Hi Everyone. Posting of finalists is delayed. I’m not exactly sure when they’ll be up, but it will be as soon as possible. Likely another week.
Eye of newt and dragon fang! It’s time for . . .
The 12th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest!!!

~ for children’s writers ~
THE CONTEST: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in word count) using the words slither, treat, and scare.
- Your story can be poetry or prose, scary, funny, sweet, or anything in between, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words. Get it? Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people 😊
- You can go under the word count but not over!
- Title is not included in the word count.
- You may use the words in any form i.e. slithery (yes, it’s a word, we looked it up 😊), treated, scary, etc, etc, whathaveyou 😊
- You are welcome to enter more than one entry – just remember you’ll be competing against yourself 😊
- No illustration notes please!
And yes, I know 100 words is short, but that’s part of the fun and the challenge!
POST: your story in the comment section of the Official Contest Post (that’s this one!)( between Right NOW this very second! and 11:59PM Eastern Monday October 31st (So you have 3 full days to post – today, tomorrow, and Monday.)
- For those of you who would also like to post on your blogs, please feel free to do so! You are welcome to include the link to your blog with your entry in the comment section of the Official Contest Post so that people can come visit your blog, but all entries must be posted in the comment section of THIS Post between right now and Monday October 31st at 11:59PM Eastern.
- If you have difficulty posting your entry to the comments, which unfortunately sometimes happens, you may email your entry to me and I’ll post it for you! [susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com Please place your entry in the body of the email including your title, byline (that means who the story is by – you! – so for example, By Jane Doe) and word count at the top – NO ATTACHMENTS! and please do not submit any entries before the official opening of the contest at 12:01 AM Saturday October 29th. They will not be accepted.
- I know how hard you all work on your entries, and how anxious you are to get them posted, but please try to be a little patient if your entry doesn’t show up immediately. Many comments have to be manually approved, and it sometimes takes me a little while to post entries that come in by email. I promise I will get to everything as soon as I can. I try never to leave my desk during contests, but sometimes it’s unavoidable 😊
THE JUDGING: over the following days, my devoted assistants and I will read and re-read and narrow down the entries to a finalist field of about 12 which will be posted here for you to vote on I hope by Saturday November 5th (though if the judging takes longer than expected it might be a little later – we will do our best! But fair warning I have two school visits that week and a long drive Friday.) The winners will be announced Tuesday November 8th (good lord willin’ and the creek don’t rise 😊)
Judging criteria will be as follows:
- 1. Kid-appeal! – These stories are intended for a young audience (ages 12 and under), so we’re looking for stories that children will enjoy and relate to.
- 2. Halloweeniness – the rules state a Halloween story, so it must be crystal clear that the story is about Halloween, not just some random spooky night.
- 3. Use of all 3 required words and whether you came it at 100 words or less.
- 4. Quality of story – entries must tell a story, including a main character of some kind and a true story arc even if it’s tiny 😊 Entries must not be merely descriptions or mood pieces.
- 5. Quality of Writing: check your spelling, grammar, punctuation etc. If you’re going to rhyme, give us your best 😊 Use and flow of language, correctness of mechanics, excellence of rhyme and meter if you use it, PROOFREADING!
- 6. Originality and creativity – because that is often what sets one story above another.
- 7. How well you followed the Submission Guidelines – agents and editors expect professionalism. This is a chance to practice making sure you read and follow specified guidelines. If you don’t follow agent and editor submission guidelines, they won’t even read your submission.
THE PRIZES: So amazing! What wonderful, generous people we have in our kidlit community! Just wait til you see what you can win!
⭐️ Rhyme & Meter Self Study Course – Renee LaTulippe Renée M. LaTulippe is the author of The Crab Ballet (Cameron Kids/Abrams, 2022) and Limelight: Theater Poems to Perform (Charlesbridge, 2024) and has poems published in many anthologies including No World Too Big, Night Wishes, School People, National Geographic’s The Poetry of US, One Minute Till Bedtime, Poems Are Teachers, ThankU: Poems of Gratitude, and A World Full of Poems.

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming or Non-rhyming, Fiction or Nonfiction) with written feedback AND a 30-minute Zoom Chat with children’s author Vivian Kirkfield, author of PIPPA’S PASSOVER PLATE (Holiday House, 2019), SWEET DREAMS, SARAH (Creston Books, 2019), FOUR OTTERS TOBOGGAN (Pomegranate, 2019), MAKING THEIR VOICES HEARD: THE INSPIRING FRIENDSHIP OF ELLA FITZGERALD AND MARILYN MONROE (Little Bee Books, 2020), FROM HERE TO THERE: INVENTIONS THAT CHANGED THE WAY THE WORLD MOVES (Clarion Books, 2021), and SHOW ME HOW! BUILD YOUR CHILD’S SELF-ESTEEM THROUGH READING, CRAFTING AND COOKING (MoneyPenny Press Ltd, 2010)

⭐️ 30 Minute Zoom Ask Me Anything with Rosie Pova author of IF I WEREN’T WITH YOU (Spork, April 2017), SARAH’S SONG (Spork, September 2017), SUNDAY RAIN (Lantana Publishing, March 2021), THE SCHOOL OF FAILURE: A STORY ABOUT SUCCESS (Yehoo Press, May 2022), and for Middle Grade readers, HAILEY QUEEN PRANKING MAKES PERFECT: THE ALIEN ENCOUNTER (Spork, April 2017) Rosie does a lot of school visits and presentations, should that happen to be of interest for your Ask Me Anything.

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (rhyming preferred) with Andrea Denish, author of EVERYONE LOVES A PARADE (Astra Young Readers, March 2020), and THE WAY WE SAY HELLO forthcoming from Starry Forest Books February 7, 2023

⭐️ Picture Book Critique (non-rhyming) with Becky Scharnhorst, author of MY SCHOOL STINKS! (Flamingo Books, July 2021) and THIS FIELD TRIP STINKS! (Flamingo Books, August 2022)

⭐️ Connecting With School Librarians! Fabulous Opportunity for published or soon to be published authors! Winner’s Choice of either a Zoom or phone chat about how to connect with school librarians and get their ear or an Ask Me Anything Zoom or phone chat about K-8th grade author visits from a librarian’s POV from Kathy Halsey. Kathy Halsey is Storyteller Academy’s Community Manager and Ambassador. She enjoys writing picture books, humor, and nonfiction. Kathy’s active in SCBWI and blogs with other kid lit writers on the GROG. She serves on the Choose to Read Ohio Advisory Council and speaks at educational and literary conferences. Kathy’s a former K-12 school librarian and children’s bookseller. She writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month along with Keila Dawson.

⭐️ 30 Minute Ask Me Anything Zoom Chat (anything relating to writing/publishing) with Penny Parker Klostermann, talented author of THERE WAS AN OLD DRAGON WHO SWALLOWED A KNIGHT (Random House 2015) and A COOKED-UP FAIRY TALE (Random House 2017) as well as the forthcoming SPIDER LADY: Nan Songer and Her Arachnid WWII Army (Astra/Calkins Creek 2025) and another as yet unannounced 😊

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming) PLUS Zoom Chat from developmental editor Lou Piccolo! Lou studied English Literature, creative writing and teaching at university in South Africa. After working as an EFL teacher in France for twenty years, she studied proofreading and editing before becoming a developmental editor of children’s and young adult’s literature for independent authors. She is a graduate of Renee LaTulippe’s Lyrical Language Lab – Punching Up Prose With Poetry course and Making Picture Book Magic, the in-house writer for Editions Entrefilet’s language-learning magazine ‘Go English Kids’ for children of 8-12 in France, and a traditionally published author of MG and YA fiction with Burlington Books.

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique PLUS Zoom Chat with Ellen Leventhal! Ellen is the author of DON’T EAT THE BLUEBONNETS (Spork, 2017), LOLA CAN’T LEAP (Spork, 2018), HAYFEST: A HOLIDAY QUEST (ABCs Press, 2010), and A FLOOD OF KINDNESS (WorthyKids, 2021)

⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (rhyming or non-rhyming) with Kelly Conroy whose poems have been published in 5 anthologies (10.10, wee words for wee ones, October 2021; BETTER THAN STARBUCKS, January 2022; THINGS WE EAT, Pomelo Books, March 2022; THINGS WE FEEL, Pomelo Books, July 2022; WHAT IS A FRIEND, Pomelo Books, October 2022) and also the author of a rhyming board book due out in 2025.

⭐️ 30 Minute Picture Book Zoom Critique Session with Lynne Marie

Lynne Marie is the accomplished author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten – art by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic 2011), Hedgehog’s 100th Day of School – art by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play — art by Lorna Hussey (Beaming Books 2018), Moldilocks and the 3 Scares — art by David Rodriguez Lorenzo (Sterling 2019 and Scholastic 2019), Let’s Eat! Mealtime Around the World — art by Parwinder Singh (Beaming Books 2019) and The Three Little Pigs And The Rocket Project — art by Wendy Fedan (Mac and Cheese Press 2022) and American Pie — art by Dea Lenihan (Dancing Flamingo Press, April 12, 2022)
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (Rhyming or Non-rhyming, Fiction or Nonfiction) with a recording of first read-through by children’s author and poet Sarah Meade, contributor to HOP TO IT: POEMS TO GET YOU MOVING (Pomelo Books, 2020!)

⭐️ 20 Minute Zoom Ask Me Anything with Darshana Khiani, author of HOW TO WEAR A SARI (Versify, June 2021), I’M AN AMERICAN (Viking Books for Young Readers, May 2023), and THE BOYS OF KOH PANYEE (coming Fall 2023)

⭐️ Rate Your Story Speed Pass from Lynne Marie

And maybe I’ll have some extra picture books to add in here and there to sweeten the pie. . . 😊
Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, recommending their books for school and library purchases, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! 😊
Happy Writing! Happy Reading! And Happy Halloween!
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Now, let the Halloweensie begin!
The 239 entries listed below are linked to where they appear in the comments so you can click on the titles and get right to them! (Assuming WordPress cooperates . . . fingers crossed!) Anyone who feels kind can start at the bottom of the list so those entries get some comments too! 🎃 😊
- Apparition Preparation For A Scary Halloween – Royal Baysinger
- Attack Of The Zornaks – Royal Baysinger
- Down In the Halloween Cave – Royal Baysinger
- Sisters – Sara Kruger
- Halloween Nightmare – Helen Lai
- The Follower – Marla Yablon
- A Frightfully Fun Time – Susan E. Schipper
- The Halloween Dream Team – Jenna Elyse Johnson
- Skeleton Sam Settles The Score – Jennifer Cowan
- Slug Slime – Vashti Verbowski
- Ghost Recipes – Julia Pierre Hammond
- Rainforest Halloween – Heather Kinser
- On Snail-O-Ween – Heather Kinser
- The Frightful Fugitive – Anne Lipton
- Little Witchy – Elizabeth Myer zu Heringdorf
- Get Your Glow On – Corine Timmer
- Sally The Slug Has A Sweet Tooth – Eleanor Ann Peterson
- In The Middle Of A Snack – Bridget Magee
- Coming Around – Emily Durant
- Piper’s Pickle – Colleen Murphy
- Safe From Scares – Sarah Meade
- Claudia Maude Clickerticker’s Costume Shop – Sarah Meade
- What Do Witches Eat? – Kelly Clasen
- Ghouldilocks And The Three Shares – Claire Blumenfeld
- Closer – Reed Hilton-Eddy
- SSSSSScary – Jen Subra
- A Shady Halloween – Jennifer Lowe
- Help! – Elizabeth James
- Arabella’s Halloween Treat – Colleen Fogarty
- Trick Or Treat? – Corine Timmer
- The Coolest Halloween Costume – Carmen Castillo Gilbert
- Green Goulash Stew – Claudine Pullen
- The House With The Good Candy – Vanessa Konoval
- The House Creatures’ Halloween – Lauri Meyers
- When Good Luck Struck – Molly Ippolito
- The Haunted House Halloween Challenge – Marty Bellis
- Demon On The Line – Laura Polasek
- The Spooky Halloween Parade – Janet Krauthamer
- Mrs. Cleary’s Cats – Susan Eyerman
- A Halloween Twist – Cheryl Simon
- Wilhelmina The Witch – Ashlee MacCallum
- Halloween Hater – Blaire Moore
- The Halloween Bake-Off – Rose Cappelli
- Trick-Or-Treat, Shoes To Eat – Ashley Sierra
- Tricks Before Treats – Danielle S. Hammelef
- Happy Halloween – Stephanie R. Mena
- A Batty Halloween – Melissa Chupp
- Who Whispers In The Dark? – Erika Romero
- Interview With The Vampire – Helen Lai
- Slug Life – Kim Wagner Nolan
- Sapling’s Halloween – Lori Sheroan
- Nothing Scared Alicia Bones – Christine Evans
- The Mask – Su Ko
- DON’T FLUSH YOUR GOLDFISH DOWN THE TOILET OR HE WILL COME BACK TO GET YOU ON HALLOWEEN NIGHT – Sue Ko
- Going As Myself – Marianna Sacra
- Halloween Snack – Debra Daugherty
- Halloween-ing – Lori Himmel
- Something Wriggling This Way Comes – Amy Chini
- Edgar Allen Crow – Kathleen Jacobs
- Queen Slug’s Halloween – Kelsey E. Gross
- Pull Of The Moon – Darla Christie
- There’s One In Every Class – Linda Staszak
- Snollooween – Katie McEnaney
- A (little) STEM Halloween – Jilanne Hoffman
- Trick For Treat – Linda Starszak
- Mattie, The Scaredy Tabby Cat – Janet Parkinson Bryce
- Nothing Scares Me – Karen Condit
- ‘Twas Halloween Night – Sharon Coffey
- A Hotdog Halloween Hullabaloo – Sharon Coffey
- Their Trick, My Treat – Carol Van Gorp
- Interview With The Vampire – Helen Lai
- Halloween Night Light – Daniella Kaufman
- Do Goblins Gobble? – Sally Yorke-Viney
- Witchy-licious Stew – Charlotte Dixon
- The Ghouliest Ghouls – Marta Cutler
- The Scariest Bear – Marta Cutler
- Halloween Is Different This Year – S.S. Lee
- The Rattlesloth – Russell Wolff
- The Eyes Have It – Marta Cutler
- A Scare Affair – Lori C. Evans
- Halloween Haul – Stephanie Maksymiw
- Halloween Is Magic – Kristen Littlefield
- Command Performance – Jamie Donahoe
- Zombie In The House – Isabel Rodriguez
- A Wise Disguise – Jill Purtee
- Truck-Or-Treat – Mia Geiger
- The Halloween Dare – Marty Findley
- Witch’s Brew – Marty Findley
- A Halloween Tail – Katie Lee Reinert
- Creepy People – Sharon McCarthy
- Happy Halloween – Elaine D’Alessandro
- Scared Sssssilly – Julie Lerczak
- A Spooky House – Gail Hartman
- A Halloween Smile – Tonnye Fletcher
- A Scary Dare – Mona Pease
- Stop Your Bellyaching Soup, A Jump Rope Song – Debbie Meneses
- A Spell Of Transformation – Meagan T. Gentry
- First Flight – Paul Kurtz
- I Scare You, You Scare Me – Paul Kurtz
- Spiders vs. Snakes – Linda Schueler
- Pot Of The Witch – Reed Ambrose
- Snake In The Grass – Judy Sobanski
- Beware Or Be Scared – Norah Colvin
- Bat’s First Halloween – no author listed
- Children Of The Bog – Melissa Miles
- In Through My Window – Eric Sondergeld
- A Squishy Scare – Stephanie Henson
- The Last House – Janet Smart
- Jack-O-Lantern – Darcee A. Freier
- Beak-A-Boo! – Jill Lambert
- Jackie Saves Halloween – Brittany Richman
- The Treat – S. E. Cottrill
- Little Vampire’s First Halloween – Sharon Dalgleish
- Franny Fruit Bat’s Friendly Halloween – Amy LaMae Brewer
- Chicken’s First Halloween – Emma Hay
- Moldy Mayhem – Sue Lancaster
- Sea Monster – Patricia Nozell
- A Halloween Lullaby – Brigid Finucane
- Tricky Treats – Lisa Lowe Stauffer
- KA-RUNCH! – Donna Kurtz
- Scary-Fairy – Donna Kurtz
- Halloween Hop – Carole Gerber
- Halloween Treat – Krista Legge
- Sara’s Hairy Halloween – Jesse Anna Bornemann
- Scary Goat Scam – Elenore Byrne
- Goulentine – Michelle S. Kennedy
- My Teacher Is A Creature – Mary Ann Cortez
- The Haunted House – Karen Morgan
- Trick or Treat: A Forest Halloween – Sarah Marhevsky
- Shadows Come Crawling – Marlee Fuller-Morris
- Slithering Snake – Deborah Hunt
- Jack-oh-no! – Pollu Mendoza
- Jack’s Lament – Steve Jankousky
- Sense The Way – Sarah Hetu
- Slither and Hiss: Trick or Treat? – Cathrene Youngquist
- Pumpkin Jack – Jennifer Weingardt
- The Peanut Butter Cup Song – Hannah Roy LaGrone
- Gregory’s First Halloween – Morgan Lau
- Scary Treats – Ken Major
- Super Scary Sausages – Chris James
- Midnight Snack – Deborah Foster
- How To Trick-or-Treat If You’re A Snake – Abigail Mumford
- Scarecrows Of Halloween – Helen Ishmurzin
- Sneaky Snake – Jan Suhr
- Who’s There? – Dawn Renee Young
- Space Rangers And Skeletons – Cynthia Mackey
- A Halloween For Willard – Krista Harrington
- On Halloween Night – Amanda Flinn
- Early Worm’s Halloween Birthday Wish – Curtis King
- Sweetie The Parrot – Barbara DiMarco
- The Annual Pumpkin Carving Contest – Laura Straut
- Boo – Jean Martin
- Pete The Smallest Pumpkin – Tiffany Hanson
- Candy Corn’s Revenge – Tiffany Hanson
- A Martian’s Halloween – Angela Calabrese
- Candy Monster – Patricia MacMillan
- Igor’s First Halloween – Danna Zeiger
- You Can’t Scare Me – Danna Zeiger
- Pumpkin, Skeleton, Wolverine – Brenna Jeanneret
- Tricky Treats – Ashley Sutphen Delaney
- Little Sister Saves The Night – Laurie Kaiser
- The Sweetest Treat – Christina Shawn
- All Hallows’ Eve – Sasha Sirisena-Green
- Pumpkin Cat’s Turn – Bru Benson
- Frankenslug – Ryann Jones
- The Costume – Nina Nolan
- The Best Halloween Ever – Dianne Borowski
- Tricked – Geraldine V. Oades-Sese
- Trista’s Treat Or Trick? – Krissy Massey
- The Scariest Costume Of All – Abby N. Wooldridge
- Halloween is the BEST, but. . . – Andi Chitty
- It’s A Tricky Afterlife – Katie Schwartz
- Spider’s Halloween – Cassy Clarcq
- Slimon’s Halloween – Imelda Taylor
- The Zombie Flop – Liz Kehrli
- Melanie Monster – Lindsey LeBlanc
- Switch Witch Swap – Julie Fruitticher Schroeder
- S-S-Selma – Nancy Forbis-Stokes
- A Halloween Adventure – Gregory E. Bray
- Enter If You Dare – Trista Herring Baughman
- Snake’s Sweet Treats – Nadia Ali
- Costume Crisis – Keatley Eastman
- Tricked By The Treats – Elizabeth Muster
- Halloween Friend – Thelia Hutchinson
- My Dreadfully Dangerous Walk – Susan Twiggs
- Slither, Treat, Scare: A Halloween Story – Lynn Greenway
- I’m Not That Scared – Allison Gray
- The Halloween Prize – Mary Rudzinski
- Portia Pumpkin Proclaims – Judy Caldwell Hughes
- Pookie The Pomeranian’s Halloween Wish – Stephanie Jackson
- Boo The Ghost Gets Beaten – Stephanie Jackson
- Costume Drama – David Cobb
- Slither Spook – Jessica Milo
- Samira’s Potion – Jessica Milo
- Sabrina Squirrel Does Not Scare Easily – Liz Gill
- Snake’s Stealthy Solution – Kira Barrett
- What Did You See? – Kathleen Mazurowski
- Father Knows Best – Janice Kay
- The Costume – Amy Duchene
- Trick Or Treat – Laura Seely-Pollack
- Many Happy Resquirms – Diana Webb
- Theodore Turkey’s Halloween Hunt – Mary-Catherine Amadu
- Ghost Finds His Groove – Cindy Greene
- Weird Halloween Treats – Una Belle Townsend
- The Jabberwocks Of Halloween – Jenny Bowman
- Sooner And Sooner Every Year! – Stephanie Henson
- A Slimy Halloween: Halloweenie Competition – Erin Buhr
- Candy Night – Anne Weaver
- Growing Candy Apples – Hannah Roy LaGrone
- Sister’s First Halloween Night – Linda Hofke
- Calling All Campers to the Camp Spooky Halloween Campfire – Jamie Rodarte
- A Pumpkin Named Rattlesnake Pete – Pat Finnegan
- Pumpkin Pride – Pat Finnegan
- Gardenia Ghost – Katie Walsh
- I Am Always a Cat – Amanda Littlefield
- Scaredy Snake – Kathy Hill Crable
- Classroom Costume Conundrum – Cynthia Reeg
- A Beckoning Spell – Les Degnan
- Halloween Eve – Tarsia Rhyne
- Which Witch Will Win? – Lucretia Schafroth
- The Spider Web House – CJ Penko
- The Monster of Barlow’s Bakery – Jill Burns
- A Candy Break For Mongoose And Snake – Katie Schwartz
- Kid Cobra’s Halloween – Denise Seidman
- Costume Not Required – JC Kelly
- Lucinda Blackletter – Karen Pickrell
- Candi Corn – Liz Kehrli
- Glass Lizard Halloween – Maria Marshall
- Scaredy Cat And The Haunted Hunt – Samantha Cora Christian Haas
- Graduation Night – Naz Alibhai
- New Friends – Sarah Hawklyn
- Sam Wasn’t Afraid – T. May LeGrys
- Black Cats Get A Bad Rap – Colleen Dougherty
- Dad’s First Trick or Treat – Annette Bethers
- Skeletons Need Teddy Bears Too – Sharon Jackson
- Sam And Dusty Trick Or Treat – Julianna Helt
- Lost – Brenda Covert
- The Snakertons – Emily Holewczynski
A BATTY HALLOWEEN
By Melissa Chupp
WC 97
“I will be a scary bat for Halloween,” said Snake.
“That’s silly,” said Snail. “Bats fly. You slither.”
“But my costume has wings.” Snake tried flapping them. Snail was right.
So Snake constructed a catapult.
“3…2…1!” yelled Snail.
“This will not do,” said Snake as he soared way past the neighborhood with the best treats.
Next, he attached a bunch of balloons. Unfortunately, he went up and up instead of house to house.
Finally, after he cut and ripped and glued and stitched, Snake did trick-or-treat as a bat.
And Snail . . . went as the ball.
So clever! Wonderful story arc and fun twist at the end!
Ha ha. Love your ending, as well as Snake’s persistence.
Haha, that was a good twist!
LOL-sounds like my life! Well done and so much fun.
The image of Snake soaring over the neighborhood makes me laugh!
Ha! So much fun! I’m so glad Snake got to go as a scary bat after all! And snail is such a supportive friend. I love how animated it is! Great job!
So clever!
What a fun story and I love the twist at the end. Good luck!
So cute, love the ending.
That ending made me smile! What a cute story, Melissa.
This is a fun story. Especially snake as a bat and snail as a ball.
Who Whispers in the Dark?
by: Erika Romero
WC: 79
Who whispers in the dark…
A snake slithering home—sss, sss, sss,
An owl on a hunt—hoot, hoot, hoot,
A spider climbing high—chit, chit, chit.
Who whispers in the dark…
A monster under the bed—boo, boo, boo,
A child after a scare—mommy, mommy, mommy,
A parent with a treat—safe, safe, safe.
Who whispers in the dark?
All sorts of critters and creatures,
Experiencing the world,
One quiet moment at a time.
Shh, shh, shh…
Great job capturing the varying sounds.
INTERVIEW WITH THE VAMPIRE
By Helen Lai
100 words
Police questioned Dracula, Halloween night:
“You’ve given the neighborhood children a fright.
Slinking around like some slithery beast…
Are you harvesting kids for a Halloween feast!?!”
“Officer, no! Please don’t misunderstand me!
I only go hunting for treat bags with candy!
Please let me go, I am telling the truth…
Despite all these fangs, I am just a sweet tooth.
On reflection, I see why you thought what you did,
But I swear on my grave, I would not hurt a kid!”
“I’m not really scary” he sobbed like a wreck.
“I’m sorry for being a pain in the neck.”
I’m so sorry, I put this entry in the wrong place and can’t figure out how to delete it!!!
Great story, I love the calming nature of the “safe, safe, safe” line.
Love the line, “sorry for being a pain in the neck.” But I don’t know, do you trust Dracula?
Easy to read rhyme, and clever ending! Vampires never get old.
Fangtastic story!
Terrific use of sound and repetition plus the fun!
I like your use of refrain! And the sound of your spider climbing high was very well done!
Lovely atmosphere!
Good job creating a world of night sounds! Very cool!
Love all the night sounds. Grat job setting the mood.
This is such a fun one to read! Good luck!
Ahhh, sweet!
SLUG LIFE
by Kim Wagner Nolan
100 words
“My therapist says I need to face my fear.”
“What are you ssscared of? Sssalt?”
“Nope. Halloween.”
“Why Halloween?”
“We’re underfoot of costumed kids running hither and thither in a sugar-fueled frenzy fighting for treats!”
“Try ssswiftly sssneaking away like thisss.”
“Slugs can’t slither like snakes. We’re limited to the scrunch and slide.”
“I ssssee.”
“And our embarrassing slime trail makes it impossible to hide from the size 13 sneaker of a six-year-old Superman.”
“How ssshameful.”
“This year, I’ve got a fear-conquering plan. I’m dressing up as a sweet little ladybug.”
“Kidssss do love ladybugsss.”
“Precisely! And slugs love candy!”
Who knew that slugs loved candy? Not me! So educational! And funny! I also didn’t know there were slug therapists… 😉
Good luck!!
Looove the “ssssssss” sounds throughout this sweet story. I really care about this little slug and totally respect the fact that he values a competent therapist. Snake is the kind of friend I strive to be – a great listener and support! What a great example for kids and adults alike. Great character development in such a few words.
Very funny premise to have a slug afraid of Halloween.
I like the use of s and its use for pacing that sluggish slug-LOL Clever!
I love your use of dialogue! Fantastic! I could see kids being riveted by this conversation! It would be fun to watch as a puppet show!
I’m glad that Slug found a solution to their Halloween fear. Good job!
This story is such fun – a slug dressed up as a ladybug. I can just imagine. 😂
I love the way you’ve emphasised the alliterative esses.
Cute. It seems slugs are trending this Halloween contest. I love the snake’s voice. Good Luck!
Sapling’s Halloween
by Lori Sheroan
(99 words)
Sapling was scared.
October was nearly over,
and still she had no costume.
On October 1st,
Maple proudly primped in his pumpkin colors.
By mid month,
Oak fetchingly flaunted her firefighter red.
Sapling grew green with envy.
“Don’t worry,” Hickory whispered
through his fur-brown mask of foliage.
“Mother Nature will make sure you’re ready for trick or treat.”
Hickory and his brothers were the three bears.
On Halloween Eve, Sapling swayed slightly.
A cool breeze slithered through her leaves.
She held onto hope.
When the sun rose on Halloween,
Sapling’s costume was complete.
Sapling, the young Ginkgo, was Goldilocks.
Very cute blend of nature and Halloween.
Love your alliteration and and lovely word choices.
Ah, kind and caring Mother Nature! I love this celebration of trees! I love the sweet, gentle spirits you have given them! And the final reveal is beautiful!
Sweet! Ginko was Goldilocks, and she was just right! Very nice!
I love the concept of Mother Nature’s costume! Beautiful!
Gingko biloba, clever.
Love the tree theme! Great job!
How lovely. A poem about nature and its beauty for Halloween. Well done, Lori.
Loved this idea of the trees colors flaunted as Halloween costumes
NOTHING SCARED ALICIA BONES
By Christine Evans
On Halloween night, nothing scared Alicia Bones.
A slithering snake didn’t make her shake.
Skeletons couldn’t cause a shiver.
Witches didn’t spook her.
And as for ghosts… she booed them right back.
But one house struck fear into our girl. For she knew what would happen if the owners of 14 Grimm Lane caught her.
She avoided the house as she collected treats.
She crossed the street.
Ducked behind gravestones
Crawled under cobwebs.
But as the full moon rose, the door of 14 Grimm Lane slowly creaked open. The words she had been dreading echoed through the night…
“IT’S BEDTIME!”
Oooh, love the twist. Super fun!
I love this story! It keeps you wondering what is going to happen.
Ha ha ha. What a great set-up and ending.
Christine!! I was so shocked by the ending!! Great story 🙂
I love this one – suspenseful and funny.
Did not see that terrific twist coming! Well done.
Soooo love this true to life twist.
This is fantastic! Alicia Bones is such a lively and spunky main character! And what a GREAT ending! I would LOVE to see this one illustrated and published!
This is so much fun! Love the twist ending.
Love the ending! What a fun story. Good luck!
Great ending!
Very cute!
THE MASK
By Sue Ko
Word Count: 99
Barry had red hair and freckles.
Everyone laughed at him.
He always ate lunch alone.
For Halloween, Barry wanted to scare the whole world.
He made a gruesome mask.
After one look, everyone dropped their trick-or-treat bags and slithered home.
Barry felt good…until his little sister saw him.
“Jenny, it’s me! Don’t cry!”
Barry tried to remove the mask–but it wouldn’t budge.
The more he pulled, the more it tightened over his head, like a balloon.
The neighbors surrounded him.
“It won’t come off! Help!”
But it was too late.
The mask was Barry’s face now, forever.
Oh no!! Poor Barry.
Yes, Barry’s in trouble…!
Oh No! One of those dreaded moments that sometimes fill our dreams. Poor Barry–what a nightmare!
A nightmare– what a compliment! Thank you! 🙂
Wow! A haunting cautionary tale! Very well done!
Thanks, Royal!
Oh no! I hope Barry is only having a nightmare and wakes up to see he has his own face back! Good job !
I hope so, too! Thanks, Nancy!
Oh this is scary!!
Yay! Thanks, Anne!
DON’T FLUSH YOUR GOLDFISH DOWN THE TOILET OR HE WILL COME BACK TO GET YOU ON HALLOWEEN NIGHT
By Sue Ko
Word Count: 93
If you don’t believe it
Dare me to
Pull down my pants so
You can see what
My dead goldfish Jerry did
To my
You-know-what.
I flushed him the night before Halloween and
Watched him swirl around and around and disappear
And I felt sad
But Halloween night I was excited about treats and forgot but
When I sat on the toilet in my Batman costume something scary
With gigantic fangs
Slithered up and
CHOMPED
And if you don’t believe it
I can pull down my pants so
You can see
Dare me?
The title😆 this is very fresh!
Thanks, Lauri!
Haha, I’ll take your word for it! Great story.
Wise choice, Helen haha! Thanks!
GULP! Never flushing that fish–EVER! Funny!
The Toilet is a dangerous place.
That title just draws you right in, like the swirling current of toilet water! And your story taught me such a valuable lesson too – on the toilet, not even Batman is safe.
“…like the swirling current of toilet water” — you make me sound so poetic! No one is safe on the toilet. The only guarantee of safety is your mom or dad kneeling in front of you, ready to pull you out.
Hahaha! I’m not taking that dare and I’m not flushing another goldfish either! Funny!
Poor countless goldfish at the mercy of children everywhere. I’d come back, too!
Excellent title, and excellent kid appeal. Ha!
Thanks, Katie!
Ha! The title alone had me LOL!
Ha Ghost Goldfish–what would that look like?
GOING AS MYSELF
by Marianna Sacra
86 words
My mirror scares me. Should I really go trick-or-treating without disguise?
My shiniest bangles slither down my arm, CLINK-CLINK. I can always say I’m a princess…
My finest tutu slides up my legs. I can always say I’m a ballerina… TWIRL!
Wig or bow? Both! I can always say I’m a stylish witch… HEE HEE! I’ll always know I’m me.
“How do I look?”
“You look like you, Paul,” Mom says, putting her purplest necklace over my head.
“Just fabulous,” says Dad.
I think I’m ready.
Very nice. ❤
I like your use of the word “purplest!” An empowering story to those who have ever looked in the mirror and not liked what they see!
Nice message! Good luck!
This is so wonderful! Good luck!
It’s good to get a little message about diversity in a Halloween story. Well done!
The title says it all. Well done!
HALLOWEEN SNACK
By Debra Daugherty
100 words
“Hey, kid. Cool zombie costume. Want to go trick or treating with me?
‘I take it your nod means yes. Okay. Let’s go!
‘I love Halloween. Scary costumes. Spooky decorations. Candy. Look! My bag’s almost full.
‘Watch out! Snake.
‘Whew! It slithered away.
‘See that house? My brother says a witch lives there. I don’t believe him. Let’s knock on the door.
‘Trick or treat!”
“Zombie, you brought Witchy a snack. The boy’s brain is yours. I get the rest.
‘Yum. Witchy loves Halloween.”
Crunch.
“So does Zombie.”
Chomp. Chomp.
“Thanks for eating my candy instead of me.
‘Friends? Cool.”
Definitely want to be friends, not food!
I agree.
Wow, that was a VERY scary setup! So clever too, making the main character so talkative! Glad it was a happy ending!
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Glad they made a deal! Scary! Good job!
Thank you.
Nice twist at the end, thank goodness!
Thanks. In my original draft, I had the child be eaten. I like this version better.
I’m pleased it had a happy ending. I was a bit worried for a while.
The surprise twist at the end was meant to fool everyone. Glad you liked it.
HALLOWEEN-ING
by Lori Himmel
57 words
Costume-dressing
Make-up-messing
Slither down the stairs
Boo-boo-booing
Sheets-a-moving
Floating through the air
Darkness brewing
Rats-a-shrewing
Nibble without a care
Zombies starving
Brains-a-blobbing
Graveyards almost bare
Spiders creeping
Grimmers reaping
Werewolves howl a scare
Ding, dong! Knocking!
Bats screech! Shocking!
Witches everywhere
Moonshine glowing
Bags keep growing
One more step—we’re there!
Trick-or-treating
Candy-sweeting
Eat it all, I…DARE!
Fun rhyme and word play. But I do not recommend eating it all in one sitting!
Thank you, Colleen! Definitely not a good plan to eat all in one sitting. 🙂
Fantastic imagery! I LOVE “rats-a-shrewing” and “graveyards almost bare!” Very evocative in so few words!
Thanks, Royal! Appreciate the read. 🙂
Catures the arc (and variety) of Halloween night elegantly. Nicely done!
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, Brigid.
Fun rhyme and rhythm! Good job and good luck!
Thank you so much, Nancy!
Excellent, with only 57 words!
I love these contests, don’t you? Thanks for reading my story, Eleanor. 🙂
I love reading all the entries and learn from them as well. I only wish I could write poetry. But that won’t happen, for now. I can picture many of these entries becoming picture books.
Brilliant 🙂
Something Wriggling This Way Comes
by Amy Chini
(97 words)
Imagine, child, how great the fright,
When gobbling treats All Hallow’s Night,
A rustling from my candy stash
Pricked up my ear mid-Monster Mash.
Though scared, I crept across the floor,
But child, I wish I hadn’t, for
There in the dish before my eyes,
A something buried tried to rise;
And as it slithered through the sweets,
My heart, it skipped a thousand beats;
Some wrinkling, crinkling apparition
Ravaging my disposition,
Surfacing then, almost through,
My child, I knew not what to do;
When breaking free with one last squirm,
Up popped a gooey gummy worm!
http://www.amychini.com/kidlit-fun/halloweensie2022
Awesome job Amy 🙂
I love the nod to Shakespeare and Bradbury in your title! Good work on the rhyme.
I love the suspense!!! Great rhyme and flow too, a fun one to read.
Oh my!! I enjoyed the way you told this story.
Amy this is so fun. I love your writing! It sounds like a great short story to tell before bed!
Your rhythm is AMAZING! Love it! And so visual with your wriggling gummy worm!
Love the rhyme and suspense! Nicely done!
Love this! The tension builds up until… a gooey gummy worm.
EDGAR ALLEN CROW
By Kathleen Jacobs
Word Count: 82
Are you ready for a treat?
A creepy sort of thrill?
Then please be so kind
As to hand me my quill
One cannot be expected
To work on an empty tummy
So, with no further ado, fork over your
Slithery worms made of gummy
Spook night is here
Oh, beware! Beware!
Perched on a mailbox
I’m ready to scare!
Who am I? I’m Edgar Allen Crow
Wordsmith of eerie poems
A literary bird who pens odes
To goblins, ghosts, and gnomes
Edgar Allen Crow, the perfect name for a literary bird! I like the idea of a bird using a quill to write! It just makes sense.
Love the name of this literary crow.
I love Edgar Allen Crow! So clever!
Clever! Edgar Allen Poe/Crow
QUEEN SLUG’S HALLOWEEN
By Kelsey E. Gross
WC 100
Seven sister slugs squirm out
One chilly Halloween
Six costume as scary ghosts
The last: a fairy queen
The ghosts are first to reach the porch
They slither to the treats
“We’re sorry, sis!” the ghosts announce
“Now we get all the sweets!”
They climb the bowl, but slip-slide back
…KERPLOP!
into a slimy stack.
The queen came tripping on her gown
“Behold, Queen Slug the Great!”
She spies a dangling spider king
“Let’s have a spooky date!”
He whisks the queen into the bowl
They monster mash and dine
“So sorry, sisters!” giggles Queen
“The tasty treats are mine!”
All hail the queen slug!! Well done!
I just could imagine the illustrations of these slug sisters. Such a fun story. My 9yo approves 😉.
Fun! The Queen reigns supreme!
I’m glad each of the slug sisters got just what they deserved! Love the use of “kerplop!”
So adorable, silly, playful, and fun! Nicely done, Kelsey.
This poem is a fun read. If only the slugs had been more willing to share, they could have had a happy ending too.
Pull of the Moon
By Darla Christie (98 words)
Shadows creep over rooftops as the blood moon slithers up into the sky. Howls haunt the silence of the night, awakening a rumble in my chest. The desire to answer the call is strong, but I will not treat with the wildness that tempts me to abandon my human life. Swallowing the roar, I let it slide back down my throat as another volley of baying leaves me gasping for breath. The yearning to join scares me when, breaking from a cloud, the moon shines fully on my face, and I shatter. My first Halloween as a werewolf.
Haunting. This will stay with me!
Thank you for reading it, Brigid! 🎃
Great story! Well done!
Thank you, Nancy! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🎃😊
Nice imagery with the moonlight!
It would be a great hook in the first paragraph of an MG novel.
I was thinking the same thing. If I could come up with a new twist on a werewolf story. Maybe.
I’m sure you’ll come up with something. Keep writing.
This story pulled me in. Great job!
This is very spooky, Darla. You’ve really captured that pull. What will be stronger the moon’s pull or the desire to remain human?
Thanks Susanna. This is always fun!
THERE’S ONE IN EVERY CLASS
By Linda Staszak
100 words
Griselda rapped her wand against the caldron.
“Pay attention—we want to scare the trick-or-treaters.”
Young witches clutched their wands.
“First—two sprinkles of magic dust and swirl your wand once.”
Poof!
Hair-raising howls filled the air…
And cheery chuckles.
Azalea ducked her head.
Griselda glared.
“Next—three sprinkles and two swirls.”
Zap!
Sinister screams erupted…
And giddy giggles.
Azalea’s cheeks reddened.
“Concentrate,” growled Griselda.
“Seven swirls, four sprinkles and two taps.”
Smoke billowed.
Ghosts fluttered…
And an elephant slithered by.
Griselda groaned. “Elephants don’t slither.”
Azalea shrugged. “He’s lumpy but he’s trying.”
“Buttered broomsticks! There’s one in every class.”
Shades of Harry Potter? An elephant slithering – that is quite the image!
Love this! Super fun to read.
Thanks!
Linda, this is so much fun. The teacher in me loved the end. There is one in every class. Too funny.
Haha! Yes, there really is one in every class! Good luck!
Thank you!
I love the expletive “buttered broomsticks!” Very funny!
Thanks! It got eye rolls from my biggest critics so I had to use it.
Love this; Azalea shrugged. “He’s lumpy but he’s trying.”
“He’s lumpy but he’s trying.” 🙂
Love the perseverance of the MC amid the magical missteps
Thanks for reading this Tracey–it’s good to have some fun!
Snolloween
By: Katie McEnaney
WC 100
A sudden snowstorm stopped the animals’ annual Halloween pumpkin party.
“Too cold for costumes!” chattered a cheerleader chipmunk.
“Too windy for wands!” whined a witchy weasel.
“I’m scared of snow!” stammered a swim-suited squirrel.
Helpless and horrified, they huddled in the tree hollow behind their newly-carved pumpkins. Snow slithered and swooped toward them, coming closer …
and closer.
Luckily, the lit jack-o-lanterns held firm, stopping the sneaky snow.
“Halloween is saved!” they cheered.
Pom-poms, brooms, and sand shovels attacked the mess. Bravely, Squirrel scooped snow into three bowls, and Chipmunk squirted syrup.
A tasty treat and a toast to Snolloween!
https://katiemcenaney.com/snolloween-halloweensie/
Resourceful critters! Love the syrup on snow treat and all the alliteration. Nicely done.
Great job Katie!
Thanks again for your comments ahead of time too, Laura!
This is so creative! Who doesn’t love shaved ice!?!
Right?! Best way to fight – consuming the enemy!
Excellent alliteration! I like that you included a weasel. They are so seldom seen in children’s books, and even more rarely as protagonists. Well done!
Thanks so much! I feel like I owe weasel’s an apology after devouring every Redwall book …
This is delightful! I love the Halloween details and cozy ending image.
Thanks so much, Sarah! Snow might not be in everyone’s Halloween memories, but it is in mine. (And this year was 70 degrees in WI yesterday … what?!)
Well done! This reminds me of sugar maple cabins; scooped snow into three bowls, and Chipmunk squirted syrup.
Thanks, Eleanor! Great comparison. Definitely the northwoods Wisconsin vibe I was going for.
A (little) STEM Halloween
It’s time to be wary!
Those Goblins are scary.
You’d better not tarry.
They want to steal all your clothes.
Quick! Hide!
When you were dithering
Ghoul Slugs came slithering,
slimy and withering.
They want to slide up your nose.
Quick! Hide!
Forsaking all sleeping,
your eyeballs keep peeping,
cause Werewolves are creeping.
They want to gobble your toes.
Quick! Hide!
The trick? There’s no treating!
Starved Zombies start eating
through all of your sheeting—
screeching as they decompose.
Phewf! Saved by bacteria,
securing the area,
ending hysteria,
brings Halloween to a close.
Oh Jillian, just where did Susanna take your mind for this Halloweensie story? Well done!
Jilanne!!!
My mind went to that elementary school place, LOL. Thank you so much!
Ack I just realized I copied and pasted the wrong version!! Here’s the correct version!! I know….I only change two words, but still….
A (little) STEM Halloween
It’s time to be wary!
Those Goblins are scary.
You’d better not tarry.
They want to steal all your clothes.
Quick! Hide!
While you were dithering
Ghoul Slugs came slithering,
slimy and withering.
They want to slide up your nose.
Quick! Hide!
Forsaking all sleeping,
your eyeballs keep peeping,
cause Werewolves are creeping.
They want to gobble your toes.
Quick! Hide!
The trick? There’s no treating!
Starved Zombies start eating
through all of your sheeting—
screeching as they decompose.
Phewf! Saved by bacteria,
securing the area,
ends the hysteria,
brings Halloween to a close.
The idea of slugs wanting to slide up our noses truly is terrifying!
Yes, it would keep me up at night, for sure!
Love this STEM spin on bacteria–they saved the night from true fright! Well done!
Thank you, Charlotte! Wouldn’t we be in a world of mess if it weren’t for bacteria?!
YES Jilanne! Bacteria to the rescue!
Phewf! Saved by bacteria! Clever and fun.
Thank you!!!
Three cheers for bacteria! Love it!
Thanks, Nancy! We’d be in a world of hurt without it!
This is amazing! Love the pacing, details, and perfect ending.
Thank you so much, Sarah!
It wouldn’t be Halloween without this–thanks Susanna!
TRICK FOR TREAT
By Linda Staszak
100 words
Children’s feet thundered onto the porch.
“Trick-or-treat.”
Creeeeeeakkkk.
A raspy voice skritched, “Do a trick and get a treat.”
“We don’t know any tricks,” the children moaned.
But they whispered, then hid beside the door.
“Trick-or-treat.”
Squueeeeeeeakk.
The voice screeched, “Do a trick and get a treat.”
The children leaped out. “Boo!”
“Not scary enough.”
The children plotted and climbed and balanced…
“Trick-or-treat.”
Criiiiiickkkkk.
The voice shrieked, “Do a trick and…eeeeee!”
Buckets of slime dumped from the door-top.
Costumed creatures slithered across the porch and sprang—hisssssss!
“Good trick!” the voice cackled.
And the trick-or-treaters grabbed the candy and ran.
Way to persist kids!
Hard core Snickers fans!
I can relate.
Halloween perseverance for sure. I love that the children were triumphant at the end. Awesome.
Thanks Sharon!
I hope the treats were worth all the hard tricking! Well done!
Some of us will do anything for a Snickers bar!
I love your use of the words “skritched” and “screeched” to describe the raspy voice!
Thanks! I like finding different words to use.
Good one, Linda. They really had to work for those treats.
This is a good one. Good trick, indeed! When we were young, we had to sing or recite a poem; otherwise, no treats.
Great visual with the slime. Love your use of sound words!
Thank you!
Mattie, The Scaredy Tabby Cat
By Janet Parkinson Bryce
Word count – 97 words
Mattie worried, “Tomorrow is Halloween, and Halloween night is very spooky,” she meowed. She paced up and down the sidewalk. “What do I do? Me-o-ow,” she cried.
Echo, the parrot heard her. “What’s the problem, Mattie?”
“Tomorrow night is Halloween, me-o-o-ow,” she cried. “The scary, slithery things will be walking and creeping through the town. I’m scared!”
“Hmm, said Echo, I have an idea.” He whispered in Mattie’s ear.
Halloween night came, and Mattie sat on the porch of her house, wearing a witch costume. “Me-o-ow,” she cried as creatures passed by. To her surprise, they gave her treats. “Me-ow!”
I like your parrot’s name. And hooray for Mattie!
Thank you
Cute story and love Echo the parrot! Good luck!
Thank you, Nancy.
I’m glad Mattie was able to conquer her fears! I like the idea of a cat dressing as a witch for Halloween! Now I would like to see a witch dress as a cat!
What a great friend is Echo, and what a great suggestion. I’m sure Mattie enjoyed her treats.
Nothing Scares Me
Witches don’t scare me, and I love bats.
Ghosts make me giggle as well as black cats.
Snakes that slither can be kind of cute.
Owls in trees do nothing but hoot.
Skeletons wiggle their wacky dry bones.
Graveyard noises are pitiful moans.
Monster faces won’t make me cry.
Headless horseman—a brainless guy.
A werewolf’s howl, a vampire’s bite,
Nothing scares me in the dark of night.
But . . .
I know I’d die if I should meet . . .
A Halloween night without Trick or Treat.
Love this! The rhyme is adorable and the twist that nothing scares you! Adorable!
Ha ha! I imagine a lot of children can relate.
Many children would say they’re not scared. A kind of bragging. They’d love this.
Haha! Just how I felt as a kid!
Yes, indeed, that is a fearful ending! Great job!
Wow! That was a FANTASTIC ending! I was wondering where it was leading! I love the ironic title, given that the narrator is in fact scared of SOMETHING. Well done!
Love it! Kids will relate to this. With the scary e-games they play nowadays, they’re not scared of anything, but if you take away their sweets…
Very Cute!
This is so cute, and what a pleasure to recite. I agree that a Halloween night without treats would be very dismal.
‘TWAS HALLOWEEN NIGHT by Sharon Coffey
By Sharon Coffey
97 words
‘Twas Halloween night and through the town,
The creatures slithered ‘round and ‘round
They carried skulls to fill with treats,
For ghouls and goblins love their sweets.
When who arrived all dressed in black,
Witch Liz, her broom, and Ned in back.
Well, no one knew him. Who was Ned?
No sweets tonight but fruit instead?
“We want our sweets,” the creatures cried.
“My date’s a dentist,” Liz replied.
“Do brush your fangs, no sweets tonight.”
Then Liz and Ned flew out of sight.
Now Halloweens just aren’t the same,
Because of Ned, yes he’s to blame.
Ha ha! When they get older they will appreciate Ned.
If not their tastebuds, at least their bodies will. 😊
Hahaha what a cute story, Sharon!
Thank you, Callie
What a clever and cute rhyming story! I loved the line “my date’s a dentist” haha.
Thanks, Hayley.
What a cute story Sharon! What could be worse than getting broccoli in your trick-or-treat bag?!
Or little trees as some people call them. LOL
Hahaha! Funny and at least it was fruit and not broccoli! Love it!
Ewww, broccoli. Now that’s scary.
“And Ned in back.” Oh, that was so funny to read! A nice Halloween spin on a holiday classic!
Never underestimate anyone named Ned. LOL
I enjoyed your innovation on The Night Before Christmas, Sharon. How funny. A dentist is definitely not an appropriate date for Halloween night! 😂
Norah, thank you for your comments. Have a fruity Halloween. LOL
I hope you had fun with yours!
Ned’s a party pooper. She’ll have to change her boyfriend.
Haha! Made me giggle! Great story!
Thank you, Deborah. I appreciate it.
Wow, Ned’s the scariest halloween creature of all!
Too funny! Thank you SSLEE1
Haha, Ned was a great unexpected twist!
Thank you for your comments. You’re the best, Tracey.
Super rhyming and funny premise, Sharon! Good luck in the contest!
Good luck to you too, Ken.
A HOTDOG HALLOWEEN HULLABALOO
By Sharon Coffey
97 words
Halloweens were boring for Skeleton. Until . . .
Skeleton watched as one black bat grabbed some hotdogs and flung them at two scary, slithering snakes. Splat-splat!
The snakes saw three zombies. Thinking the zombies threw the hotdogs, they aimed and flung. Splat-splat-splat!
The zombies spotted four giggling ghosts. “Aha!” They aimed and flung. Splat-splat-splat-splat!
The ghosts gasped. “Hmm, five suspicious scarecrows.” The ghosts aimed and chunked. Splat-splat-splat-splat-splat!
The scarecrows looked around. Skeleton pointed towards the misbehaving bat. Skeleton and the scarecrows aimed and flung. Splat-splat-splat-splat-splat-splat!
Skeleton laughed so hard her bones rattled. What a Halloween treat!
Sounds like a great time – splat! I reckon “Count” Dracula would enjoy your story too. Sorry, couldn’t resist…
Too funny Helen. Thank you.
That’s how to make a Halloween not boring.
And healthy.
A hullaballoo indeed! Well done!
Thanks, Callie.
Oh my goodness, what a funny and clever story! I LOVE this one 🙂 All those splats! I’m glad the skeleton ratted out the bat, though. I thought it was going to get away!
Thank you, Haley.
What an original idea–a Halloween counting story. And such a fun story–can you imagine the illustrations!
Thank you, Linda
Food fight! Very cute.
Thank you, Nancy
I like the alliterative descriptions of the ghosts and scarecrows! I’m glad that the clever skeleton pointed out the original culprit!
That’s right, culprits beware. Thanks, Royal.
Nothing like flying hotdogs to liven things up. Love the counting and corresponding splats!
Humor and hotdogs seem to go hand in hand. Thanks, Tracey.
This is another fun entry by you! Good luck.
Thanks, Ken. I was surprised you could enter up to three entries.
Hey Sharon-I sometimes do two entries, but stuck to one this time around.
Their Trick, My Treat
By Carol Van Gorp
92 words
Pillowcases bulge with candy. A Snickers for you. Two Kit-Kats for me.
Our old babysitter, Mrs. LaGant barks, “Time to sleep!”
I hop into my parents’ bed, cozy and snug, until my four brothers’ shadows slither in and go under the bed.
Heart pounding, I pull up the covers.
Will they jump out? Grab my arm hanging over the side?
Suspense mounting, I scream!
Mrs. LaGant’s humongous husband, wearing patched overalls, stomps in roaring, “TO BED!”
My slithering brothers now scurry like mice.
Who is more scared now?
Their trick. My treat!
Babysitters are scary! Fun story!
Thanks Nancy! Glad you liked it!
I love your opening sentence! It is “filled” with nostalgia! I haven’t seen kids use pillowcases in years!
Thank you!!! I love your pun, too! HA
You showed them! I think Mrs. LaGant’s humongous husband was more scary than the four brothers. 😂
Agreed!!! He was more scary!! HA Ha!
😂
INTERVIEW WITH THE VAMPIRE
By Helen Lai
100 words
Police questioned Dracula, Halloween night:
“You’ve given the neighborhood children a fright.
Slinking around like some slithery beast…
Are you harvesting kids for a Halloween feast!?!”
“Officer, no! Please don’t misunderstand me!
I only go hunting for treat bags with candy!
Please let me go, I am telling the truth…
Despite all these fangs, I am just a sweet tooth.
On reflection, I see why you thought what you did,
But I swear on my grave, I would not hurt a kid!”
“I’m not really scary” he sobbed like a wreck.
“I’m sorry for being a pain in the neck.”
Really clever. Love the wordplay.
Very cute. Love, Upon reflection and pain in the neck! Good luck!
“Harvesting kids.” A very creepy image! Some excellent wordplay throughout! Poor Dracula! As a side note, I hope he gets his phone call. Maybe his mummy can bail him out. If not, I know a skeleton who does pro bone-o work….
Thank you. Haha, your comment tickled my punny bone!!!
“I’m sorry for being a pain in the neck.” Well done!
hahahah I love this. Dracula just wants some candy! I can picture this interrogation so vividly!
Your puns were spot on. I love the way Dracula was interrogated and skillfully stated his case clearing up any misconceptions of being evil. Excellent!
HALLOWEEN NIGHT LIGHT
By Daniella Kaufman
Word Count: 91
A candle in a pumpkin sees
the sun set out of sight.
Then tilts its flame near windows cut
to free the candle’s light.
Its glow will guide the ghouls and ghosts—
some scary, others sweet—
by casting beams upon a path
for all to trick-or-treat.
“Stay bright tonight!” The candle chants
behind its pumpkin’s face,
while waxy droplets slither down
and puddle at its base.
It droops. It stoops. But still, it shines
‘til night has come and gone.
Then sighs triumphant threads of smoke
into the light of dawn.
I love that you have told this, beautifully, from the perspective of the candle light inside the pumpkin.
Thank you so much for these kind words about my little ode to candlelight!
You are welcome.
Beautifully written.
Thank you so much! 😊
This is simply wonderful!
You’re wonderful for saying so! Thank you!
Lovely! “Stay bright tonight!” The candle chants
behind its pumpkin’s face,
while waxy droplets slither down
and puddle at its base.
Thank you 😊 I actually wrote this stanza first! Needed to figure out “slither.” Fun three words this year!
BEAUTIFUL closing stanza! A sweet ode to the un-sung heroes who make our celebrations magical!
What a thoughtful and lovely perspective! Thank you so much!
Love this Danni! You are a master of rhyme! So glad the candlelight made it all the way through the night!
You’re the best, Ryann! Thanks for the confidence boost! 😊
Great rhyme and meter. I love the imagery! Good luck!
Thank you!! I love writing in verse (even if it’s a special kind of pain to edit). Best of luck to you too!
Absolutely beautiful and poetic. Your rhyme is flawless.
You’re so kind! Thank you for reading and for the smile I’ll be wearing all day 😊
Do Goblins Gobble?
By Sally Yorke-Viney
Word Count: 100
Slither, Treat, and Scare
Lived in their goblin lair.
But every year they rose
From ominous shadows.
Tonight’s the only night
For a hideous fright.
As Halloween began
They hatched their sinister plan!
Slither slunk across to Treat.
“What do you want to eat ?”
“There’s a child’s outside cave,
Looking yummy, let’s be brave!”
Scare screeched a hideous shriek
“Grab his goodies! Take the sweets!
“I’m too young to eat a child,“
“Though I’m shrill, I’m mostly mild
Slither sadly slunk back down,
Treat sunk slowly underground
Scare sighed a dejected moan,
We’ll try next year when we’re grown!
I am relieved they did not eat the child!
I think Slither was just talking big!! A bully who knows better. Thankfully his goblin friends talked him out of it!
Agreed!
Goblin kids, yikes! Glad they’re too young to eat a child!
Yes… and thank heavens for a friend who talks them out of the plan!
Thank goodness they’ll have to wait until they’ve grown.
Hopefully the more leveled headed goblin (Is that possible!) will always talk sense and go for the candy!
Crossing my fingers.
“Slither slunk” is an INCREDIBLE double consonant alliteration that rolls delightfully off of the tongue! I love your creative use of the three required words as names! Slither and Scare are perfect goblin names, and Treat, well, maybe Treat was adopted by TRansylvanian TRolls.
Royal, you are always the master of rhyme! Thank you for you comments. I will consider Treat’s adoptive parents’ names… How about Traps, Trixie and Treat the Transylvania Trolls?? Truly terrific!!
Very cute! I love the use of the required words as the mc’s names. Well played.
Thanks MA, they had a nice rhythm when I said them.
WITCHY-LICIOUS STEW
by Charlotte Dixon
WC 100
Every Halloween, Willow Witch gathered ingredients for Granny’s Halloween treat—
Witchy-licious Stew.
Willow whooshed to Mushroom Meadow but . . .
NO MUSHROOMS!
Swished above Slithering Gardens but . . .
NO SNAILS!
Explored Frog Bog but . . .
NO FROGS!
Willow brewed a new idea.
I’ll search Scary Woods.
Willow swooped low and—
spotted Tilly Ogre.
“Tilly, do you know why the mushrooms, snails, and frogs are gone?”
“Why do you ask?” said Tilly.
“Granny needs them for her stew.”
Tilly squirmed,
shuddered,
and . . .
BURRRPED!
“FREEZE! You smell like Granny’s stew!”
“UBBADUBBAUPCHUCK!”
Tilly lurched,
spewed stew, plus—
Ogre seasonings.
“Witchy-licious!” shouted Willow.
“C’mon. Granny’s waiting.”
Ew gross!! LOL
Thank you for reading. I know–a tad gross-LOL
Ha ha. Just a tad!
This is not one to read after eating. Kids will luuuuv the grossness.
Yep. Not one to read after eating–LOL
Oh, this is perfectly gross! Love it, Charlotte!
Thank you, Julianne!
Sorry about the autocorrect! BAH–HUMBUGGERS! I’ll try again. Thank you Jilanne!
No worries, Charlotte! Autocorrect “corrects” my name spelling when I type it, too, LOL. Clearly, it doesn’t learn.
I laughed out loud at “UBBADUBBAUPCHUCK!” Too funny!
Thank you Michelle! It’s a mouthful!
LOL Funny ending! Love your witchy details throughout and snappy pacing.
Thank you, Sarah.
Yuk! I wasn’t expecting the Ogre seasoning.
Thank you, Eleanor.
Haha! Eww! Funny!
Thank you, Nancy. It was a huge EWW!
Willow “brewed” a new idea! GENIUS! Willow is a cute and resourceful main character! Well done!
Thank you, Royal.
The Ghouliest Ghouls!
By Marta Cutler
(69 words)
Hide your candy!
Look out! Beware!
The ghouliest ghouls
Are here to scare!
Carmen cackles
Maya moans
Hannah howls
Gemma groans
Simon slithers
Casey creeps
Stephen stomps
Sami sneaks
Door to door
They trick or treat
Filling bags
With candy sweets
One more house
At last! They’re done!
Now sleepiest ghouls
Have had their fun
To bed they tumble
What do they dream?
How scary they’ll be
next Halloween!
I am pretty sure I want to steer clear of that neighborhood.
This is a scary one. Well done!
Simon slithers
Casey creeps
Stephen stomps
Sami sneaks
Nice rhyme and alliteration! Very cute with all the treat or treaters. Good luck!
Thanks for the lovely feedback everyone!
I love the line “Now sleepiest ghouls have had their fun!” A LOVELY and action-filled adjective that references your opening as we transition into your close! Very nice!
Very cute! And I love the alliteration!
THE SCARIEST BEAR
By Marta Cutler
(99 words)
“What do you think?” asked Rabbit.
“Best Zombie ever!” said Bear.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
“Scare Wear delivery!” boomed a voice.
“Oh goody!” said Bear. “My costume’s here!
“Let’s see!” said Rabbit.
Bear opened the box.
Something green and shiny slithered out.
“What is it?” asked Rabbit
“A glow-in-the-dark alien suit.”
Bear put it on. It fit exactly one big bear arm.
“Oh dear,” said Rabbit.
“Halloween is ruined!” Bear cried.
“I know!” said Rabbit. “You can be a one-armed Scare Bear!
Bear brightened.
“Really?”
“Scariest bear ever!” said Rabbit. “You’ll get lots of treats!”
And Bear was. And Bear did.
Everyone needs a clever and convincing friend like Rabbit.
Now that’s making lemonade out of lemons. Bravo.
I like this. Positive thinking. Everyone should have a friend like Rabbit.
Good for Bear. He’s lucky to have the encouragement of a resourceful and quick thinking friend in Rabbit.
Very cute! Glad that Rabbit came up with a creative solution. Nice!
Glad you like it and thanks for taking the time to comment!
I LOVE the detail that “it fit EXACTLY one big bear arm!” Very funny! And the business name “Scare Wear” is inspired! A sweet story of costumes, friendship…and candy!
HALLOWEEN IS DIFFERENT THIS YEAR
By S.S. Lee
100 words
Once, Halloween was fantastic,
but now it’s a horrible chore.
I wish I could go trick-or-treating!
Instead I just float by the door.
I COULD be disguised in a costume,
eating candy, carousing with friends.
But Mummy drones, “That life is over!”
while Banshee wails, “Suffer your ends!”
Zombie groans, “It’s an adjustment.”
Halloween’s different this year:
I’m a ghost. No more treats, only tricks!
Though Ghoul says the treat is their FEAR.
A crowd slithers out of the darkness.
Startled, I unleash a BOO!
It’s clear by their shrieking I’ve scared them.
I smile… Because tricks are fun too.
Ha ha ha. You have to learn to adjust, and ghost did.
thanks Colleen! we’ve all gotta learn something, don’t we 🙂
Indeed!
Oh, I love this one!!! One of my favourites – I love how ghost is learning to adapt to its new “life” by the end.
gosh thank you Helen!! that is lovely to hear!!
I’m happy she adjusted to her new situation.
hah I think she is too! thanks Eleanor!
Nicely done. Great rhyme and rhythm. Good luck!
thanks Nancy, you too!
I LOVE this! A beautiful fable for the young and a healthy reminder for the less young that change is constant. Wonderful dialogue. This resonates with the Halloween spirit.
Aw thanks for your eloquent comment!!
You really captured such a sadness in this. You feel for ghost. To generate such empathy in so few words is a talent. This offers a change in perspective for children. A happy ending with the little scare and a smile at the end.
THE RATTLESLOTH
By Russell Wolff
100 words
Rattlesloth’s alarm clock screeches.
Halloween.
Time to scare.
Rattlesloth slicks its slitherous tongue
sharpens its fang-erous claws
and gathers its clatterous tail.
Heading to town, Rattlesloth greets Tarantula…
“Ahhh!” Tarantula cries, trembling.
…nods at Bat…
“Eeeek!” Bat squeaks and crashes into a tree.
…and slow-fives Opossum, who plays dead.
Rattlesloth smiles.
Rattlesloth arrives.
Knock…
…
…
knock.
The door opens.
Rattlesloth freezes.
Out crashes a creature
with anger-ous eyes
wormous hair
and gnashering teeth.
Rattlesloth trips over its tongue trying to get away.
“Wicked costume!” the creature says, removing its terrorful face.
Rattlesloth takes a deep breath
smiles
and reaches for treats.
A lot of scaring going on here.
🙂
I love all your words, slitherous, clatterous, etc. Creepy! Good job.
Thank you! They were fun to think up.
Your scenes with your frightened animals are very animated! A very good job! Loved the word slitherous!
Thanks! I can’t believe slitherous isn’t in the dictionary. 🙂
The Eyes Have It
By Marta Cutler
(100 words)
Max and his sister were almost home.
Their bags bulged with treats.
It was the perfect end to the perfect Halloween.
Except for the eyes.
“Still there?” whispered Max.
“Yes,” said his sister.
Huge, glowing eyes slithered behind them.
Max and his sister went faster.
So did the eyes.
“Run!” yelled Max.
They dropped their bags and ran home.
Luna the cat appeared. So did Witch.
“Nice scare with the eyes!” said Witch.
“Thanks,” Luna purred.
Witch loaded the candy onto her broom.
“The perfect end to the perfect Halloween!” she cackled.
And the tricksters flew off into the night.
Well that wasn’t very nice of the witch and the cat! Poor kids.
Very tricky. Those wacky witches. Never trust them.
Poor kids. But it’s a cute story, all the same. I can picture Luna purring and stretching. All proud of herself.
Tricksters for sure, naughty witches! Cute story!
Haha! A FANTASTIC repetition of the phrase “the perfect end to the perfect Halloween!” I love that it switches from narrative voice to dialogue! A very nice touch!
A Scare Affair
Lori C Evans
Word Count 100
Trick or treat,
My name’s Pete.
I’m a zombie
give me meat!
Brains are best,
But when pressed
I’ll accept arms,
legs, or chest.
Trick or Treat,
Vampires greet.
I dare you –
Pass them in the street!
They might bite.
They’re not polite.
They’ll suck your blood-
Oh, what a fright!
Trick or Treat!
Misty feet
slither slide
beneath a sheet.
The goodies rise.
I hear your cries
as unseen hands
collect their prize.
Trick or Treat.
It’s not complete
until my friends
All get to eat!
Wait, don’t run!
Just spooky fun.
Did we scare you?
Our work’s done.
Well yes. You scared me!
Great title. This is a scary one, indeed.
Scary indeed! Good job.
I LOVE your opening stanza! Reminiscent of the “Trick or Treat, smell my feet” taunt many of us remember from childhood. I like what you’ve done with it!
Very cute! Great job!
Halloween Haul
By Stephanie Maksymiw
Word Count: 93
What do we have here?
A bucket of treats.
I reach down and get…
A box of raisins?!?!
That’s not a treat.
Away dried-up fruit.
Flee in fear.
Slither in shame .
The next treat must be better.
Candy bar!
Crunch.
Yummmmm!
What’s next?
Caramel apple!
Crunch.
Owwwwwww!
Uh-oh.
My teeth hurt.
I need my dentist.
But she’s busy tonight.
Doing what?
Giving out toothbrushes.
Handing out stickers.
Scaring trick-or-treaters with tales of cavities.
I’ll have to wait.
Until then, no more sugar or hard foods.
What can I eat?
A box of raisins!!!!
See. Raisins are not so bad after all.
Cute
Oh dear. That’s a sad tale. No more treats, just raisins. Dentists and Halloween don’t really mix well, do they?
Oh no! All she can eat is “fool’s chocolate!” Hoping she doesn’t need a root canal . . . Now that is scary! Good luck!
“Away dried-up fruit!” Such a hilarious command to give raisins! I know I still feel this way, even as an adult!
ENTRY POSTED FOR KRISTEN
Halloween is Magic
By Kristen Littlefield
Word Count: 91
“It’s Halloween!” Witch Wanda screeched.
“And I can’t scare up tricks or treats!”
“The cauldron’s cracked.”
“My potion burned.”
“I’m out of bats and three-eyed worms.”
So Wanda flew into the night,
And gathered things to give a fright.
Ten slithery snakes,
Two warty toads,
A shrew that had a runny nose.
“Yippee!” she cried, “What spooky fun!”
“Can’t wait to see those kiddies run!”
But when they spied Witch Wanda’s “treats”,
Excited children filled the streets.
They hugged the snakes.
They cuddled the shrew.
Now Wanda runs a petting zoo.
Fun surprise ending!
Ha ha. Way to make the best of a not-so-successful scare, Wanda!
Like the surprise ending.
I like the way the kids surprised witch Wanda, who, it turns out, is quite the opportunist. A petting zoo!? A unique ending.
I love this, especially the ending.
Ahh, cute! Love the ending! Good luck!
That’s such a fun ending! Super cute!!
Phenomenal last line! I’m glad Wanda had a successful Halloween after all!
This is a great story, Kristen! My favorite line “A shrew that had a runny nose”. And the ending was perfect! I could see this as a board book!
COMMAND PERFORMANCE
By Jamie Donahoe
95 words
“Trick or treat!” we called from the street, shouting to the eerie house.
The door swung wide – “Aha!” cried the witch inside. “This year I will take a trick.”
“You!” she cackled, pointing a long, crooked finger at ME.
“Come hither and play my zither.”
I shivered under her steely gaze as I tiptoed into the scary manse, shadowy candles all ablaze.
A sliver of moonlight revealed the zither, waiting for me thither.
I dared not dither, so took a deep breath and began to play.
The old witch danced and swayed… and slithered away.
Story on my website: https://www.jamiedonahoebooks.com/post/halloween-performance
Good thing he knew how to play the zither! Nice work with your internal rhyming.
Thank you – it’s a new thing for me!
Playing the zither? Very cool!
Sadly, no. Internal rhyme! But my child’s Montessori teacher many moons ago did play the zither…and very nicely too
Well good job with the internal rhyme!
Like the addition of a zither. Unique.
Thank you!
Well done Jamie! A sliver of moonlight revealed the zither, waiting for me thither.
Thanks Eleanor!!
To be honest, I had to look up zither, shhhh don’t tell anybody.
Loved the use of hither and thither and dither! Playing a zither by candlelight feels very Halloween-y! Well done!
Thank you! It was very fun pulling it together
zither, dither, thither, hither … so fun! And I learned a new word 🎃
I can’t play the zither, but I can play the Appalachian dulcimer. Fun addition to your story. Good luck!
How fun! I wonder what could rhyme with dulcimer…
ENTRY POSTED FOR ISABEL
ZOMBIE IN THE HOUSE
by: i c rodriguez
wc: 41
Scary Goolish Eyes. Check.
Plastic Vampire Teeth. Check
Slithering Fake Blood. Check.
Black-Nailed Rubber Hands. Check.
Torn Raggedy Gown. Check.
Wiry Stringy Wig. Check
Treats-Filled Jack-o-Lantern. Check.
Noisy Rattling Chains. Check.
Mirror on the wall?
Eeek! Zombie in the house!
Ha ha! Good sense of humor? Check!
Slithering fake blood sounds terrifying! No wonder the narrator was scared!
Haha! Fun checklist!
ENTRY POSTED FOR JILL
A WISE DISGUISE
by Jill (P. J.) Purtee
96 words
“What shall I wear?”
said the snake in a dither.
She slid through the house
in a slithery slither.
“Tonight’s Trick or Treat.
I need a disguise.
Not something to scare,
but to fool or surprise.”
“Last year I was scary
and dressed as a ghost.
I even scared me, but
I don’t want to boast.”
“Aha! On the nightstand,”
she said with a hiss.
“My disguise. I’ll wear those—
and, of course, I’ll need this.”
“A book and my glasses.
I’ll fool them indeed.
I’m disguised as a bookworm,
and I’m too young to read.”
Ha ha! Perfect disguise.
Funny! Loved the-I even scared me.
So cute! Good luck, Jill! 🙂
So cute. A bookworm!
A bookworm is a BRILLIANT costume idea for a snake! I LOVE it! I would love to see this illustrated!
Very cute! Great rhyme. Nicely done!
ENTRY POSTED FOR MIA
Truck-or-Treat
By Mia Geiger
89 words
Two small trucks drove down the street.
Soon they’d get to trick-or-treat!
The green one said, “This Halloween,
I want to be a lima bean!”
Her brother smiled, but had some doubt.
“We really, truly, must stand out.
Tow trucks? Mixers? Excavators?
Maybe shippers. Flatbed freighters?
Or scary tractors full of snakes
that slither through our wheels and brakes.”
The green one blinked. “I think you’re right.
We have to be a frightful sight.”
Then all at once an idea struck—
“We each can be … a MONSTER truck!”
My grandsons would love this piece! They are huge fans of anything trucks.
So that’s how monster trucks were born.
I loved how the story came out, Mia. How funny, lima bean. Good luck!
Mia, this turned out so delightful! I love the “scary tractors full of snakes . . .” line and the perfect ending line. Nicely done!
Boys who play Hot wheels with Monster trucks will love this.
This one really made me smile, Mia. The ending is great, but I really enjoyed the lima bean. 😊
I love this story, Mia. The trucks have such a sweet sibling relationship, and the punchline at the end is perfection!
Monster truck – INSPIRED! Their lively brainstorming would be very enjoyable to see illustrated! I love the scary tractor full snakes description! So visual! Great title that doesn’t give away the ending! PERFECT!
Love the ending! Very fun story. Good job!
ENTRY POSTED FOR MARTY
The Halloween Dare
By Marty Findley
100 words
Sneaky Snake slithered up to Snail with a scary stare. “Mmmmm…a tasty treat!” he hissed. Snail replied, “Please don’t eat me! I dare you to race me to the Halloween Ball. If you win you eat me but if I win, you disappear.”
Snake knew Snail’s pace so agreed, gliding away sliding side to side leaving snail trailing far behind.
Crow swooped down and cawed, “Get on!” and away the friends flew to the ball. There was no hurry or worry for they were sure to win. Pumpkins glowed; Snake never showed and two friends had a safe Halloween!
It pays to have friends in high places!
I wonder where the snake went? You’ll have to write a picture book for this one. A retelling of the hare and tortoise.
Hooray for Snail and Crow!
I guess the snail got what it wanted, the snake just…disappeared! Hooray for Crow!
Snail was lucky to have Crow as a friend.
ENTRY POSTED FOR MARTY
Witch’s Brew
By Marty Findley
97 words
Things that slither side to side
Creepy crawly things that glide
Trail of snail and wings of bat
Add some whiskers of black cat
Serve with peppers for some heat
Will you have some for a treat?
A cup of this – you won’t be seen
When you go out on Halloween!
Can’t you scare up something nice…
A tasty treat like pumpkin spice?
A bit of magic swirled in cream
Tantalizing like a dream…
A drink to make us disappear
When we trick-or-treat this year
Just a sip…don’t gulp it so
Hmmm…Where did you go?
Does the trick-or-treater come back??
Cute
A bit of magic swirled in cream. Now that sounds nice. I enjoyed your story.
This reminds me of Harry Potter. Who wouldn’t want to become invisible?
I’d like a 2nd helping, please!
Cute story, fun to read.
“A drink to make us disappear!” How delightfully filled with the Halloween spirit!
Cute. Fun rhyme and love, A bit of magic swirled in cream! Nicely done and good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR KATIE
A Halloween Tail
By Katie Lee Reinert
Word Count: 100
As Sophie sprinted out the door, her mom called, “Just the neighbor’s house!”
Treat bag in hand, Sophie hurried up the sidewalk.
She froze. Was that slithering?
Shrugging, she resumed her candy quest.
There it was again!
“Lionel, if you’re trying to scare me, it won’t work!” Her brother wasn’t going to ruin her first solo trick-or-treating! Satisfied, she continued toward the house.
More slithering! If Lionel wasn’t making those sounds, what was?!?
A shadowy figure emerged.
Sophie screamed!
“Sophie, honey, pick up your tail.” her mom said. “I heard it dragging all the way from our house.”
Ha ha! Very cute surprise at the end.
Cute twist ending
Unexpected ending, sweet and funny.
This was excellent! The title made me feel like the slithering would be her own tail, but when the “shadowy figure emerged,” I had no idea what it could be! She had every reason to scream! A charming Halloween “tail!”
Hahaha! Great ending! Fun story.
ENTRY POSTED FOR SHARON
Creepy People
Word Count 90
By Sharon McCarthy
Shhhhh!
Gather round, my fellow stinkers. Our night of sneaking has arrived!
The creepy people are itching to scare!
Let’s deliver a mist of fragrance this year!
Dress up promptly in your cat costumes. Creepy people adore kitties, so.
They’ll slither over like impulsive snakes and smack right into our trap.
Shhhhh!
Hold your spray!
Clomping feet are approaching!
Their stretching fingers are closing in!
“Nice little kitties!”
Scratch!
Pet!
Tickle!
HA! HA!
“Trick or treat, creepy people!”
Tails, UP stinkers! — Spray!
“Peeee Ewwwww!
Skunks!
Run!”
Gotcha! Creepy People!
Poor people!! But well disguised, skunks.
Quite the trick, little skunks. Hold your spray! Gave them away.
Cute story and great ending!
So funny! Yes, kittens are irresistable. Skunks not so much so, especially when they spray. Or so I would imagine. I’ve never met a skunk. 😂
I like you showcasing HUMANS as the creepy things that lurk about on Halloween! Clever!
Little stinkers! Glad they didn’t show up on my neighborhood! Good job!
I love the idea of conniving little stinkers tricking trick-or-treaters. Fun story!
ENTRY POSTED FOR ELAINE
Happy Halloween
100 words
Elaine D’Alessandro
Witch Winona slithers out
Plotting planning all about
Cackling calling trick or treat
Up and down her festive street
Scary ghosts and grizzly girls
Princesses with lots of curls
Scarecrows sporting flannel pants
Skeletons with creepy hands
Halloween arrives at last
Witch’s time to have a blast
Doling out her many sweets
To her pals with scanty treats
Taffy apples, lollipops
Candy corn and gummy drops
Licorice in the shape of stars
Jelly beans and chocolate bars
Sharing candy at day’s end
Witch’s way to be a friend
Then makes sure that everyone
Heads on home when day is done
Witch Winona certainly knows how to do Halloween right!
Finally, a good witch.
I like that even witches can share at Halloween. Anytime is a good time to look after each other. Well done, Elaine.
I like your alliteration in the first couple of stanzas! And liquorice in the shape of stars sounds festive and tasty!
Sharing is caring. Love that Winona shared with other. Nice job .
ENTRY POSTED FOR JULIE
Scared Sssssilly
by Julie Lerczak
One Halloween night, six siblings — SaraSimonSolSerenaSueandStu sought sweets to savor.
Sensible yet slightly superstitious, they stuck close together, trick-or-treating the shadowy streets.
Suddenly, silent bats swooped, and a sickening sour smell stopped them in their steps.
Slurping sounds and someone’s stomping signaled something sinister was stalking.
Suspecting slobbering swamp monsters or stinking sasquatches, the six were scared silly.
Screaming, they split, stumbling over sticks, stones, and several salamanders slithering in slime.
Speeding home to safety, they secured all locks on windows and doors, then sat shivering in silence.
Simultaneously they said, “SWEET TREATS AREN’T WORTH BEING SO SCARED!”
They certainly are not! Great use of consonance/alliteration!
Thank you, Colleen.
Well done creating this tongue twister piece.
Thank you!
Love the story and the “S” sounds!
Thanks, Pamela!
Super great tongue-twisty story! Bravo!
Thank you so much!
“A sickening sour smell” – I loved how you added the sense of smell to their discomfort and fear!
Thank you, Royal!
What a fun tongue twisty story!
Thank you!
ENTRY POSTED FOR GAIL
The Spooky House
by Gail Hartman
99 words
“Spooky house,” said Jon.
“I’m not scared,” said Sophie.
Did they hear the owl hoot in the old sycamore?
Did they see the yellow eyes gleam in the window?
Bong, bong, bong went the doorbell.
“Trick or treat,” called Sophie and Jon.
“Maybe we should go,” whispered Sophie.
Creak went the door.
“Too late now,” said Jon.
A shadowy figure with tangled hair and a warty nose peered out. A salamander slithered round its shoulders. A boney hand holding a basket poked out of a tattered sleeve.
“Full-size chocolate bars!” exclaimed Sophie.
“Thanks! Great costume, Grandpa,” said Jon.
Oh my goodness. Great job with the costume Grandpa!
I guess the kids didn’t expect grandpa would dress up for Halloween. Cute ending!
I love the “bong bong bong” of your doorbell, instead of the traditional “ding dong.” It was MUCH more ominous!
Leave it to a grandpa to celebrate up with the nest costume! Nice and creepy! Good job.
Autocorrect attacked my comments! Leave it to a grandpa to come up with the best costume! Good luck!
ENTRY POSTED FOR TONNYE
A Halloween Smile
by Tonnye Fletcher
96 words
The O’Lantern family was thrilled Halloween was here.
Jack’s job as the chief scarer for the general store was getting intense.
Day slithered into night as he rolled home.
Jill had a treat waiting.
“A baby?!” Jack grinned.
“Let’s carve a Jack Be Little,” she smiled back.
They cut two triangle eyes, like his mom.
They drilled a round nose, like his dad.
As they began to carve his toothy grin,
a “roll-ll-ll, THUNK!” scared them
and the knife slipped.
Turns out, the toothy grin was toothless,
just like Grumpkin,
who had bumped into the door.
Ha ha ha. Cute premise and clever names.
Love this line especially-Day slithered into night . . .
Uh-oh! Not a toothless grin. Great ending.
This is so cute, Tonnye! It made me smile imagining the O’Lantern family.
Love the O’Lantern family, Tonnye! Super cute!
I love the detail that Jack “rolled home” from the general store. I could see this charming pumpkin family as a claymation!
Fun and creative. Good job!
Haha, so cute Tonnye!
Posting for Mona Pease
A Scary Dare
by Mona Pease 100 words
She shivered while slinking down the path
to the rickety house on the Dead End lane
and wondered why she accepted the dare
when everyone else was afraid.
She didn’t knock and was ready to bolt
when the door creaked open slowwwww.
Standing there
was a crickety man
with a creakity voice who calmly croaked,
“Won’t you come in my dear.”
“Uhhhhhhhhh!”
He served tea. They played checkers.
He quietly said, “I’ve been lonely. I’m glad you stopped by.”
She said, “Goodnight,” to the crickety man with the creakity voice in the rickety house,
“I’ll come back and visit soon.”
I am so glad it ended well for both the trick-or-treater and the crickety man!
This is very sweet.
I can imagine an old toad opening the door. Great theme of compassion.
Oh, the language and its rhythm is so lovely here, Mona! And it has such a sweet ending. I love it!
You closing line is a GEM! “…to the crickety man with the creakity voice in the rickety house…” BEAUTIFUL.
So sweet that the girl cheered up the crickety old man. I love the feelings in this story. Nice!
ENTRY POSTED FOR DEBBIE
Stop Your Bellyaching Soup, a Jump Rope Song
Opening scene: Scary Fairy is eating a heap of candy.
By Debbie Meneses Word Count: 98
Scary, Scary Halloween Fairy
Boats through the bog with her garden rake.
Catches fireflies in a flurry
Used as bait for a slithering snake.
Scary, Scary Halloween Fairy
Skims through the swamp with her garden rake.
Crayfish claw for a ride on the tines
Shrewdest fairy for goodness’ sake.
Scary, Scary Halloween Fairy
Floats through fog on her garden rake.
Dragging her catch from the swampy lake
Simmers a soup to soothe her ache.
Scary, Scary Halloween Fairy
Hangs a sign on her upturned rake.
“Bellyache Treat” bubbles warm and swirly
Serves the broth as a Halloween take.
I like that she has witch’s rake and not a broom. And maybe she is not so scary after all?
Nice repetition, and I like, Simmers a soup to soothe her ache. She’s probably a druid.
I love the fairy and all she does!
A jump rope song. That’s interesting. It does have a good beat for jumping to, and the repetition helps also. It flows well.
This is so clever!! I LOVE the jumprope aspect to this Debbie!
Wonderful rhyming story! Love it. Very creative concept.
Your repeated first line descriptions of the Halloween Fairy moving about with her garden rake are beautifully haunting!
Your scary Halloween Fairy moving through a bog, a swamp, and collecting ingredients for her potion in the fog is very eery and gives me goosebumps.
This is so inventive. Love the rhyme and the mood.
ENTRY POSTED FOR MEAGAN
A Spell of Transformation
By Meagan T. Gentry
100 words
“For a Halloween treat, two must say the word strange.
As scary moon beasts with fangs, both shall change.”
The twins repeated the spell again, puzzling over the riddle as clouds slithered past the full moon.
“Moon? Fangs? What word…” Pippa said. “Wait! What do wolves do at the moon?”
“Howl?” Peter asked.
“Yes! HOWL-o-ween. But said ‘strange.’”
“Ween-oh-howl?”
“Close. To transform we say…” Pippa grasped Peter’s hand tightly and whispered. They grinned wickedly before shouting in unison at the sky –
“WE! NOW! HOOOOWL!”
Moonlight flashed as twin wolf pups trotted away, their tails twined together like two clasped hands.
Love the image you created in the end.
If only I could transform into a wolf. Kids will love this.
I love your title followed directly by the words of the Spell itself! INSPIRED transition for such a short story!
Well done! Who wouldn’t want to change into a wolf on Halloween! Good luck!