Would You Read It Wednesday #322 – Puffcaso (PB) PLUS The February/March Pitch Winner!!!

It’s May! It’s May!  The lovely month of May!

Okay.  It’s possible the original version of that song had a word other than “lovely” but this is supposed to be an E for Everyone blog… 😊

Here on Blueberry Hill we are still having April Showers… always a little behind the times up on ye olde mountain top!… but we also have more than 4 dandelions, so May is definitely trying to get her foot in the door!

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In other news, Amazon and Barnes & Noble indicate that WHY A DAUGHTER NEEDS A DAD is having a book birthday today, in plenty of time for folks to pick one up for Father’s Day or any day 😊  B&N recognizes me as an author, Amazon does not (I have no explanation) but I did in fact write the words! 😊

Dad - art from spread 1 DAD - art from lion cub spread

 

Artist Sydney Hanson did such a fantastic job, don’t you think?! 😊

Okay, sorry!  I’ll stop!  Everyone put on your serious face and we’ll be all business from here on in!

First, I’m thrilled to announce that the winner of the February/March Pitch Pick is one of the Sarahs (not surprising since we had 3 of them!) for her pitch for Trapped In Trash!

Congratulations, Sarah (Hetu-Radny lest there be any Sarah confusion)! Your pitch is on its way to editor Erin Molta for her thoughts!

And congratulations to all our other pitchers for stepping out of their comfort zones and bravely posting their pitches for constructive criticism and a learning experience for all of us.  Even though Erin won’t read these pitches, I hope you all got enough helpful feedback from our fabulous readers to feel that you have stronger pitches now than you did when you started! (Also, I want you to know this is the closest Pitch Pick vote we’ve ever had – all the pitches were within 4 votes of each other and there was a tie for second! So you should all feel good!)

To celebrate Sarah, congratulate our other pitchers on their wonderful work, and thank our amazing, generous, and helpful readers, I think it’s time for Something Chocolate!  How about some Peanut Butter Oreo Dessert!

Peanut Butter Oreo Dessert

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Recipe HERE at I Am Baker

 

We can start a trend and have dessert for breakfast!  Although, when I think about apple danish (essentially pie) and pancakes (I mean, come on, they have cake in the name!) I have a feeling we may not be the first to have come up with this idea… 😊

Now then, onto today’s pitch which comes to us from Nadine.  Nadine is an elementary librarian for an urban PA school district. She loves how fortunate she is to be surrounded all day by books and children to share them with.  She is a mom to three young men and two dachshunds. 

Nadine has two picture books being published later this year by Blue Whale Press.  You can visit her website Nadinepoper.weebly.com to learn more.

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Here is her pitch:

Working Title: Puffcaso

Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)

The Pitch: Pufferfish meets Picasso. The ocean art contest is days away. Pufferfish works hard at his project only to have it ruined by a hostile ocean dweller. A faceoff with his adversary leads Pufferfish to unexpected teamwork.

So what do you think?  Would You Read It?  YES, MAYBE or NO?

If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest.  If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Nadine improve her pitch.  Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome.  (However I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful.  I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)

Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks!  For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on Would You Read it in the dropdown under For Writers in the bar above.  There are openings in June, so you could get your pitch up pretty soon for helpful feedback and a chance to have it read and commented on by editor Erin Molta!

Nadine is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch!  I am looking forward to taking my dad’s car for a oil change! (Yeah, I know, today’s agenda is a little less exciting than some…but you’ve got to find the fun, even when it appears to be lacking…! 😊)

Have a wonderful Wednesday everyone!!! 😊