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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Valentinies rock
And so do YOU!
Like galloping hooves, our brave hearts are pounding with excitement and anticipation (or maybe trepidation!) because it’s time for. . .
The 6th Annual Valentiny Writing Contest

~ for children’s writers ~
The Contest: since writing for children is all about “big emotion for little people” (I forget who said that, but someone did so I put it in quotes!) and Valentines Day is all about emotion, write a Valentines story appropriate for children (children here defined as ages 12 and under) maximum 214 words in which someone feels brave!
- They can be brave about asking someone to be their Valentine, of course, but they can also do something brave to get a Valentine (the person or the gift), or do something brave to help a friend. They could be brave about giving something up, or brave about asking someone they’re not sure they like to be their Valentine just to be nice. . . sky’s the limit! Think beyond the obvious!
- Your story can be poetry or prose, sweet, funny, surprising or anything in between, but it will only count for the contest if it includes someone brave (can be the main character but doesn’t have to be) and is 214 words (get it? 2/14 for Valentines Day 😊
- You can go under the word count but not over!
- Title is not included in the word count.
- You are welcome to enter more than one entry – just remember you’ll be competing against yourself 😊
- No illustration notes please!
Post your story in the comment section below (preferred) or on your own blog between right now this very second and Sunday February 14th by 11:59 PM EDT. If you only post on your own blog, add your post-specific link to the form list at the bottom of the post. This post with all the entries in the comment section and the list of links for those who prefer to post on their own blogs will stay up all week for everyone to enjoy. If you have difficulty posting your entry to the comments, which unfortunately sometimes happens, you may email your entry to me and I’ll post it for you! [susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com
We discussed changing the entry posting. The majority voted to have all the entries in one place here in the comment section, so we’re going to give that a try. But there were some who wanted to continue blog-hopping, so I’m going to include a link list for them at the bottom of the post. For those who are willing to post in the comment section but also plan to post on their own blogs, you are most welcome to post the link to your blog in your posted entry here (see example below.) That way people can come visit you if they want to but can also read most of the entries in one place on my blog if they prefer. It is certainly easier for the judges to have as many entries as possible in one place. We’ll try it this way one time and see how it works. We can always go back to the old system 😊
(So a sample entry might look like this:
ENTRY TITLE – word count
Author Name
(link to your own contest entry blog post if you have one and would like to share it)
Amazing wonderful Valentiny Contest story.😊
Dudley’s Brave Valentine – 212 words
by Violet Hill
http://bit.ly/3aOxhZm
It was almost Valentines Day and Dudley’s heart had sunk to somewhere near his big toenail.
(etc etc amazing story continues)
I know how hard you all work on your entries and how anxious you are to be sure your entry is posted, but please try to be a little bit patient if you’re waiting for your entry to show up in the comments or on the list of entries. I try never to get up from my desk during contests but sometimes it’s unavoidable. 😊
The Judging: over the next several days, my lovely assistants and I will narrow down the entrants to 12 top choices which will be posted here and voted on for a winner on Thursday February 18th (or possibly a day or two later if the judges need extra time.) The winner will be announced Monday February 22nd depending on judging and voting time needed. The dates of the judging/voting/winner announcements are subject to finagling depending on how much time the judges actually end up needing!
Judging criteria will include:
- Kid-appeal/Kid-friendliness – remember, this is a story for kids!
- Creativity in using bravery and success in making us feel the bravery!
- Valentine’s Day appropriateness – this is a VALENTINE story!
- Quality of story – we will look for basic story elements and a true story arc
- Quality of writing – use and flow of language, correctness of mechanics, excellence of rhyme and meter if you use it, PROOFREADING!
- Originality – surprise us with something new and different! 😊
- How well you followed the Submission Guidelines – agents and editors expect professionalism. This is a chance to practice making sure you read and follow specified guidelines. If you don’t follow agent and editor submission guidelines they won’t even read your submission.
The Prizes: Talk about a pounding heart! Just look at these fabulous prizes!
Hannah VanVels – Agent, Belcastro Agency – PB MS Critique
Hannah will offer one lucky winner a PB MS critique. The winner may submit fiction or nonfiction, rhyme or prose – Hannah is open to anything!

Winner’s choice of Renee LaTulippe‘s Lyrical Language Lab Intensive Rhyme & Meter Self Study Course OR a one-hour ZOOM consultation with Renee to get feedback on a manuscript of your choice, ask questions about writing in rhyme/lyrical prose, or spend however you like!

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyme or Prose, Fiction) from Dawn Young, author of THE NIGHT BAAFORE CHRISTMAS (WorthyKids 2019), COUNTING ELEPHANTS (Running Press Kids, March 2020), and THE NIGHT BAAFORE EASTER (WorthyKids January 26, 2021)

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique (fiction) from Kirsti Call author of The Raindrop Who Couldn’t Fall (Mazo Publishing, January 2019), Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee, September 2020), as well as COW SAYS MEOW (HMH) and COLD TURKEY (Little Brown) which will release in 2021.

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Melissa Stoller, author of SCARLET’S MAGIC PAINTBRUSH (Spork 2018), READY, SET, GORILLA! (Spork 2018), THE ENCHANTED SNOW GLOBE COLLECTION (chapter books) (Spork 2017), and SADIE’S SHABBAT STORIES (Spork, October 2020)

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique (non-rhyming, fiction) from Becky Scharnhorst, author of the forthcoming MY SCHOOL STINKS! (Philomel Books, July 6, 2021)

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Ellen Leventhal, author of A Flood Of Kindness (WorthyKids April 2021), DON’T EAT THE BLUEBONNETS (Spork 2017), LOLA CAN’T LEAP (Spork 2018), and HAYFEST A HOLIDAY QUEST (ABCs Press 2010)

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique (non-rhyming, fiction, fewer than 800 words) from Rebecca Kraft Rector, author of SQUISH SQUASH SQUISHED (Nancy Paulsen Books, February 16, 2021) (which means it’s coming out in the middle of our contest!😊) and the forthcoming LITTLE RED (Aladdin, Simon & Schuster, Spring 2022) and TRIA AND THE GREAT STAR RESCUE (Delacorte/Random House)

– Picture Book Manuscript Critique (nonfiction PB or rhyming PB) from Julie Abery, author of LITTLE TIGER and LITTLE PANDA (Amicus Ink 2019), YUSRA SWIMS (Creative Editions February 2020), LITTLE MONKEY and LITTLE HIPPO (Amicus Ink February 2020), THE OLD MAN AND THE PENGUIN (Kids Can Press, December 2020), and the forthcoming LITTLE PENGUIN and LITTLE ZEBRA (Amicus Ink, March 2, 2021) and SAKIMOTO’S SWIM CLUB (Kids Can Press, May 4, 2021)

A Picture Book Manuscript Critique by gifted author and former Holiday Contest prize winner, Jenna Waldman, author of the forthcoming Larry’s Latkes (October 2021) (originally written for the Holiday Contest!) and Shark-bot Shalom (August 2021) She is on twitter at @SarafinaDesign

– Either a signed copy of WHEN A TREE GROWS OR a Picture Book Manuscript Critique – winner’s choice! – from Cathy Ballou Mealey, author of WHEN A TREE GROWS (Sterling April 2019) and the forthcoming SLOTH AND SQUIRREL IN A PICKLE (Kids Can Press, May 4, 2021)

– a personalized signed copy of SUNDAY RAIN from author Rosie Pova PLUS a personalized signed copy of DEAR GRANDMA from Yours Truly.

– a personalized signed copy of DON’T HUG DOUG: (He Doesn’t Like It) from author Carrie Finison PLUS a personalized signed copy of CURIOSITY’S DISCOVERY from author/illustrator Nancy Derey Riley!

– a personalized signed copy of The Night Baafore Easter from author Dawn Young PLUS a personalized signed copy of Hop To It: Poems To Get You Moving from poet Sarah Meade!

Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! 😊
Now! Put your heart into it and bravely post your entries!
I can’t wait to read your stories!!!
Eager Readers: Check out the comment section for all the fabulous entries, and the link list at the end to visit the blogs of the authors who wanted to post on their own home turf 😊
ENTRIES IN THE COMMENT SECTION: (all entries are linked)
- Not “IT” – Danielle Sharkan
- A Goosely Valentine – Danielle Sharkan
- Charlie and Sienna – A Friendship Story – Laura Roettiger
- Most Valuable Valentine – Anne Lipton
- A Valentine’s Day Quest in the Land of Moore – Gregory Bray
- Red-Green Valentine’s Day – Stephanie Amargi
- A One-of-a-Kind, Just-in-Case, Not-at-All-Pink Valentine’s Day – Amy Leskowski
- Love Is Stronger – Teresa Traver
- Valentine’s Gotcha Day – Jessica Hinrichs
- Carmela’s Valentines – Lu Pierro
- Bee Brave – Gennie Gorback
- Crushed – Corine Timmer
- Too Chicken – Sue Lancaster
- Shelly and the Path of Peril – Sue Lancaster
- Brave Hearts – Jamie Donahoe
- Step-Brother Battle – Brenda Whitehead
- I Woof You – Debra Daugherty
- My Valenchicken – Glenda Roberson
- A Neighborly Valentine – Meg King-Sloan
- U R Brave – Lindsey Hobson
- If I Were Brave – Rose Cappelli
- Elonso’s Best Valentine’s Day Ever – Susan Drew
- Dibble and Wiscowski: “A Cookie Valentine” – Bru Benson
- One Brave Balloon – Susan Schade
- The Wibbler – Tracy Curran
- Brave Bonnie – Shannon VanStraten-Sundlass
- Cupid, Junior – Linda Staszak
- A Valentine Visit – Julie Maria
- Cupid: The Love Fairy – Rachel Shupin
- Be Brave On Valentine’s Day – Sara Kruger
- Operation Moonbeam – Simon Yeend
- A Valentine Rose – Daryl Gottier
- The Ballad of Bad Bart – Carrie Boone
- The Brave Little Seed – Michelle S. Kennedy
- Something I Want To Say – Jeny Morales
- Stella & Sparky And The Last Valentine – Patricia Nozell
- Stella & Hank – Nicole Loos Miller
- Untangled Valentines – Janie Reinart
- The Wildflower – Ashlee Hashman
- The Color of Love – Allison Strick
- Puppy Love – Deb Buschman
- Super Brothers – Shannon Howarth Nelsen
- Brave For Gigi – Kelly Swemba
- Wannabe my Valentine – Cynthia Stacey
- Cupix – Bridget Magee
- U To The Rescue – Amy Heath
- Blob’s Valentine’s Wish – Deb Sullivan
- Violet & The Valentine’s Vampire – Sarah Meade
- Jana’s Valentine’s Visit – Sarah Meade
- Mole & Miss Vole on Valentine’s Day – Sarah Meade
- A Valentine’s Mouse In Our House – Elizabeth Meyer Zu Heringdorf (2 entries in one comment)
- Will you be my ninja – Elizabeth Meyer Zu Heringdorf (2 entries in one comment)
- Grouchy Grover – Rebekah Hoeft
- Brave In A Cave – Cedar Pruitt
- Cardy’s Valentine Story In All Its Glory – Sally Yorke-Viney
- My Kind of Valentine! – Megan France
- Lavender Buzz – Vicky Langdon
- Love Sick – Abi Island
- Be Brave! – Lisa M. Clewner-Newman
- I’m Not Afraid – Patricia J. Franz
- The Girl With The Candyfloss Hair – Simon Yeend
- Valentine’s Day on Halloween Hill – Abby Wooldridge
- W-R-I-T-E For Each Other – Elizabeth Muster
- Olive You Forever – Ann Ferrello
- The Pink Pro – Kelsey Gross
- Brave Brave Brave – David McMullin
- The Witch of Valentine Lane – Marietta Apollonio
- Gordon’s One-Footed Hop – Kelsey Gross
- Charmadillo – Lauri C. Meyers
- “Soon” – M.R. Haqq
- More Than Cookies – Halley M. Cormack, LCSW
- Fishing For Love: A DIARY – Amy Olsen
- The Lost Valentine – Jeannette Suhr
- Brave New Friends – Dawn Young
- Scaredy-Cat – Danielle S. Hammelef
- Hard To Love – Robin Currie
- Brave Hearts – Susan Klaren
- Across The Road – Rachel Dutton
- Knight of Hearts – Ellen Crosby
- Tootsee Tulip Bulb’s Love-Treat – Judy Caldwell Hughes
- Brave in the Basement – Jessica Whipple
- Caleb’s Heart – Anne Bromley
- Corn Dogs on the Corner – Colleen Dougherty
- Brave Heart – Rebecca Gardyn Levington
- Knock, Knock, Knock – Marty Findley
- Villain-tine’s Day – Laura Bower
- Take A Deep Breath – Elyse Trevers
- Only Three Words – B. A. Schlosser Hill
- A Stolen Valentine – Martha Holguin
- Class List – Elizabeth Volkmann
- Cards and Cookies – Jennifer Reichow
- Chalk Tears – Judy Brewer
- Nurse A Broken Heart – E. Elle Bea
- Bravely Soldier On – E. Elle Bea
- New Kid Blues – Darcee A. Freier
- Valentine’s Recitation – Keely Leim
- Mama Love. Dada Love. – Nancy M. Tichenor
- A Valentine’s Treasure – Ingrid Boydston
- An Itsy Bitsy Valentine – Maria Antonia
- Dino & Gigi – Carolina Bottino (Nina K. Brown)
- Hearts Trail – Carolina Bottino (Nina K. Brown)
- The Giant’s Valentine – Sheila M. Hausbeck
- The Loneliness Street – Nina K. Brown
- Brave Little Valentine – Charlotte Dixon
- Playdate – Margaret Aitken
- Octopus Hugs – Chambrae Griffith
- Conversation Heart Courage – Becky Kimbrough
- My Friend Nate – Karima Davis
- Jojo’s Valentine – Sarah Hawklyn
- “I Like You A Lot” – Julie Schnieders
- Unconventional Friendship – Sarah Hawklyn
- The Flavors of the Heart – Armineh Manookian
- The Candybot – Ellen Seal
- An Otter Love Story – Kristy Roser Nuttall
- Floret And The Fondue – Ashley Sierra
- Be Brave, Be Kind, My Valentine – Susan E. Schipper
- Cupid’s Booty Camp For BabyBoo – Ally Enz
- Playing To Win – Norah Colvin
- Super Special Valentine – Aundra Tomlins
- A Brave Change of Heart – Amy Nicolai
- Sarla Asks A Question – Sandhya Acharya
- A Trail of Ketchup and Mustard – MeiLin Chan
- Juliet and Romeo: Verona’s Valentine’s Celebration – Cristina Raymer
- A Little Atom – Isabel Cruz Rodriguez
- Oscar Octopus Plants A Garden – Isabel Cruz Rodriquez
- My Bestest Friend – Roberta Abussi
- My Every-Day-Valentine – Roberta Abussi
- Sarah’s Valentines – Rachel Zimmerman Brachman
- Lemur In Love – Sarah McDermott
- A Cocoon of Love – Jyoti Rajan Gopal
- Eggbert – Charlie Bown
- A Valentine For Mom – Patricia Martin
- Becca’s Brave Hearts – Marty Bellis
- Little Truck’s Daring Delivery – Kristin Kolp
- The Valentine On My Shoe – Catherine J. Lee
- No More Pink – Robin Currie
- Shiny Sharp Scissors – Katie Fischer
- Valentine Love Languages – Jaymie Dean
- Val & Jack – Karen Keesling
- Brave Heart – Tonnye Fletcher
- Valentine Delivery – Katie Brandyberry
- Apple Pie: Valentine’s Day Treat – Sarah Skolfield
- Brave Little Friends – Judy Sobanski
- Lone’s Very First Day – Jennifer Reinharz
- The Monster’s Valentine Buffet – Kelly Conroy
- Freddie Frog’s Valentine – Lindsey Hobson
- A Simple Valentine – P. J. Purtee
- The Wonky Heart – Stacy Burch
- Roses From Valentina – Carmen Castillo Gilbert
- A Natural Valentine’s Day – Sharon McCarthy
- Miss Hedgehog’s Valentine Mission – Amy LaMae Brewer
- Blown Away – Diana Webb
- Zooming Valentine’s Day – Susan VandeWeghe
- Snack Attack – Melisa Wrex
- Heart Hands – Sarah Heaton
- Bigfoot’s Valentine – Kirsten Leestma
- Geronimo! – Lydia Loeber
- The Most Terrible, Awful, Icky Valentine Ever – Melissa Trempe
- Babies Share Bedrooms – Kristi Newsome
- 214 St. Valentine Way – Tracy Anderson Martin
- Six Secret Valentines – Una Belle Townsend
- The Bees and the Birdss – Paul Kurtz
- Someone Special! – Paul Kurtz
- Zombie My Valentine – Donna Kurtz
- The Owl and the Kitty-Kat – Donna Kurtz
- No Pictures! – Diane S. Scotti
- Blue Flower – Mary Warth
- New Line Valentine – Marcia Parks
- Leo Lionhearted – Jill Lambert
- Bravery Is From The Heart – Sophia Zafra
- A Heavenly Visit – Deborah Dolan Hunt
- The Bird And The Cat – Beth Winslow
- THE Valentine Question – Kate Rehill
- How To Be Valentines (With A Boa Constrictor) – Mary Noon
- Desi’s Daring Delivery – Darci Nielson
- New Best Friend – Sherri T. Mercer
- The Gift Tree – Ciara N M Greenwalt
- One Shot – Dazzle Ng
- Fuzzy Bum – Stacey Miller
- Arrrrr Is For Valentine – Sara Ackerman
- Valentine’s Day Rocks – Samantha Haas
- Cyrus The Bold – Patricia Corcoran
- Saying What I Really Mean – Nina Nolan
- Mr. Grumpy’s Valentine – Anne Sawan
- Heart Shaped Everything – Rathi Munukur
- You Can Do This Jonathan! – Martina Palkovicova
- Caveman Valentine – Jennifer Lowe
- Percy’s Valentine – Nancy Derey Riley
- Brave Hearts – Mary Rudzinski
- Legendary Valentine – Audrey Day-Williams
- In Front Behind – Diana Webb
- A Punny Valentine – Linda Staszak
- Love is an Ocean Away – Kimiko Wadriski Lumsden
- Valentine’s Day Rescue – Brigid Finucane
- Mission: Cancel Cupid Call – Kalee Gwarjanski
- The Valentine’s Quest – Karyn Curtis
- Seeking Courage – Bonnie Kelso
- Valentina and Valentino – Claire Lewis
- Will You Bee My Valentine – Ranessa Doucet
- A Valentine Ski – Clara MacClarald
- Dance Like An Eagle – Jyothi Nookula
- A Gift For Abuelo – JC Kelly
- My Tummy Valentine – Janice Kay Alexander
- Elijah and the Valentine – Susan Twiggs
- Assortment Phobia – JC Kelly
- A Beastly Valentine – Steve Jankousky
- A Valentiny for ME! – Karima Davis
- Friendship Cake – Dea Lenihan
- Be My Valentine – Liz Kehrli
- Love Story – Liz Kehrli
- Love Birds – Lisa Lee Furness
- Mr. Grumpy – Mary A. Zychowicz
- Feep and Meep – Echo Roben
- The Cave of Utter Darkness – Bill Canterbury
- Yellow Like A Mango – Imelda Taylor
- Melanie’s Back! – Shari Della Penna
- All About Heart – Anna Lunt
- Tilly’s Great Big Heart – Amy Flynn
- Insiya’s Valentine – Aditya Simha
- Corazon Does Not Cliff Jump – Kate Rehill
- We’re Still Brave! – Kelly Coutsoubos
- The Cupcake Who Dared To Be Different – Susanne Whitehouse
- Lucy’s Brave Lifelines – Karen A. Kelly
This form ONLY for people who prefer to post on their own blogs and are ONLY posting their entries on their own blogs!
Nurse A Broken Heart – 196 words
E. Elle Bea
I hate Valentine’s Day.
I hate stuffed bears and bouquets of flowers and boxes of chocolate.
I hate red streamers and pink streamers and white streamers.
I hate cartoony hearts and cardboard Cupids.
I hate balloons and cards.
I hate love.
“Hey, Timmy. How are you feeling?” Abby enters my room, her smile wide until she sees me. “Not good?”
I shake my head, then see she’s hiding something behind her back. “What’s that?”
“You were very brave today,” she says, ignoring my question.
I’ve heard it a million times, but it means more coming from her. She was there. She helped.
“And I hope I’m not too late, but …”
She finally reveals what she was hiding.
I love it.
I love the small balloon and card.
I love the glittery stickers and handwritten X’s and O’s.
I love the red, pink, and white heart-shaped construction paper.
I love the stuffed bear holding it all and I love the candy bar Abby pulls out of her lab coat.
I love Valentine’s Day.
“… Timmy, will you be my valentine?”
And just like that, Nurse Abby helps fix my broken heart — for the second time today.
Oh! You got me! Well done!
Sweet story! I love how character arc and Valentine’s Day details.
So lovely. Nurses make wonderful Valentine’s.
Nice twist there! “Fix my broken heart – for the second time today.” Nurses are our superheros!
Oh, this is sweet. Nurses do so much!
Aww! I am glad Nurse Abby was there for Timmy.
A very surprising and sweet ending. Well done!
As a fellow nurse, I was touched. Thank you for what you do!
Wow! Fixing his broken heart for the second time today choked me up. Great story. Good luck!
So perfect! Great last line too!
Bravely Solider On – 197 words
E. Elle Bea
I follow Mom into the building, snow crunching under our boots. I grip my homemade cards against my chest. We head to the main dining hall where everyone is enjoying a special dinner. They stop eating when our arrival is announced.
“So brave,” someone whispers, and I try not to burst into tears.
Mom’s gentle touch on my shoulder urges me forward. My hand trembles. My heart pounds.
“Thank you for your service,” I say, my voice weak as I hand out my first card. “Happy Valentine’s Day.”
The veteran handles the valentine with far more care than is necessary, his wrinkled fingers caressing the red, white and blue construction paper I’d cut into a heart shape. His eyes are watery when he looks back at me.
“Your father was a good man,” he says. “He would be so proud of you.”
Dad was supposed to be home for Valentine’s Day this year. We were going to give valentines to the veterans together.
“Thank you,” I finally say, then move on to the next person. I don’t know how long my courage will last, but, like Dad used to say: “We’re a military family. We soldier on.”
So special!
Oh my, more tears. Just beautiful!
This is heartwarming. Love the title and ending.
Such a touching story!
Aw, so sad but so well done. Military families give so much for our freedoms.
Beautiful story! ❤
So heartbreaking! Thanks for sharing.
Oh my goodness. You really pulled me into this story.
You got me again. Something so simple that meant so much.
Beautiful
My dad was an Air Force colonel, my husband a Vietnam veteran. This is a special story. Good luck!
New Kid Blues by Darcee A. Freier (214 words)
Ned survived his first day at Hill Valley Elementary by playing invisible. Before the final bell, the teacher said, “Remember your Valentines for tomorrow’s party.”
Ned paled.
Julie noticed. She whispered to Arjun. “Don’t forget the new kid. Pass it on.”
Ned ran home. “Mom, I can’t go back. Tomorrow’s the Valentine’s party.”
“That will be fun. Let’s go buy candy.”
Ned painted a box black, and decorated it with planets and stars. His guts churned, “Nobody knows me. What if I don’t get any?”
“What if you do?” Mom kissed his curls. Secretly, she tucked two candies into the box.
Before class, Ned snuck his box behind the others, and passed out his candy. He was too anxious to watch as classmates deposited their Valentines.
Ned hid in the reading corner, wishing for 3 o’clock.
Arjun walked over, “I’m Arjun. Your box is the best. Did you see the supermoon?”
Two boys scuffled up. “I’m Fred,” said one.
“I’m Ted,” said the other. “We’re the Ed twins.”
“Now we’re triplets!” laughed Fred and Ted, squishing in on the sofa.
“Meet the class clowns. I’m Julie.” She squeezed in too.
“Party time!” said the teacher.
Ned grabbed his box. It bulged. He poured Valentines all across his desk, flabbergasted.
The class cheered, “Welcome, Ned!”
This makes my heart ache for kids to be back in the classroom has normal kid stress…well done.
Me too! I’m retired now and I miss my students at times like this!
I’m online. It’s better than I thought it would be but boy, I miss them!
So wonderful that the students made sure Ned was included! Nice story, Darcee!
I had faith that the kids would be there for them. Well done.
The “Ed twins,” then triplets! Clever. Very sweet story!
It’s always stressful being the new kid. So glad the class welcomed Ned. Good job and good luck!
Valentine’s Recitation (167 words)
Keely Leim
Reciting a Valentine’s poem
in front of my grade
makes me jittery, panicky,
and just plain afraid.
For most kids it flows.
For most speaking’s easy,
but with a stutter like mine
I feel extra queasy.
The stutter will begin
in my stomach, then rise,
a halting flutter
of twitchy butterflies.
I try to hold back,
I try to restrain
the indomitable stutter
and recite the words plain.
I slow myself down
and let the fear go.
I volunteer a stutter
to help confidence grow.
I lock eyes with my best friend.
She gives me a wave.
I take a deep breath
to help me feel brave.
I get stuck here and there,
a few words like quicksand,
but one syllable at a time,
each word I command.
On the final line I trip,
then quickly proclaim,
“Happy Valentine’s to you!”
I loudly exclaim!
By the end of my poem,
my grade stands to cheer,
and I walk off the stage
with a smile ear to ear.
A beautiful illustration of what it feels like to take the stage at that age. I felt every emotion!
Thank you for this. Isn’t it so hard to stand in front of people and just go for it? I’m grateful to be able to do most of that online these days! 😉
Congratulations! What a great take on overcoming a stutter!
It’s wonderful that you highlight stuttering and overcoming it during public speaking. I enjoyed your story, Keely!
Thank you so much for this comment!
Public speaking is a challenge even without a stutter. I can only imagine what stress that adds. Good job!
Yes, I agree! I was concerned about writing this one, because it is not from an OWN VOICES experience, though I did admire the way a friend in highschool worked to overcome her stutter. I hope I’ve done right by this. Thank you for your comment!
Love how skillfully the poem invites readers to travel the MC’s emotional arc. Beautifully done!
This is a very kind comment. Thank you for this!
Even without a stutter, speaking in front of a class can be terrifying! Good job!
I love love love that you chose this angle- not only is public speaking so scary, when you have a stutter it’s an extra strike. You left me cheering for your character!
Mama Love. Dada Love. – word count: 171
By Nancy M. Tichenor
https://contentment671263920.wordpress.com/and-a-little-bit-of-magic/
PJs.
Bottle.
Mama’s arms.
Dada’s kisses.
Crib.
Bottle.
Blankie.
Stuffy.
“Night. Night.”
“Niiiieeegh niiieegh!”
“I love you, Hazel. I love you, Daddy.”
“I love you, Hazel. I love you too, Mommy.”
“Too!”
“Poo? Did she just say poo?”
“I think so.”
Up.
Crib. Out.
PJs off.
Diaper off.
“Nope, no poo.”
“Huh.”
“Huh.”
Diaper on.
PJs on.
Crib.
Bottle.
Blankie.
Stuffy.
“Night. Night, Hazel”
“Niiiieeegh niiieegh!”
“I love you, Hazel. I love you, Daddy.”
“I love you, Hazel. I love you too, Mommy.”
Dark.
Mama love.
Dada love.
“Too!”
Quiet.
Dark.
Scared.
Mama love?
Dada love?
Crib. Out.
Bars.
Lift.
Up.
Stuck.
Swing foot. Swing foot.
Hang.
Slide.
Plop. Ground.
Dark.
Scared.
Mama love.
Dada love.
Pitter patter.
More dark.
More scared.
Mama love.
Dada love.
Tiptoe.
Peer.
Most dark.
Most scared.
Mama love.
Dada love.
Light!
Mama!
Dada!
Lift.
Kiss.
Mama bed.
Safe.
“I love you, Hazel. I love you, Daddy.”
“I love you, Hazel. I love you too, Mommy.”
“Too!”
“Too?”
“Too!!”
“Ohhhh, Sweet Hazel. We love you TOO!”
What a creative way to tell the story, Nancy! I could see it in my mind:) Good luck with the contest:)
This is so sweet ❤
Precious!
This is so sweet, loved it!
I can totally picture this toddler. So sweet. Good luck!
A Valentine Treasure
By Ingrid Boydston
212 words
Could he do it? Would he do it? It seemed like a terrific idea when it first landed in his brain. He’d be considered a hero— kind and generous. But now, was he brave enough to actually go through with it?
It seemed so long ago, but it was only this morning when he’d first discovered his treasure. His newfound store of what could only be described as riches. Even the box said “Only the richest for the best!” He knew that because his sister read the shiny gold words out loud. That was right before tragedy struck. Somehow, in all the excitement, someone’s elbow— his maybe?— had knocked over a glass AND her box! Crash! Splash! Her treasure tumbled into the puddle of spilled milk! She ran sobbing, into her bedroom.
That was ages ago. He’d been so sure he could give some of his own wealth to her. But now it was nearly gone. One single piece remained. “Be brave!” he told himself. Slapping on the heart-shaped lid so he couldn’t be tempted by the beauty, the color, and especially the smell of his last treasured piece, he ran to his sister’s room. His four pack of chocolates was almost empty. “This one’s for you,” he said. “Happy Valentine’s Day.”
Thank you for another happy Valentine Susanna!
Ingrid… my apologies… I tried to reply but it bounced somewhere else… Love this story, It takes a lot of love and bravery for a little brother to share his last chocolate with his older sister. This is so sweet, especially on Valentines Day!
Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
Sweet story of brotherly love!
Thank you❣️
How fun to highlight a brother sharing his last piece of chocolate with his sister! “Slapping the heart-shaped lid so he couldn’t be tempted by the beauty…” Great description, too!
Thank you! So glad you liked it.
This is so cute.
Thanks!😊
A brother trying his best to make things right is such a sweet story. I love how you were able to show his struggle.
I am terrible at sharing my chocolate! This is a very sweet story 🙂
Thank you Charlie!
So cute and brave. We forget how precious candy can be to kids. Good luck.
Thanks, Deb!
He did it!! So lovely ❤
Thank you!
Such a sweet story! What a great illustration of love-giving away your very last piece of chocolate.
Thanks Armineh!
What a sweetheart of a brother! I just wanna give him a hug!
Awww, thanks!
Aw, I love how this features sibling love and sacrifice, and CHOCOLATE, truly one of the holiday’s treasures.
Thank you!
I absolutely love it! So heartwarming!
You sweetie! Thanks for commenting Dina!
Awe…so sweet!
Thanks Mary!
What a sweet brother! Great job and good luck!
Thank you Nancy!
Wonderful, Ingrid!
Thank you David!
AN ITSY BITSY VALENTINE – 201 words
by Maria Antonia
https://bit.ly/3jHFjrf
There’s a spider on my valentine!
“Eek!”
“Just an itsy bitsy spider,” Sharice says.
“Bigger than a house!” I say.
“A very tiny house,” Sharice says.
Sharice! Thinks she’s sooooo smart.
There’s a spider on my valentine!
“Eek!”
“Gimme your shoe,” Amy says.
“Yuck! I don’t want spider guts on MY shoe,” I say.
Amy! Thinks she’s sooooo smart.
There’s a spider on my valentine!
“Eek!”
“Don’t kill it,” Pedro says. “Spiders are good. They trap flies.”
“I’d rather have the flies,” I say.
Pedro! Thinks he’s sooooo smart.
There’s a spider on my valentine …
Sharice, Amy, and Pedro slowly back away.
Somebody’s got to be BRAVE!
Stare …
Glare …
No FAIR!
It’s MY valentine!
Wait. I have an idea.
“Stay there!”
I get a cup.
THUNK!
Trapped.
“Don’t put him outside,” Pedro says. “It’s too cold.”
“It’s February,” Amy says.
“It’s Valentine’s Day!” Sharice says.
Hmmmph!
Maybe …
C-a-r-e-f-u-l.
I carry the valentine to the big desk at the front of the classroom.
I lift the cup.
“You, stay.”
Mrs. Carter comes over.
“Why, Jamie! For me?”
She picks up the valentine and …
“That itsy bitsy spider looks so realistic—”
“Eek! There’s a spider on my valentine!”
THE END
That was fun! I didn’t know what to expect!
Cute story! 🙂
You caught me by surprise. I wouldn’t have hurt it either. Cute! Our house is similar to the family Addams in the winter. I wait until the spring to release the spiders into the wilderness. Unless my cats get them first.:)
That’s very funny. A very realistic spider indeed. 🙂
Haha, what a fun ending!
This was fun and I love the repetition. I also do not like spiders!!
So clever! I love this twist on being brave on Valentine’s Day.
This one made me laugh. Thank you.
Oh, oh, oh. And the title was PERFECT!
Very funny! Gotta wonder how the spider felt! LOL
Dino & Gigi – 213 words
by Carolina Bottino pen name Nina K. Brown
Dino was a very scared little mouse. He was afraid of eating different foods, heights, water and was even more afraid of the dark.
His girlfriend Gigi was the opposite of him. She was brave, like to play on water, climbing trees, and love to try new foods.
Dino admired his brave girlfriend.
One day Gigi went out to pick berries in the forest, to make a nice Valentine’s Day pie for Dino. But she didn’t return.
Dino was desperate about the disappearance of his girlfriend. He decided to face his fear and go look for her in the forest. He put on his explorer outfit, grabbed some cheese, and ran towards the forest…and stopped, he couldn’t go in. The forest was so scary and he was terrified.
Shivering, Dino thought about Gigi and that she might be in deep danger. So he gathered all the courage he needed and bravely entered the forest.
Tiptoeing in, staring at the frightening trees, mosquitos and spiders he faced everything to look for his adorable Gigi.
He climbed trees and crossed the river. Up there in the top of a mulberry tree was Gigi stuck upside down by her tail. Dino, a big brave mouse, went up and saved Gigi.“I always knew you were brave Dino.”
Love conquers all as the saying goes! 🙂
Thank you for reading 🥰!
Dino faced his fears and did it anyway. A lovely story.
Thank you🥰!
Well done Dino!!
Thank you for reading 🥰!
Very sweet!
Thank you🥰!
So glad that Dino gathered up his courage to rescue Gigi! Good luck!
Thank you for reading 🥰!
Hearts Trail – 209 words
by Carolina Bottino pen name Nina K. brown
http://ninakbrown.com/trail-of-hearts/
Today was a very special day for Nina, she finally going home after five months in the hospital.
Waking up early, Nina started getting ready.
Standing in front of the mirror, she saw something was glued to it so she gently pulled it off. It was a paper heart note that said:
“You are beautiful!”
She looked around to see who could have left that note, but there was no one there apart from her mother. Nina took a scarf to put on her head and realized there was another little note inside, “You are amazing!”
When leaving the room, she found a note in each step she took that said,
“You are brave!”,
“You are smart!”
Nina collected all the notes she found along the way.
They all said things that warmed her heart.
“Mom, did you write these notes?”
“No, Nina, I’m just as curious as you are to find out who wrote them.”
“We shall follow the trail, Mom… it may take us to the person who wrote them.”
Together they followed the trail and found more little heart notes along the road to home.
Curious Nina opened the front door and soon found out who wrote the notes.
We love you, Nina! Screamed her classmates.
Ahh so sweet! 🙂
Such a sweet subject! I wanted to get to the end.
Thank you 🥰!
What wonderful affirmations of Nina – a very thoughtful class.
Thank you for reading 🥰!
Aw, how sweet her classmates surprised her! What a nice story, Carolina!
Thank you 🥰!
I love your title and your story. ❤
Thank you 🥰!
Heart warming! ❤️
Thank you🥰!
Oh so sweet! Love the trail of hearts. good luck!
Thank you🥰!
The Giant’s Valentine
213 words
By Sheila M. Hausbeck
Lucy knew there was a giant on Giant’s Mountain. She’d seen his footprints. She’d heard his windy voice. She’d smelled his cookies baking.
She wondered if he’d like a valentine if she could be brave enough to give him one.
The magnificent valentine was too big for Lucy to carry. She punched a hole in one corner and looped a ribbon through it so she could pull it up the mountain.
As she hiked, the wind whispered to her. Then it yelled! Was that the giant’s voice? Lucy raised her chin and climbed. At the top, she tiptoed after the giant’s footprints to his door. Hmmm, cookies, that meant he was home. She had just taken a deep breath and raised her hand to knock when the wind whooshed in and tried to wrestle the card away!
“Stop it!” she yelled. “I made this valentine, I dragged it all the way up here and I’m giving it to the giant!”
The huge door creaked open. “Is that for me?”
Lucy’s bravery evaporated. She dashed off down the mountain.
The next morning Lucy awoke to something sparkly blocking the sun from her room. She opened the window, hmmm, frosting! She rushed outside. There against the house stood a heart-shaped cookie from her giant admirer.
So sweet. The only way to win a friend is to be one.
That’s a nice saying, Norah!
What a nice story! I’m sure it was the only Valentine the Giant received and that cookie will probably feed the whole town!
What a brave child to make that trek. I really like how she solved the problem of transporting the oversized Valentine.
I absolutely love that she was brave enough to reach out to someone who may have needed a friend!
I loved “she smelled his cookies baking”, so unexpected in the description of a giant. 😄
I never expected to see a giant in a Valentine story. Great!
Who knew giants were bakers! So fun and I like the way you showed us how Lucy was being brave. Good luck!
The Loneliness Street – 206 words
by Nina K. Brown
http://ninakbrown.com/the-lonely-street/
In Loneliness street there was a puppy who attacked everyone that came close.
Whenever someone approached, He barked, growled, and threatened to bite.
The mischievous children teased the dog by throwing stones and pieces of wood, but that didn’t make the dog leave.
Zaira, who had recently moved into Loneliness street, watched from her window, people dodge the dog or throw objects at him.
She decided to do something. She went to the kitchen, took a piece of meat that was leftover from lunch, and went outside to where the puppy was.
When he saw her, he snarled and bared his teeth.
Zaira didn’t give up. She put the piece of meat on the floor and pushed it closer to the dog with a stick.
The dog sniffed, sniffed, and ate. So Zaira did it every day until the dog no longer barked when he saw her.
As time passed, Zaira realized that the dog was not angry. He just didn’t know what love was. Everyone who had approached him had hurt him in some way, either with words or by hitting him. The girl was the only one who never hurt him.
As time went by, the girl and the dog left the Loneliness street.
Love the ending! 🙂
Thank you 🥰!
That’s a beautiful story – love conquers all.
Thank you 🥰!
Friendship earned by trust. I love a pup story!
Thank you for reading 🥰!
Poor puppy! Thank goodness Zaira befriended him AND they left that Loneliness Street.
Thank you for reading 🥰!
I love a happy ending. 💕
Thank you for reading 🥰!
I’m so glad there are kind hearts in the world and Zaira is one of them. Good luck!
Thank you 🥰!
BRAVE LITTLE VALENTINE (214 WORDS)
by Charlotte Dixon
Something snatches me . . .
from my construction paper family!
I’ve never been away from home!
My every fiber shakes!
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
SNIP! SNIP! SNIP!
My sides slip away.
You clipped me!
Shivers ripple my pulp.
Sticky fingers grip my middle.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
Goop oozes and slathers my edges.
GLOP!
You slimed me!
Sticky fingers squeeze and . . .
wind me round and round.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
My sides poke out in white.
Ew! Ruffles!
Sticky fingers press and push.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
Black marks streak my body!
You tagged me with graffiti!
Sticky fingers grip my middle.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
Goop oozes and slathers.
GLOP!
Rope loops and tangles . . .
here, there, and everywhere!
I must be brave and . . .
get out of this muddle!
I flutter to the floor, and scoot out the door.
I blow past the swings,
monkey bars,
and shouting faces.
A warm breeze whisks me . . .
up
up
up.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
Riding high,
I dip and skip over . . .
a zoo,
a carnival,
and animals that moo.
CRINKLE! CRINKLE! CRINKLE!
I float aloft until . . .
a cry wafts from below.
A child sits in a swing . . . alone.
Maybe, she needs a family, too.
I swoop—
and flop on her lap.
She clasps me to her heart.
“My Valentine!” she shouts.
“I’m home,” I whisper.
Such a charming, clever, and funny Valentine’s story. The unique perspective combined with the onomatopoeia to give me all the feels.
Yay Charlotte! Nice job!
Thank you Anne 🙂
Heart worming story! 🙂
Thank you!
I love the way this is told from the paper’s point of view. So nice the card found some one in need of love.
Thank you Norah.
I love that you have taken a unique MC. Well done!
Thank you Colleen.
I love this little valentine! Such a clever POV. Charolette, your sound words are fabulous. The ending is so satisfying. ❤️
Thank you Janie 🙂 Your eyes helped!
Awww! Super sweet and a fun p.o.v.!
Thank you Ingrid 🙂
Oh this is such a delightful read Charlotte. I love the personification of emotion. That word CRINKLE to define the characters feeling is so well appointed. Well done, lady.
Thank you Pam 🙂 Your eyes were there to help Valentine along his way!
What a fun, loving story. Love the crinkle, crinkle, crinkle! Good luck!
Thank you Nancy 🙂
I can certainly picture this! Great job!
–Look closely at the first letter of each line 😉 —
PLAYDATE – 184 words
By Margaret Aitken
Verity, I’m so glad you could come play today.
Aren’t climbing trees the best? You make it look SOOOO easy.
Look, I found a ladybug. They’re red and spotty just like that sweater you wear…except when it’s in the wash and you wear the blue one with stripes.
Elephants are my favorite animal too. It used to be stripy, snarling tigers … but now it’s elephants.
Nobody else from class could make it this afternoon, so I guess it’s just you and me. Although, I maybe forgot to ask them…
The red envelope? Oh, that’s nothing. Mom must have put it in my bag—she’s always doing that sigh!
It’s Valentine’s Day today? I’d totally and completely forgot.
Nah, I’ll open it later.
Except … I just remembered. It’s actually for you! Happy Valentine’s Day.
Sure, it was no problem! There were loads of red, spotty elephant cards in the store, so I just grabbed one.
Do I want to go to your house for ice-cream?
Absolutely and definitely.
Yeah, Valentine’s Day is my favorite holiday too. I’ve been waiting for it ALL week.
Valentines Day!!! Wow!!! 🙂
That’s a very special playdate. I love the way you’ve written it as an acrostic.
A cute acrostic❣️
Very clever! What a unique way to tell the story. Good luck!
I love it, Margaret!
OCTOPUS HUGS – 205 words
by Chambrae Griffith
Octopus was floating by,
when a flyer caught his eye.
Clown fish, dolphins, sting rays, slugs,
are you good at giving hugs?
A Valentine’s Day hug contest.
The prize, a sunken treasure chest!
Contestants, meet at Aqua Park.
Test all your hugs on me!
Love, Shark.
“A treasure chest? Oh what a prize!”
But hug a shark, would that be wise?
With 8 strong arms he’d be the winner,
or he might wind up— shark’s dinner!
He squirmed his way to Aqua Park
to see who dared to hug a shark.
But not one creature stood in line
Only shark—who held a sign.
Hug contest. Enter, please!
I’ve never had a single squeeze.
Shark’s head hung low, he looked so blue,
Octopus knew what to do.
He swam up slowly feeling wary,
shark was big, and very scary!
He stretched his shaking arms out wide,
and whispered, “Here shark, swim inside.”
He wrapped shark up, all tight and snug,
and gave him the most perfect hug.
“Oh what a hug! The very best!
You win this sunken treasure chest.”
But Octopus had fixed his eyes
on something else, a shark-sized prize!
“Though the treasure chest looks great,
I’d rather win— a new best mate!”
This is absolutely adorable!
Great ending! 🙂
Simply darling! Enjoyed your rhyme too!
Gorgeous. Octopus was right to be wary. I like that he considers a friend of more value than a treasure chest.
What a sweet story and told so well! Love the ending!
Clever and sweet! ❤
This was really fun to read – and oh so different! Good job!
Clever concept – a shark hosting a hug contest! What a sweet ending. This was fun to read!
I love this concept- true bravery!
This is SO good!!
Love this! I can already see the illustrations to go with. Great job!!
Delightful, Chambrae! Well written, original, nicely done emotion, and Octopus certainly did have to be brave to hug Shark! I’m glad they ended up friends! 😊
Oh! This made me shiver with happiness! Rhyme is the best, right next to a happy ending like this. Great job! ❤️
This entry is cozier than an eight-armed hug, and funny, too! I love it Chambrae!
So delightful, fun to read aloud, and all-around awesome.
Love it! So much fun and I love the last line! Good luck!
Conversation Heart Courage
By Becky Kimbrough
212 words
“Whee! Yippee!” hollers HUG ME.
“Onward!” shouts XO.
Candy hearts jump in the bag. I hide, afraid to go.
“Vamanos!” declares YOU’RE CUTE.
But what am I to do?
Candy hearts should dazzle and I’m just a boring blue.
“We’ll decorate their cookies! It’s our time to shine. You can’t miss this party, Blue. Hurry!” says BE MINE.
Suddenly, I’m scooped right up. Oh no! My fate is sealed.
A teacher puts us in her bag. Soon we are revealed.
Diving deep, I hide, too scared to do my part.
With no words printed on my front, I’m just a broken heart.
“Yoo-hoo, woo-hoo!” calls I LOVE YOU and lands upon a plate.
“Ooooh,” says BE TRUE, “I’m coming too! Time to decorate!”
Children sift and scramble. I look the other way.
Maybe no one will notice and I won’t be picked today.
Finally, one child is left, quiet, all alone.
He doesn’t seem to care for any hearts that he is shown.
Eek! Can it be?
Did he smile at me?
Maybe I know what to do.
Wiggling close, I smile back. Perhaps he only wants wordless blue?
Braver now, I mustn’t hide, but trust I’m a good catch.
Lucky for me, now I can see, JUST BLUE’s a perfect match.
Cute idea! 🙂
Thank you!
Those conversation sweets are very cute. I do believe there is someone special for everyone. I’m pleased JUST BLUE found the perfect match.
I agree! Thanks for your sweet thoughts.
You are welcome.
Clever use of the conversation hearts.
Thanks! Happy Heart Day!
Giving life to conversation hearts! What a cool idea:)
Thank you! My brain does tend to be pretty random, lol. Happy Valentine’s Day!
Well that is darn cute! Just blue is just right. 💙
Thank you! I have known many little people who insist on blue for all things… 🙂
Ingenious, funny, and uplifting! I love how you gave each of the conversation hearts a fitting persona and that Blue was finally able to join the “conversation!”
Thank you Anne! A comment from the person who wrote Most Valuable Valentine means so much!
Very fun idea. I’m glad Just Blue found his boy. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR KARIMA
My Friend Nate – 214 words
by Karima Davis
My friend Nate is eighty-seven. I am eight.
When I get home, he waves from his front gate.
With his big wide grin and silver hair,
There isn’t a day that he isn’t there.
His special grin, a mile wide,
Says, “Hurry up, come on inside!”
He’s my best friend, steady and true.
He waits each day to hear what’s new.
He knows my teacher is super nice.
I know his favorite meal is curry rice.
We dunk cookies in milk and watch T.V.
I help him with things, and he helps me.
He loves when I say, “No way!” or “Super cool!”
He laughs when I tell him silly jokes from school.
Nate tells me stuff, both old and new,
Stories of brave friends and planes he flew.
Nate’s stories of the things he has done,
Make me excited to one day tell some.
I hope to have courage, just like Nate.
I want him proud of being my mate.
Nate says, he is already super proud,
I’m a kid that doesn’t follow the crowd.
It takes courage to grow. I learn from him.
I think that’s why he has that special grin.
A grin that says, I’m eighty-seven and you’re eight,
But who cares about age, you and I get along great!
Ahhh they sure are the best of friends! 🙂
How lovely to see that true friendship transcends time.
I love a story of friendship especially when age doesn’t matter. Nice!
Thanks!
What a great and unique friendship. ❤
Thank you! Happy Valentine’s Day!
Happy Valentine’s Day to you too!! ❤
Gulp! What a delightful tale of friendship!
Thank you for reading!
Sweet story! I liked the use of “eighty-seven, and I am eight.” It rolled nicely off the tongue.
Thank you! I hope to have an 8 year old friend when I’m 87!
Very charming friendship story. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR SARAH
Jojo’s Valentine
By Sarah Hawklyn
Jojo baked three big cookie hearts decorated with red sugar and cinnamon candies.
One each for Mom and Dad. She held the third one in her hand.
I should take it to Louis, her head said, but her heart wouldn’t move.
He doesn’t want to be bothered. Does he? What will she say to him?
She tried to imagine being without her Mom. When she tried, a scary pit opened in her stomach. He must be so sad.
She’d always thought being brave meant going on a quest to find a unicorn or flying to the moon, but it really means..
She rose slowly and walked next door.
“Hi Louis, I thought you might like a Valentine.” Her trembling hand betrayed her; it dropped the offered cookie, which broke into two pieces.
“Thanks Jo.” Louis picked up the pieces and they sat on his front stairs.
“I’m sorry Louis.” Jojo said quietly.
“You didn’t mean to drop the cookie.”
“I mean about your Mom.“ She tried not to cry.
“I think it’s the perfect Valentine.” He fit the two broken pieces together, then handed Jojo one and they ate them, just sitting.
Afterwards, she ran home and hugged her Mom, resting in bed, glad that at least for now her family was still whole.
A lovely realisation of what it means to have courage. Jojo is such a thoughtful and empathetic friend.
Aw, sniff, sniff. You’ve tugged at my heart, Sarah!
I love this interaction:
“I’m sorry Louis.” Jojo said quietly.
“You didn’t mean to drop the cookie.”
“I mean about your Mom.“ She tried not to cry.
You did a great job incorporating lots of emotion! Good luck!
Thanks a lot of emotion for a little story. Beautiful!
Oh, this tugs at my heartstrings! Lovely. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR JULIE
“I Like You A Lot” – Word count 213
Julie Schnieders
Cindy carefully printed each of her classmates name’s on the outside of their Valentine’s with her own name inside. She had one special Valentine that she didn’t sign. Cindy felt bashful. Her Valentine to Jay simply read: “I like you a lot.” She put the finished Valentine’s in a brown paper bag decorated with cut-out construction paper hearts next to her bed.
Cindy tossed and turned trying to fall asleep. How would she give Jay his Valentine?
“Oh, he’s so cute,” Cindy thought, drifting off to sleep.
The next morning, Cindy grabbed her bag of Valentine’s, heading off to school.
Cindy walked into the classroom. Butterflies fluttered in her stomach as she caught a glimpse of Jay. The teacher asked the students to take out their heart-decorated shoe boxes and put them on their desks. Cindy’s classmates erupted in a cacophony of excitement eager to pass out Valentine’s.
Cindy watched Jay put his Valentine in her shoe box. She daydreamed. What did he write in his Valentine to her?
Jay looked through his shoebox filled with Valentines. Jay frowned. He didn’t see a card from Cindy.
“Where’s my Valentine?” he asked.
Cindy handed it to him. He opened it.
Right.
In.
Front of her.
Their eyes met.
Cindy blushed.
Jay smiled.
Phew! I’m pleased she remembered to take it. I thought she’d left it beside the bed. 🙂
I thought she left it by the bed too! Yay, so glad she had it to give to him:) Young love is so precious:)
Cute!
Yup! Tension built, I worried it was by the bed as well. Yay! It wasn’t!
Sooooo relatable. Who didn’t like someone ‘a lot?’ And he liked her ‘a lot,’ too.
Aww, sweet first love. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR SARAH
Unconventional friendship
By Sarah Hawklyn
She knew she shouldn’t go.
“Pixies don’t go out into the woods at night,” she’d been told.
She went anyway.
Bright light in her eyes…pinned!
From behind the beam came a soft voice, “Don’t be scared.”
Frozen she could not speak.
Her legs trembled. She barely kept upright.
She didn’t want to be scared, but instead of answering, she ran.
Afterwards she boasted to her friends, “He was really afraid. I could hear it in his voice.”
“You’re so brave.” “I wouldn’t do that…” They all chimed in.
It didn’t take away the fear…or the excitement.
With her heart beating she planned.
She gathered vines and flowers. She wove them together.
She made a gift. A beautiful heart.
Tonight she’d go. Was she brave enough?
She wanted to return to let him know…
She wasn’t afraid.
Maybe they could be friends.
The night was dark.
The moon, hiding, did not guide the way.
She placed her crafted heart within the toadstool ring and ran behind a tree.
Would he still find it?
The torchlight searched, moving through the woods.
Finally brilliance illuminated her offering.
“Thanks,” floated down from above.
“You’re welcome,” she whispered, safe in her hiding spot.
Even though he was giant and she was small…
Couldn’t they be friends?
I’m sure this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
What a creative way to show how unlikely friends can come together! Nice, Sarah!
I especially liked the description”the moon, hiding, did not light her way”. Nicely done!
Of course they can be friends. Very sweet. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ARMINEH
The Flavors of the Heart-213 words
by Armineh Manookian
At the bottom of Grandma’s pot, were all the flavors of her heart.
Ani dug inside it.
She savored the bouquet of spices,
saffron
fenugreek
rosewater in a Persian stew.
But-
Ani winced at the last bite. “Why is it bitter, Grandma?”
“You’re tasting sadness.”
Grandma accidentally spilled the rice.
“Scattered. Everywhere.” Grandma sighed. “Like family.”
Ani gathered it into the shape of a heart. “Look! For Valentine’s Day.”
“How I long our family could celebrate it together.”
“I wish I could help,” Ani said.
“Can you ask the neighbors for more rice?”
Ani whispered. “Talking to grown-ups is scary.”
“Please?”
Ani walked down the steps.
One.
At.
A.
Time.
Mrs. Mansour didn’t have any, neither did Mrs. Hernandez, nor did Mr. Park.
Ani returned.
Without rice.
Without helping Grandma.
Empty handed
Yet full
of the fragrance of her neighbors’ cooking.
Ani took a deep breath …
and walked back to Mrs. Mansour’s.
“I have an idea.”
Soon, Mrs. Mansour, Mrs. Hernandez, and Mr. Park followed Ani to her apartment.
Grandma walked into the room as the neighbors placed down their dishes, spiced with
flavors from faraway places.
“Happy Valentine’s Day!” they cried.
“On the bottom of these pots,” Ani said, “are the stories of their hearts.”
Grandma hugged her. “Let’s dig in!”
This story is delightful! I love “On the bottom of these pots are the stories of their hearts.”
Thank you Sarah!
Heartwarming and poignant. You portray Grandma and Ani’s relationship in an authentic and relatable way, while beautifully depicting their individual strengths and struggles. Ani’s creativity and pluck are *chef’s kiss* and I seriously crave the recipes to go with this story!
Thanks so much, Anne. Yes to Persian cuisine! 🙂
Beautiful subject and wonderfully rendered! Well done!
Thank you. I appreciate you reading it!
Food is of special significance in so many cultures. It really does help to tell stories of the heart.
Thanks so much!
Sharing their food and the stories of their hearts! Nicely done:)
Thanks!
Such a sweet story. I like how you structured it and Sarah is right. “At the bottom of Grandma’s pot, were all the flavors of her heart,” is such a great line. Good luck!
Thanks so much. You too!
A smorgasbord of love. ❤
Like the way you put it! 🙂
This story is lovely, Armineh. It’s so beautifully written, and I, too, love the line “On the bottom of these pots are the stories of their hearts.” Thank you for sharing.
So appreciate the ❤️. Thanks Sarah!
Beautiful themes of family and friendship. I love how the main character solves the problem and brings everyone together in the end. Well done!
Thanks!
This is so wonderful, it made me miss my Grandmother and sharing in her kitchen. I loved your ending. Well crafted, Armineh!
Grandmas hold a special place in our heart. Thanks so much for reading it!
I love your writing. This story is full of heart and warmth. Great job!
Thank you!
I like the line “scattered like family”- resonates especially this year!
Thank you for reading! Hopefully in the months ahead, there will be less scattering and more gathering. 🙂
Wow–the flavors of the heart! The stories of their hearts! So tender and heart warming! Well done!
Thanks, Kristy
You packed a lot into this little story! Nice job of “showing not telling “ about the diversity held together by love.
Love how you put it, Ingrid. Thanks so much for reading!
Love this and the pots having the flavors or stories of their hearts. Great job. Good luck!
Thanks so much!
The Candybot – 210 words
by Ellen Seal
“Aw, man! Mine’s broken!” Lolly heard as she fell into the classroom trash can.
She dusted off her wrapper. “Guess my Valentine’s Day party is over.”
Lolly was unsure of who she’d meet in a place like this.
“Welcome to Scrap Central, amigo! – Bin of the unwanted.” said a cinnamon heart, “I’m Fuego the Spicy.”
More candies emerged from crumpled papers as a conversation heart waved, “I’m Pinky the Chalky!”
“How do we get out of here?” Lolly asked.
“Don’t even try it!” Pinky shuddered and gestured to a pile of crumbs. “Look what happened to Cookie!”
Lolly grimaced.
“There must be something we can do.” she said and started to collect paper clips. “What if I climb up and pull you out?”
The other candies were terrified. “We can’t trust three old paper clips! We’re doomed!”
Lolly sighed and sat down. “It’s hopeless.”
As she looked up at the top of the basket, a Transformer’s backpack passed.
“That’s it! We’ll transform!” she said. “We’ll feel braver together.”
The candies nodded. “Let’s try.”
Lolly directed as they all smooshed, squished, and stuck together into one big Candybot.
With new-found strength, Candybot climbed easily to the top of the trash can and flexed its robo-biceps. “Who’s ready to party?”
What a cute story, Ellen! A Candybot! That’s going to be some party!
Thanks so much!
Love the line, “Look what happened to Cookie!” Thanks for the laughs Ellen.
What a concept! Fun visual.
Clever! Children would love this story.
Oh my! Truly creative! That was fun to read! 😄
Ahhh…so Creative!!! 🙂
Great teamwork! Love it! Good luck!
I love how they all “smooshed, squished, and stuck together into one big Candybot.” Such a creative solution that kids would love!! I think you’re ready to party with this story–well done!
An Otter Love Story– 214 words
by: Kristy Roser Nuttall
http://www.kristynuttall.com/blog-1/valentiny-contest-entry-an-otter-love-story
Of all the sea otters in the sea, Oliver liked Ella.
Actually, he like liked Ella.
But he felt too shy to tell her.
When he saw her, the only thing he could think to say to her was,
“Tag–you’re it!”
So he left her little gifts in secret.
Colorful sea urchins.
Tasty mussels.
Crunchy crabs.
Ella wondered who was leaving her these delicious gifts, but Oliver never signed his name.
Then on Valentine’s Day, Oliver wanted to do something big.
Something bold.
Something brave.
He stared at the pile of clam shells in front of him and got an idea.
He wrote a note on one of the shells and swam it over to Ella.
But when he got there, he froze.
What if Ella didn’t like like him back?
What if she laughed at his Valentine?
Then Oliver saw her smile, and his shy thoughts melted away into one big bold thought.
I’m a brave otter.
After all, he had played tag, delivered gifts, written a Valentine note, and now he just had to . . .
“Ella, you make my heart smile like no otter. Will you be my Valentine?”
Ella took a deep breath and said,
“YES!”
Of all the sea otters in the sea, Ella and Oliver like liked each other best.
Such a delightful story! Love the premise, Oliver’s big bold thought, and the wordplay.
Thanks Sarah!! Think bold right?
You had me at “otter”! 🙂
Yep, the world needs more otter stories!
I really like liked this heartwarming, lovable story!
Awww, thank you!!!
So cute! The love “Ella, you make my heart smile like no OTTER!” Very creative:)
That’s my favorite line too! Thanks for reading!
Ahhh a perfect love story! ❤
Thank you!!! There need to be more otter love stories out in the world right?
I love otters. They are adorable, so what better characters for a sweet Valentine’s story. Well done!
Thanks! They really are ridiculously adorable–I love them too!
Very cute! I can picture them holding their otter hands while floating around.
Right?! That’s one of my favorite otter facts–I think it’s so cool that they hold hands to keep from floating away from each other.
Oooh, word play makes *me* “smile like no otter”! Nice work!
“Like liked” That’s wonderful! 😍
Oh my gosh! So cute! Love: Something big! Something bold! Something brave!
And “Of all the sea otters in the sea …” – just love that!
Such a sweet and clever story!
This is otterly adorable! 🙂
Thanks Audrey! Otterly adorable is what I’m going for!!
So sweet! I’m sure EVERYONE can relate to how Oliver feels about Ella. Like liking someone is kind of a big deal! Haha! Adorable! Good luck to you!
Yep–when you like LIKE someone, it really is a big deal!
So cute. Love the last line, Ella and Oliver like liked each other best. Good luck!
Thanks Nancy!!! I love imagining the otterly cute illustrations.
This takes the cupcake! I love how Leroy embraces his true self in this wise, witty, and whimsical poem.
FLORET AND THE FONDUE – 213 words by Ashley Sierra
Floret drooped.
“No fair! Why don’t I get to swim in the chocolate swimming pool like the Marshmallow Brothers, Banana, and the Strawberry Sisters? They get to have all the fun while I’m stuck here. Hmph.”
“Let’s take a dip, bros.”
“Woo-hoo! Banana bomb!”
“Smooth on our seedy skin.”
“I can’t take it anymore! I’m going in!”
Crrrracckk! Snap!
Floret broke herself free from the bunch.
She reached the edge of the counter.
She jumped!
And landed on the dining table when . . . slip!
“Of course Banana left his peel lying around! Ooff.”
Floret flopped on the floor.
“Great. Now what?”
RUFF! RUFF! RUFF!
“AAH!!! Oh, a balloon! I’m saved!”
Floret dodged the dog’s bite and clambered up the string. Higher. And higher. But . . .
“I’m too far away from the table. Great. Now what?”
MEOW. MEOW. MEOW.
“Not again!”
Floret swung out of the cat’s reach.
“This is . . . working!” She swung. And swung. Then let go of the string.
“GREAT! NOW WHAT?!?!?!!”
Boing.
“Muah. Muah. Thank you, you soft pink huggable teddy bear. I made it!”
Floret scrambled up the spoon.
“Chocolate and broccoli?” the others shouted.
“Floret Flop!”
SPLASH!
Floret emerged and heard a voice.
“Come try some chocolate fondue I made for Valentine’s Day. Let’s EAT!”
Floret froze.
“Uh, oh. Now what?”
This story makes me smile, Ashley! Love the title you choose, fun premise, and LOL ending.
Thanks Sarah!
Such a fun story that kept me guessing the whole way through!
Thank you for reading Armineh 😊!
Haha! I could picture the journey in my mind:) Fun ending!
Thanks for reading Colleen 😄.
Such a fun story! I could visualize everything and it certainly made me smile. Good luck!
I’m glad it made you smile 😃. I had fun writing it. Thank you for reading.
I like your story, Ashley! Good luck!
Thank you Elizabeth for reading!
Now that is an interesting mixture! And isn’t Floret aware that life is over after the dipping? LOL. Love the creative thought process.
Thanks Colleen!
What a unique idea for a Valentine story, Ashley! I was pulled along by the nonstop action until I made a screeching stop at your perfect ending. I could see this as a graphic novel–terrific!
Thank you for reading Jill! I did imagine this as a graphic novel when writing it. I’m not an illustrator, but I did do a little sketch of Floret to flesh out her personality. 🥦🍫
Such a fun fondue romp!!! Love your creativity!
Thanks Kristy! 😄
What an adventure! And now, I’m hungry! 😊
😄. Thank you for reading Ingrid!
Haha! Adorable. Floret is so determined! Love how this turned out, Ashley!
Thanks Shannon for all your help!
Fondue is so fun and a Valentine’s tradition for my sister’s family- chocolate broccoli- true kid appeal!
I remember having it at school in the 5th grade. So much fun! Thank you for reading!
Uh oh, now what? Floret is in a fix! Cute story! Good luck!
Yes, she is 😄. Thank you for reading Nancy!
Be Brave, Be Kind, Be My Valentine
Word Count – 210
By Susan E. Schipper
It’s tough to be brave, even if you are covered with 30,000 quills. Just ask me, Pauly the Prickly Porcupine. It is even tougher to find a Valentine. Who wants a hug if you will get stuck by quills? I’ll never be brave enough to find a Valentine. With a heavy sigh, I headed back to my tree.
Suddenly, I heard a sound, a whimper. Should I try to see if someone needs help? Noooo, I can’t help anyone, I’m t-t-too scared to try. Peeking around the tree, I saw a ball of black and white fur. I listened nervously. It was mumbling something in between its shivering, shaking and sniffling. “Valentine’s day is almost here and I’ll never have a special friend to share it with! Everyone thinks I’m stinky! Waaaa!”
Then, I remembered something my mama told me, “If you do something kind or say something nice, you’ll make someone happy take my advice!” Trembling, I approached. H-h-hi! I’m Pauly, I’m looking for a Valentine, but I have quills. The furball looked at me and replied, “I-I’m Sam” and sometimes I make a stinky smell!!
Guess what!! We had the greatest Valentine ever…because I learned the best thing to do is be the bravest, kindest, most marvelous you!
Pauly and Sam, the perfect friends! I love a story of acceptance:)
Thanks so much! 😊
Very sweet – and stinky – and prickly. A match made in heaven!
Thanks so much , Colleen!
Beautiful advice wrapped in a sweet story!
So happy you enjoyed reading this 😊!
Am ingenious modern-day fable. Your story conveys such a wonderful message about reaching out to others and making connections.
Great intro line! Glad Pauly and Sam found one another!
Best line is his quote from his mama, If you do something kind or say something nice, you’ll make someone happy, take my advice! So glad Pauly and Sam found they could be friends. Good luck!
CUPID’S BOOTY CAMP FOR BABYBOO (214 words)
By Ally Enz
It was Valentine’s Day, and Cupid awoke with a nasty diaper rash.
One too many juice boxes before bed.
He flung off his soaked diaper, twisting around to get a better look in the mirror.
“These cheeks are too chapped for flying!” Cupid cried. “Who’s on backup duty?”
He hastily scanned his list.
‘Babyboo!” he called. She appeared at once.
“B-but I’m brand new!”
Heart racing, hands trembling, Babyboo took the wings, bow, and quiver of golden arrows
from Cupid.
“Who . . . Wh-where . . .?”
Cupid shrugged, powdering his delicate tush. “Just have fun with it. I don’t even aim,
really!”
Unlike Cupid, Babyboo wasn’t given unlimited arrows. Or second chances.
She had to save Valentine’s Day!
Babyboo worked tirelessly, shooting golden arrows into the most hardened of hearts.
As the day wore on, she frowned at the nearly empty quiver. Would there be enough?
Soon, only a single arrow remained.
Babyboo’s heart sunk. What more could she do?
Then, she saw it.
Love! Pouring from people who hadn’t even been targeted by the arrows!
It was contagious!
Babyboo leapt up, drew back the bow, took careful aim . . . and released her final arrow.
WHOOOOOSH!
Straight to the moon!
A zillion little arrows of light exploded like shooting stars.
The entire world was blanketed with love.
Bravo, Babyboo!
Love Cupid’s attitude and Babyboo’s quick and clever thinking!
If only the entire world was blanketed with love! Wouldn’t that be lovely? What a nice story!
Bravo, indeed! Sweet story. ❤
This gave me that “Awww…” feeling at the end. So sweet!
I love the fact Cupid has a diaper rash. So funny! And thank goodness Babyboo came to the rescue. ❤
This would make an excellent animated short! Very fun!
Funny take on Cupid 🙂
I LOVE Cupid with a diaper rash- too funny. Great visual ending, too. Good luck!
I read this aloud to my littles and we were all delighted by it. Such a fun premise and sweet ending. And that hilarious title!!
Great imagination and the shower of love. Good luck!
It takes a lot for a little brother to give his sister who could read his last piece of chocolate. That is bravery and loads of love!
Doing the unexpected to be true to yourself:) “Some lions are tougher and cooler, I am who I am, and I promise this land a kind and compassionate ruler.” Really nice:)
PLAYING TO WIN — 214 words
By Norah Colvin
https://norahcolvin.com/2021/02/13/playing-to-win-valentiny-contest-entry/
On one side of the arena, Prince Fergal raised his sword. “I am the bravest of the brave, the strongest of the strong. No one can defeat me.”
On the opposite side, Princess Valentina raised her sword. “I am the bravest of the brave, the strongest of the strong. No one can defeat me. I challenge you to a duel.”
“I am Fearless Fergal!”
“I am Valiant Valentina!”
“Charge!”
The riders kicked their hobby horses into action. Across the arena they galloped, swords drawn, ready for mortal combat.
As they neared the centre of the arena, Fearless Fergal’s horse stumbled, flinging him to the ground.
“Ouch!” he cried, clasping an elbow.
The spectators held their breath. What would Valentina do? Would she drive her sword home and declare herself the victor? Would she insist that Fergal be her faithful follower forever more? Was there any way Fergal could claim victory?
Fergal didn’t look so fearless clutching his arm and rocking from side to side.
Valentina released her sword and leapt from her steed. She knelt beside him.
“Are you okay, Fergal?” she asked.
The spectators swarmed.
Fergal nodded. “It’s just a little graze.”
“Shall we go again?” Valentina asked.
“Another day. Let’s play something else now.”
The contest done. The crowd dispersed. Friendship won.
I love your last line! It sums it up nicely. Good luck with your story, Norah!
Thank you, Colleen. Good luck with yours too. 🙂
Princess with a sword — a fresh twist on a classic setting!
Thank you for reading, Kelsey. 🙂
I really liked the development of this story and the imagination your characters (you) showed. Well done!
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Colleen. Appreciated. 🙂
I like all your active verbs in this and friendship reigning champion!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I always like it when friendship rules.
Friendship won! Love that!
Thank you, Ingrid. 🙂
Some things are more important than winning…like friendship!! Nice story!
Thank you. I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Judy.
Very sweet story. Love the visual of the hobby horse charge.
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Love the fun characters and sweet message.
Thank you, Sarah. 🙂
This is so cute. Love the names and the last line! Good luck!
Thank you so much, Nancy. Good luck to you too if you’ve entered. There are quite a few prizes in this contest. Like in my story, there can be more than one winner. 🙂
Actually, I’ve donated a prize! A signed copy of my picture book, Curiosity’s Discovery. The original story won 4th place in last year’s Valentiny.
SUPER SPECIAL VALENTINE – 167 words
By Aundra Tomlins
http://bit.ly/37ccr5d
In Reji’s backpack was a super special valentine he had made just for her. It had unicorns (her favorite), dinosaurs (her second favorite), and, of course, hearts.
He was about to put it on her desk when the teacher called for circle time.
Reji watched her singing full volume about roses.
During art time he was tiptoeing over to give her the super special valentine but he spilled some paint.
Reji watched her cut the red, pink, and purple papers into beautiful hearts.
After lunch, he crept towards her, super special valentine in hand, but she ran to the sandbox.
Reji watched her build a perfect sandcastle.
Now, it was almost pick up time.
He took a deep breath and charged over.
“Abbie!” He thrust his hand at her. “For you.”
Her eyes jumped between the valentine and Reji.
“Thanks.” She blushed. “This for you, Reji.”
It had cars (his favorite), trains (his second favorite), and, of course, hearts.
“Thanks.”
It was a super special Valentine’s Day.
It’s so cute that they know each others favorite things! Nice story!
Thank you!
Super sweet! ❤
I just adore how you use the valentine details to show how well the characters know (and like) each other. The setting and exchange is so realistic! Good luck, Aundra 🙂
Thanks so much!
Such a sweet story! Love the school setting.
The ending is so sweet! Good luck!
I am so glad Reji was able to deliver his special Valentine – and then get one in return. I also like how both Valentines included a first favorite, a second favorite, and of course, hearts. Well done.
We all know preschoolers have their valued second favorite! Thank you!
But we wouldn’t all think to articulate that in a story.
That would be a super special day! Very sweet!
How wonderful to personalize their Valentines. So visual. Well done.
Awwww, the first and second favorites are a great touch!
Very sweet. So fun that they know each other’s favorite things and put them in the valentines. Good luck!
How wonderful when everyone cheers the success of another.
A BRAVE CHANGE OF HEART- 214 words
By Amy Nicolai
Maybe they’ll be my friends after I give them these, Luna thought as she sprinkled glitter onto Valentine’s cards. She taped a lollipop to each heart and went to bed.
The next day at school, Luna took a deep breath and walked up to Clara and Elyse.
“I made you special Valentine’s Day cards,” Luna said.
“I don’t like lollipops,” Clara said.
“I don’t want it,” Elyse said.
Luna’s face felt hot, and her eyes watered. She crumpled up the cards and threw them away.
During lunch, Luna tried not to think about the cards anymore, even though it was hard.
“Can I sit with you?” Luna asked the girls.
“No room,” Clara said as she put her lunchbox on the empty chair next to her.
Elyse snickered.
Luna sat alone.
During recess, Luna tried to give Clara and Elyse her jump rope, but they ran away. She started chasing behind to give them the chocolates she’d saved from lunch. She just had to find the right thing that would make them like her.
Luna paused when she heard a group of kids laughing. She realized she’d rather be laughing with them instead of running after the girls who made her feel so bad.
So, she decided to stop chasing and let them go.
Good riddance to those mean girls! I want to give Luna a hug!
Aw, this story makes me sad for poor Luna and happy with her brave change of heart– great choice on the title.
Go Luna! Hopefully she learned this lesson well in elementary school. It will save her lots of heartache later. 👍
I sure hope Luna finds children who will appreciate her. Those girls were so mean!
Ugh, those meanies. Glad Luna had the self discovery and change of heart – before losing the chocolate! 😉
Oh, you made long to give Luna a hug, but she figured it out for herself. Life is to short to worry about mean girls. Good luck!
SARLA ASKS A QUESTION – 213
By Sandhya Acharya
https://www.sandhyaacharya.com/sarla-asks-a-question-entry-for-valentiny-2021/
When Sarla moved to her new home, she had questions about so many things –
autumn,
snowflakes,
canyons,
earthquakes.
She thought she would find the answers at school.
But when she tried to ask,
the questions got all muddled,
and jumbled,
and twisted into a tight ball inside her.
So Sarla sat at an empty lunch table
and sketched.
She sketched parrots from her old home,
the rickshaw she took to school,
The crowds at the mela,
Nani’s shawl.
Until –
Hideyo stopped by.
Hideyo was the ‘new-kid’ before Sarla.
He showed Sarla his sketches –
pink blossoms on cherry trees,
his old bike,
crowds at a snow festival,
his sobo’s hairpin.
There were newer sketches too –
a sea of sunlit ginko trees,
a bridge hugging the clouds,
a packed farmers market.
a butterfly.
The bell rang.
Hideyo got up to leave.
Sarla felt a tug inside.
A new question
wiggled,
and jiggled,
and struggled
to come out.
Sarla stood up.
“Hideyo,” she called out, “Will you be my friend?”
Hideyo smiled, “Yes!”
They walked together.
Autumn,
snowflakes,
canyons,
earthquakes –
Sarla got all her questions answered.
Later,
Hideyo had questions too,
as did Lily,
and Mike,
and everyone else.
Sarla felt as light as a bird.
She made lots of friends,
and never stopped asking questions.
Powerful themes of friendship and bravely moving forward in a new place, and wonderful visuals!
Thanks!
What a beautiful sketch book that would be! What a sweet story, Sandhya!
Thank you for reading!
What a wonderful tale ❤
Thank you!
Questions can help a lot when it comes to making friends. Sweet story!
Absolutely! Thanks for reading
I love that they found a connection through their sketches. Beautiful
Thank you for reading!
The power of art and of friendship. I do love how art is a universal language.
Thank you for reading!
This is beautiful! Thanks for sharing, Sarla.
*This is beautiful! Thanks for sharing Sarla’s story with us, Sandhya.
Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it
This is beautiful and such lyrical parts. I’m glad Sarla never stopped asking questions. Good luck!
A Trail of Ketchup and Mustard – 214 words
by MeiLin Chan
Romeow the mouse took one look at Juliet’s shiny fur and perfect ears and knew he was in love. In his best suit and with the best cheese, he came to her house to ask her out on a date.
When the door opened, he almost dropped his cheese. Juliet wasn’t alone. Nor was she standing.
Juliet was being dangled by her tail by a big Siamese cat.
“You’re interrupting my lunch!” the cat said in a gruff voice.
“You… You can’t eat her!” Romeow said, tail shaking. “Don’t you want some cheese instead?”
“I want meat!” the cat said, drool pooling. “Fresh juicy meat of a mouse.”
Romeow wanted to flee but he couldn’t bear the thought of living without Juliet.
“Let her go!” Romeow ripped off his suit to show his big belly. “Eat me instead, I’m fatter and juicier.”
The cat released her and scooped up Romeow, and Juliet dashed into the garden.
The cat slathered Romeow with ketchup and mustard and was about to eat when Juliet leaped in through the window.
“Wait!” Juliet said. “You need flowers on your table!”
Out came a large bouquet of catnip.
As the cat dived for the catnip, Romeow and Juliet scurried away, hand in hand in a trail of ketchup and mustard.
Ha ha ha! Two stories of Romeo and Juliet in a row and both with mice as the protagonists! I love their ingenuity.
I enjoyed this story so much! Romeow (great name!) ready to sacrifice himself and Juliet coming up with a plan to distract the cat and save Romeow! So funny that you have them leaving “in a trail of ketchup and mustard!”
How would have thought you could put ketchup, mustard and catnip in a Valentines story? Very creative! 😄
Romeow!!! Fantastic tail er tale! 🙂
Romeow made me laugh each time I read it! Brave mice!
Wow! Quite a story. Glad the mice were such quick thinkers. Good luck!
Love Leroy! ❤
Juliet and Romeo: Verona’s Valentine’s Celebration – 213 Words
By, Cristina Raymer
Juliet and the mice were busy decorating the piazza. Juliet strung, hung, and sprinkled with glee for tonight was her sweetheart Romeo’s favorite time of year: Verona’s Valentine’s Celebration.
Everything was going exactly as planned until…
Tybalt, the Prince of Cats, arrived.
Tybalt stomped.
Tybalt smashed.
Tybalt snapped.
“Quick, to the garden!” Juliet cried. She reached for her sword, but stopped. She was no match against the fierce feline. Disheartened, she hid under a medlar tree.
A shadow emerged on the balcony above her. A mouse appeared shining brighter than the sun. Romeo!
Romeo watched as Tybalt destroyed. “NOOOO!” Romeo began to cry.
Juliet wiggled her whiskers. She could not let Romeo’s favorite holiday be ruined.
Standing tall, Juliet strode into the piazza and shouted, “Tybalt, you villain, turn and draw!”
“A little pip-squeak. Let’s tango!” Tybalt hissed.
Juliet took her stance and they began to dance.
ZING!
ZANG!
ZAP!
Tybalt’s sword flew. Juliet had him pinned.
“I banish you,” Juliet said. “You must leave Verona at once!”
Tybalt fled in terror.
“Our hero!” The mice cheered.
That night, the piazza sparkled with love. Romeo arrived with a golden statue of Juliet. He placed it in the center of the square.
“For the bravest mouse in Verona,” he said. “Happy Valentine’s Day, Juliet.”
I love your take on Romeo and Juliet! This is wonderful, Cristina.
That was fun! Shakespeare would be proud of Juliet!
Juliet for the win! Nice job, Cristina! So creative~
I love how brave mouse Juliet is!
And Romeo’s gift made me laugh, it’s cute.
This is such a fun read, and I love that Juliet saves the day!
This is so much fun! “Tybalt, the Prince of Cats” made me smile, and I love how Romeo was the one up on the balcony in your story.
I love how Juliet was the hero! Such a cute story!
Juliet saves the day! A much better ending than the original if you ask me. 😉
Great take on the “original ” story!!
To the bravest mouse in all of Verona! Love it! Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ISABEL
A Little Atom
Isabel Cruz Rodriguez
A tiny little atom
Was floating around space
It bumped into another
And then became my face.
It formed into my eyes and mouth
And then gave me a nose
While other tiny atoms
Helped feed me through a hose.
Some say I came from Science
Others say I came from God
The contrast in their versions
Can differ miles apart.
No matter what they tell me
I know my life did start
From a tiny little atom
That was in my mother’s heart.
There’s no debate on how beautiful this is, Isabel! “From a tiny little atom, that was in my mother’s heart.” It really says it all!
Oh that ending!
🥰
Shivers! Great ending!
Very touching. Love the last line. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ISABEL
Isabel Cruz Rodriguez
OSCAR OCTOPUS
PLANTS A GARDEN
Oscar Octopus loves Angelina Angelfish.
Oscar thinks Angelina is the most beautiful sea life in the reef.
He wants to invite Angelina to a movie at the Shipwreck Theatre.
But…..he’s too shy to ask.
Oscar controls the reef traffic.
He waves a STOP sign so the school of fish can go to class.
Angelina swims by on her way to work.
Oscar waves hello with one arm and covers his head with the others.
Angelina swims by on her way home.
She smiles at Oscar waving good-bye with one arm and covering his head with the others.
Oscar sits on his idea rock….
…and thinks.
No idea comes to his big octopus head.
Then, Oscar hears voices…..
“I planted a garden of flowers for you,” a boy says.
“They’re so beautiful!”
“Would you like to see a movie?”
“Yes. Thank you for asking.”
Oscar gets an idea.
He rushes to the Reef Depot for supplies.
Using all his arms, Oscar digs….fertilizes….seeds….and waters.
Soon his garden has colorful blooms.
On Valentine’s Day Oscar takes the blooms to Angelina’s shop.
“I planted a garden of flowers for you,” Oscar says.
“They’re so beautiful!”
“Would you like to see a movie?”
“Yes. Thank you for asking.”
They leave Angelina’s Flower Shop and swim off to the movies.
Oscar’s process sounds a lot like the writer’s process. Sometimes sitting on the idea rock leaves us empty-headed, but then we hear a passing conversation and magic strikes!
I like that your characters are an octopus and an angelfish. Well done!
Well said, Colleen! I agree;)
Isabel, I loved the visual I got for both Oscar directing traffic and also for his idea rock! Would love to see what illustrations would go with it.
Oscar did great taking that advice to heart.
Oh, I love the thinking rock! 🙂
I love that Oscar’s garden wins Angelina’s heart. Such a visual story. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ROBERTA
My Bestest friend – 212 words
by Roberta Abussi
My Bestest Friend
This is Livia, you can always find her in the quietest corner of the school, writing on her precious Diary.
This morning Livia has something special to write about: Eli left a Valentine’s card on her desk… now WHAT?
“Dear Diary,
I found Eli’s Valentine’s card, but you know how I feel about him. He is the most perfect, BESTEST, dearest friend I will ever have… but just a friend!
What is the right way to tell him so? Should I argue with him? Or… stop talking to him? Or… give him a card back just not to hurt him?
I want to go home! Can I hide till the end of the day? My stomach is hurting; I could call mom and go home!
I don’t want to lose him. He is important to me. I need to find a solution, RIGHT NOW!”
It’s the end of the day, and Livia is back to her Diary.
“Dear Diary,
I found a solution, at last! I made a Frientine’s Day card and I organized the perfect date to celebrate our friendship. What’s best than popcorn, a warm blanket and a funny movie with the most perfect, BESTEST, dearest friend after all?
Eli loved it, and we’ll turn it into our special tradition!”
I like your Dear Diary format. It is a fun way to read how the relationship develops.
Her problem is real, Roberta! I like that you used the diary format and found a solution for Livia to keep her friendship with Eli, which means so much to her. Nice!
That kind of worrying resonates right there for the 10-12 crowd, I love her solution – especially that it’s gosh to be a reoccurring thing!
The world needs more stories that end in friendship. Well done!
I’m so glad she found a way to stay friends. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ROBERTA
My every-day-Valentine – 213 words
by Roberta Abussi
My every-day-Valentine
Clara and Alex lived in the same town and went to the same school.
When Clara was around, Alex couldn’t speak, and the skin on his cheeks felt steaming hot.
Likewise, Clara couldn’t speak when Alex was around and she felt bubbles in her stomach.
“This year it’ll be different!” Clara said to her best friend Linda, while looking at Alex from across the yard. “I’ll finally tell him how I feel about him!”
“Why this year?” Linda asked.
“Because we’re meant to be together!” Clara said.
Similarly, from across the yard, “this year it’ll be different! I’ll finally tell her how I feel about her!” Alex told his best friend Ian.
Valentine’s Day arrived and neither Clara nor Alex made a move. Everybody was exchanging cards and making plans, all but Clara and Alex.
That night, they couldn’t sleep. Another year would go by, and they couldn’t be together.
Clara tinkered all night. The next morning at school, she approached Alex. Silently and shakingly she gave him the card.
“I know I’m late. But when you love someone, every day is Valentine’s Day. Would you be my every-day- Valentine?” Alex read aloud, his voice trembling.
They held hands for the very first time, happy to celebrate with the best ice-cream in town.
I love that line, “Because we’re meant to be together.” And thank goodness they finally made it happen. ❤
You’ve really captured the feelings well for Clara and Alex. I love “But when you love someone, every day is Valentine’s Day.” I enjoyed this story, Roberta!
“Every day valentine” that’s so sweet.
My favorite part is “Every day Valentine”! 💕
Aww, sweet first love. Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR RACHEL
Sarah’s Valentines
Rachel Zimmerman Brachman
Sarah put on her favorite red sweatshirt and placed 25 valentines in her backpack. She harnessed her guide dog, Scruffy, and together they bravely walked to school for the first time since her eye surgery.
“Happy Valentine’s Day, Sarah! It’s time to hand out your valentines,” said her teacher, Mrs. Hutchins.
The box on Sarah’s desk filled with cards. She sat quietly while her friends read their valentines, giggling to themselves.
Mrs. Hutchins approached Sarah’s desk. “We have a surprise for you, Sarah. The whole class worked on it together.” She gave Sarah a gigantic card, covered in words made of puffy paint. Sarah ran her fingers over the raised letters. ‘Happy Valentine’s Day, Sarah!’ she read. “Thank you so much!”
“Next year, we’ll make valentine cards for you in braille. The whole class wants to learn it, so you can read what they write to you. They’re calling it ‘Sarah’s Secret Code.’ What do you think?”
“Wow! They would do that for me? That’s the best valentine ever!” Sarah said.
That afternoon, Sarah showed her mom the box of cards she received. Sarah’s mom read her the valentines.
“Hey, there’s a card in the box for Scruffy!”
“Really? What does it say?” Sarah asked.
“It says, ‘Puppy Love’. How perfect!”
“Woof!” barked Scruffy.
Aww! I love how the class is going to learn braille and they call it Sarah’s Secret Code.
These are the kinds of stories we need during this trying time. Her class not only welcome her back with the puffy paint card, but they’ve already devised a plan to make her feel more comfortable by planning on learning braille. The card for Scruffy tops it off nicely!
Thats so wonderful how they are going to learn Braille and yet still made sure to include her in the meantime.
Well done!
Heartwarming!
Lovely. I actually got chills when I read this. Such a sweet story.
It’s so nice that her class would learn braille just for her. So sweet. Good luck!
I could feel the love…and bravery! Such a cute story, Jen. Good luck!
Thank you, Rose!
This made me giggle! Such a fun story, Jen!
Lemur in Love – 170 words
by Sarah McDermott
Trevor is an AYE-AYE and he’s ready for some love.
But sadly he’s so SHY-SHY, hiding in the leaves above.
He’s got his eyes on Rita, it feels more than just a whim.
But what if she won’t love a scruffy GUY-GUY just like him?
Trevor knows that AYE-AYEs aren’t the handsomest of males.
He gives a great big SIGH-SIGH as he polishes his nails.
But maybe looks aren’t everything, he needs to make her see
The fluffy little TIE-TIE wearing GUY-GUY up the tree.
Trevor must impress her but an AYE-AYE’s skills are few.
He gives a mournful CRY-CRY. He just hasn’t got a clue.
But then a lightbulb moment, Trevor’s great at French cuisine!
He’ll bake a splendid PIE-PIE, soon she’ll be his jungle queen!
Trevor looks up HIGH-HIGH where the moon is shining clear.
He makes his way to Rita, trying hard to show no fear.
He offers her his PIE-PIE, Rita smiles then takes a bite
And hearts begin to FLY-FLY on this very special night.
I agree Aye-aye’s are not very attractive creatures! Great job playing with the vowel sounds as well as the other rhymes.
Bless them! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback 🙂
This is adorable!
Love how you incorporated all the Aye-aye rhymes inside the poem.
And, yes, pie is the best way to celebrate Valentine’s Day.
Absolutely! And thank you for the lovely feedback 🙂
I love this! (Never even heard of an AYE-AYE until now!) Clever and a sweet story.
Neither had I, until I started some research! Thank you for your lovely feedback 🙂
This is excellent! I love your use of rhyme and word play. ❤️❣️
Thank you so much! It’s the first time I’ve done anything like this, so your kind words mean a lot 🙂
You made the Finals! On your first time! Congratulations and good luck!😃
So creative!! Adorable valentine piece!
Thank you so much! 🙂
Very clever. I like it! With that I will say BYE-BYE and good luck!
Thank you! That made me giggle! 🙂
A Cocoon of Love
by Jyoti Rajan Gopal
Coiled in a canopy
Cream colored chevrons
Camouflaging, concealing . . .
Cobra catches sight of cobra
and cruises down to charm.
A competitor?
Courage!
Cobra confronts and carnivores clash.
Combat!
Creatures scurry!
Crushed challenger creeps away.
Cobra courts cobra
and soon. . .
They create a nest of leaves,
Cozy, comfortable,
A cocoon of love,
For a clutch of eggs.
Mama cobra curls and covers.
Papa cobra circles, a sentinel.
Crack… crack…
Little cobras hatch.
And a cobra family,
Chevrons camouflaging, concealing
Coils in the canopy.
The End
Beautiful language, Jyoti! So well written! All of those hard “c”s capture the fierce side of the cobra, and the soft ones bring to mind hissing. I love that even a creature we often think of as frightening can have a “cocoon of love.”
Thank you so much!
Captivating! 🙂
Wow! Great use of alliteration.
The rhythm rolls so well when read out loud.
Thank you for reading!
A cobra love story! How Creative! “C” what I did there? 😉
Chuckle, chortle ! So clever 🙂
Cobra romance! Great job!
Great job with your alliterative language.
Very well done! Good luck!
Eggbert (word count: 214)
Charlie Bown
https://authorcharliebown.com/2021/02/13/eggbert/
@CharlieDBown
Eggbert was in the wrong place. He was meant to be on the red shelf with the hearts but had somehow ended up here, with the early Easter eggs. Perhaps someone was having a joke he’d thought, watching all the other teddies line themselves up ready to be chosen by loved-up customers.
Then Eggbert saw his valentine – bouncing up and down in the trolley, smiling and pointing at him.
“That’s for Easter,” the little person’s big person said, “It’s too early for Easter!”
Eggbert’s heart sank into his fluffy feet. As his little person rounded the corner, Eggbert heard him howl with sadness and Eggbert knew what he had to do. As he moved, the Easter chicks below chirped with horror – “You can’t leave the shelf! It’s too dangerous!” But Eggbert was determined; he knew where he belonged.
Teddies are not natural ninjas, especially ones as round as Eggbert, but that day Eggbert was fired up with love as he jumped over pineapples, raced along toilet paper, dived through cheese and finally caught up with his valentine at the till. With the stealth of an egg and the heart of a bear, Eggbert rolled into the trolley, straight into the arms of his valentine, who giggled and cooed, cuddling him all the way home.
Way to roll Eggbert!!
🙂 Thank you for reading!!
What a cute story, Charlie! Eggbert was determined and his reward was finding his Valentine!
Thank you so much! 🙂
It’s an adventure love story! Very fun!
Thank you for reading 🙂
Fun! I especially enjoyed the beginning.
What an action-packed story! Eggbert has skills! Love this!
Eggbert was excellent! Very cute story. Good luck!
Very cute, I was rooting for Eggbert to make it to his Valentine.
A VALENTINE FOR MOM – wc 191
Patricia Martin
@framilymedicine
Every morning, Mom gives me my inhaler.
Shoooooop! Shoooooop!
I breathe in some magic dust, wrestle my backpack on, and race outside.
Without the magic dust, Mom says my lungs sound like a bike with squeaky brakes.
In art class, Mrs. Rosario passes out supplies to make valentines for our moms and dads.
I trade with Tonya at my table. All of my pink and red paper for all of her white paper.
I sneak to the front of the art room and fill my pockets with tissues.
At my table, I rip the tissues into a billion pieces.
Whoooosh! Whooosh! Whooosh!
I trim the white paper in to the perfect shape, round and straight and pointy in all the right places.
I glue the tissue bits all over the paper so that my valentine starts to look like a cloud.
“What an unusual valentine! Can you tell us more about it?” Mrs. Rosario asks.
“These are my lungs!” I say. I sprinkle silver glitter on top of the tissues, “And this is magic dust!”
Mrs. Rosario smiles, but she looks confused.
“Don’t worry,” I whisper, “My mom will love it.”
Love the relationship between mother and child. ❤
I love this from the shoop, shoop magic dust to the sprinkling silver glitter! So well done!
How sweet! He’s right; his mom will love it!
I love the imagery of the inhaler as magic dust and that the kid wants to make sure to thank mom for taking care of them.
That’s a truly unique take on a Valentine. I’m assuming it close to home? It certainly hits home. Well done.
Aww, so sweet. Love the idea of magic dust. Good luck!
No ‘yolk’, Eggbert is all love! ❤
Egg-cellent! Thank you for reading!!
Becca’s Brave Hearts — 67 words
An acrostic by Marty Bellis
Becca drew and wrote and sent
Red valentines by the dozens.
All for people she didn’t know –
Valiant, courageous, every one,
Each carrying on in their own unique way.
Her heroes for their selfless acts.
Each simply doing their job, helping others.
Asking nothing in return,
Reinforcing her belief in the power of love
Take care, she wrote. Be safe. God bless.
Sent with thanks, from Becca
At only 67 words you were able to create a vision of a child thanking health care workers, or first responders, or (fill in the blank). I like that you left it open to interpretation. I enjoyed this, Marty:)
Thank you so much, Colleen. It started out as a tribute to our troops but I realized how many others it applied to as well this past year. There are so many ‘brave hearts’ in this world. Isn’t it amazing?! And wonderful 🙂
Aww, great job getting all that feeling into the acrostic.
Thank you, Katie. I love playing with different forms and structures. Susanna’s contests always inspire me to try something new.
This is a wonderful story for this year in particular ❣️
I couldn’t agree more, Ingrid! Thank you so much for your comment.
Such a loving message in just a few words. Great job! Good luck!
Thanks for your comments, Nancy! It was a fun one to write.
A fun title and premise, with lots of humor. Good luck!
Thanks, Kelsey- you, too!