and you were writing about a real pig! I love that kind of surprise. Well done!
Cute story. I like her dunking the chip in the dip.
Ha, ha, I can just picture Annabelle The Pig! Reminds me of another animal, who gets so excited when he hears hubby get out the chip bag! But I think Annabelle is funnier, enjoyed your story!
King Fredrick the Fair (Square)
In a far off land lived King Fredrick the Fair
Who only ate food in the shape of a square.
His mother told him to eat three square meals a day
And he listened to her and he tried to obey.
Tiny green grapes were his favorite of food
That the royal chef cut into tiny green cubes.
Round pizza, not found in this land
Only cobblers allowed, round pies were banned.
Sandwiches were one of the favorites of the king
For squares to him meant everything.
When he walked about his kingdom people would stare
And heโd hear them whisper โFredrick the Square.โ
He called on his mother who came right quick
Because she thought her son might be quite sick.
โMother, I listened and eat three square meals a day
But you should hear what my people say.
They no longer admire me as King Fredrick the Fair
Now they mock me and call me Fredrick the Square.โ
โI know you love squares with four angles of right
But is it still square after you take your first bite?โ
This advice gave him much to chew on
And he stayed up all night until the break of dawn.
Making everyone eat like him was rude and not fair
So he removed the decree on foods that were square.
But King Fredrick the Fair still liked his squared food
So if you visit his court you will find grapes in a cube.
Love this story – good work!
Great advice from his mother and great story!
I love that he listened to his mama! This was a fun read!
Very fun and what a fresh take. I love Frederick’s mother’s wise question: Is it still square after your first bit. So many layers in this. Well done.
Awwww….poor Frederick. I love his cubed grapes.
Like A Bird. (83 words) things with the letter C
I only eat things that start with the letter C.
Luckily for me that includes chocolate, cupcakes, chips, cashews and cookies.
Mum tries to get me to eat other things. She even tries to hide them on my plate.
Tonight it’s chicken (which she knows I will eat) and an A-Z of vegetables.
I’m “like a bird” she says, picking out the chicken, cauliflower, carrots and corn.
She gets frustrated at times, but doesn’t complain too much. After all, she named me Prissy.
I’m with Prissy on having a fondness for foods that begin with C.
Hahaha! Good one.
Limerick for Week 6 ( foods that are square; 32 words )
I only eat peas that are square.
They’re a treat and exceedingly rare.
Keep your eyes open wide
for the ones with four sides.
Plain old round guys in no way compare!
Love it!
Thanks, Linda.
Amazing WC! And great limerick!
Best way I’ve found so far to keep my WC low ๐
Thanks for the comment, Michelle.
Awesome!
Thanks for the kind word, Deborah!
Masterful, Marty!
Thanks for your alliterative comment ๐
You should compile all your limericks into a book, Marty! Another nice one!
If only Susanna would keep feeding us ideas, eh?! It’s been a fun 7-weeks and given me a chance to try something new.
Thanks for the encouragement, Jill!
I am enjoying your limericks. Love the opening line!
Thanks, Corine. They have been great fun to write ๐
Terrific! You know there are going to be kids looking for square peas.
Yep, I may start looking for them myself. LOL!
MILO SLURPS
By Sarah Meade
Word Count: 129
(only, through a straw)
Milo is always on the go!
Sooooooo…
he only eats from a straw!
Not just any straw– his turquoise twisty straw!
Breakfast:
Miloโs on the go!
No time for eggs and waffles. Milo slurps strawberry smoothies through his twisty straw.
Lunch:
Miloโs on the go!
No time for sandwiches or mac and cheese. Milo slurps tomato soup through his twisty straw.
Dinner:
Miloโs on the go!
No time forโฆ. mmmmmm. Tacos?
Thereโs always time for tacos.
Milo sets down his straw and smiles.
He picks up his taco and takes a big crunchy, munchy bite.
Yuuuuuuuum!
Milo devours two tacos, a bowl of beans and rice, and allllll his milk.
Dessert:
Miloโs on the go!
No time for cake or cookies. Milo slurps pistachio pudding through his twisty straw!
I wish I had a turquoise twisty straw! But I would also drop it for tacos. Yummy story!
Thanks, Linda!
It turned out great Sarah!
Thanks, Ashley!
Great idea, Matthew!
I really enjoyed this, Sarah, especially the repeated refrain and the consonance you sprinkled throughout. Great job!
Thank you, Jill!
Everyone’s got time for tacos!!!
Agreed! Thanks for reading, Michelle.
Wise boy to lose the straw for taco night…love the name Milo too!
Thanks, Deborah! Me too. ๐
I’m with Milo on the tacos. What a fun take on the busy lives of children and eating on the go!
Thank you, Mary!
Sarah, such a cute story! Love Milo!!!!
Thank you!
I can picture a kid doing this. Cute story.
Stop and Roll (foods that are square)
All Circle did was roll, roll, roll. She never stopped unless she bumped into something.
While she rolled, Circle saw the objects that didnโt have to roll: the squares. If they wanted to roll, they needed a push, but at least they werenโt dizzy all the time.
Circle decided that to be more like them, she would eat the squares. First Circle consumed a small one, then she swallowed a medium one, and finally she gobbled a large one.
Circle could feel herself changing. Pop! She becameโฆSquircle.
โNow I can stop and roll,โ Squircle said.
So clever. Circle gets the best of both worlds ๐
I almost put that as the title.
Squircle! Hilarious. I love the ending.
Thanks.
Yay! Problem solved…(and it’s fun to say “squircle” too ๐
Yes, you’re right. I think we need to use the word more.
A Squircle!!! SO fun!! Delightful!
Thank you.
I love the part “at least they weren’t dizzy all the time” and the hilarious ending. So inventive, Susan!
Thanks!
Very clever!
There was a Young Lass
By Jill Lambert (238 words/ like a pig/orange/upside down)
There was a young lass who never ate carrots.
I donโt know why she never ate carrots.
She just couldnโt bear it!
There was a young lass who never ate yams.
Not even her Gramโs. She never ate yams.
She avoided the yams as she did the carrots.
I donโt know why she never ate carrots.
She just couldnโt bear it!
There was a young lass who never ate apricots.
Sheโd never been taught to eat apricots.
She shunned the apricots as she did the yams.
She avoided the yams as she did the carrots.
I donโt know why she never ate carrots.
She just couldnโt bear it!
There was a young lass who never ate cantaloupe.
She couldnโt cope with a cantaloupe.
She shirked the cantaloupe as she did the apricots.
She shunned the apricots as she did the yams.
She avoided the yams as she did the carrots.
I donโt know why she never ate carrots.
She just couldnโt bear it!
Her Gram concluded she hated the color.
She roughed up an orange to make it look duller
and helped her resist being a culler.
There was a young lass who tried something new.
She flipped upside down, changed her point of view.
She DID eat an orange, got some vitamin C
(and likely avoided developing scurvy).
She ate like a pig and enjoyed every bite,
expanding her palate and her appetite.
Whew! Orange you glad?
What a fun take on this familiar rhyme. Especially loved the last stanza and last line!
Thank you, Marty!
I love your take on the challenge. A fun way to play with your food! ๐
It was fun to work on, Susan…and a challenge! Thank you!
Wow! Great job Jill. So many layers here. I could see this as a full story.
I really appreciate that, Ashley!
I love the unique spin on “There was an old lady…” That used to be one of my favorite songs as a kid.What fun, Jill! And LOVE the last stanza- vitamin C and avoiding scurvy!
Thank you, Michelle! It was fun coming up with the scurvy part!
Jill, I loved how she flipped upside down and changed her point of view! Such an important lesson.
Thanks, Mary!
Love the play on words at the end!
Great rewrite, especially like the last line! You kept me reading, I wanted to see what was going to happen next. Love all the orange foods! A fun read!
POSTED FOR LESLIE
Dahliaโs Dilemma – Leslie Denkers
(190 words)
Pattern: ____________ always/only/never eats (food) like a (simile) (position).
Iโm having a party and Iโve invited all my friends. Mom didnโt know what to feed them.
Sylvia only eats sundaes on Sundays, singing like a Saint Bernard, while sitting on the step in her Sunday best.
Marnie only eats marshmallows over mangos on Mondays, while mounting her monkey bars like a . . . well, you know, . . . a monkey.
Tucker only eats tuna and tomato pasta on Tuesdays, while tucking in like a turtle in a terrarium.
Waverly only eats waffles-n-walnuts on Wednesdays, while waddling in the water like a Walrus.
Thaddeus only eats thorns and thistles on Thursdays, while thundering into his thatch like a Thorny Devil lizard.
Frida only eats French toast with fruit, frybread with frijoles, and frankfurters with French fries on Fridays, while frisking through the front room like a ferret.
Stetson only eats strawberries, salsa and sorbet, while swimming in the sea like a seal.
I decided. Itโs my BIRTHDAY party. We will have Barbequed Bacon and Beef kabobs, Broccoli, Beans, Bananas, Blueberries, Boysenberries and Blackberries, and Brownie ICE CREAM CAKE! Now everyone can eat!
Except Thaddeus. Donโt let him loose. (Thaddeus is a pet goat)
I can just see this a s a picture book!
POSTED FOR MICHELLE
Mix Nโ Match Challenge Week 6
(Always ate / Like a bird / Seeds (nut-free alternative) / On the floor)
By Michelle S. Kennedy
A Bird Like Petunia (WC 265)
Petunia the pig
always ate like a bird.
She loved to eat seeds.
Itโs what she preferred.
Sheโd peck with her nose
like it was a beak.
The other pigs knew
her ways were unique.
Sheโd mimic bird sounds
and sing out with zeal.
Of course, all her chirps
came out as a squeal.
Sheโd built her own nest
with mud, twigs, and twine
and sat on some eggs
to hatch her new swine.
The days passed on by.
No piglets came out.
The eggs looked the same.
She started to doubt.
The other pigs watched.
Petunia looked sad.
โLetโs give her a hand
before she goes mad!โ
The pigs made a plan-
Theyโd have to be slick.
โWeโll switch out the eggs.
We must do it quick.โ
Next day she arose
to sounds, โTap! Tap! Tap!โ
She looked underneath
and watched, Crack. Crack. Crack.
โMy eggs are a hatching!โ
Petunia surmised.
The pigs gathered โround,
feigning surprise.
Out popped some piglets!
She counted all three
then pumped up her joints
and flew to a tree.
Huh?
Yep. She had wings!
Didnโt you know?
Petunia could fly.
And so, she did so.
She peered down below
and spied all the squirms,
to feed her new brood
some much-needed worms.
Now back on the floor
her nest and babes waited.
Petunia was proud-
In fact, just elated!
The other pigs baffled,
looked stunned in a haze.
Petunia the pig
WAS a bird in ALL waysโฆ
You think this is strange?
Did you hear of the goose?
He had antlers and hair
and ate like a moose.
So fun!
Thanks Deborah!
This is so good, Michelle! Petunia is precious! You have great rhymes throughout It’s such a unique way to interpret this prompt. Super job!
Thank you Jill! I had fun with this one!
What a fun story!
Thank you Diantha!
I like this so much! It is adorable!
Aw! Thanks Lily!
I love a good pig story and this one was great fun. I love that her eggs hatched – wink, wink, with help from her friends. And I’d love to read more about the goose! ๐
Thank you Susan! I might work this into a full MS ๐
Love this, rhyme, meter and story! A pig that can fly – ha, ha – she knew all along she was a bird-pig! You could definitely expand the story, would make a great PB!
Thank you Katie! You know the saying “when pigs can fly!…” LOL
POSTED FOR KAY DiVerde
Week 6: like a bunny, things that are orange, on the floor (word count 183)
Paul only ate orange carrots. He ate orange carrots like a bunny, and he ate orange carrots on the floor.
Paul loved orange carrots! He ate them for breakfast. He ate them for lunch. He ate them for dinner.
The crazy part was, Paul would only eat sitting on the floor. Well, not really sitting on the floor. Paul squatted down, ate a carrot, hopped around and hopped back to grab another carrot to eat. Paulโs brother Tommy called him a rabbit.
No one knew why Paul liked carrots so much.
Paul ate so many carrots, his hands and hair turned orange!
โThis must stop!โ Paulโs mother yelled. โYou are eating so many carrots, you are turning into a carrot! And you cannot eat on the floor. You must join us at the table.โ
Paul looked confused. He hopped over to the table and sat in a chair at the table.
From that point on, Paul ate 2 baby carrots with lunch and 3 baby carrots with dinner. His hands returned to their normal color, but the orange hair was there to stay!
Cute story!
So sweet!
Meredith, Meal Time Scientist (always, eats like a scientist)
(85 words)
Curious Meredith eats like a scientist,
testing experiments three meals a day.
Sniffity, lickity, mashity, splashity,
wonders what happens whenโWHOOSHโoff the tray!
Broccoli zooms like itโs launched into space and then
Meredith watches it spin twice around.
Suddenly broccoliโs no longer going up.
SPLAT! Now the broccoliโs down on the ground.
Meredithโs able to draw the conclusion that
throwing plus gravity makes quite a pair.
Data reveal if you make a mess big enough,
you will be freed from your boring old chair.
Sara, I laughed out loud at this! Your language is so much fun, and to be freed from the boring old chair – what a riot! Well done!
Love your made-up words, the fun visual images, and the smile-producing ending.
Well done!
Fun! Great visual appeal. I love the broccoli lift-off.
I love the science you included!
Haha! Nicely done, Sara!
Love this Sara! “Broccoli zooms like it’s launched into space!” Too funny.
POSTED FOR SHARIFFA
Ayla always eats like a bird
Although she is not a bird
Why does she eat like a bird
One day Ayla was in the desert
She took some popcorn with her
All that heat popped the popcorn
It popped,popped into fluffy clouds
To eat it she had to fly upside down
So she eats like a bird upside down
Clouds of popcorn can be seen
In the desert if you are very keen
Upside down and like a bird akin
Love the fluffy popcorn clouds and having to fly/eat upside down!
I like the comparison between popcorn and clouds.
Fun imaginative leaps!
SEAFOOD DIET?
By Rebecca Gardyn Levington
(only, Seafood โ 74 words)
I only eat foods that come straight from the sea,
or maybe its foods that begin with a โCโ?
I cannot remember the rules of this diet.
My friend said, โItโs easy! Come on now, just try it!โ
โSeafoodโ or โC-food?โ Iโm in such a haze!
I havenโt had REAL food in 21 days!
So hereโs my new diet; I know Iโll complete it.
Whenever I SEE food Iโm just gonna eat it!
This is so clever! I love it.
Very fun!
Fabulous! Love the sea, C, and see!
Fun and poetic, thank you!
haha! This is great Rebecca! You have captured all the angst about dieting and trying to keep all the “rules” straight! Love it!
Really cute, from one play on words to another! Short, with lots of fun packed into it!
Very fun, Rebecca!
Wow, thanks for all the kind words everyone! So glad you enjoyed it! ๐
I only ever Eat things Beginning with C โ Tracy
I only ever eat things beginning with C!
Absolutely, only ever!
Itโs like a dream:
Cookies
Cream
CHOCOLATE
Canโt you see Iโm winning here?!
Coco-pops
Candy
CUPCAKES
Except Dad said I hadnโt quite thought it throughโฆ
Carrots
Cauliflower
CABBAGE
Cucumber
Corn
CONSUME??? – What? Cold soup???
Letโs start again shall we!
I NEVER EAT things beginning with C,
only beginning with…
What a fun turnaround!
Love this!
Clever!
Itโs cute and funny! Thank you!
Too funny! Love the ending!
Haha! Love that the surprise twist is cold soup!
Tink Eats Like a Bird
Mary van Beuren
134 Words
I did not intend for this to rhyme, and struggled to turn the rhyming off, but my mind insisted. Please pardon that the meter is off and the rhyme feels forced. This is the first time a story idea came easier in pictures, than words. Fun exercise! And, it’s going to be fun to rewrite this.
Tink ate like a bird,
A blueberry here,
A cracker, there,
Gummies bears, everywhere.
Tink loved to build nests
She loved to climb trees,
She climbed up, up and up,
As light as a breeze
From her perch
She looked all around
Then, she stood on her head and found
She could not eat, upside down.
She was a baby bird, learning to fly
She learned dips and rolls and dives
Tink tried to nip at her mother’s wings,
Sometimes she collided with the other fledglings.
Tink was rambunctious
She gave her mother quite a fuss
Until her mother flew fast away,
Just fast enough, to keep Tink at bay.
Tink alighted on a limb,
And waited to be fed
When a worm did not arrive,
She ate a gummie worm instead
Come nighttime
Tink went inside
Took a bird bath,
And flapped her wings dry.
She ate like a bird,
She slept in a nest,
No matter how far she flew,
She liked home the best.
Awww…what a sweet story!
Love the name Tink! Captures baby bird perfectly and all the things she is learning. Love the imagery of her flapping her wings dry.
Cute! I enjoyed those jostling fledglings!
I know how you feel, Mary! It’s hard to turn rhyme off sometimes! I love the name Tink and the picture you painted of this baby bird. Well done!
Thanks, Jill! You made my day.
Peter Liked to Eat like a Pig (On the kitchen countertop) 114 words
Peter liked to eat like a pig. Maybe because he was one. He lived in a pig house with pig
things.
His trough was on the kitchen countertop. Every morning, he put his snout into it and ate like a
pig. His favorite meal was banana peels.
One day, Peter invited all the farm animals to his Pig House for a party. He gave everyone a
mini trough.
โWhatโs the matter?โ he said.
โWell,โ said Goose, โIโm sorry but I cannot each this compost!โ
โNeither can I!โ said Cow.
Everyone in the room looked at Peter.
Peter scratched his head.
โWell,โ said Peter, โLetโs order Take out!โ
The room roared with friends cheering ‘Hooray’!
The End.
Cute story.
Thank you Diantha!
All the best,
Lily
haha! Giving in to takeout is such a pleasure:) I’m glad Peter didn’t sweat it.
I Always Eat Summer
by Kristy Roser Nuttall
WC: 65 (always, summer)
I always eat SUMMER.
PINK PINK
Squirts and squishes of watermelon slices
GREEN GREEN
Circles of icy cold grapes
WHITE WHITE
Sโmore marshmallows so sticky
BROWN BROWN
Melty chocolate and crunchy crackers
RED RED
Strawberries taste like sweet sunshine
ORANGE ORANGE
Yum yum slippery ice cream popsicles
BLUE BLUE
Blueberries so tart and tangy
I always eat SUMMER
The best tasting season
Of all
oh, yum! Love this! I’m hungry for a little summer, too!
Just love summer! ๐
Great story! I can see this as a picture book.
Thanks! I hope so!
I agree! Summer is the best tasting season of all! Nice job. ๐
Thanks! Summer does taste delicious!
Sweet! I like how you didn’t only stick w/ the fruits/veggies!
I ALWAYS Eat Upside Down
Corine Timmer (114 words)
I spend most of my life
upside down, but
I never get dizzy.
I have no bones,
no heart and
no brain.
My dangling arms
are situated
around my mouth
through which I eat and
POOP!
Yuck!
When itโs sunny
Iโm fed by
photosynthesis. (That means solar powered.)
When itโs cloudy
I float through the water
catching prey.
My favorite snacks are
shrimp larvae and
copepods. (A type of zooplankton.)
My best friends are
my family and
Dino Flaggellata. (Heโs a member of the Algae family.)
We like to hang out in
warm lagoons, mangrove swamps and
turtle grass flats.
My name is Cassio Pea Frondosa.
Can you guess what I am?
ษฅsฤฑษสืืวษพ uสop-วpฤฑsdโฉ
Notes
Cassiopea (upside-down jellyfish) is a genus of true jellyfish and the only members of the family Cassiopeidae.
Cassiopea jellyfish live in a symbiotic relationship with photosynthetic dinoflagellate algae, the zooxanthellae (zo-zan-THELL-ee). The algae provide the jellyfish with energy (food). In response, they get the sunlight that is necessary for the photosynthesis.
The genus Cassiopea includes eight species one of which is Cassiopea frondosa.
Very cute! ๐
Thank you ๐
Super clever!
Corine, this is a super story! I really like the science aspect of it. Do you write science picture books for kids?
Most of my stories (not that many yet) are realistic fiction. Nature inspires me in all things I do.
That’s great!
I like your story! Iโm glad the answer was jellyfish! Itโs fun to say!
Iโm glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by.
Great STEM story! At first I was thinking it was worm. Love that you did the name upside down. Creative!
Thanks for reading and commenting, Michelle. Glad you like the upside down name.
Very cool!
Thanks! Glad you like it.
I love that you focused on the Cassiopea. It is such a cool jellyfish. I used to take kids to Florida to teach them about the mangrove swamps and we would come across these beauties. They are so cool. Thanks for giving them a shout out! ๐
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your experience.
Never Eat/Like a Pig-140 Words
Follow the Rules!
I will never eat like a pig! Pigs have no etiquette.
I cringe when I think about slop. That breaks my #1 rule: Never-ever let your foods touch.
If your foods do touch, activate your 2-decibel howl. Continue to howl until a new plate magically appears with the required 10mm clearance on the sides of all foods. Make them promise that this will never happen again.
Pigs gorge on anything. They obviously donโt know about rule #2. If a new food appears on your plate declare loudly, โI donโt like it and I am not going to eat it.โ Be prepared to outwait your mom. She may threaten you with no dessert. She may not let you leave the table until you try it. If all else fails offer to eat just one bite. Then cover it with ketchup, scrunch your eyes, pinch your nose, gasp, gag and swallow…
You really captured picky eaters!
Ketchup! The caviar of kids:)
***I thought I had submitted this on Monday , June 15, around 10:30 am. I just searched and searched and did not find it??? So sorry if I just missed it and posted it twice! Yikes
Susanna..Loved your sample as well as the opening โsongโ!!! Thanks for inspiring us!!! ๐
Like a bird, Things that are round, Upside down
Word count 43
Susan Schipper
Henrietta
Henrietta only eats things that are round
And looks for them while she is upside down!
It could be a cherry or even a berry
Sometimes a guava will do.
Peaches, Persimmons loquats too,
Henrietta eats like a bird from Kalamazoo!
I love the less familiar fruits that make an appearance here. This reminds me of something out of The Frogs Wore Red Suspenders!
You Are Invited
(325 words โ pig, orange things, treehouse)
by D. Litwer
They always ate like royal pigs when J.D. invited them to the treehouse for snacks.
J.D. being the oldest, the biggest, and the only one who brought treats, always ate first. Sometimes there was very little left for the guests.
The treats were always orange because that was J.D.โs favorite color. The guests never complained.
Today their host appeared, licking an orange popsicle and clutching a bulging grocery bag. They watched J.D. struggle up the ladder into the treehouse and lay out the feast. They waited impatiently for J.D. to finish eating.
The first guests to arrive hurried to the base of the tree and tasted what remained of the popsicle with their feet. โDeliciouszzzz,โ buzzed the flies. J.D. paid them no attention.
The next guests zoomed into the treehouse and hovered around the puddle of orange drink, slurping up the sugary goodness with their proboscisโ. โThanks-ummm-ummm for inviting us-ummm-ummm,โ droned the wasps. J.D. didnโt hear them.
Two more guests peeked in the door, then bounded over to a scattering of candy. Cheeks bulging with the orange covered chocolates, the squirrels flicked โthank youโ with their tails and skittered off. J.D. didnโt notice.
The last guest to arrive perched on the edge of the treehouse window. Below her, the ants were struggling to carry off the popsicle stick. Inside, the puddle of orange drink had dried up and the wasps were gone. The squirrels had carried off all the candy. All that remained was a half-eaten bag of orange cheese puffs. Cawing โthank you,โ the crow plucked up the bag and flew off. J. D. didnโt stir.
โJ.D.,โ yelled Mama, โyou better not be up in that treehouse eating junk food. Itโs almost time for supper.โ
J.D. sat straight up. Rubbed the sleep from her eyes. Looked around.
โI ainโt got no junk food up here, Mama,โ she called back. And stuffing the plastic grocery sack in her pocket, she climbed down from the treehouse.
My favorite line- โI ainโt got no junk food up here, Mama” (reminds me of my sister and I when we were little and used to sneak and eat candy to eat at the creek. Good memories!!!
Michelle,
I’m thrilled my story sparked a wonderful memory for you. Thank you for sharing that with me.
I like stories set in a treehouse. Thank you!
I love the wasps, great sounds there, too! They hardly ever get invited:)
Thank you!
Finally done! (34 words)
No to Purple Food!
I never eat purple food!
Dis-gus-ting!
Round squishy grapes โ like eyes.
Weird-shaped eggplant โ so blah.
Brain-shaped cauliflower โ just no!
Whoever heard of purple potatoes
Or purple cabbage?
No way! Just no to purple food!
I like the “round squishy grapes — like eyes.”
Haha! This does a great job of capturing the emotional pitch of food nos! ๐
Week 6 Story
Treehouse
Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
Try It in Reverse
250 words
Simon only ate in his treehouse. He would pick up food in the kitchen, scurry outside and up the ladder, plunk himself inside and chew. If he wanted more, he would swiftly climb down, race into the kitchen, grab the next installment of food and be off to the treehouse again. It was like watching a bird flying back and forth between a birdhouse and a quiet branch where it could eat seeds in peace.
One Saturday Simonโs mother said, โWhy donโt you try this in reverse?โ
โWhat do you mean?โ Simon asked.
โIโll hand you up some lunch and then you carry pieces of it into the kitchen to eat,โ his mother explained.
Simon was intrigued, so they tried it. The first time he appeared in the kitchen with a quarter of an enchilada, Simonโs parents were there eating their enchiladas. Simon ate his enchilada and then leaped off his chair to get more food in the treehouse. When he came back, his friend Ethan was sitting there eating an enchilada too. Ethan waved at him.
Surprised, Simon finished his off and then looked longingly at the plate of enchiladas on the table.
โNo, no,โ his mother said, โgo back and get more.โ
Needless to say, Simon lugged back the rest of his lunch and sat there eating it in the kitchen and discussing Pokemon Go with Ethan.
โI have a big desire for family mealtimes,โ said Simonโs mother.
โFortunately, you also have a big imagination,โ said Simonโs father.
Wonderful story!
Thank you!
Ha! I totally get a mom going to no end in trying to establish family mealtime:)
Gabi the Dog Eats Carrots by Susan Krevat
Gabi the Dog only eats like a pig. She especially loves any
and all food, especially if it is orange. She absolutely adores carrots,
which will always have a special place in her heart.
Years ago, Gabi had a friend, Dillon the Dog. Dillon and his mother
(Nancy) walked by Gabiโs house every day. Dillonโs mother always
made sure to put carrots in her pocket. Upon arriving at Gabiโs
house, both dogs would sit down until they devoured all
the carrots that Nancy has brought.
Eventually, Nancy got early Alzheimerโs Disease. Even as
her memory deteriorated, she would walk Dillon over to
Gabiโs house to wolf down carrots ~ by now, the dogs were
well trained and had high expectations.
One day, the doorbell rang. It was Nancy and her helper.
Nancy wanted to make sure to tell Gabi and me that Dillon
had crossed the rainbow bridge.
Nancy ~ even with an impaired memory ~ continued to
remember and treasure feeding Dillon and Gabi carrots every day.
Little things like carrots are important because it usually is the little
things that make all the difference in our lives.
Awww….what a sweet story!
Oh wow. So sweet and very realistic. Alzheimer’s is such a tough disease. Your story is a reminder that people with it (like Nancy) can still hold special memories that will forever remain in their hearts even when their minds start failing them. โค
Nicely done, beautiful ending!
POSTED FOR LIZ
Week 6
Santa and His Beans- Two Limericks
By Liz Kehrli
Iโm Santa and Iโm here to say,
I always eat beans on my sleigh.
Theyโre such a delight,
the gas helps my flight
if my magic should shrivel away.
Or,
Itโs Santa here, and I must say,
I never eat beans on my sleigh.
They give me bad gas,
I canโt help but pass,
that reindeer wonโt come near my sleigh.
Ha! I’m partial to the second, those long-suffering reindeer:)
Very cute, love that you showed the two opposite points of view!
Ugo Anidi
238 words
I only eat things that are square.
I only eat things that are square and everyone knows this. My bread is sliced, my yams are cubed and so are my plantains and potatoes.
Well, one-day Mum and Dad and Cherry went to the hospital and I had to stay with Grandma Sunday.
For breakfast she made croissants and not toast.
โI do not eat crescents; I only eat things that are square.โ
โYouโre not hungry my childโ Grandma said and she took the food away.
For lunch she made fried yam chips and not cubed yam porridge.
โI do not eat rectangles; I only eat things that are square.โ
โYouโre not hungry my childโ Grandma said and she took the food away.
For dinner she made gari balls and soup and not gari squares and soup.
โI do not eat circles; I only eat things that are square.โ
โYouโre not hungry my childโ Grandma smiled and she took the food away.
The next day she made beans and plantain with carrots and cabbage, some chicken and mango and pineapple slices.
I gobbled it up and sang thank you; you see by then I was starving.
When Mum came back and saw me eating akara balls, she jumped almost up to the roof.
โWhat happened to โI only eat things that are squareโ? โ
I smiled. โNow I eat circles and crescents and stars and rectangles โcause thatโs the best way to get a square meal.โ
I love the way the square comes back in the ending! And crescents/croissants great word play!
Love this, I kept reading, to see what was going to happen! And you got a lot of shapes in, very creative. Word play/pun to wrap it up is perfect!
Jim?! JIM! (Always, like a bird; word count 62, Jess Murray)
Jim always ate like a bird.
Sometimes he ate seeds,
sometimes he ate worms.
He adored frog spawn.
He noshed among the weeds.
He chased the squirrels
across the lawn
for the tastiest bits
from the feeder.
Gulp, slurp! Goodbye squirrel,
goodbye vulture.
Goodbye vulture?
Yuck, Jim.
We really like you,
but if you keep this up
itโs back to the breederโs.
Carl Eats Like A Pig (137 Words)
By Amy Flynn
Everyday Farmer Tea poured slop into Carlโs trough.
Everyday Carl trotted calmly over, a napkin tied neatly around his neck.
A delicate bite.
A dab to his snout.
Bite.
Dab.
Bite.
Dab.
One fateful day, Farmer Tea hosted a picnic and Carl overheard a woman scold her child, โDonโt eat like a pig!โ.
Carl was appalled to discover the child had ketchup on his face, ice cream on his chin, and, macaroni in hisโฆ.hair?
Eat like a pig?!
Heโd show her.
With a running start, Carl bursted through his pen, napkin billowing like a flag.
Once free, he calmly trotted over to the picnic table.
A delicate bite.
A dab to his snout.
Bite.
Dab.
Bite.
Dab.
The picnic-ers looked on in amazement, each one vowing to never again utter the phrase โEat like a pig.โ
This is so cute, love it! Your pig deserves respect, for sure. Hope it goes on to be a picture book!
So cute! “A delicate bite, a dab to his snout.” I think It’d need to call him Prissy Pig!
Alicia Meyers Kelly
WC: 76 words
I ONLY eat things that are square
I only eat things that are square.
I like for things to be fair.
Four corners, four sides,
the number applies
when I cut it in half to share.
I only eat things that are square.
Babysitters—beware!
Bread, crackers, cheez-its, galore–
waffles, brownies, I want more!
I ONLY EAT THINGS THAT ARE SQUARE!
I know my request is rare.
Stop bringing me food
Iโm NOT in the mood.
So, Mom uses her knife to repair.
Oakley only eats quirky food. WC – 135
Ma calls out, โOakley, rise and shine.
Itโs time for breakfast, nigh to nine!โ
โIโm hungry for a big, fat, bug!โ
Ma just laughs, gives me a hug
Same old oatmeal, with a plop
of brown molasses on the top.
Lunch is next, โOak, what sounds good?โ
I brighten up, โA piece of wood!โ
Ma rolls her eyes, sets down my plate
โBrussel sprouts, thereโs no debate!โ
The sun is setting, dinner time!
โMama, please, a bowl of slime,
jade or amber, fuschia, mint,
With a razzle-dazzle tint!โ
โWeโre having salty boiled potatoes,
Ham and yams and stewed tomatoes!โ
โTake one bite, and donโt you fret
What you see is what you get!โ
โLittle Oakley, so unique!
A bit quirky, so to speak.โ
โAh, Mamรก thank you, donโt you fret!
What you see is what you get!โ
Same old oatmeal, with a plop! So fun Katie! I can picture this silly little girl in a full story. Hope you’ll keep working on it and maybe she’ll get her “unique” meal in the end!
This is so cute. I love the quirky items she requested. You made mealtime quite fun, even if she didn’t get what she asked for. The character’s personality and her Ma’s definitely come through.
POSTED FOR MIA
Week #6
Afternoon Snack
By Mia Geiger
49 words
(words used: eat, bird)
Liam and Lucy
each grabbed a sack.
They wanted to fill them
for an afternoon snack.
They ran to their yard
and searched all around.
“Let’s look,” said Liam,
“right here on the ground.”
Lucy suggested
they eat just like birds.
“Snatch up some seeds …
But not any worms!”
POSTED FOR KETAN
Mix and Match Week #6
by Ketan Ram
word count 148
Up-side down Blu eats things that are orange.
Blu was a sloth always hanging around.
His favorite way was up side down.
His next most favorite thing of all
was eating orange things, large or small.
Carrots, pumpkin, sweet potatoes too,
apricots and persimmons is all that he knew!
Could Blu the sloth be any duller
for eating things only orange in color?
His friends told him, โBlu, this is enough!โ
โIt’s time you ate more colorful stuff!โ
Blu gave it some thought and decided he would
try new food because he knew he should.
His friends brought apples, acorns, beets and kale.
He munched upside down holding tight with his tail.
His friends sat watching as he chewed and chewed.
They wondered how Blu liked these new colored foods?
While chewing and hanging, Blu fell fast asleep.
Leafy kale hanging out of his teeth.
Then suddenly when he awoke he outright said,
โI’d rather eat orange food instead!โ
Jay the Bird Boy (This has a touch of quarantine insanity I think!) 256 words
Jay only ate like a bird. It started innocently enough when he loved a trail mix of almonds and sunflower seeds. But then he wanted seeds and nuts every day.
Next, he wanted his food cut up in small bites, so he didnโt have to chew it. Mom agreed, thinking this was only a phase.
Then, he stopped eating with a fork, and started to peck his food off his plate. This was fine for home, but they couldnโt go out to eat anymore.
But then things got weird. Jay wanted his food served under a layer of dirt so he could pull it out of the ground like a worm.
When he asked for a bird feeder to perch on while he ate, his dad built a giant one in the yard.
The parents fretted about this new turn of events, but went along with it.
But when Jay asked his mother to chew up his food and spit it in his mouth, she decided things had gone to far. She refused handing him a plate with noodles and a fork.
Jay was so upset, he flew off.
Jayโs mom cried at the window each day. Jayโs father kept the bird feeder filled, in case Jay returned.
Months later Jay returned with an eagle. His mom watched in astonishment as the eagle chewed a worm and dropped it in Jayโs mouth.
But she missed him too dearly to say anything harsh. Dad built a nest for the bird and boy, and they are living there still.
The boy wanted to be what he wanted to be despite what the parents wanted for him. A great theme as we often try to in-still our own wants for our children. We need to listen more to their needs especially when they are adult children and they make their own decisions. Thank you for an eye opening story. ๐