⭐️Deck the Halls! ⭐️ Light the menorah! ⭐️ Fill the Kikombe cha Umoja! ⭐️
It’s time for . . .
The 11th Annual Holiday Writing Contest

~ for children’s writers ~
The Contest: Write a children’s holiday story (children here defined as age 12 and under) about a Holiday Contest!
Your contest can be anything you want! Baking, wrapping, decorating (tree or home), raising money or collecting gifts for those in need, ice skating, sledding, caroling, fancy dress, snowman or fort building. . . sky’s the limit! But it must be about a holiday contest!
Your story may be poetry or prose, silly or serious or sweet, religious or not, based on Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Winter Solstice, New Year’s or whatever you celebrate during the Holiday Season, but is not to exceed 250 words (I know! So much freedom after the Halloweensie Contest 😊 ) (It can be as short as you like (the judges will be grateful 😊 , you are welcome and encouraged to write shorter, but no more than 250! Title not included in word count.) The field is wide open! Have fun! The more creative the better! No illustration notes please. (And yes, if you feel compelled to submit more than one entry you may, just remember you’re competing against yourself!)
Post: Your entry should be posted between right now this very second and Thursday December 9th at 11:59 PM EST, and must be posted below in the comment section of this post. All entries should include a title, byline (people always ask what this is – it means who the entry was written by, so, by Suzy Q. Writer or whoever 😊) and word count. You are welcome to also post your entries on your own blogs and include your blog address with your entry here if you’d like to encourage people to come visit your blog, but your entry must be posted in the comment section of this post or it will not be counted because we won’t see it. This post will remain up for your reading pleasure until I post the finalists. There will be no regular posts (Tuesday Debut, Would You Read It, or Perfect Picture Book) for the duration of the contest so everyone will have plenty of time to visit and enjoy. If you have trouble commenting, you can email your entry to me and I will post it for you. Please copy and paste your entry with word count and byline into the body of the email – NO ATTACHMENTS please.
The Judging: My lovely assistants and I will narrow down the entrants to approximately 12 finalists. In the interest of finishing up the contest in a timely fashion so everyone can go about their holidays, we will do our best to post the finalists here by Tuesday December 14th for you to vote on for a winner. (But it almost always seems to end up taking us longer. . . so it might be a day or two later.) The vote will be closed on Thursday December 16th at 5 PM EST. Whoever gets the most votes will be first and so on down to twelfth place (or wherever we place to), and the winners will be announced on Friday December 17th. (These dates are subject to adjustment if it takes the judges longer than we anticipate to get the judging completed.)
Judging criteria will be as follows:
- 1. Kid-appeal! – These stories are intended for a young audience (ages 12 and under), so we’re looking for stories that children will enjoy and relate to.
- 2. Holiday Contest! – the rules state a Holiday Contest story, so it must be crystal clear that the story is about a contest that in some way relates to Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Winter Solstice, New Year’s, or whatever seasonal winter holiday you choose. The story must center on the contest – the contest must not be just an offhand mention/reference in a story about something else.
- 3. Quality of story – entries must tell a story, including a main character of some kind and a true story arc even if it’s tiny 😊 Entries must not be merely descriptions or mood pieces.
- 4. Quality of Writing: check your spelling, grammar, punctuation etc. If you’re going to rhyme, give us your best 😊 Overall writing quality and use of language are also important. Please proofread!
- 5. Originality and creativity – because that is often what sets one story above another.
- 6. PLEASE FOLLOW THE DIRECTIONS! Large numbers of entries make it easy to cut entries that haven’t been entered as we asked.
The Prizes!: Oh! Such wonderful prizes! All I can say is, how lucky are we to be part of such a talented and generous community that offers such amazing prizes!
Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! 😊
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming or Non-rhyming, Fiction or Nonfiction) with written feedback AND a 30-minute Zoom Chat with children’s author Vivian Kirkfield, author of PIPPA’S PASSOVER PLATE (Holiday House, 2019), SWEET DREAMS, SARAH (Creston Books, 2019), FOUR OTTERS TOBOGGAN (Pomegranate, 2019), MAKING THEIR VOICES HEARD: THE INSPIRING FRIENDSHIP OF ELLA FITZGERALD AND MARILYN MONROE (Little Bee Books, 2020), FROM HERE TO THERE: INVENTIONS THAT CHANGED THE WAY THE WORLD MOVES (Clarion Books, 2021), and SHOW ME HOW! BUILD YOUR CHILD’S SELF-ESTEEM THROUGH READING, CRAFTING AND COOKING (MoneyPenny Press Ltd, 2010)

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming or Non-rhyming, Fiction or Nonfiction) with a recording of first read-through by children’s author and poet Sarah Meade, contributor to HOP TO IT: POEMS TO GET YOU MOVING (Pomelo Books, 2020!

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique/Zoom Chat (Non-rhyming) from children’s author Janie Reinart, author of WHEN WATER MAKES MUD: A STORY OF REFUGEE CHILDREN (Blue Whale Press, 2021)!

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming) PLUS Zoom Chat from developmental editor Lou Piccolo! Lou studied English Literature, creative writing and teaching at university in South Africa. After working as an EFL teacher in France for twenty years, she studied proofreading and editing before becoming a developmental editor of children’s and young adult’s literature for independent authors. She is a graduate of Renee LaTulippe’s Lyrical Language Lab – Punching Up Prose With Poetry course and Making Picture Book Magic, the in-house writer for Editions Entrefilet’s language-learning magazine ‘Go English Kids’ for children of 8-12 in France, and a traditionally published author of MG and YA fiction with Burlington Books.

⭐️ Connecting With School Librarians! Fabulous Opportunity for published or soon to be published authors! Winner’s Choice of either a Zoom or phone chat about how to connect with school librarians and get their ear or an Ask Me Anything Zoom or phone chat about K-8th grade author visits from a librarian’s POV from Kathy Halsey. Kathy Halsey is Storyteller Academy’s Community Manager and Ambassador. She enjoys writing picture books, humor, and nonfiction. Kathy’s active in SCBWI and blogs with other kid lit writers on the GROG. She serves on the Choose to Read Ohio Advisory Council and speaks at educational and literary conferences. Kathy’s a former K-12 school librarian and children’s bookseller. She writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month along with Keila Dawson.

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyme or Prose, fiction only) from children’s author Shelley Kinder! Shelley is the author of NOT SO SCARY JERRY (Spork 2017), THE MASTERPIECE (Spork 2018) and GOD AND ME AND THE SEA (Kregel Children’s Books, May 17, 2022)

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (written) PLUS 15 minute Zoom Chat (no nonfiction) from Cindy Williams Schrauben author of THIS COULD BE YOU (Cardinal Rule Press, April 1, 2022)!

⭐️ Zoom Visit to a classroom or to kids at home by children’s author Ellen Leventhal! Ellen is the author of DON’T EAT THE BLUEBONNETS (Spork, 2017), LOLA CAN’T LEAP (Spork, 2018), HAYFEST: A HOLIDAY QUEST (ABCs Press, 2010), and A FLOOD OF KINDNESS (WorthyKids, 2021)

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Heather Gale, author of HO’ONANI: HULA WARRIOR (Tundra Books, 2019) which was one of the New York Public Library’s Best Books for Kids 2019, one of the Ontario Library Association’s 2019 Top Ten Titles, Featured on the 2020 Rainbow Book List, Featured on the 2020 Rise: A Feminist Book Project List, and received a Booklist Starred Review!

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Maria Marshall! Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature fun for children. She’s a judge for the Cybils Awards and the #50PreciousWords competition. Four of her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes. The Picture Book Buzz Website Facebook Twitter Instagram

⭐️ A Reversible Handmade Christmas Stocking or Other Winter or Holiday-Themed Gift Bag from Karen Gebbia PLUS a Personalized Signed Copy of CURIOSITY’S DISCOVERY by Nancy Derey Riley to fill it!

⭐️ Personalized Signed Copy of either QUEEN OF PHYSICS:How Wu Chien Shiung Helped Unlock the Secrets of the Atom (Sterling Children’s Books 2019) or TWO BICYCLES IN BEIJING (Albert Whitman 2020) (Winner’s Choice!) by Teresa Robeson

PLUS!!!
a Personalized Signed Copy of either LISTEN (Simon & Schuster/Paula Wiseman Books 2021) or TWO DOGS ON A TRIKE (Harry N. Abrams 2020) (Winner’s Choice!) by Gabi Snyder

⭐️ Personalized Signed Copy of THE QUEEN AND THE FIRST CHRISTMAS TREE: Queen Charlotte’s Gift to England (Albert Whitman 2018) by Nancy Churnin PLUS a Digital Copy of THE STAR IN THE CHRISTMAS PLAY (Beaming Books 2018) by Lynne Marie

⭐️ Personalized Signed Copy of MY SCHOOL STINKS! (Philomel July 2021) by Becky Scharnhorst PLUS a Kindle or Audiobook Copy of either FUNNY JIMMY (AuthorHouse 2011) or THE HAUNTED HOUSE OF RIDDLES (Avid Readers Publishing Group 2011) (Winner’s Choice!) by Vanessa Rose Lee

⭐️ Winner’s Choice of 2 of the following 4 picture books, kindly donated by Dee Knabb!
- LILLYBELLE, A DAMSEL NOT IN DISTRESS by Joana Pastro
- ALMA AND HOW SHE GOT HER NAME by Juana Martinez-Neal (signed by the author/illustrator)
- TINY CREATURES by Nicola Davies (NF)
- PIPSQUEAKS, SLOWPOKES, AND STINKERS by Melissa Stewart (NF)

With so many great prizes up for grabs I hope there will be a lot of entries – the more the merrier! And you’ve still got a couple days to write, so you can squeeze in under the wire if you haven’t written yet. Feel free to spread the word to your writing friends as well. And your reading friends – parents, teachers, etc. The more people who read and enjoy your stories, the better!!!
Contest Entrants, remember you MUST post your entry in the comment section below and include title, byline, and word count.
Eager Readers – just go along the list of links below, click on them (they’ll take you directly to whichever story you click on), and enjoy the stories!
So let the Holiday Contest begin!
Happy Writing and Happy Holidays! 😊 ☃️ ✡️ ⭐️ ❄️ 🎄🕯🕎
I can’t wait to read your entries!!!
THE ENTRIES!
- It Takes A Forest – Lucretia Schafroth
- The Kelpie Challenge – Bonnie Kelso
- The Cookies Of Holiday Hollow – Royal Baysinger
- Elf Off The Shelf – Anne Lipton
- The Trolls: A Winter Tale – Royal Baysinger
- Upon A Winter Solstice – Royal Baysinger
- So You Think You Can Prance – Amy Leskowski
- The Festive Flying Race – Nicola Beach
- Birdie’s Song – Beth Stillborn
- The Holiday Homework – Sue Lancaster
- How Tiny Won A Seat On Santa’s Sleigh – Elizabeth Westra
- The Claus’ Candy Cane Contest – Susan Schipper
- He Knows If You’ve Been Bad Or Good – Colleen Murphy
- Olive, The Other Reindeer – Lindsay Moretti
- Go Green For Christmas – Margaret Zotkiewicz
- Tree Number Nine – Lindsey Hobson
- Christmas Boots – P.J. Purtee
- Ellarose’s Sweater – Marta Cutler
- A Fourth Grader’s Poster Problem – Jennifer Vose
- A Buggie Tradition – Kay Inglis
- Kendy And The Solstice Solo Show – Sarah Meade
- Elsie And The Christmas Comedy Contest – Sarah Meade
- The Better Elf On The Shelf – Molly Ippolito
- Ernie And The Science Fair – Deborah Foster
- Mr. Tweedy’s Christmas Trees – Colleen Fogarty
- Best Wrapped Surprise – Sara Dean
- Christmas Eve Ride Along Contest – Dawn Young
- The Christmas Tree Contest – Dorothy K. Kohrherr
- Alfredo Learns The Secret Of Greatness – Joan Leotta
- The Pretty Ugly Sweater – Pamela Swanson
- Jamie’s Holiday Surprise – Diana Sussman
- Katie’s Snow Creation – Marty B.
- The Tasty Treat Christmas Contest – Katie Brandyberry
- Santa’s Secret Contest – Linda Staszak
- Phoebe’s Snowperson – Kelly Clasen
- THAT’S Not A Christmas Cookie! – Vanessa Konoval
- Candy Pies – Sharon McCarthy
- Solstice Skaters – Allison Strick
- The Best Gift Ever – Pen Avey
- The Most Christmassy House – Jen MacGregor
- Candy Caribou – Steena Hernandez
- A Christmas Pickle Story – Daniella Kaufman-Schloss
- Shining Star – Sarah Hawklyn
- Grumpy Snow Pants – Stephanie Maksymiw
- The Best Reading Contest Of Winter, 1959 – Beth Schmelzer
- Playground Games – Colleen Dougherty
- Simply The Best – Nicole Loos Miller
- Bear’s Christmas Cookie – Marta Cutler
- Happy Everything! – Laura Barens
- Dancing With The Elves – Jill Lambert
- A Creature Was Stirring – Judy Sobanski
- The Monster On Christmas Eve – Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
- What Christmas Means To Me – Marty Findley
- A Miscalculation – Emily Durant
- Lily And The Winter Festival – Karen J Moore
- 2021 Monkey Merry Xmas – Shariffa Keshavjee
- The Ginger Friend House – Kelly Swemba
- Gingerbread House Extravaganza – Elaine D’Alessandro
- Parol: This Little Star Of Mine – Lynn Grace Wong
- Christmas Song – YauMei Chiang
- Reindeer Games – Tiffany Hanson
- The Cookie Contest Caper – Kelsey E. Gross
- The Clean-Out-The-Clutter Contest – Sarah Demarest Guthrie
- The Contest – Amanda Sherlock
- Asher’s Chanukiah – Dina Silverberg
- Best Hanukkah Ever! – Paul Kurtz
- Cinder-Latke – Paul Kurtz
- Bunny Claus – Donna Kurtz
- Jangle Shells – Donna Kurtz
- Spin – Cheryl Simon
- Fantastical Fairytown Christmas Snowflake Contest – Ellen Crosby
- The Winning Recipe – Judy Abelove Shemtob
- The Greatest Display Of All – Barbara Kimmel
- Sparky’s Wish – Ingrid Boydston
- The Night After Christmas – Abby N. Wooldridge
- The Claus’s Hawaiian Vacation – C. S. Boyll
- Gifts For Grandma – Cindy Sommer
- Keep Christmas Coming – Jeannette Suhr
- The Most Special Ornament – Timothy Hicks
- Santa’s Workshop Winners – Polly Owen
- Elfie Selfie Contest – Stephanie Henson
- The Great Holiday Bake Off – Jamie Donahoe
- Laughing All The Way – Sarah Hetu
- A Sack Full Of Presents – Patricia Nozell
- Fairy Tale Houses – Jim Chaize
- Christmas…By A Nose – Jesse Anna Bornemann
- Reindeer Sing…Are You Listening? – Katie Schwartz
- Christmas Carrots – Vashti Verbowski
- Being Santa Lucia – Cindy Greene
- Nun, Gimel, Hei, Shin – Who Will Win? – Stephanie Wildman
- ANDRÉS BLUE RIBBON – Carmen Castillo Gilbert
- The Chubby Bunny Champion – Alicia Meyers
- Up And Away! – Kristy Roser Nuttall
- Christmas Isn’t – Ingrid Boydston
- The Christmas Pirate – Julianna Kurtz
- Maryam’s Happy Persian Christmas – Shadi Kafi
- The Most Beautiful Snowflake Of All – Cassie Silva
- Fire And Ice – Jyn Hall
- The Santa Spectacle – Mary Cathering Amadu
- A Jarring Contest – Bru Benson
- Everything – Sandhya Acharya
- Similarity Despite Diversity – Eva Felder
- O Christmas Tree, O Christmas Tree – Becky Goodman
- Solstice Wars! – Phoebe Browning
- Gingerbread Surprise – JC Kelly
- Squirrels Christmas – Charlotte Boyer
- The Holiday Contest – Denise Seidman
- The Witch’s Gingerbread House – Lauri Meyers
- Elf Rivalry – Michelle S. Kennedy
- Dream Big, Little Pip! – Sally Yorke-Viney
- An Extraordinary Elf – Becky Kimbrough
- Jasmine Jingletoes And The Christmas Stocking Contest – Brenda Covert
- Let There Be (MORE!) Lights – Judy Carey Nevin
- Laughing All The Way – Samantha Gassman
It Takes a Forest
by Lucretia Schafroth
Birds twittered and tweeted with holiday glee
announcing the contest for “Best Christmas Tree.”
Just two days to fashion the forest’s top prize—
to serve as a beacon for Santa’s old eyes.
A clamor erupted when each critter heard
the challenge of where the tree judging’d occur.
Each masterpiece had to stand tall in the Square
for all to enjoy—and be seen from midair!
Fox fretted though sure he could find the best one,
“I simply can’t move it—I can’t get it done!”
“I’ll help you,” said Beaver, “‘cause I’m good at chopping—
but don’t think that I’m the ideal one for propping!”
Bear offered assistance to join for the win—
“That pine’s but a twig,” he exclaimed with a grin.
But clearly brute strength wasn’t all that it took—
‘cause even with Bear’s help, the tree swayed and shook.
“It’s easy to fix that,” the Badger declared.
“I’ll just get a stable foundation prepared!”
A Deer wandered over to share her collections
of garlands and berries and other selections.
Then Squirrel arrived with his acrobat skills—
“I’ll dress up this pine tree with all Deer’s nice frills!”
Raccoon came to ponder the beautiful sight,
suggesting “My topper would make it just right…”
…a tree’s not quite “Christmas” until it’s star-kissed!”
So Crow volunteered with a careful assist.
The critters admired their lovely creation,
a symbol of teamwork and cooperation.
“It’s perfect!” the head judge proclaimed, eyes aglow—
when “Everyone’s” entry was picked “Best in Show!”
Word count: 248
This is an adorable entry Lucretia!
Thank you, Sue. It was so much fun to write.
Wow. What a lovely story. And what a high bar to set for the contest! Nicely done!!!
Thank you, Marta.
Great title for this piece! I really like the idea that the Christmas tree is a beacon for Santa’s “old eyes,” and of course, the many different animals working together!
Thank you for your kind words. I had a blast with this one–once the idea popped into my head!
❤️Team work makes the Dream work. Good job.❤️
Thank you, Dawn. I just love Susannah’s Holiday Contest–it’s such a fun way to celebrate the season and cap a year’s worth of kid lit writing.
This is delightful! I love “a tree’s not quite Christmas until it’s star-kissed.”
Thank you, Sarah.
I love all the teamwork and can picture this gorgeous scene! I love that “Everyone” won.
Thank you, Amy. I had a blast writing this one.
Love this!!! Good luck to you!
Thank you so much, Michelle.
What a great story of teamwork!
Thank you, Lisa.
This was a fun teamwork story . . . and with animals! Perfect word choices–beacon and star-kissed. Know that I smiled when I read this.
Thank you for your kind words, Jill. I find the seasonal theme to be quite inspirational.
Congratulations on being the first entry and on creating such a great story! Good luck!
Thank you, Colleen. I appreciate your kind words. Full disclosure: I’ve never even come close to being posted in the first 50+ for any of Susannah’s contests in which I’ve previously participated. But I promised myself that I’d be prepared and give it a try this time…and it worked! : ) This one practically wrote itself, which helped my efficiency a lot. ; )
You did a great job with your story and your goal!!
What a wonderful story to get the ball rolling! I love how all the animals contributed! So nice, Lucretia!
Thank you for your kind, thoughtful words, Colleen. Having woodland animals, a forest and the holiday season as muses was inspirational!
I love how all the animals worked together. Perfect title! Good luck!
Thank you, Judy.
Great rhyming entry!
Thank you, Marty.
Aww, so sweet! Your description of each animal’s skills is spot-on!
Thank you, Allison. As a life-long lover of all things woodland, I am indebted to wonderful influence of my surroundings–both flora and fauna.
A heartwarming come-together tale with the perfect title! I love how all you show all the creatures playing to their strengths.
Thank you for your kind words, Anne. I’m a true admirer of Mother Nature as well as all her animal inhabitants and their amazingly varied skills.
This is my favorite…………..…a tree’s not quite “Christmas” until it’s star-kissed!”
So Crow volunteered with a careful assist. Loved all the working together and sharing their talents.
Thank you, Kathryn.
This evokes such a lovely sense of holiday spirit!
I appreciate your kind words, Jamie. Thank you.
Just perfect! What a lovely story!
Thank you, Ingrid!
Very nice. Love the theme of teamwork. Best line, a tree’s not quite “Christmas” until it’s star-kissed!” Good luck!
Thank you so much, Nancy.
Good Job!
Thank you!
What a wonderful story! I keep wondering about the Crow’s assist — a wonderful challenge for an illustrator.
The Kelpie Challenge
by Bonnie Kelso
(247 words)
Three young Kelpies crawled from a crystal clear creek.
Silver birch trees twinkled in the rising moonlight.
“Tonight’s the winter solstice and the longest night of the year!” cooed Misty.
Crash challenged. “Let’s see who can stay awake until sunrise.”
“I want to play, too,” chirped Glitch.
They lit a Yule log to warm themselves.
After only a few minutes, Crash was snoring.
Misty teased Glitch. “Feel like giving up, too?”
“That depends. What’s the prize for winning?”
Misty broke a twig from a tree. “You’ll win this!”
“A stick?” asked Glitch.
“It’s not just any stick, it’s special.”
Misty snapped the twig in half and handed a piece to her friend.
“Chew it!” she said.
“Mmmm. It tastes sweet!”
CRUNCH-MUNCH-SLURP!
“I guess there’s no more prize,” yawned Glitch.
“What if the real prize is knowing you did something you set out to do,” suggested Misty.
“Or maybe, it’s spending time with a good friend,” added Glitch.
The two snuggled shoulder to shoulder and were soon fast asleep.
As the first rays of sun kissed the Kelpies’ quivers, Crash squealed with delight.
“I won! I won!”
“But you fell asleep,” said Misty.
“You were snoring,” added Glitch.
“I was pretending! I tricked you both!” laughed Crash.
“That’s cheating!” said Glitch.
Crash shrugged. “What did I win?”
“What do you want?” asked Misty.
“I want to go to sleep!” said Crash.
So the three young Kelpies
slipped back into the crystal clear creek
for a long winter’s nap.
This is such a sweet entry Bonnie!
A stick is a great prize for a Kelpie. Cute story.
Thank you, Sue! 🙂
A long winter’s nap is a worthy goal. But, really, was he tricking them, or did he really fall asleep?
Love the way your alliterative intro created the setting and mood for your sweet story about very unique MCs.
Thank you, Lucretia! 🙂
This is so cute! Love the language throughout, the unexpected characters, and the sweet story iteself.
Thank you, Sarah! 🙂
I loved your opening imagery of the birch trees twinkling in the moonlight!
Thanks, Royal! 🙂
I like surprise endings. Crash wanted to go to sleep! Nice.
Thanks, Jill! 🙂
This was a fun and sweet story Bonnie. Good luck!
Your story reminded me of all the sleepovers when I was a girl and seeing who could stay up the latest! I never thought about using pretend snores to win! Wish I had!! Thanks for a trip down memory lane, Bonnie!
I really liked your mythical, lyrical language. Great names for the Kelpies, too!
Humor and heart — the best combo!
A sparkling modern kelpie tale with endearing humour and gorgeous details. I love “the first rays of sun kissed the Kelpies’ quivers.” The world needs more kelpies! And more of your writing, Bonnie.
Very cute story Bonnie! I love the character names. 🙂
Bonnie, I was drawn to your story right away because of …. KELPIES. I’m a storyteller and work at Celtic festivals. I have Scottish heritage and you wrote about kelpies!! Wow! Thanks for sharing your wintery kelpie story. It makes me smile.
Such a wonderful story of friendship adventure in a truly unique setting!
What a sweet story of friendship and fun!
Very cute. Love the friendship and feel of your story. Good luck!
THE COOKIES OF HOLIDAY HOLLOW
By Royal Baysinger
250 words
Santa couldn’t be merrier! His final stop that Christmas Eve was Holiday Hollow, where the fairy founders of all our festivities live. They were holding a competition to see who could have the best cookie waiting for him and his tummy positively tickled with excitement!
In the Hourglass House, sat a simple snickerdoodle. Santa bit into the soft yet firm goodness. It was perfect! He left Father Time the “Most Perfectly Baked Cookie Award.”
In the Love Nest, Santa savoured a macaron with an exquisite filling – fluffy and sweet. It was perfect! He left Cupid the “Most Perfectly Sweetened Cookie Award.”
In the Rainbow Bungalow, he had a golden butter biscuit and delighted in how well it filled his ample stomach. It was perfect! He left the Leprechaun the “Most Perfectly Sized Cookie Award.”
In the Hidden Burrow, Santa marvelled at a sugar cookie, bedazzled with colourful frosting and elaborate sprinkles. It was perfect! He left the Easter Bunny the “Most Perfectly Decorated Cookie Award.”
In the Haunted Hovel, he was impressed with the gingerbread cookie’s intricate design. It depicted Santa in his sleigh with all nine reindeer. It was perfect! He left Jackie Lantern the “Most Perfectly Carved Cookie Award.”
Santa headed home, where he tiptoed quietly to bed. But not before finding the chocolate chip cookies Mrs. Claus had left for him in the hall. As he ate them, Santa’s belly shook with silent chuckles. They were perfectly perfect! The best cookies of all are made with love!
This is such a sweet story!
Cookies should be a food group. Nice!
Sue, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story!
KINGIS8, I’m glad I could tickle your sweet tooth!
Sign me up for this cookie contest! Such a fun story and now I’m hungry for cookies. Kids would love this delicious story with the perfect amount of sprinkles on top!!
Great Title. The story had all my favorite cookies. Brought back memories.
Cheers for the Holiday Crew – and Santa, too!
Yep, they work hard to make the holidays great! Thanks for taking the time to read my work and leave comments Joyce, I will keep a hopeful eye out for an entry of your own, should you post one.
Great job on a story that is sweet on many levels, Royal! I enjoyed your refrain and incorporation of all the “fairies” in a calendar year.
Thanks for your feedback Lucretia! It was perfect!
So sweet! Love the creative places like Haunted Hovel and Love Nest.
I’m glad you liked the holiday founders’ homes. I was particularly pleased with the Love “Nest!”
Okay. I definitely want a cookie now. Great job, Royal!
May the holiday season bring you a perfectly perfect cookie, Bonnie! Thanks for taking the time to read my work and leave feedback!
Alliteration abounds!
SCHMELZB, nice catch! After your comment though, I had to go back and re-read; there was more than I thought there was. I think it just comes out on its own when I’m not looking. Force of habit? If and when it gets expanded, I’ll be sure to pack some more in for you! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Fun. I adore the names you gave to the houses and the characters who live within them. Now I want to visit an hourglass house!
Jill, thank you so much for reading my story and leaving such wonderful feedback! You saying that now you want to visit an hourglass house is one of the sweetest and most precious things I have ever heard! If you find one, let me know! I’ll do the same for you. Thanks again!
The ending is so true!! And I love the way this story unfolds. Good luck!
Colleen, thanks so much for reading my story and taking the time to leave feedback!
My pleasure Royal.
Leave it to Santa to find perfection with every cookie! I enjoyed your story, Royal!
Colleen, I loved your insight. Oh Santa, that jolly old elf! May we all find a bit more perfection wherever we go! Thanks for reading my story!
Such a clever creative tale. Love the idea of ‘fairy founders of all our festivities’ and your cookie flavors are intriguing and fun.
Marty, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and leave some feedback too! I really appreciate it! It was a later addition, but it just made sense that each of the fairy founders would have a different flavor/sort/type of cookie. Thanks for your kind words!
Awww I love this. I was so curious how it would end! I loved all the creative names for the homes each cookie maker lived in and how it connected to who lived there. I loved the connection with each cookie type and award! Very well thought out. I especially loved “Jackie Lantern” and the phrase “fairy founders.” So clever!!
Amy, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story! You thinking it was clever is saying something! I especially love Jackie Lantern of all the fairy founders as well. I intend to give her her own spinoff, for sure. Maybe next Halloweensie…. Thanks again!
I loved how you coordinated the cookies and holidays! Of course Santa would like Mrs. Claus’ cookies the best!
Judy, of COURSE he would! Not only because of the love, but because Mrs. Claus has GOT to be the world’s leading expert by now. I mean, she has to compete with ALL of the other cookies Santa eats. And let’s face it, that’s a lot of cookies…. Thanks for taking the time to enjoy the ones in Holiday Hollow and for leaving some feedback for me!
OK, I want to live in Holiday Hollow! If they ever need other cookie judges, I’m happy to volunteer.
The fairy founders would be lucky to have you as a neighbour, Allison! I’ll be sure to pass along a glowing recommendation for you, should they need cookie judges in the future!
An ingenious story with delectable details. I love how you folded in different holidays and devised the perfect habitat, cookie, and award for each character.
Delectable details….Such perfect praise for a cookie story! Thanks for the encouraging feedback, Anne! And for taking the time to read my work! I really appreciate it.
Royal, I love the idea that fairies are founders of festivities! And what a neighborhood that would be! Cool houses.
Kathryn, thanks so much for taking the time to visit Holiday Hollow! You are always welcome! And thanks for the encouraging feedback! You’re awesome!
Royal, great story! The holiday homes and their “residents” fit perfectly! 🙂🎅
(Now I need to bake some cookies!!)
Thanks so much Susan for the sweet feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed the cookies of Holiday Hollow and I hope you have found (or will find) plenty of time to bake some of your own!
The best cookies of all are indeed made with love. Charming story!!
Jamie, thank you for taking the time to read my story and for leaving me such kind words! May you enjoy the best of cookies made with the greatest of love this holiday season!
Oh my, Royal! I loved this! The names of those places that housed each award-winning cookie made by a mythical character was very creative (Jackie Lantern…tee hee!). And, how can you not feel all warm and content, not just by the thought of eating all these yummy cookies, but to know those things done out of love are the best of the best!
I’m so glad you loved my story! Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave me some feedback. I’m particularly delighted that you enjoyed Jackie Lantern, I look forward to writing more about her. I hope the holiday season gives you the opportunity to eat some yummy cookies made just for you!
What kid wouldn’t love this? I know I do!
Simple and sweet! Like Father Time’s snickerdoodle! Thanks for the kind compliments, Ingrid!
Such a sweet story. Yes, the ones with love are always the best!
Thanks for the kind words, Barbara! And for taking the time to read my story, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
For some bizarre reason, I am craving cookies now…Seriously, such a sweet, delicious story! Adore all the alliteration and fun house/baker names. I especially love this idea and phrasing: “where the fairy founders of all our festivities live.”
Jyn, I hope you are able to satiate your cookie craving this holiday season! Thank you so much for pointing out the things you adored and loved! Such sweet sentiments! Thank you! It’s always good to know what is working in a story.
A perfectly perfect holiday cookie story. Love the ending! So sweet!
Wow! Perfectly perfect! No higher praise! Thanks so much Nancy for taking the time to read my story and leave some feedback.
How true! The best cookies are made with love –although every one of those sounded fabulous. Great job!
I love all the characters you incorporated in your story! The names were so clever. Sweet sweet ending.
Elf Off the Shelf
by Anne Lipton
(241 words)
Attempting to expand his biz,
Nick called on his concept whiz.
Ms. C was a dynamo,
shaping plans like cookie dough.
Businesslike, but sweet and kind,
she maintained an open mind:
“It’s time to think outside the shelves,
and hear ideas from the elves!”
A contest rolled out workshop-wide,
and it became a point of pride
for every elf across the Pole
to throw a hat in Christmas Bowl.
The prizes proved an elfin dream
with free sleigh rides and mint ice cream.
The applications piled up
in hopes to win the Cocoa Cup.
Leading off was Glitter Glitch
and his innovative pitch.
He had the ear of all the elves
with “Toys so smart they build themselves!”
Next came Sunny Brighton Beams,
who dreamed a dream of streaming dreams,
but Santa would not make that leap
since Sandman ran the world of sleep.
Last on deck was Elf Sno-Cone
plugging Robo, the Rein-Drone.
“Sno-no-no,” good Saint Nick teased.
“I fear my flight crew won’t be pleased.”
Sno said, “The deer may work or rest,
but drones will boost our mission best.
Our future’s written in the stars.
Think of children born on Mars!
“Greenlight me, and have no fear,
our next gen will be rocket-deer!
Santa, with your nose for hype,
won’t you fly my prototype?”
Santa gave first place to Sno,
eager to see where she’d go.
Sno-Cone raised the cup to Mars,
and snowflakes fell like little stars.
“Santa, with your nose for hype,
won’t you fly my prototype?”
Love it Anne!
Thanks, Sue!
Santa’s interstellar drone deliveries?! Hmmm…perhaps he and Elon Musk need to schedule a meeting… What a fun story, Anne!
Thank you!
This is so great! Love the ending image of the snowflakes, all the fun-to-read-aloud rhyme, and the delightful, funny details. So much festive fun!!
Thanks, Sarah!
“Greenlight me, and have no fear,
our next gen will be rocket-deer!
Santa, with your nose for hype,
won’t you fly my prototype?”
Brilliant! 🙂
Thanks a million, Bonnie!
Love the idea of a Christmas Bowl and winning the Cocoa Cup. Delightfully modern with smart toys, and streaming dreams, as well as rocket drone technology! Brilliant world-mashing with the Sandman too.
Wow! Thanks for picking up on all those details, Royal!
This is wonderful, Anne! I love it. Good luck!
Thanks, Lisa!
Great imagination and fun rhymes Anne!
Thanks, Colleen!
Nice! Elf Sno-Cone is ahead of the game! Mars will be visited by Santa and his Robo crew:)
Thanks, Colleen!
Those are some forward thinking elves! Very creative!
Thanks, Judy!
Haha, Santa’s ready to go galactic!
Copy that, Allison! Thanks for reading!
My favorite part–Sandman ran the world of sleep.
So glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
What I love about this….
This line…..”Santa, with your nose for hype,
won’t you fly my prototype?”
And…..that I hear a strong rap beat when I read this. Did you mean to do that? It’s just cool!
Thanks, Kathryn! That’s also my favorite line. I was actually riffing off “Rudolph, with your nose so bright . . .”
My fav lines seem to concur with everyone elses: “Santa, with your nose for hype,
won’t you fly my prototype?” Oh yes, and the “Cocoa Cup” made me smile. A great holiday read, Anne!
Sweet! Thank you!
Love this! Especially ” Snowflakes fell like little stars! 🙂✨
Thank you! That line has a special place in my heart.
Your fabulous story is packed with so many wonderful concepts! Awesome!
Thanks, Ingrid!
Love this elfin competition, very creative and original! So many images come to mind as I read this! Well done!
Thank you!
Amazing Anne! I love how your hip rhymes/beat match your lingo/theme so well. I caught myself rapping your story to myself as I read it:) Completely clever and fun. Well done!!
Thanks, Vashti!
This is super cute!! It’s hard to choose a favorite line!! I did love ““Sno-no-no”–that made me chuckle. Nice job with this and good luck!!
Thanks, Amy!
Fun rhymes and quite a competition! Good luck!
Thanks, Nancy!
Loved this. Great job.
Thank you!
A creative use of technology to spread gifts — great idea.
Thanks, Sarah!
THE TROLLS: A WINTER TALE
By Royal Baysinger
249 words
High in the alps of some forgotten country, four troll siblings were hiking the steep trails to visit their grandmother for Christmas, when their path disappeared into a loose mass of snow, clinging to the icy mountainside. It was much too dangerous to cross.
The trolls agreed, whoever could clear the path would get to sit next to Grandmother for Christmas Dinner.
The older troll brother was biggest. He pounded his fists and stomped his feet upon the frozen ground. A tremor shook the moonlit hills. But the snow did not move an inch.
The older troll sister was a powerful thrower. She packed massive snowballs and hurled them against the snow-covered ridge. But the snow did not move an inch.
The younger troll brother had prodigious lungs, capable of blowing kites out of sight on windless days. He huffed and puffed with gale proportions. But the snow did not move an inch.
The younger troll sister was cleverest. She knew the reverberations of her mighty yodelling would never move the snow, not even an inch. So she suggested they work together.
As one, they pounded and stomped, huffed and puffed, packed and hurled, and yodelled mightily, until – with an audible groan and a thunderous crash, the mountain heaved its blanket of snow off its shoulders and into the valley below.
When Christmas Day dawned, the trolls were all safely tucked inside their grandmother’s cottage, eating their broth upon the warm hearth and seated around her in a circle.
This is such a lovely tale with a strong message of teamwork!
Sue, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story! I’m glad you found beauty in the teamwork of the troll siblings.
Just as Grandma Troll dreamed. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Nothing finer than visiting Grandmother for a comforting meal! Thanks for reading my story, Joyce! And for leaving feedback!
Love the teamwork and prize for the winner(s). Nice job!
Lucretia, thanks for taking the time to read my story and for the encouraging words!
Love this! I appreciate the great ending image of all of them seated around them in a circle and the theme of teamwork. Nicely done!
Sarah, thank you so much for reading my story! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you enjoyed the final scene!
This is so visual! Good job.
Jill, I appreciate you taking the time to read my story! What wonderful compliments, thank you!
I love the younger sister’s idea of cooperation as well as the solution to who wins the prize. Well done!
Well, the younger sister WAS the cleverest. It only made sense that she would see the solution. Thanks for reading my stories Colleen! And for taking the time to comment!
You were quite ambitious and productive with your entries!! I just now realized you actually wrote THREE stories. Great job!
Such a cool story, Royal! Really nice:) I love how they all had their own strengths, but nothing worked until they brought all their strengths together. As I was reading, I wondered who would win! You answered it beautifully…”seated around her in a circle.”
Colleen, thank you so much for such sweet feedback! Thanks for taking the time to tell me how much you enjoyed the ending!
I love the ending! Great scene setting, and fun words!
Amy, thanks for reading my story! I really enjoyed the Alps of this forgotten land, I’m glad you did too! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!
Such wonderful descriptions! I loved that the trolls all worked together to achieve their goal!
Judy, thank you so much for reading my story! I really appreciate your comments regarding my writing!
Love your use of the repeated line, and the underlying message is perfect for a contest story!
Allison, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and leave some feedback! I appreciate you pointing out the things that you enjoyed about it!
You’ve threaded a timeless Troll tale of togetherness and teamwork in this story, Royal!
Thank you so much for the kind words, Anne! I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and leave feedback!
A timeless tale of troll teamwork! Some vocabulary words to learn such as “prodigious” and “reverberations”, but very precisely move your story along nicely. I can so see the lovely and heartfelt ending illustrated in a PB. Thoroughly enjoyed it, Royal.
Ellen, thank you for sharing such encouraging sentiments about the ending! I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed it! I try not to shy away from using “big” words in my stories intended for picture book audiences, because it was something I ALWAYS appreciated coming across as a child. Bill Peet in particular was a joy to read when I was young. Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment!
Great tale! Especially loved the setting! 🙂
Susan, thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and leave some feedback! I am thrilled to hear you enjoyed the story and its setting! I am particularly fond of those high Alps in that long forgotten country as well and I look forward to expanding upon it.
This feels like a classic already! Wow! Well done!
Ingrid, that is such a nice thing to say! The troll siblings are special to me. I’m glad you enjoyed their journey to Grandmother’s!
Such unique story, and a fitting troll Christmas tale:)
Vashti, thank you SO much for taking the time to read my story and to leave me feedback! I’m glad to hear you enjoyed the Trolls and their Christmas journey!
This reads like an old-fashioned fairy tale. Nicely done!
Nancy, that is such a sweet and encouraging comment! Thank you for taking the time to read my story! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
I love that they all worked together!! Awesome troll story. I love the last line where that are “all safely tucked inside their grandmother’s cottage.” So cozy!!
Loved this sentence –the mountain heaved its blanket of snow off its shoulders
So visual! Great job!
UPON A WINTER SOLSTICE
By Royal Baysinger
250 words
Winter Solstice, the shortest day of the year, was rarely celebrated by the animals of Farshadow Forest. They were usually hibernating before it arrived in late December.
But one year, Fox convinced her forest friends that they should have a long party where they would stay awake to see this marvel of nature.
“We could each bring the most scrumptious food from our winter reserves and the last one awake can take home the leftovers,” said Fox.
“What a great idea!” said her friends.
They excitedly finished their chores before the leaves changed colour, then hurried to Bear’s den where they would await the Winter Solstice together.
Fox brought a neckerchief filled with glistening acorns, Bumblebee brought a jug of sweetest honey, Frog brought a pot of wriggling earthworms, Hedgehog brought a basket of fragrant apples, and Bear pulled out a little wagon brimming with blueberries.
They ate.
And waited.
They played games.
And waited.
But in early October, Bumblebee couldn’t stay awake any longer. She flitted away to fall asleep.
In early November, Frog couldn’t stay awake any longer. He hopped away to fall asleep.
In early December, Bear couldn’t stay awake any longer. He lumbered away to fall asleep.
And two days before the Solstice, Hedgehog couldn’t stay awake any longer. She waddled away to fall asleep.
Fox slyly loaded the remaining food into Bear’s little wagon and she slinked away.
Her sleeping friends had no idea…that foxes don’t hibernate. It was her best Winter Solstice yet!
ANOTHER great entry – you’re going to make Susanna’s job hard!! Love the ending!
Sue, that is such a lovely thing to say! Thank you SO much for taking the time to read my entries! And to leave feedback on them! I really appreciate it.
And they’ll never know… 🦊
So true, Joyce, so true! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply! It means a lot!
Oh that clever, sly Fox! What a cute story and ending.
Lucretia, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story! And I appreciate your kind words!
Another great story! I enjoyed reading it. What a sly fox (and my son loves the word slink!)
Sarah! Thanks so much for the feedback! I am honoured you enjoyed reading this one! Your son loving the word slink is the most beautiful compliment! I hope you mean he discovered the word because of my story, rather than he has long enjoyed using it whenever life permits and I merely stumbled upon it. Otherwise, the magic is lost a bit. But either way, it made me very happy to hear! Thanks for sharing!
Oh that fox knew just what he was doing!! Good luck!
Yeah, you’ve got to look out for those crafty sorts of foxes. They often pop up when you happen into the forest. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, Colleen! I appreciate it!
I enjoyed reading your work!
Sneaky fox! All of your submissions have been so well done:)
Colleen, thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate you reading my work and taking the time to reply!
Watch out for those sneaky foxes! Another great winter tale! Best of luck!
A wise warning for us all to remember, Judy! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply! It means a lot!
You’re on fire with these entries!
Yeah, I couldn’t bring myself to leave any of them behind. I was trying to find the right fit and they all just seemed to polish up so nicely. I hope you enjoyed Upon a Winter Solstice! Thanks for taking the time to read my work and to comment, Allison!
Royal, the comments are so well deserved. Love the cleverness of the story, and so charming!!!
Marta, such kind, supportive words! Thank you! I’m so very glad you enjoyed it!
A fun, fresh modern fable with a hilarious twist ending!
Anne, thank you SO MUCH for the fantastic feedback! Your comments always sound like the endorsements on the back of a picture book. A work of art in themselves. I am honoured to have my story referred to as a fable. Thanks again for taking the time to read my work and to comment!
I love the childlike inability of these sweet animal characters to stay awake…and oooh, that sneaky fox! Brilliant ending! Well done, Royal!
Jill, thank you so much for your insights! It is always VERY helpful to know what works in a story! I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for taking the time to read AND comment!
Clever . . . like a fox! I especially like the paragraph about what all the animals brought (the wagon is my favorite part of all). I also like getting the chores done before the leaves change colors. And how sweet the way they all got sleepy one-by-one. Well done.
Jill, thank you so very much for mentioning all of the details you enjoyed! It’s always good to hear about different things that get noticed and enjoyed! I REALLY appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! Thanks again!
I had a feeling that that fox was up to something! I like how you “showed”, not “told”, us the passage of time by each of fox’s compatriots falling asleep. I was really pulling for the Hedgehog! Thanks for sharing this story with us, Royal!
Oh, clever Ellen! Fox would have such a hard time fooling you! Thanks for the encouraging feedback on my story-telling! It always helps! I’m sorry Hedgehog just couldn’t stay awake any longer for you! Thanks for taking the time to read Upon a Winter Solstice and thanks SO MUCH for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
Another great story! That sly old fox!!! 🙂🦊
Susan! Thanks for reading all of my stories and leaving feedback on each of them! I really appreciate you taking the time to do that!
I caught it! What a great trick! The details are so engaging I almost fell for it. I think kids would get a big kick out of this. It’s similar to an Anansi tale! Great job again!
Ingrid, I am thrilled and honoured to have my story compared to an Anansi tale! Thank you for such encouraging feedback. I was especially happy to hear you say the details were engaging enough to almost fool you! Fox will have to get up a little bit earlier in the Spring to get you next year! 😉
What a foxy fox! Very cute story!
Nancy, thanks so much for taking the time to read each of my stories and to leave feedback on them! I’m glad you enjoyed Upon a Winter Solstice!
So creative! Love that sneaky fox. I wonder what happened when they all woke up??
SO YOU THINK YOU CAN PRANCE
By Amy Leskowski (250 words)
https://motherhoodblockparty.net/so-you-think-you-can-prance/
“Places, Rudolph. Jump in line.”
(That’s me! Contestant #9.)
“Welcome back to North Pole Live:
‘So You Think You Can Prance,’ season five.
I’m your host, the famous Prancer.
Please welcome back our champion dancer!
He’s shimmied chimneys—Seoul to Atlanta:
the man, the myth, the legend—SANTA!”
Santa’s back? Last season’s best!
His reindeer too? I should’ve guessed.
Dasher coasts. Dancer whirls.
(Prancer hosts.) Vixen twirls.
Comet? She was born a star.
Cupid is on point, so far.
Donner brings the beat, the boom.
Blitzen’s jig ignites the room.
Maybe I’ll sit out this year.
With four left hooves, I’m bottom tier.
Eight contestants soar. I sink.
They float. I flail. They curve. I kink.
They sway. I swoop. They strut. I stop.
They spring. I sprawl. They dip. I drop.
Showing off, they’re busting moves,
I spin and—
SPLAT.
I’ve busted hooves!
“Oh, DEAR!” I hear.
Yes, I’m aware—
my spill was broadcast on the air.
The crimson of my well-known nose
extends until my body glows.
Someone whispers, “not a dancer.”
Reindeer snicker—even Prancer!
“Can klutzy caribous compete?”
My antlers shrink. My legs retreat.
Halfway out the door, I hear,
“Rudolph! I need YOU this year!
Ho-ho-ho! That grit! That glow!
Prancer, change my choreo’:
Substitute those samba mixes.
No more formal foxtrot fixes.
Rudi’s riffs will spark my set—
a glow-in-the-dark-breakdance duet!”
*North Pole Live rewrote its jingle
to feature Ru’ and Kris-Kross-Kringle,
the prime-time prancing pair sensation,
who tours one eve—to every nation.
Genius! Nice work!
Thank you!!
So fun and funny, Amy! I love it.
I looooved this one. So original!
Thanks to all three of you!
Brilliant entry Amy. So much fun!
Thank you, Sue!
Amy, the visuals made me chuckle right out loud.
Oh yay! Thanks, Joyce!
Wonderful!
❤️So fun!❤️
Thank you!!
Hilarious! Love this out of the box concept! Well done!
Awww thanks, Molly!
Someone publish this NOW! 🙂
awww, thanks, Bonnie!!
So much excellent word-play here! Love “Seoul to Atlanta” bringing in not often mentioned capitals to paint the world-wide sensation that is Santa. Love Donner and Blitzen bringing the beat and igniting the room because of their German meanings of Thunder and Lightning! Love that you found a way to still make Rudolph the odd-ball who finds a way to shine with the help of Santa! “Ru’ and Kris-Kross-Kringle”, yes yes YES!
Thank you, Royal!!! I’m so glad you got all those!!!! I’m always nervous tucking in easter eggs, hoping someone will catch them.
I loved the Seoul to Atlanta part too! (Esp because I live in Atlanta and right before the world shut down, I flew from Seoul to Atlanta, haha!)
Well how fun is that! I’m glad you have a Seoul to Atlanta connection!
I love this idea! It was super cute and so clever!
Thank you!!
This is amazing! So much fun to read aloud and to imagine! Very, very clever– love “Kriss-Kross-Kringle”!
Thank you!! I’m glad it passed the Sarah Meade readloud test!! That means the world!
*read-aloud!
clearly I need to be able to edit my comments hahaha
Would probably be fun to readloud too! 😉
Amy! This is FABULOUS!!! So much fun to read!!! Good luck to you!
Thank you!!
This is hilarious (and really nice storytelling in rhyme!). My favorite part . . . contestant #9.
Wow, thank you!!
Your introduction did a marvelous job of setting the mood and then you kept the energy and great rhyme going throughout the story! Well done Amy.
Thank you, Colleen!
This is so creative!
Thank you!! I appreciate it!
What a fun, energetic story! Nice job, Amy.
Thank you!!
I could really feel the rhythm in your story. Rudolph saves the day again! Nice job!
I’m so glad to hear! Thanks, Judy.
This is HAlarious. Kris-Kross-Kringle??!! Standing ovation.
awww thank you!! I’m soooo glad you enjoyed that.
This is just fantastic. The “Kris-Kross-Kringle” made me LOL and brought back silly memories of adolescence (not to date myself or anything, but if you know, you know).
LOL, I know, right? hahaha same here 🙂 And thank you!
So clever. So fun. And the rhyme simply sparkles!
Wow, thank you, Kathryn!
A delightfully imaginative high-concept entry with serious attention to detail and a catchy beat that echoes the rhythm of dancing.
Wow, thank you, Anne! I appreciation all the encouragement!
Amy, I absolutely love this! “Shimmied chimneys” Such a great image, and all throughout! 🙂 So fun, and action packed. Kids would love reading this too!
Thank you, Steena!! Such encouragement. Thanks for reading.
This is great!!!
Thank you!
So fun! So funny! This was a blast to read out loud!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
There is so much greatness in this story! Just a joy to read from beginning to end. I was hip-hopping, break dancing, moving my feet along to the beat of your lyrical lines. Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Awww that’s the best to hear! Thanks for sharing!
Amy, this is outstanding. I especially liked “North pole Live re wrote its jingle
to feature Ru’ and Kris-Kross-Kringle” Wow! 🎅🙂
Awww thank you!!
Fantastic! Just love this!
Thank you!!
Haha – perfectly hilarious title and idea! So much fun word play!
Thank you!!! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for your comments!
This is fantastic! Love it!
Thank you!!
Loved the concept and read it aloud to get the whole feeling.
Awww, thank you! That’s so nice of you to do!
I loved the line — “four left hooves. I’m bottom tier”. Great one!
Thanks, Sarah!! That’s so great to hear 🙂
THE FESTIVE FLYING RACE – Nicola Beach 232 words.
Tomorrow is Christmas. Rudolph’s called in sick.
What a massive headache for poor old St. Nick.
St. Nick hosts a contest, a festive flying race.
The lucky winner gets to fly in Rudolph Reindeer’s place.
Who is at the starting line? …Dumbo, …Superman,
Dragon, Fairy, Pegasus, Witch, and Peter Pan…
Wait a minute, here comes Elf. There’s something on his back.
Goodness gracious, Elf has made a homemade rocket pack.
“When I blow the whistle, fly up in the sky,
zoom once around the world and back across the line!”
The racers push, shove, and dive, desperate to win,
But all that jostling just means they end up in a spin.
Determined little Elf, flies low, straight, and fast.
It’s his first time flying, but he will not come last!
They race towards the finish line and have a big collision,
Crash landing in a tangled heap, a crazy magic vision.
Elf has won the race! His rocket pack is smashed.
It must have happened when all the crazy fliers crashed.
St. Nick smiles and puts his hat on Elf’s little head.
“I’m not feeling great. You drive the sleigh instead.
All the other racers will have to pull the sleigh,
For now, all the reindeer have fallen ill today.”
So tonight, this Christmas Eve, be sure to watch the sky,
To spot Elf and his zany crew flying way up high.
❤️Poor Santa. Very cute.❤️
I love the idea of such a bizarre troop of flyers working together to pull Santa’s sleigh. Dumbo, Superman, Dragon, Fairy, Pegasus, Witch, and Peter Pan…. I would love to see what happens next when they have inevitable conflicts as they deliver presents.
What a fun ending image of Elf and all the other racers with the sleigh!
Ha ha!! What a Christmas to remember!!
Of course, I’m imagining Will Farrow as Elf! Maybe you’ve written an “Elf 2” Will Farrow won’t turn down:) Haha! Fun story, Nicola!
Oh this is too much fun! Great story.
Elf had some tough competition! Very exciting and a great build up of tension during the race! Good luck!
Charmingly comedic Christmas crossover! I love how Elf earns the reins!
Who would have thought of these characters taking center stage in one story? Highly imaginative. I’d like to see this group flying past on Christmas Eve!
This certainly is a bizarre group working that Christmas Eve! So creative! 🎅
This could be a picture book or an animated special! Hilarious!
Wow what a zany contest. I can see lots of fun illustrations here. Good job!
BIRDIE’S SONG
by Beth Stilborn
(242 words)
https://www.bethstilborn.com/birdies-song-my-entry-in-susanna-hills-holiday-writing-contest/
This year, Birdie was determined to win the Christmas Singing Contest. Every year since she’d been five, Annabelle had won. Not this year. Birdie had practiced until she knew her song forwards, backwards and sideways. She could even sing it in her sleep. She had to win!
Annabelle stood on stage. Her notes soared.
Couldn’t she squeak just once? Birdie thought.
Ms. Ringly said, “Now Birdie will sing for us.”
Birdie opened her mouth to sing.
“Bingle jells, bingle jells,
Fill the sleigh with hay!”
What was going on?
“Help old Santa with his sack
And send him on his way-ay!”
Wrong words! People were laughing!
“Reindeer fly through the sky –
He will soon be here!
Eat some cookies, leave some toys,
And come again next year!”
Birdie wanted to race off the stage and out the door. She ran back to her seat and hid her face in Mom’s coat sleeve. Would people ever stop laughing?
Ms. Ringly stood on the stage, towering over everyone. “Attention, please. The winner of this year’s Christmas Singing Contest is, of course, Annabelle! Her singing was dazzling, as always.”
Birdie slumped even further. Annabelle won. Of course.
Ms. Ringly looked down at the audience. “This year, though, we have a special extra prize. For most original song, Birdie!”
Birdie couldn’t believe it. She practically flew onto the stage to get her prize.
As they drove home, Birdie started thinking up words for next year’s song.
Such a cute story! I love the song lyrics!
I love that she recognizes her own talent as a lyricist and begins preparing for next year!
This is so charming and delightful! I love the new words to Birdie’s song and how she flew up on stage to get her prize. So cute!
Clever. Maybe you should write jingles!
I am happy it worked out for Birdie! Good job with your story and good luck!
So funny! My nephews are always changing the words to songs–they’ll love this!
Oh, bless her heart! I love the satisfying ending to your story, Beth!
I love how Birdie sings to the tune of her own heart!
How wonderful that Birdie found her “voice” and realizes she has a very special talent! Nice Job!
You just have to root for Birdie! And, we really are relieved and so happy for her. The underlying message honest effort and courage can bring its reward. Good luck to you, Beth!
A sweet story of how we discover our own talents in unexpected ways! Here’s to creativity and originality.
On the spot lyrics are always the best and almost always a hoot! Nicely done!
You have to love “Birdie”! Great story! 🙂
Cute story with a sweet ending. I’m glad Birdie was praised for her creativity.
The Holiday Homework
By Sue Lancaster (250 words)
“Your holiday homework,” announced Wendy’s teacher, “is to write a story about a holiday contest. The winner will receive a special prize!”
The school children erupted into excited chatter as they left the classroom.
Wendy rushed straight home to get started.
She stared at the blank page, hoping an idea would pop into her head. But nothing came.
She scribbled a couple of lines. But they felt silly, so she screwed them into a ball.
Soon Wendy had a mountain of discarded words.
“This is hopeless,” she groaned.
Wendy asked her mother: “What makes a good story?”
“A likeable character?” suggested Mum. “Someone the reader really cares about.”
Wendy asked her father: “What makes a good story?”
“An obstacle to overcome?” offered Dad.
Wendy asked her brother.
“A twist at the end,” replied Paul. “Something the reader doesn’t see coming.”
Wendy returned to her desk.
“Ok… I need a character, a problem, an unexpected ending…”
“Anything else Teddy?” she giggled.
“Maybe a sprinkling of magic,” replied the stuffed bear. “It is a Christmas story after all!”
Wendy started writing. This time the words tumbled onto the page like the settling snow outside!
On the first morning back after Christmas, the children handed in their stories.
“It’s been so hard to judge,” said Ms. Hill later that day. “But the winner of the holiday contest is… Wendy! What a wonderful story with an unexpected twist!”
The class cheered. Wendy beamed.
And the unexpected twist?
Well, it’s the story you’re reading now!
I love the “mountain of discarded words.” And the advice that Wendy’s family gives on what makes a good story is helpful. But you won me immediately with the stuffed bear and Christmas magic!
So cute! Quite the surprise ending! 🙂
Fun idea, Sue! 🙂 Love the mountain of discarded words. I can so relate.
I love this! So much fun. And of course, I related to Wendy! My favorite part is Teddy’s magical suggestion.
A sprinkle of magic. Of course I imagined it!
Very cute and well developed story Sue.
Lovely story, Sue, with great surprise ending–just like her brother suggested. I think we can all relate to Wendy’s “mountain of discarded words.” Well done!
An entry for a holiday writing contest about a holiday contest that’s about…a holiday writing contest?! My head hurts. Very clever!
A story I think we can all relate to! Nice, Sue!
A magnificently meta story explicating the mechanics of story writing in such a magical way.
This is brilliant Sue! So expected and unexpected. I especially loved your sassy twist ending!!
That really was a surprise ending! Great job! I loved how you covered some important elements in writing as well!
Story elements 101 here in 250 words or less. Unexpected ending … bravo! I like the phrases “mountain of discarded words” and “words tumbled onto the page like the settling snow outside”. Two great visuals for a PB illustrator! Thanks for sharing this, Sue! Good luck!
I was hoping it would play out this way! My favorite bit was Teddy’s sprinkling of magic! That took me by surprise!
Super original idea! Great ending as well! 🙂
Clever and one we can all relate to.😊
Ahh, the struggle we all have with Susanna’s contests! You turned it into a very fun story!
How Tiny Won a Seat on Santa’s Sleigh
Elizabeth Westra
250 Words
Tiny wanted to ride Santa’s sleigh on Christmas Eve, but the other elves said, “You’re too small.”
Santa announced, “There will be a contest for the seat near me. The elf who paints the most creative toys in one week wins the spot.
Tiny said, “I want to win that spot.”
The other elves mocked him. “You won’t make the most creatively painted toys. You’ll mess up.”
Tiny knew he needed to make his toys stand out. He dipped his finger into yellow paint then into blue. “What a lovely color!” he said. Then he dipped his finger into blue again and added red. “Such an unusual color.” Tiny mixed colors and painted toys in vivid hues. He avoided the elves so they wouldn’t see.
He watched the other elves. None copied his idea. They painted with basic colors; red, yellow and blue. He found an elf examining his toys, but the elf only noticed the strange colored puddles on the floor.
He told the other elves, “He’s just playing with colors. He won’t win.”
Tiny painted and painted, and soon had toys piled high. The deadline was near.
Next day Santa inspected their toys. Tiny didn’t have the most painted toys, but his were spectacular. While the others painted in red, blue and yellow, Tiny’s toys flashed in neon orange, aqua, lilac and juicy watermelon.
“I’ve never see those shades before,” an elf said. “Where did he get them?”
Santa smiled. “He used creativity mixing the basic colors to make new ones. Tiny wins the ride in my sleigh. He didn’t paint the most toys, but he showed creativity by blending the old colors and creating radiant new ones.
I love that this story shows kids that they can break the mold and exercise creativity when operating under accepted constraints.
This is a delightful story, and I love the creativity theme.
An artist is born! Such a ‘colorful’ story.
Way to be creative Tiny! And he was the most creative, as opposed to most, creative. Santa could have gone either way. LOL
Ohhh, this is a preschool teacher’s dream book for the holidays! Well done!
Even with mocking, Tiny plowed through! Nice story, Elizabeth!
I love how Tiny uses his imagination to defy—and exceed expectations!
Very picturesque!
The Claus’ Candy Cane Contest
BY
Susan Schipper
WC 247
You know Dasher, Dancer, Prancer, Vixen, Comet, Cupid, Donner, Blitzen and Rudolph, the best known of all of the Candy Canes. However, did you know how Rudolph the red nosed candy cane won Santa’s contest…..
“Ho Ho Ho! Let’s begin this contest”, chuckled Mr. Claus! “Which candy cane will the elves select to guide my sleigh tonight!”
Mrs. Claus was organizing the elves. Alabaster (better known as Al) was in charge of lining up the Candy Canes by size, which was a sizable task! Humphrey checked if the candy canes googly eyes were equipped with precision night vision. Pipe cleaner inspection was Holly’s focus! No unnecessary curves or bends were acceptable. Mario A., known for his shooting star speed, lined the candy canes up to inspect their speed and agility! Elf Sugarplum Mary had to judge the candy canes’ pompom noses.
All of the candy canes paraded in front of the judges. Dasher knew he was the most debonair, tallest cane. Dancer and Prancer’s googly eyes twinkled and sparkled! Vixen, Comet and Cupid, why they could zig, zag, zoom and fly no matter how full Santa’s sleigh was! Perfectly shaped pipe cleaners created quite a look for Donner and Blitzen!
The candy canes all laughed at Rudolph! “Look at that shiny, pompom nose! You’ll never win! Ha,Ha,Ha!” Sobbing, Rudolph darted towards the forest.
BRRRING…Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer turned his alarm clock off! Rubbing hoof to eye, he thought, “Wow! I just had the silliest dream ….”
So cute! I especially love the ending!
Thanks so much! 🙂🎅
I LOVE the imagery of candy cane reindeer that many of us constructed as children! I could see this being a mixed media picture book with photographs depicting the candy cane reindeer.
Thanks! I think being a Kindergarten teacher may have helped with creating Candy Cane Reindeer!! 🙂
Fun! That twist made me chuckle. I love the line “Vixen, Comet and Cupid, why they could zig, zag, zoom and fly no matter how full Santa’s sleigh was!”
Thanks, Sarah! I was trying to visualize that…..🙂🎅
Ha ha!!! That was quite a dream! Good job!
Thank you! Glad you liked the story! 🎅🙂
Haha, I’m going to have to make candy cane reindeer with my kids today–and share this story with them.
Thank you! Hope your kids like the craft..my kids always liked making them! Hope they like the story too! 🙂🎅
Haha! Rudolph will have fun sharing the dream with the others:) Cute!
Thanks so much! 🎅🙂
A crafty and delicious twist on a Christmas classic!
Thanks so much!😊🎅
Great ending, Susan! And, all the parameters by which a candy cane is judged is so funny…especially the googly eyes equipped with precision night vision. Good luck and thanks for sharing this with us!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! 🎅🙂
I love the ending!!!! You had me seeing the candy cane competition and then dropped me into Rudolph’s awakening dream, fantastic!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! 🎅🙂
Excellent use of “It was only a dream…l! 😂
Thanks so much! I appreciate the comment! .🙂🎅
HE KNOWS IF YOU”VE BEEN BAD OR GOOD
by Colleen Murphy
246 words
“The envelopes sit on the top of the shelf,
and each is inscribed with the name of an elf.
The challenge is simple, to sew and to stuff
a dozen brown teddy bears filled full of fluff.
The first one to finish,” said Santa Claus, “wins.
At the sound of my sleigh bells, the contest begins!”
As soon as he signaled, assembly commenced,
except with Cassandra (as Santa Claus sensed).
She wielded her needle with purpose and flair,
but never inserted it into a bear
while other elves easily crafted with thread.
(As Santa suggested, they’d practiced ahead.
“I didn’t see value in such an endeavor;
there’s more to explore for a pixie so clever.”)
She slyly kept count of the projects completed.
At ten bears apiece she thought, “Action is needed.”
“Dear Elfmates, excuse me, a personal matter
behooves me to run and attend to my bladder.”
In minutes Cassandra came running and screaming,
“The bathroom is flooding; the toilets are teeming.”
Everyone rushed to attend to the mess–
(except for Cassandra who praised her success),
then came back to notice their stores had diminished.
Before they could protest, Cassandra said, “Finished!”
By touching his nose Santa calmed down the crew.
“We must give Cassandra the credit she’s due.
Now open this envelope bearing your name.
They’re longing to hear the reward you will claim.”
“Your prize,” read Cassandra while wiping a tear,
“is to clean out the stalls in the barn for a year.”
❤️Clever❤️
Thanks Dawn!
Punishment fits the crime! Poor naughty Cassandra.
Yes it does!
Great twist! Nice rhyme too. I always enjoy reading your stories, Colleen!
Thank you Sarah!
Colleen, this is so fun! Love the clever ending. What a great job with your rhyme too. Good luck to you!
Thank you Michelle!!
Wonderful, Colleen! I love your naughty little elf and your smart Santa!
Thank you Katrina!
Well done, Colleen! So hilarious and such a satisfying ending!
Great story, rhyme and meter, Colleen. Thank goodness naughty Cassandra got the appropriate “prize” for her dirty trick–your ending provided a very satisfying twist!
Thank you Lucretia!
Haha, Colleen! I was hoping you weren’t going to award Cassandra’s naughty behavior! Such a fun story!
Nope! And nor would Santa. He has known what she has been up to all year!
Original, ingenious, and hilarious! I’m in awe of how you managed to tell this deliciously twisted Christmas tale in beautifully rhyming verse, Colleen.
Aww! Thank you Anne. It is fun to do!
Great rhyme and great ending!!! 🎅🙂
Oh, if only things worked out this way! 😂 How funny! I loved the words together,
“filled full of fluff.” They feel so good.
Thank you Kathryn!!
I love Cassandra. Great character building!
Thank you Jill.
I love a twisty ending! Super fun!
So clever! And fabulous rhyme!
Thank you Barbara!
Very creative, Colleen. Your rhyme is fantastic and Cassandra got her, well deserved “prize.” Great job!
Thanks Nancy!
OLIVE, THE OTHER REINDEER
(To the tune of “Rudolph, the Red-Nosed Reindeer”)
By Lindsay Moretti
220 Words
We have Rusher and Tapper and Swagger and David,
Haley and Sweetie and Thunder and Lightning.
But do you know the most epic reindeer of all?
Olive, the other reindeer,
Was shrouded in mystery, (like Atlantis)
And in this very moment
She will remake history. (Like Allyson Felix.)
Today begins the contest
Of who will lead Santa’s sleigh. (Like ol’ Rudolph.)
Olive approached the start line.
Other reindeer clicked and brayed. (Like the Stooges.)
On the morn of Christmas Eve,
Santa had to say,
“Students of the foremost nine,
Let’s see who will fly tonight!”
After the whistle sounded,
They dashed ahead joyfully. (Hoo-wee!)
Some of them got the munchies
And three strayed off instantly. (They were hungry.)
And then they had to climb up
A treacherous mountain pass. (Like Mount Everest.)
Three reindeer had a fear of (wait for it…)
Heights that ruled them out quite fast. (Who knew?)
Only three reindeer remained
To finish the final test. (Here we go!)
Sidling through the dense fog,
Olive’s nose guided the rest! (Like a bright star.)
As they came out of the fog,
The reindeer had to say,
“Olive, with your handy light
You should fly the sleigh tonight!”
Oh how ol’ Rudolph cheered for
This fearless girl so joyfully! (Yahoo!)
“Olive, the red-nosed reindeer,
Fly that sleigh tonight proudly!”
This was so fun to read! Great work!
Thank you, Molly! It was fun to write 😊
I love how you added in refrains, like the ever popular “Like a Lightbulb, Like Columbus, etc” that many children grow up doing.
I’m happy to hear that! I remember those refrains were such a fun part of the song.
I really enjoyed your asides, especially the “wait for it.” Great job and good luck!
Thank you, Colleen!
SO fun! Definitely kid-friendly!
Thank you, Allison!
Such vivid voice. Others may play Reindeer Games, but Olive has a lock on the Reindeer Olympics (like Allyson Felix)!
Thank you, Anne!
Very funny! The parenthetical statements are the best!😂
Thank you! 😊
Love this take on Rudolph the Red nosed Reindeer!! 🙂
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😊
Go Green for Christmas
“Due Monday- Go Green for Christmas contest entries,” said Mrs. Denton. “First place is fifty-dollars. Recycled materials only.”
“Fifty bucks?” Jake shouted. “I’ll take it!” Everyone laughed.
“Psst! Sam!” Jake whispered. He held a note.
“Not now, Jake,” Sam said.
Jake wasn’t the best listener: his note flew onto Sam’s desk.
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“My house. Tomorrow morning. To create the WINNER!”
“I …work for my mom on Saturdays.”
“I’ll be there!” Alex said.
“Sam, breakfast!” Mom said.
“Do I have to help you collect garbage today?”
“Yes. Junking is how I get supplies.”
“Most artists buy supplies, Mom,” Sam said.
“I’m not most artists. I’m The Junk Lady- ‘Making Garbage Artfully Useful.’”
“Look at that!” Mom said fifteen minutes later. Her pick-up truck was soon filled with construction cones.
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Mom turned left. “Doesn’t Jake live on this street?”
Sam crouched down. Maybe Jake wouldn’t notice him.
“There’s your friend now.”
Alex stood in Jake’s driveway.
Jake burst out of his house.
“You made it!” Jake said.
Alex snickered. “Your mom collects garbage?”
“Uh…yeah,” Sam said.
“Go ahead, Sam.” Mom said. “I’ll manage alone today.”
Mom hit the gas. A cone fell off the truck and landed straight up. Jake threw the basketball to Alex.
Alex missed.
Sam ducked. The ball settled on the cone.
“Wow!” Alex said.
“It’s a…funky Christmas tree,” Sam said.
Jake opened the recycling bin. “Just needs decorations.”
“Being The Junk Lady’s son is pretty great,” Sam said Monday, as the principal placed a blue ribbon on the tree.
I love this story! It’s cute and has a great message behind it!
Thanks SDEAN26201. I’ve had this story on paper in one form or another for over a dozen years, and it was adding the recycling aspect that made it all come together.
I like that Mom’s junk-collecting for her repurposed-art helped her son create a prize-winning display. Mom must be so proud!
Thanks @ROYALBAYSINGER. I’ve had this story on paper in one form or another for a dozen years or more, and when I added the recycling aspect, it all came together in a fun way.
Very creative and practical!! I love that mom was a Junk Lady.
Thanks for the kind words. It was a fun write!
It seems like it!
All construction sites need traffic cone Christmas trees! Clever idea!
Wonderful story of seeing things—and people—in new ways.
It was a fun writing challenge. This story was originally over 750 words.
Nicely done!
Love the theme of Go Green! 🙂
@seschipper Thank you! I feel the same way 🙂
Go GREEN FOR CHRISTMAS is 250 words- I hit the send button before I added that.
TREE NUMBER NINE
By Lindsey Hobson
250 words
Sofie could barely contain her excitement. Today was Noel Knob’s first ever Christmas Tree Decorating Contest!
She had been gathering decorations for weeks —
Berries from the holly bush next door.
Strings of garland strung with white, fluffy popcorn.
Bows made from leftover ribbon.
She packed everything in her backpack and headed to the town square.
There, evergreen trees lined the lawn. The smell of fir, spruce, and pine tickled her nose.
At the sign-in table, Sofie was assigned tree number 9.
She got right to work — a bow here, berries there, garland wrapped around and around, and a big pinecone right on top!
Proudly, she stood beside her tree. But soon her shoulders sagged.
Around her, trees twinkled with tiny lights, dazzled with store-bought decorations, and on top of each tree was a shining star.
She glanced at the ceramic teapot on the prize table and felt her hopes evaporating like steam.
Zipping up her bag, Sofie headed home.
Behind her, the judges were ready to announce the winners.
“Third place goes to… Tree 21, for most decorations!”
Everyone clapped. Sofie kept walking.
“Second place goes to… Tree 7 for most sparkly!”
Everyone cheered. Sofie kept walking.
“And first place goes to… Tree 9 for most creative!”
Everyone celebrated. Stunned, Sofie hurried to the stage.
“Which prize would you like?”
“The teapot, please.”
When she got home, Sofie carefully wrapped the teapot in red and green paper.
Then, she filled out the gift tag —
To Mom
From Sofie
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
I loved reading about tender Sofie and her heartfelt efforts. This is a tale that celebrates the true selfless giving that defines Christmas.
Thank you. Merry Christmas!
Your descriptive writing makes me feel like I’m THERE! What a sweet ending to a beautifully written holiday tale! Well done, friend!
Thanks, Molly! 😊 I appreciate your help getting it ready!
Aww! This is delightful. I was rooting for sweet Sofie.
Thank you, Sarah!
My favorite sentence: ‘felt her hopes evaporating like steam.’ Well done. Nice story all around.
Thank you so much!
Aww this made my heart happy! Love the descriptive language and play on all senses – it places you right there with Sophie.
Aww! Thank you so much!
Lindsey I want to give Sofie a hug. What a sweet character you have created. ❤
Thank you, Colleen!
There’s so much heart in this! Sofie knows what Christmas is all about.
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it!
As a mom, I can tell you how I love gifts with a meaning behind them:) Thanks for this sweet story, Lindsey!
I am so glad you liked it! Thank you!
I love Sofie’s thoughtfulness, creativity, and generosity.
Thank you
So very sweet! I love the ending!
Thank you
Thank you Lindsey. That’s kind of you!
Christmas Boots
by P. J. (Jill) Purtee
249 words
Every Christmas, Rudy said, “Mom, I want cowboy boots. That’s all I want. Just the boots. I’ll wear them to the Rope-A-Reindeer Christmas Rodeo Contest.” Last year he added, “I’m twelve now—men’s size 8.”
Every Christmas, his mom patted Rudy’s worn out cowboy hat. “Sure. And I’ll ask Santa for a nice man to marry so I can quit my second job.” She joked, but she meant it.
Boots were pricey. His mom couldn’t afford one pair of boots and Rudy needed two pair. He was born with two different sizes of feet. He donated his spare shoes to soldiers who had lost a leg in combat.
Mr. Nicholas, a soldier who held the record for Rope-A-Reindeer, always thanked them for the shoe donations, especially the one that fit his left foot last year. In return, he taught Rudy how to tie rope knots for the rodeo. Rudy’s fingers fumbled.
A few years ago, Rudy said, “Mom, Mr. Nicholas is nice. Let’s invite him for Christmas dinner.
So they did—every year. And after dinner, Mr. Nicolas and Rudy roped the dog . . . for practice. Rudy’s rope always slipped.
Last Christmas, Mr. Nicholas married Rudy’s mom, she quit her second job, and Rudy found something special under the tree . . . two pair of cowboy boots! He donated the right boot to a soldier. His new dad wore the left.
Rudy won third place in Rope-A-Reindeer dressed in new boots and . . .
a new cowboy hat.
Such a sweet story! You did a wonderful job!
Thank you. Ha! Reminds me of the Christmas Hallmark movies. My husband and I watch one nearly every evening.
Wow, I love the awareness this opens up for readers both young and old. I also LOVE that Rudy uses his hardship to consistently bless the lives of others!
Thank you.
What a sweet story! Love the Rope-A-Reindeer event and Rudy’s happy ending.
Thank you.
What a sweet story, Jill. I love its message of thoughtfulness and sharing. Great job!
Thank you, Lucretia.
I love that Rudy has a heart of gold! Stories like yours can inspire other children! Nice, Jill!
Thank you, Colleen.
Wow, this is so sweet! I love how Rudy’s generosity comes back to him, twofold!
Thank you, Allison.
Love the sentiment and kindness in this story Jill.
Thank you, Colleen.
Jill, thank you for a sweet story of Christmas kindness….and cowboys!
Thank you, Kathryn. I’m glad you liked the cowboys. I grew up in Oklahoma!
A heartwarming story of the transformative power of generosity.
Thank you, Anne. I’m glad this warmed your heart.
It’s those unexpected twists that just get me! Nicely done!
ELLAROSE’S SWEATER
By Marta Cutler
(250 Words)
Everyone in class had signed up for the Ugliest Christmas Sweater contest. Not Ellarose. She didn’t feel very holiday-like. Until she saw the prize. It was the most beautiful snow globe she’d ever seen. Her mom would love it. Maybe it would make her feel less sad that they’d had to move in with Gran!
To keep it secret, Ellarose decided to make her sweater. Gran had taught her to knit. Could she do something this big? She had to try.
She collected Gran’s wool and hid it under her bed. She knit after school and at night. As she knit, Ellarose started remembering Christmases when they were a family. Picking out the tree. Making chocolates with her dad. Singing carols in the car.
The sweater grew and grew. So did Ellarose’s memories. The more she knit, the better she felt.
The day of the contest, Ellarose wore her coat so no one would see her sweater. She lined up with the other children. Each sweater was uglier and funnier than the next. Finally, it was her turn. She took off her coat and stepped onstage.
“Ooooo,” said the judges.
“Ahhhhh,” said her classmates.
Ellarose’s sweater wasn’t ugly. It was magical. It glowed with her memories. Looking at it made you feel all the best and warmest feelings. Someone started to sing. Someone else started to cry.
The judges were unanimous. And when her mom saw the snow globe, she smiled for the first time in months. So did Ellarose.
You created such a beautiful story! I love the impact of putting emotions and weaving memories into something creative.
Thank you so much Lindsay!
It’s so nice how you’ve involved Gran to teach Ellarose how to knit. I also enjoyed how she created her sweater herself:) Nice, Marta!
I loved that you showed knitting as an art form like any other – the therapeutic, emotional journey that goes into creating something beautiful! Bravo!
Hi Royal. That means a lot! Thank you!
I love this story, Marta. So warm and magical.
Thank you Sarah!
I felt the love in every stitch.
Oh, that’s such a sweet compliment! 🙂
A magical, knitted tapestry of memories for the win-and a present for mom! Lovely story, Marta.
Thank you SO much Lucretia. That’s a very lovely compliment!
This is jam-packed with heart. Well done!
Thank you Allison. Your own stories are just so wonderful, I didn’t know where to begin, so this means a lot! 🙂
The reveal would make for a great illustration! So sweet!
Thanks Colleen!!!!
Ellarose created something so memorable and magical. And so did you.
That is a very lovely thing to say. Thank you for taking the time to comment!
Another lump in my throat..beautiful!
A Fourth Grader’s Poster Problem
(248 words)
By Jennifer Vose
On Ms. March’s “Go!”, the entire fourth grade made a mad dash for the art closet, but not me. While the other kids carried armloads of supplies back to their desks, I stayed glued to my chair. I didn’t dare raise my hand and ask, “What should I do if my family doesn’t celebrate anything?” This was one art contest I wouldn’t win. But a “creative poster” showing how our family celebrates the winter holidays was part of our grade, so I knew I had to come up with something. No way was I failing art!
With my blank posterboard stuffed into my backpack, I hurried home from the bus stop so Sally wouldn’t ask me a million questions about my poster. Hers, no doubt, would look as perfect as the tree in her front window. What could I do for mine?
I knew the answer when I climbed my front steps and came face-to-face with the mountain of food our neighbors had piled under Mom’s hand-written sign, “Food Bank Donation Drop Off.” I grabbed my camera and snapped a picture. OK, so a food drive probably wasn’t what Ms. March had in mind, but this is, after all, what my family does every December. I glued the photo to my poster board and wrote, “My Neighborhood Gives.”
Sally’s gingerbread village poster did get the blue ribbon. But Ms. March put me in charge of MY class’s food drive, which I thought was a way cooler prize anyway.
WOW! I love that this story addresses and includes individuals who don’t celebrate holidays. I am impressed and delighted! Your main character is the kind of young person that we grown-ups can all learn from!
Perfect 🤩
Love the voice in this story. I agree that a leadership role is a way cooler prize.
This is so sweet, and I absolutely love the ending! We need more kids focused on giving this time of year.
Refreshing. Wonderful–on many levels.
What a great message and way to celebrate the holidays! And it is important to recognize that not everyone does celebrate in the same way.
Your story speaks volumes with a strong, vivid, and authentic voice.
Yep! It is so important to include EVERYONE. I love how this teacher handled it and that the child appreciated how cool his tradition really is!
A BUGGIE TRADITION
By Kay Inglis
Snow Fly is a winter bug.
They only have one thing to do.
Winter is kind of lonely and a little boring.
Ant and Lady Bug are summer bugs.
Summer is busy with lots of friends and doings.
Today, Snow Fly hatched early, and Ant and Lady Bug hibernate.
It’s a first – a winter bug meets a summer bug!
“Good morning, summery summer bugs! Gotta go. There’s a winter contest to prepare for. It’s tradition!”
“What contest?!” said both Ant and Lady Bug.
“Stay and chat,” Ant asked.
“No way. Winter’s short. I must gather lots of seeds and dried berries to win, win, win.”
“Who wins?” asked Ant.
“Why all the summery summer bugs. We prepare your first meal after hibernation. It’s what we do. Have a good sleepy sleep.”
Snow Fly scampered away.
“I didn’t know about winter bugs,” Ant said
“And they think of us,” Lady Bug added.
We have a little time. Let’s start a winter contest too,” said Lady Bug.
“Yeah! Where the winter bugs are the winners,” Ant said.
Soon, Ant created a cavern in a dirt bank.
Lady Bug carved a slide and erected a jungle gym.
Then they hibernate.
In spring, Ant and Lady Bug race to the cavern. Bugs had played on the playground. Piles of seeds and berries filled the space.
Best of all, a sign read:
Every Buggie Bug is a Winner
Now, all summer bugs spend time making their winter contest bigger and buggier.
It’s tradition.
Word Count – 249
What a cute idea! I’ve always been a sucker for stories that have talking animals as the main characters!
Thank you!
Very creative and fun story!
I love Snow Fly’s lilted voice! (summery summer, sleepy sleep, buggie bug) I also enjoyed the feeling of excitement that Ant and Lady Bug had when they woke up to see if Snow Fly had enjoyed their present.
Thank you much!
So sweet! I love the idea of bugs making fun things for each other, even when they’ll never meet!
My favorite part . . . Have a good sleepy sleep.
I am loving the evolvement of this buggie tradition. And like many traditions, it just keeps growing. Great imagination!
An incredibly imaginative insect story! Your word repetition cleverly evokes wing-beating.
Thank you!
Now THAT is creative! Well done!
Kendy and the Solstice Solo Show
By Sarah Meade
Word Count: 250
Kendy couldn’t wait!
It was December 21, the day of the Winter Solstice Solo Show.
“Ready for tonight?” she asked her best friends.
Jessa gulped. “I’m nervous singing in front of the judges.”
Len nodded. “Me too. I forget the words.”
“But there are prizes!” Kendy cried.
“Will you help us practice?” asked Jessa.
“Sorry,” said Kendy, “I have to rehearse my song. It’ll be my best solo ever!”
That night each singer stepped onstage for their solo.
Kendy sang out loud and proud.
Jessa took one look at the judges– and froze.
Len forgot the words.
When the winners were announced . . .
Kendy was one of them!
She fist-pumped, then picked her prize, a yule log cake.
“Sweet!” She swirled like a snowflake.
Kendy found her friends and said, “Let’s go to my house and share it!”
“No thanks.” Jessa and Len walked away.
Kendy frowned.
Victory didn’t feel quite so sweet anymore.
Later . . .
Kendy tossed and turned.
She pondered . . .
and planned . . .
It was the longest night.
In the morning, Kendy set off to deliver invitations.
“What’s this?” asked Jessa.
“Please come to Kendy’s Christmas Eve KARAOKE PARTY!” Len read.
“No judges,” Kendy said.
Jessa smiled.
“It’s fine if you forget the words, because they’re up on the screen!” Kendy said.
Len laughed.
On Christmas Eve, Kendy, Jessa, and Len sang out loud and proud– together.
“Best Christmas ever!” Jessa cheered.
“Let’s do this again on New Year’s Eve!” Len whooped.
“Sweet!” Kendy swirled like a snowflake.
She couldn’t wait.
This is so sweet!!
Good problem solving, Kendy! Love the swirl like a snowflake. Great job as always, Sarah!
Thank you so much, Bonnie!
I like the believable disappointment and pouting after a poor performance. Kendy is also a well-written friend who wants to love and support her friends while giving them their space!
Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words!
Aw! What a good friend Kendy is!!! Nice job Sarah! Good luck to you!
Thanks, Michelle!
Kendy came up with the perfect solution! I could relate to this one (as I’m sure kids would). I played a drum solo at a contest once; I was so nervous, I walked off the stage WITHOUT MY DRUM and had to retrieve it in front of the judges.
Oh no! Yes, solos are hard. And I love karaoke with friends. 🙂 Thanks for reading!
Kendy’s thoughtfulness and gracious, supportive friendship is heart-warming–at any time of the year. Nice story, Sarah!
Love this entry, Sarah! Kendy is a good friend, and who doesn’t love karaoke?!
A splendid story, so apropos to the season, that beautifully celebrates the virtues of winning graciously and bringing joy to others.
I can so relate to this stage fright Sarah. When I was about ten I won a local singing contest which won me a trip to 4-H camp where I was supposed to sing and compete again. But I developed a bad case of laryngitis (brought upon by fear) and never even performed the second time. I love how Kendy found a way to make her friends feel confident and happy! Great job.
Sarah, you know I love this because of the singing! 😉 I’m so happy Kendy learned to be considerate of her friends feelings! She is a true winner! So sweet!!
Nice job as usual Sarah! 🙂🎅
Nice arc! Great story!
Just adore the sweet ending with the friends all singing together. Nice arc for Kendy’s character. Well done, Sarah!
Elsie and the Christmas Comedy Contest
By Sarah Meade
Word Count: 249
All December Elsie prepared for the Cows’ Christmas Comedy Contest.
She jotted jokes and rehearsed with her best friend Heloise.
“Why does Santa have three gardens?
So he can ‘HO HO HO’!”
Heloise chuckled.
Elsie grinned. “What did the gingerbread man put under his blankets?
A cookie sheet.”
Heloise tittered.
Elsie beamed. “What’s the best Christmas present ever?
A broken drum– You just can’t beat it!”
Heloise cracked up.
Elsie took a bow.
Surely she’d win Funniest Fruitcake!
On Christmas Eve, the barn was packed.
The Fa-La-Ha-Ha Laughter Tracker was ready.
The Cows’ Christmas Comedy Contest began.
Lollipop earned lots of laughs with her knock-knock jokes.
Angus got guffaws for his Farmer Green impression.
But Bessie and Daisy brought down the barn with their “Moos-on-first?” skit.
Elsie gulped.
How could she follow that?
She stepped onstage, knees knocking.
“M-m-mooey Christmas,” Elsie stammered.
Silence.
“Where does a snowman keep his moolah?
In a SNOW-bank.”
Elsie heard one lone laugh.
“What’s red, white, and blue at Christmastime?
A sad candy cane.”
A familiar chuckle.
“What’s the weather forecast every Christmas?
One hundred percent chance of REIN-deer.”
One giggle. Everyone else groaned.
Elsie skittered offstage . . .
out of the barn . . .
to the pond.
“Hi,” Heloise whispered from behind her.
“I flopped.” Elsie hid her head.
“You were udderly hilarious!” Heloise said.
Elsie brightened. “Really?”
She didn’t win Funniest Fruitcake . . .
but Elsie already had the FUNNEST friend.
“What comes at the end of Christmas Day?
The letter Y!”
Heloise fell over laughing.
Elsie grinned.
So cute! I’m going to share those jokes with my kids, they’ll love them! Moooo! 🙂
Oh, I’m so glad you’re going to share the jokes with your kids!
Sarah, I LOVE this one! Cows as main characters for a Christmas story is unique and very fun! Their names are hilarious, you painted a great picture of a solid rehearsal followed by failure. I really liked the mentioning “Moo’s on First” and “Farmer Green impression.”
Thank you so much, Royal! I appreciate your kind words.
Not one but TWO entries!!! Great job Sarah!!! Just MOOvalous!
Thanks, Michelle!! 🙂
Nice story with a sweet ending, Sarah. I love your unique MCs and funny Christmas riddles!
My kids are going to go bananas for this jokes! Fa-la-HA-HA indeed!
An udderly delightful Christmas twist on barnyard humor, Sarah! You really milk those jokes for all they’re worth!
Oh, yes. Cute. Funny. Great job!
Well I thought the jokes were funny! I am glad Elsie was at least appreciated by Heloise!
Love the “moovelous” jokes! I’m going to have to attempt to remember them!! Great job!🐄
Favorite joke….. “What did the gingerbread man put under his blankets?
A cookie sheet.” 😂
Man, we all need friends like this! Thanks for writing this!
This is SO up my alley! Thanks for sharing the fun!
I love this one 😉 Well done!
The Better Elf on the Shelf
Word Count: 242
Santa Claus was coming to town…
and Wink and Trixie were up to their stockings in holiday horseplay!
Wink was all never-not naughty while Trixie was all sugar-and-spice nice.
But, they couldn’t help but wonder who was the BETTER elf on the shelf?
There was only one way to find out…
“How about a little holiday contest?” Trixie asked.
Without another word, Wink marched to the treat dish and unwrapped a chocolate candy.
He playfully plopped it in the toilet bowl – a sly grin covered his face.
“Ha! Wink ONE..and Trixie NONE!” he shouted.
I better not pout, Trixie thought.
I can do better…no doubt!
She hustled to the kitchen and sprinkled handfuls of powdered sugar snow from the canister.
Lying down, she waved her arms and legs – an angelic smile covered her face.
“WINNER, WINNER CHRISTMAS DINNER!” Trixie cheered.
I better not cry, Wink thought.
I can do better if I try!
A roll of toilet paper in his hand, Wink shimmied up the Christmas tree branch by branch until…
“OH, JINGLE BELLS!”
He tumbled down,
down,
down…
Snow flurries fluttering in her belly, Trixie hurried over.
“Maybe it’s not about who is better…” Wink said. “I think it’s best if we work together!”
So, the elves shook on it.
The next morning, merry footsteps rushed down the stairs.
Wink and Trixie’s kids discovered them having snow much fun, armed with fluffy marshmallows.
“A snowball fight!” they all cheered.
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So cute, Molly! I want to make powdered sugar snow angels! Love the holiday language woven in, too.
Thanks so much! I’d also LOVE to make a powdered sugar snow angel, haha!
I love this! You wrote it so well, I could see it all in my mind just as if I was looking at a picture book!
Thanks so much for your kind comments! Hope you had fun reading!
Clever descriptions of the two very different elves. “Never-not naughty” and “Sugar-and-spice-nice.” Love it!
Thank you for the thoughtful comments! 🙂
This is great! I had considered writing a story about an elf on the shelf too. Good luck to you!!!
Can’t go wrong with the elf on the shelf – haha! Thank you!
Love this, Molly! It’s so fun to read aloud, and your word choices throughout are snow perfect!
Haha – I see what you did there! Thank you so much!!
What a cute, engaging story, Molly. I enjoyed your two MC’s dialogue with their many internal rhymes and holiday references as well as your sprinkles of alliteration and their “all never-not naughty” and “all sugar-and-spice nice” characterization dichotomy, too. Very clever and well done!
Haha, those mischievous elves! Kids will love this entry!
Thank you so much! Elves make things more merry!
You grabbed my attention from the beginning. Wink–such a fun name. And ‘up to their stockings in holiday horseplay.’ What a great opening!
Thank you!! So glad you enjoyed reading!
The elves being themselves!! Fun and imaginative!
Always so tricky! Thanks so much!
My kids only have one elf this time of year. But after reading this story, we may just have to get another one for twice the fun! I enjoyed this story so much! 🙂
This is our first year with one…but pretty sure my daughter would FREAK one day if she woke up and found two! Haha…thanks so much!
An odd-couple story that doubles the fun!
Thanks so much! 🙂
Love the Elf off the shelf mischief of Wink and Trixie, what a sweet ending! Yum!
Thanks so much! 🙂
What a lovable couple of characters! Love the shenanigans!
Good job!
Thanks!
Ernie and the Science Fair (249 words)
By Deborah Foster
Ernie Elf paced back and forth. The bells on his shoes echoed the clock.
Tick-tock. Jingle-jangle.
The Holiday Science Fair was tomorrow and Ernie still hadn’t come up with a project!
Tick-tock. Jingle-jangle.
Sandy, a sugarplum elf, created a powdered sugar that erased memory; perfect for when children woke up and saw Santa.
Sam, Head of Security, boasted that an elf in his department had created a silent device that kept mean dogs from biting Santa.
Even Ernie’s best friend, Ralph, had finished his project!
Though he wouldn’t let anyone see it! Not even Ernie. Ralph kept it hidden in the stables.
What could he, a lowly elf in the happiness department, possibly make? North Pole elves were always happy. As long as the hot chocolate didn’t run out.
That’s it!
Jingle-jangle. Jingle-jangle.
Ernie ran to collect his supplies.
The next morning, Ernie watched as Santa and the Head Elves judged the projects.
Ernie crossed his fingers and toes.
“And the winner is… Ralph and his Reindeer Poop-Scooping Robot!”
Ernie congratulated Ralph and began to pack up his project.
“Ahem,” someone coughed.
Ernie turned to see Santa.
“I love your project Ernie. Do you think you could install your Never-ending Cocoa Machine on my sleigh? The hot chocolate always runs out and I’m grumpy by the time I get home.”
Ernie gleamed, “Of course!”
“One more thing,” Santa said, “I officially name you Apprentice of the Happiness Department!”
The bells on Ernie’s shoes sang as he skipped home.
Jingle-jingle-jangle-jangle.
So cute and clever! I especially love the ‘jingle-jangles’!
So funny! Laugh out loud good! I LOVE that a sugar plum elf developed the sleep powder sugar. I LOVE that the incredibly practical poop scooping robot won. But I also like to think of even Santa getting a bit grumpy as he runs out of hot chocolate on his way home. SO clever!
Thank you both!
This is delightful! Love the creative inventions and the fun jingles and jangles throughout.
I really like the jingle-jangle!
What a clever, creative story! Enjoyed your engaging intro and each elf’s practical invention–very fun and funny.
Oh, I love the idea of an elf science fair. And I’d like a never-ending cocoa machine too, please!
Great job! I love the jingle-jangles and the idea of a hot cocoa machine! I think we all need one in our “sleighs”.
The Happiness Department . . . love it!
Who wouldn’t want a never-ending hot cocoa machine?? Way to go Ernie! And good luck Deborah!
An ingenious story of inspiration and invention.
Such a fun atmosphere to this one! And…hot chocolate! Yum!
What a lovely, engaging story, Kathryn. I liked that the contest transformed the “entire neighborhood from ‘meh’ to merry!” Lillith’s “live action” mailbox display is so clever–and environmentally friendly!
What a great idea! Love this story and found myself waiting too. Nice job. My favorite line was “from “meh” to merry!” 😉 Cute!
oops! Sorry–just realized I replied to a comment not to the story!
Thank you Lucretia!
And thank you, Amy!
This was adorable. The anticipation associated with “just wait” really worked!
Beautiful story — my favorite line was “like ornaments falling from the sky”. I could just see it happening. Good job.
I LOVE this story! It is so much fun, and I can just picture all the festive mailboxes and the big reveal at the end. This would be a delightful picture book that I’d definitely buy!
Goodness! I wish that was possible. Thank you so much.
MR TWEEDY’S CHRISTMAS TREES
By Colleen Fogarty Word Count 244
Mr. Tweedy had grown Christmas trees forever. Now he was tired
“Boys,” he said to the trees, “I’ve decided to sell the farm.”
“Noooooo,” they howled.
DouglasFir, the oldest, pleaded with Mr. Tweedy. “We can’t grow for a stranger. No one would
care for us like you.”
Frasier and BlueSpruce agreed. “Mr. Tweedy, who will trim our limbs? Who will cut us down when someone wants to take us home for Christmas?”
Old Mr. Tweedy pondered this and announced, “We’ll have contest. You have six weeks before the townsfolk come for their trees. You can each be a winner if you make yourself handsome enough to be picked. Those who can’t, will remain on the farm with the new owner.
The trees didn’t answer. Their branches sloped.
ScotchPine’s sap started to drip. “I don’t stand a chance; who’d pick me with my crooked trunk?
”
The weeks passed quickly. The trees shook their branches getting rid of brown needles, careful not to shake off their prized pinecones. ScotchPine didn’t even have pinecones.
Opening day arrived. Townsfolk parked their cars and strolled through rows of sweet, spicy Christmas trees. Mr. Tweedy tied DouglasFir, Frasier and BlueSpruce onto the cars.
A family arrived, pushing a boy in a wheelchair. The boy yelled, “Look,,,that’s my tree!” pointing to ScotchPine.
“Teddy,” his father said, “It’s crooked and thin.”
Teddy answered, “Yes, just like me.”
Mr. Tweedy tied ScotchPine onto Teddy’s car.
“ScotchPine, you’ re the winningest tree of all!”
Such a sweet message! And I love the idea of talking Christmas trees!
Thank you! They says tres do communicate….
I love Mr. Tweedy, the aged, caring gardener and his relationship with his trees! So clever talking about the trees shaking off the brown needles while being careful to keep their pinecones. And your description of evergreens as “sweet and spicy” calls to mind their fragrance. Very nice!
Sweet story! I like the holiday setting and unusual characters.
Lovely story with a sweet message. I so enjoyed Mr Tweedy’s relationship with and kindness toward his Christmas trees. Well done!
Oh ScotchPine! I’m glad you found a home!
Great ‘showing’ of tears . . . ‘sap started to drip.’
Aww!! ScotchPine found the perfect home. What a great message Colleen.
Here goes the lump in my throat again. Thank you for the lovely story!
Best Wrapped Surprise
By Sara Dean
250 words
My school’s Christmas wrapping competition
is finally here!
I’m going to win.
I’ve practiced all year!
I’ve wrapped the same box,
over and over again.
It definitely shows,
I wore a hole in one end.
Mom says no one will notice.
It’ll be okay.
I hope she’s right.
The contest is today!
My cat, Fluffy, watches,
as I gather supplies.
He’s excited too,
I can see it in his eyes.
I drop the paper, ribbon and tape.
It makes a sound.
It must have scared Fluffy,
because now he’s nowhere to be found.
I wrap the box in blue paper,
then tie on a bow.
I tape on gold stars,
then Mom says, “Time to go.”
In the gym at school,
presents cover the floor.
I nearly trip over several,
as I walk through the door.
I set mine down,
and step to the side.
It looks like it’s shaking,
but there’s nothing inside!
The room gets quiet,
as the judge walks in.
This is what we’ve waited for,
it’s about to begin!
The judge picks up each present.
He studies each one.
Only mine is left,
then the judging is done.
He holds it up,
close to his face.
What happens next,
makes me freeze in my place!
The box begins to shake,
it rattles, it rocks.
Then Fluffy bursts out,
through the top of the box!
I’m sure I’ve lost,
until the judge hands me a prize.
I won a new category,
for the best Christmas wrapping surprise!
Fun rhyme! I really enjoyed reading your piece! Good luck to you!
Thank you! I had so much fun writing it! Good luck to you too!
Oh, silly kitties and their bizarre affinity for boxes! A very creative premise!
Thank you! Our cat has never met a box he didn’t like, so it wasn’t hard to imagine him doing something like this!
Cute. Too bad we don’t have animals anymore. I may have to borrow a family dachshund or two; I’m a terrible wrapper, too.
Thanks! We have plenty of animals, I’ll loan you some of mine to make your wrapping more interesting! 🙂