Guess what, my little chickens?
It’s time for the Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Writing Challenge Week #5!
What an impressive showing we’ve had so far! You guys are a creative and talented bunch, and I am having so much fun reading your work! It looks like you’re enjoying each other’s as well!
Side note: please take a moment to look over the prize list if you haven’t checked it lately because, thanks to the generosity of the kidlit community, there are quite a few more fantastic choices than we had back on day 1!
Now, then! On to the challenge!
Mix ‘n’ Match Mini is a writing challenge for anyone who needs a little boost or a little encouragement to get writing….or maybe just a little fun!
You get to write your own story, enjoy and be entertained by everyone else’s stories, and get yourself in the running for some awesome prizes (please see the end of the blog post for a list of all the prize goodies…which keeps getting added to!)
For a full description of the challenge or to enter your Week #1 entry (or read other people’s entries 😊), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #2 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #3 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #4 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
Remember, if you’re just stumbling onto this challenge, that you can submit your stories for previous weeks any time until Sunday June 25th, so you can still qualify for a prize!
Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Writing Prompt #5 for Week 5
So far we’ve worked with a Character plus an Action, an Origin Story, an Image with a Situation, and a List Story!
This week, we’re going to work with Cause and Effect!
Picture books need a series of events that lead from one to the next, pulling the reader along from cause to effect. All stories need it, but it’s been emphasized in various titles such as FORTUNATELY by Remy Charlip, IF YOU GIVE A MOUSE A COOKIE by Laura Numeroff, and WHEN YOUR LION NEEDS A BATH by Yours Truly.
This week your mission, should you choose to accept it 😊, is to write a Cause and Effect story of your own.
Choose a subject from Column A and a condition from Column B and fill in the blanks to create the opening of your 100-word Cause-and-Effect story for children as follows:
If (subject from Column A) was/were [a/an] (condition from Column B) . . .
For example:
If I were an astronaut. . .
If my brother was a cricket. . .
If my babysitter was extinct. . .
You may write in if/then style, or the “then” may be understood, but the story must use Cause and Effect with each situation leading clearly to the next.
For example:
If I were an astronaut, then I would not have to play in my piano recital on Thursday.
OR
If my brother was a cricket, I could keep him in a box. (in which “then” is understood)
Then you’ll continue with what would happen if you could keep your cricket brother in a box, and what follows from that, etc. until you reach a satisfying story conclusion 😊
| Column A | Column B |
| I | worm |
| You | invisible |
| My sister | gigantic (or teeny tiny) |
| My teacher | elastic |
| My grandpa | unicorn |
| My best friend | movie star |
| My dog | ninja |
- Stories can rhyme or not – totally up to you!
- You can go under or over 100 words if you want to – also totally up to you! – 100 is just a guideline
- If you’re deeply inspired by a different subject or a different condition that doesn’t appear above, go for it! – the purpose here is inspiration and to get you writing! Just tell us what you’re using!
- For simplicity’s sake (and to aid skimming readers who might be interested in a particular thing) please say which Subject and Condition you’re using at the top of your entry along with your name, title, and word count (unless it’s obvious from your title.)
For example:
Granny Shark
by Marcia Writer
107 words
my granny, shark
So come join the fun! Get some writing done! Encourage your kids (or students) to give it a try! Or just have a good time together reading what other folks have written!
Post your Week #5 story in the comment section below, or, if you have trouble for any reason and can’t post yourself you may email it to me using the Contact Form and I will post it for you.
Ready, set, WRITE! 😊
(And remember, for full details on the 7 week challenge you can check HERE.)
Check out the Week #5 stories!
If My Teacher Was a Movie Star … – Katie McEnaney
Home (from the perspective of someone who is neurodivergent – ADHD, autistic…) – Lauren N. Simmons
If My Dog (Wally) was a Movie Star – Kelly Kates
If I Were a Worm – Patricia Nozell
Oh, No! – Elizabeth Thoms Charles
If I Could Be Invisible I Would Do What I Want – Isabel C Rodriguez
The Most Magical Harvest Festival – Kelly Clasen
If I Were Teeny-Tiny – Sara Kruger
Movie Star – Tomi Rues
If I Was A Unicorn – Lyn Jekowsky
If My Dog Was Teeny Tiny – Beth Volkmann
If My Sister Were A Worm – Julie Hauswirth
Ukie, My Special Pet – Susan E. Schipper
If Grandpa Was Elastic – Stephanie Maksymiw
If Grandpa Was a Unicorn – Karen A. Wyle
If My Dog Were A Movie Star – Debbie J. Arnn
I Can’t Hear You – Angel Gantnier
Now You See Me… – Elyse Trevers
If My Dog Was a Ninja – Tiffany Hanson
If My Dog Was a Ninja – Marta Cutler
Invisible Best Friend – Ellie Langford
If I Were A Worm – Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
Freedom through Friendship – Colleen Murphy
Movie Star Fun – Dawn Renee Young
Ninja Brother – Bev Schellenberg
If My Dog Were A Unicorn – Linda Schueler
If You Were Invisible – Krithika Santhanam
My Invisible Sister – Penny Taub
Vanishing Cream – Jill Lambert
If My Teacher Was Tiny (Like Me) – Lauri Meyers
If I Were My Baby Brother – Ashley Sierra
If You Were a Mayfly – Sarah Meade
If My Teacher Was Invisible – Michelle S. Kennedy
If My Teacher Was Invisible – Julie Kurtz
If I Was A Worm – B. Holland Paley
If I Were Invisible – Ryann Jones
If I Learn To Ride My Bike With One Hand – Sally Yorke-Viney
If You Were a Unicorn – Haley Hendrickson
Sister Snail – Sara Petersohn
Teeny Tiny Me – Dianne Borowski
My Buddy Rusty – Dianne Borowski
If My Dog Were Invisible – Deb Buschman
My Perfect Life As An Earthworm – Royal Baysinger
When it comes time for prizes, names of all those who completed the challenge will be drawn randomly and matched with prizes drawn randomly until we run out! 😊
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique from Penny Parker Klostermann, talented author of THERE WAS AN OLD DRAGON WHO SWALLOWED A KNIGHT (Random House 2015) and A COOKED-UP FAIRY TALE (Random House 2017) as well as the forthcoming SPIDER LADY: Nan Songer and Her Arachnid WWII Army (Astra/Calkins Creek 2025) and another as yet unannounced 😊
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⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique OR Ask-Me-Anything Chat OR a signed copy of SCIENCE, MATTER AND THE BASEBALL PARK (winner’s choice!) from author Catherine Ciocchi. Catherine is a multi-published author and a teacher with a knack for STEM-themed rhyming texts. Her books include SCIENCE, MATTER AND THE BASEBALL PARK (Gnome Road Publishing, March 28, 2023) and THIS LAND IS YOUR LAND (Arbordale Publishing, May 2015)
⭐️ a 20 minute Zoom or phone Ask Me Anything with Jilanne Hoffman, author of 2 board books, THE HONEY BEAR HIVE (Mudpuppy January 2023), HAPPY CAMPER (Mudpuppy January 2022), and the forthcoming picture book A RIVER OF DUST
⭐️ Copy Editing/Proofreading Of Up To 5 Picture Book Texts (All Types and Lengths) from Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf, professional technical writer and copy editor.
Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
⭐️ a first read-through recording package from children’s author and poet Sarah Meade, contributor to HOP TO IT: POEMS TO GET YOU MOVING (Pomelo Books, 2020!) where she will read aloud and record up to five PB manuscripts for one author (1,000 words or less each, fiction or nonfiction, rhyming or non-rhyming) so you can hear how your stories sound to someone who is unfamiliar with them on a first read-through! Very helpful and emlightening!
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Kathy Halsey currently serves on the State Library of Ohio’s “Choose to Read Ohio” program and writes curricular toolkits for SLO’s award-winning children’s books. She is a former K-12 school librarian, seventh grade English teacher, and bookseller for a children’s independent bookstore. Her first work for hire board book releases fall, 2023.
2019 PBChat Mentorship
SCBWI Ohio Central-South Co-Assistant Regional Advisor
Former Community Manager, Storyteller Academy
Ohio Educational Library Media Association Past President
⭐️ a signed copy of ANIMALS IN SURPRISING SHADES: POEMS ABOUT EARTH’S COLORFUL CREATURES (Gnome Road Publishing, March 28, 2023)from author Susan Johnston Taylor! This book is great for classrooms and recommended by SLJ!
⭐️ a copy of Becky Scharnhorst‘s brand new picture book – just coming out tomorrow! – HOW TO GET YOUR OCTOPUS TO SCHOOL (Flamingo Books, May 16, 2023)
⭐️ A signed copy of Susanna Leonard Hill’s ALPHABEDTIME (Nancy Paulsen Books/PRH, October 25, 2022), generously sponsored by a very kind anonymous donor! Thank you so much for your donation, You Know Who You Are 😊
⭐️ A copy of Mary Kole’s Writing Irresistible Kidlit: The Ultimate Guide to Crafting Fiction for Young Adult and Middle Grade Writers
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⭐️ Making Picture Book Magic Self Study Class (any month)
⭐️ Magnetic Poetry – Little Box of Happiness
Susanna Leonard Hill 
If My Teacher Was a Movie Star …
By: Katie McEnaney
110 words
my teacher, movie star
If my teacher was a movie star, she would teach cursive only so we could sign her autographs.
If we learned to forge her signature, we could write letters home inviting us to her Hollywood premiere.
If we took the class to Hollywood, we could wow the child actors with our cursive skills, and they would recruit us to sign their autographs too.
If we got too good, they might start making us do ALL their homework, and we’d be buried in homework forever!
Maybe it’s better to have a regular teacher and only one-kids-worth of homework.
…but I’ll still practice my cursive. Just in case.
[Teacher winks behind movie-star sunglasses.]
This is so much fun, Katie! Love it!
Enjoyed this story, so creative and fun!
Such a creative take on this prompt! Really well done.
A great reason to learn cursive! And such a fun story!
Fabulous, Katie! Great job with the prompt!
Fun story! I only wish my son had some incentive to learn cursive, LOL, back when he was doing so. We might be able to read his writing now, LOL.
Unique idea for this prompt! 🙂
This is so cute!
Home (from the perspective of someone who is neurodivergent – ADHD, autistic…)
By: Lauren N. Simmons
133 words
I, invisible
If I were invisible, I could do what I want and not need to “have a talk about my behavior.”
If I were invisible, I could spend all my time digging for and looking at bugs and not have to do something else.
If I were invisible, I would not be corrected in front of everyone, all the time.
If I were invisible, none of my classmates could say that I “ruin everything.”
But if I were invisible, my mom couldn’t give me a cookie at the end of a long day.
My dad definitely couldn’t play catch after school.
My dog wouldn’t wait at the front door for me to come home… there would be nothing to wait for.
I am glad my family sees me. It’s always good to be home.
Well done, Lauren. In my 5th grade classroom we call this the kind of story that “rips your heart out and stomps on it” but in a good way.
You’ve packed a powerful message in your short word count, and I hope that someday your “I” finds affirmation outside out their home as well.
Thank you, Katie!
Wow, Lauren! What a poignant story. Some kids want to be invisible. Some kids wish they would be seen. Either way tugs at your heartstrings. Great job with the prompt and working with it to create such a meaningful story!
Thank you so much, Susanna!
Oh, I love this story! So much in the mind of the child.
Thank you, Jilanne!
This is so moving. Well done.
Thank you, Kelly!
Lauren, your message is so moving! Well done! 🙂
Thank you so much!
Loved this story, well done.
Thank you so much, Tomi!
As someone who understands this struggle, I love your positive ending!
Thank you so much, Michelle! That means a lot!
This definitely tugged at my heartstrings. Nicely done!
Thank you, Sarah!
Lauren, this heartfelt story is so true for so many students in our schools. Your voice echos those of neurodivergent students and adults. Don’t ever stop writing. Your words will make a difference for so many people.
Oops!Sorry Susanna.I forgot to update the WC so I had to re-send.Isabel———————————–
No problem 😊
Wow! So powerful in so few words. I can definitely see this expanded into a picture book.
Thank you so much, Patricia!
POSTED FOR KELLY
Week 5
WC: 112
If My Dog (Wally) was a Movie Star
If Wally was a movie star he would be rolling in the dough, instead of the grass.
He wouldn’t have to wait all day beside his food dish. Instead, people would be waiting on him.
He wouldn’t get in trouble for barking loudly at the kids on bikes. People would be screaming his name.
He wouldn’t have to keep us safe from squirrels because he would have his own bodyguard.
Photographers would chase him just like he chases that bunny in the backyard.
But then he might be too busy signing autographs to take naps on the couch with me so . .
I think it’s better if he keeps thinking I’m the star.
Such a fun story, Kelly. I love how you compared his life as a movie star to his life as your pet, and I agree that it’s much better to have him snuggling than signing autographs.
Ha! Yes, it’s so fun to be a dog’s “star”!
This is great—especially that opening line!
Kelly, this is such a fun story! The beginning line and ending are great! 🙂
Fun story and I especially like the last line!
This made me laugh out loud! And the story has such great visuals too.
This is delightful!
If I Were a Worm
by Patricia Nozell
99 words
I, worm
If I were a worm, and you were a newly-planted seed, I’d squirm through soil to provide pathways for rain water to ease your thirst.
If I were a worm, and you were a germinating seed, I’d loosen packed earth to enable your roots to dig deep and your stem to stretch towards the sun.
If I were a worm, and you were a sprouting seed, I’d chew fallen leaves and grass, leaving castings behind to nourish your growth.
If I were a worm, and you were a leafy plant, I’d savor your shade and relish our growing friendship.
This is so good, Patricia! I love these types of nonfiction, STEM stories! So interesting how the worm works with all the different types of seeds/growth process.
Thanks!
I love this, Patricia! The start of a lovely symbiotic friendship!
Thanks, Jilanne!
This is sweet AND informative. I love it.
Thanks, Kelly!
Patricia, love the way you were able to develop a stem story! 🙂
Thank you! I think being a life-long gardener helped!
So good, Patricia! Great job with the prompt, and telling a story, and teaching young readers about worms! 😊
Thanks, Susanna. I had fun with this prompt!
This is a great nf story with wonderful flow. Good job!
Thank you!
Very engaging. Love the STEM component.
POSTED FOR ELIZABETH
Oh, No!
by Elizabeth Thoms Charles
131 Words
I, elastic
If I were elastic, then I could bend around corners.
If I were elastic, then I could anchor myself, then stretch, then launch.
Oh, no. The anchor did not release, whacked back and bruised.
If I bend back like elastic, anchor myself with my toes, stretch myself
And then release my toes, then I will fly.
Splat, flat. I landed on the neighbor’s roof.
Hmm. If I aim, bounce from roof to roof, then I will land on the confectioner’s shop.
Smells delightful. Mint chocolates, spun sugar, swirls of orange and lemon lollipops.
If I bend around, then I can taste them all.
Oh, No! No, put me down.
If I were elastic, I would be stretched and
then bound about a giant cellophane wrapping sweet confections.
Tied in a knot.
Love the humor in this story, Elizabeth. Guess we better be careful what we wish for.
Ha! Yes, what Patricia said. Love the humor and the “twist” of an ending.
Elizabeth, great humor throughout the story! 🙂
Whimsical and fun story!
POSTED FOR ISABEL
2023 Mix ‘n’ Match – Week 5
If I Could Be Invisible
I Would Do What I Want
Author/Illustrator: Isabel C Rodriguez
WC: 132
If I could be invisible I would do what I want
I’d learn to be a seamstress by sitting on my aunt.
I’d watch her push materials and step on her foot to sew
Then I’d put on my invisible clothes and wear my red chapeau.
I’d go outside so all could see my brand new combination
But the red chapeau is the only thing they’d see of my creation.
Then I would board a flight to Paris, me and my red chapeau
And ride along the River Seine aboard a French bateau.
Then I’d fly home to talk about my wonderful vacation
But my red chapeau would just engulf my exciting narration
It’d be then I’ll realize that my voice would also be
Unfortunately for this rhyme, as invisible as me!
I love the use of the word chapeau. It gives character to the narrator. And I love the realization at the end.
Great job! 🙂
The Most Magical Harvest Festival
By Kelly Clasen
163 words
my best friend, unicorn
If my best friend Cass were a unicorn, she would carry me down Main Street during the harvest parade, striking golden hooves on old red bricks while the crowd oohed and aahed.
Afterward, I’d buy her a bucket-sized pink snow cone in her favorite flavor, cotton candy, and I’d get one to match her rainbow tail.
Then we’d register for the tractor pull and leave those old machines in our sparkly dust. The whole city would cheer!
When the sun sank into the plains, Cass and I would find a grassy spot, and I would braid her mane until the fireworks show. Cass would shoot the most spectacular grand finale right from her horn.
After the festival, we’d have a sleepover—only in my back yard, instead of my room—and Cass would whisper funny stories until I was swept away into dreamland, just like she always does.
Come to think of it, maybe Cass IS part unicorn. She’s pretty magical already.
Aw, such a sweet tribute to a friend!
Thank you, Jilanne!
Ahh, best friends! Nice story! 🙂
This is such a sweet, magical story, Kelly. I can envision all of the fun the two would have.
I am loving the fall/festival vibes, Kelly! Great job!
Thank you! 🙂
I love how lyrical and descriptive you write. This is a great story!
Thank you, Tomi!
This is so sweet! The ending made me smile.
Yay!
If I Were Teeny-Tiny
by Sara Kruger
WC: 145
I // teeny-tiny
If I were teeny-tiny then I wouldn’t need to eat
All my fruits and vegetables—one pea would be a feat.
If I were less than one inch tall I’d never have to clean
I couldn’t hold the vacuum up or make my bed pristine
If I were smaller than a thumb I’d be a stowaway
I’d go with Dad on work trips and hang out with him all day
But if I were indeed so small, I couldn’t hug my mum
She’d hold me in her hand and then I’d have to hug her thumb
And if I could be measured by a ruler made of teak
No one would ever find me in a game of hide and seek
It’s fun to write a story where I’m smaller than a ball
But when it’s time to eat dessert, I’m glad I’m four foot tall!
Ha! great twist at the end!
Cute story! Good job! 🙂
Great rhyming & twist at the end. I think many of us are happy to be full-sized when it comes to dessert!
Cute! I’m with you … dessert, please and thank you!! 🙂
This is delightful! Love the image of hugging mum’s thumb!
Thank you!
Movie Star
by Tomi Rues
WC: 94
I, movie star
If I were a movie star,
I’d have a ton of fun.
I’d lounge around the pool all day
and lay out in the sun.
If I were a movie star,
I’d wave a princess wave.
I’d speak in front of millions,
and always feel quite brave.
If I were a movie star,
I’d fly to Paris, France.
I’d meet the king and the prince
who’d ask me for a dance.
I’d dance one dance
and that is all.
Do you wonder why?
It’s past my bedtime.
Don’t you know?
After all, I’m only five!
Cute. Your story has a good flow to it.
Thank you! I hardly ever try to rhyme.:)
This is so fun, Tomi! I love the rhyme and the ending!
Ha, ha! Thank you so much!
Cute story! Love the surprise ending! 🙂
IF I WAS A UNICORN
by Lyn Jekowsky
114 words
I, unicorn
If I was a unicorn,
my granddaughter’s delight,
I would be her soft pillow
she slept on at night.
In her dreams I would fly her
With my wide soft white wings
To magical fairy clouds
With tiny queens and kings
I would soar over rainbows
She’d hold my gold horn
Through the colorful sky
We would fly all the morn.
When she awoke,
in a saddle of pink
I would step her to breakfast
Sip a strawberry drink.
I would trot her outdoors
To play unicorn circus,
She’d stand center ring,
Sing a unicorn song chorus.
When we were tired
from unicorn play.
We would snuggle together
“You’re the best,” I would say.
wc 114
Grandma’s are the best! 🙂
Beth Volkmann
If My Dog Was Teeny Tiny
(131)
If My Dog Was Teeny Tiny . . .
. . . he would explore the grassy backyard jungle
and meet a worm
who would show him the best dirt for digging,
and tunnel underground to find my dog’s
long forgotten bones.
Popping up in the garden,
my dog would hitch a ride
on the back of a bumblebee –
breeze in his ears,
nose to the sky.
Upon landing, the bee would stir up the tufts
of a dandelion puff –
sending silver seeds spinning.
My dog would give chase
until he caught the scent
of cookie crumbs
carried in the clutches of an army of ants.
Refusing to battle, my dog would roll around
in a patch of clover
until the warm sun
lulled him to sleep,
to dream the dreams
of every dog –
big or small.
This is lovely!
Agreed, really lovely!
What a beautiful story! 🙂
If My Sister Were a Worm
By Julie Hauswirth
130 Words
My Sister, Worm
If my sister were a worm, she wouldn’t get all the attention.
Worms don’t steal the show at your birthday party.
Instead, my best friend Emma would say,
“Ew! There’s a worm on my chair!” and put the worm outside.
If my sister were a worm, I wouldn’t have to share a bedroom with her.
Worms don’t sleep in big-girl beds.
Instead, mom and dad would say,
“Why is this worm in your room?” and put the worm outside.
If my sister were a worm, I wouldn’t have to sit next to her at dinner.
Instead, our pet parrot would eat her.
My parents would say, “Julie! Turn your sister back into a human THIS MINUTE!” and then I would probably be grounded.
I’ll turn her into a kitten instead.
This is totally delightful – and really well done! 🙂
Very cute story! 🙂
Ukie, My Special Pet
By Susan E. Schipper
WC 117
My dog, Unicorn
If you picture an animal with one horn, then you probably see a Rhino or maybe a Narwhal.
If I picture an animal with one horn, I see Ukie, my pet unicorn!
Unicorns love to eat rainbows. If Ukie wants a rainbow, then we buy some rainbow sherbet. Unicorns are gentle. If I want to hug him a zillion times a day, then he always gives a zillion hugs back!
If I throw a ball, Ukie will fetch. If I grab his leash, he knows it is time to go for a walk. If I say “speak”, then Ukie BARKS! If he barks, then that means he’s really a…..
I love my uni…er…dog! As for his horn, well…
So cute, Susan! I was totally along for the unicorn ride until that perfect last line. Nice work!
Thanks so much Jill! 😉
If Grandpa was Elastic
by Stephanie Maksymiw
88 words
My grandpa, elastic
If Grandpa was elastic,
his arms could stretch for miles.
If his arms stretched for miles
they’d have to weave thru the streets.
If his arms wove thru the streets
traffic would be blocked.
If traffic was blocked
he’d have to make arm bridges.
If he made arm bridges
cars would reach their destinations.
If cars reached their destinations
other grandpas could see their grandkids.
If other grandpas saw their grandkids
they’d give each other big hugs.
Like the bug hug I’d get
from my Grandpa’s elastic arms.
Great use of the prompts! 🙂
If Grandpa Was a Unicorn
If my grandpa was a unicorn,
he’d have the longest white beard of all.
He’d know more stories than all the other unicorns,
stories about how the unicorns got their horns,
and the unicorn who had wings and flew to the moon,
and the unicorns who fought duels with their horns before the Queen of the Unicorns told them to stop.
If my grandpa was a unicorn,
he’d introduce me to all the other unicorns, and tell me all their names.
He’d let me ride on his back, all through the forest and over the hills.
He’d be able to see by starlight, so we’d never get lost.
I wonder if Grandpa would like to be a unicorn.
If he ever tells me so, I’ll tell him it’s all right.
I’ll remind him how he still tells me stories,
and still takes me for walks, and still lets me ride on his back.
I’ll tell him he’s wonderful, just as he is.
(I forgot to include: my grandpa, unicorn, 162 words)
So true, Grandmoms and Grandpops are wonderful, unicorns or not! 🙂
IF MY DOG WERE A MOVIE STAR
By Debbie J. Arnn
WC: 164
If my dog were a movie star,
I’d watch ALL his premieres.
He’d walk across the red carpet
While everybody cheers.
My dog would be so famous.
He’d have adoring fans
Who’d send him lots of friend requests
Unless…those TikTok bans!
If my dog were a movie star,
He’d go a lot of places.
He’d give out lots of paw-tographs
And lick a lot of faces.
The famous dog would travel
To shoot on set. That’s cool!
And I could travel will him,
Except that I’m in school
If my dog were a movie star,
Paparazzi would be naughty.
He’d have to wear disguises
To the park so he could potty.
At first, it might sound fabulous
To have a movie star pet.
But when you want to snuggle him,
He might not be home yet.
If my dog were a movie star,
It would be good and bad.
I think I’ll keep my dog at home.
He’s the best I’ve ever had.
I really enjoyed your story. Well done!
thanks so much!
Love “paw-tographs”! Good story! 🙂
paw-tographs… Brilliant!!!
thank you!
I Can’t Hear You
by Angel Gantnier
86 words
my sister, teeny tiny
If my sister were teeny tiny then my sister would have a teeny tiny voice.
If my sister had a teeny tiny voice then I wouldn’t be able to hear what she is saying.
If I couldn’t hear what my sister is saying then I wouldn’t know how my sister is feeling or what she wants to do.
If I couldn’t communicate with my sister then my sister wouldn’t be happy.
I’m glad my sister is not teeny tiny and that I can hear her voice.
Nice! 🙂
POSTED FOR ELYSE
Now You See Me…
by Elyse Trevers
100 words
If I were invisible, when mom said “Time to sleep” I would pretend to go to bed but then downstairs I’d creep.
If I were invisible, I’d hear what they said,
as they thought I was quietly lying in my bed.
If I were invisible, I’d wear bright purple eye shadow , even though my folks always told me no way, no.
If I were invisible, no one would see when I stand on the floor
to hear the very best music during Taylor Swift’s Era Tour.
If I were invisible, that would be my superpower and I’d have cool adventures hour after hour.
Nice job! 🙂
If My Dog Was a Ninja
By Tiffany Hanson
146 Words
Dog, Ninja
If my dog was a ninja,
Then he’d be gone every night.
Spying on the neighbor’s cat,
And ready for a fight.
And if the cat found out,
It was being spied upon,
He would get revenge by coughing up
Furballs on the front lawn.
And if the lawn was full of furballs,
My parents would be upset.
They’d make me clean the yard each day,
And wash the front porch steps.
And if I had to wash and clean,
The yard every day,
I’d be too tired to walk my dog,
And teach him how to stay.
And if I couldn’t teach my dog,
How to stay home every night,
He’d creep up on the neighbor’s cat,
To give it a sneaky fright.
So if my dog was a ninja,
A stealthy, secret spy,
Prowling around the neighborhood,
Would that make the cat a samurai?
Nice job!
Thanks!
Clever story. I liked it!
Thanks!
I like the alliteration “stealthy, secret, spy”
Thanks!
hee hee! Love the last line!
Thanks!
If My Dog Was a Ninja
By Marta Cutler
(111 words)
If my dog was a Ninja, he’d sneak into the kitchen to eat the leftover cake.
He’d get icing paw prints all over the floor.
So, he’d sneak into the closet to get a mop and bucket.
He’d fill the bucket Ninja-style quiet.
But he’d fill it too high and splosh water everywhere.
He’d sneaky mop up all the water.
Then he’d get thirsty from all the mopping.
He’d sneak into the fridge to get a glass of milk.
But he’d bump into my mom who would be getting her own milk.
She’d notice the icing on his nose.
And that would be the end of his career as a Ninja.
Great story! Icing on the nose always gives it away!!!:)
Ha ha! Thanks so much for the feedback! 🙂
INVISIBLE BEST FRIEND
By Ellie Langford
120 words
friend, invisible
If my best friend was invisible,
He’d sneak cookies from Mom’s cookie jar,
candy from my brother’s stash.
and ice cream sandwiches from the freezer.
He’d share the treats with me.
We would eat them all, every bite.
Our stomachs would feel h-u-g-e.
We’d get sick and throw up. Yuck!
If my best friend was invisible,
he might turn on a big fan
where they print U.S. money.
and snatch lots of dollars from the air.
He would bring some dollars to me.
We’d ask Grandma to take us shopping.
We’d buy toys and games and all kinds of things.
But then, we’d both end up in jail, behind bars.
If my best friend was invisible,
I might do really goofy things.
I might be tempted to do things I shouldn’t.
And then blame them all on him.
I’m the one deciding what to do, or not.
After all, my choices belong to me,
so I’ve decided I can’t have a friend like you. … Hey!
Where are you? I didn’t get to say good-bye.
Very cute ending! 🙂
If I were a worm
by Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
94 words
If I were a worm,
I’d wriggle around.
I’d inch through the grass,
And sneak underground.
When it rained I’d come up
Poke my head in the air.
A bird would swoop down
And snatch me from my lair.
He’d carry me up
To the babes in his flight.
And wave me around
While they each took a bite.
And when they were done,
My spirit would squirm
Right down to the ground
And become a new worm.
Just squiggling and chomping,
Forever will be.
So much for my dreaming.
I’d better stay me!
Love the ending! 🙂
Great job and under 100 words!!! (I have a hard time keeping my stories below the word count!)
Freedom through Friendship
by Colleen Murphy
WC: 138 (close)
Friend, invisible
If only I could have a friend whom I can’t even see.
I wouldn’t ever be afraid to bring her home with me.
Of course she’d need to hear and talk and be about my age.
I just don’t want to see her when my folks go on a rage.
But I really want to find someone in whom I can confide,
to understand the reason I’m so broken up inside.
I’m too afraid to tell adults the things my parents do.
Given all the threats they’ve made, I fear they’ll follow through.
With kids at school I’m too ashamed I feel I don’t belong
I do what I am told so no one asks me what is wrong.
But if my friend’s invisible and sees conditions here,
perhaps she’ll help me figure out how I can disappear.
Fun story, with a wonderfully surprising ending that made me laugh!
Thanks Bev,
Colleen, My apologies–my comment here is was for a different story and I don’t know how to delete it. Your story, “Freedom through Friendship,” is heartfelt and vulnerable. You show the pain that exists and the sense of longing for something better. Thanks for sharing it.
No worries! I had a response I wanted to delete, so I understand. Thank you.
A touching story.
Thank you Linda.
Very moving story! Nice job! 🙂
Thank you.
Wow, Colleen! An unexpected but poignant take on this prompt. This could be an important SEL book.
It is a difficult subject to address in a picture book, but since it is my experience, I would really like to be able to help other children out who might be experiencing similar dysfunction. Thank you Jill.
The ending tugged at my heart. Touching and poignant.
Thank you Marta.
This one breaks my heart. I want to give this kid a real and visible hug!
Thanks Michelle. It is based on my younger brother Mark, who passed away early from complications due to AIDS.
The reply was for my week six entry!! This one was based on me! Sorry for the mix-up. I should wait to respond until I wake up.
POSTED FOR DAWN
Dawn Renee Young
Mix-n-Match
Week 5
MOVIE STAR FUN
WC-95
My sister / was a movie star
If my sister was a famous movie star than I could borrow her fancy clothes.
If I borrowed her fancy clothes than I could ride in her long limousine.
If I rode in her long limousine than I could go to grown-up parties.
If I went to grown-up parties than I could order Shirley Temples.
If I ordered Shirley Temples than I would get my picture taken.
If I got my picture taken than I could meet other movie stars.
If I met other movie stars than I would say, “My sister is the best!”
Very cute, Dawn, and great job with the prompt!
Love the way you used My sister/was a movie star! Wow! 🙂
Love the Shirley Temples part! You made this so fun in only 95 words. Great job, Dawn!
If my brother is a ninja
NINJA BROTHER
By Bev Schellenberg
(183 words)
Note: my youngest child’s description of her big brother and my understanding of my own big brother was very much one of a ninja…and more.
NINJA BROTHER
My brother is a ninja, and here’s the reason why:
He wears a lot of black. I never see him cry.
Mom takes him to Jiu Jitsu in pajama comfy clothes.
He even got his brown belt for his blocks and locks and throws.
He disappears in hide and seek, impossible to see.
But when I think he’s really gone, he’s sneaking up on me.
He helps me battle monsters, when it’s almost night.
They run away from closets before Mom shuts off every light.
But the other day I saw him, eyes watery and red
‘Cause something sad had happened. That is what he said.
And when I check his socks, they’re not black, but grey
His snacks are chocolate doughnuts. He doesn’t always want to play.
So… I still think he’s a ninja. I love him to the core.
My super-duper brother: a ninja and much more.
This flows well. I also thought of my big brothers this way.
Thanks, Linda!
Great story! 🙂
Thanks, fellow teacher!
So sweet!
Thanks, Michelle, for reading and responding.
“If my Dog were a Unicorn”
by Linda Schueler
Words: 123
Fun prompt!
If my Dog were a Unicorn
If my dog were a unicorn, she’d want to get some special unicorn snacks.
I’d fly her to the clouds to the mythical creature snack store.
On the way, she’d want to stop at the rainbow to look for the pot of gold at the end, so we could buy more snacks.
When we find the pot of gold, we’d be chased by angry leprechauns.
We’d have to make a dramatic escape in our plane.
Our dramatic escape would attract the local Pegasus.
The local Pegasus and my dog turned unicorn would have to debate whether wings or horns are better.
They’d get hungry after all that debating.
And you know what that means…
We’d finally get to the mythical creature snack store.
Hmm, wonder what mythical snacks they sell? 🙂
For the unicorns, I picture something glittery
This flows well. I also thought of my big brothers the same way.
Whoops, I meant to put this above. LOL
“If You Were Invisible”
By Krithika S.
175 Words
If you were invisible, you could roam through the jungle
Walk right up to a sleeping lion . . . and POP! a balloon full of confetti
WELL, you probably shouldn’t have done that! Now he’s awake with a tickle in his nose
AAAAA-CHOOOOOOO! And there it goes . . .
ALL. OVER. YOU.
Quick! jump in the river . . . to wash off all that lion gunk
Just try not to be too . . . SPLISHHHHH! SPLASHHHH!
Fuzzleguts!! All of your splishing and splashing has drawn the hungry crocodiles near
SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!
Why are you screaming?! You’re invisible, you silly goose!
Better to stop screaming . . . and start TICKLING
Tickle Tickle Tickle! EEEEEEEEK! hehehehehehe!
UH OH! I had a feeling this might happen . . . GRUMPY bear heard all of that commotion . . . and now he’s at the river . . . telling the crocodiles to SHHHH!
Well, it’s probably best to just tiptoe out of the water slowly and . . .
I must say, I didn’t see that coming.
But I guess there’s really no better time to HUG a bear then when you’re invisible.
Fun! I love all the onomatopeia you incorporated in this one!
Nice job! 🙂
MY INVISIBLE SISTER
Penny Taub
If my sister were invisible, we would have so much fun.
She would sneak up on Mom and make her jump in the air.
Once Mom landed, she’d tell us to go and watch a movie.
Together we could snuggle on the couch watching a movie.
During the movie, we would want some popcorn.
We’d fight over who should hold the bowl, spilling popcorn everywhere.
Together we’d pick up every popcorn kernel and toss it into the invisible world.
We would watch in amazement as popcorn pelted the earth like rocks.
The popcorn rocks smashed everywhere, creating giant craters.
When it rained, the water would fill the holes.
My invisible sister and I would dive into the chilly water.
We’d race across the water to see who was faster.
Exhausted, we’d floated on our backs to relax.
Too tired to do anything else, we’d head home to watch a movie.
Of course, we’d want some popcorn.
Very nice job! 🙂
Vanishing Cream
By Jill Lambert
WC:108 you/invisible
If you want to be invisible,
you’ll have to buy a potion
concocted by a scientist,
a dreamy creamy lotion.
Vanishing is tricky–
read instructions to apply.
Make sure you have full coverage,
plastered low and high.
Set a timer for an hour.
You will start to notice fading,
first your toes, then your nose.
Oh, it’s so exhilarating!
Ta da! The potion worked!
Once you’re hidden out of sight,
fool your parents, friends, and neighbors.
Move an object, flip the light.
But if you want to stay invisible,
you’ll have to keep the jar.
What’s the matter? You misplaced it?
Oops! They caught you. “There you are!”
Jill, great rhyme! My favorite lines are “Ta da! The potion worked!” Then the ending line “Oops! They caught you. “There you are!”
Thank you for reading and commenting, Susan!
heheh! Too cute! Love it, Jill!!!
Thanks, Michelle!
If my teacher was tiny (like me)
By Lauri Meyers
65 words (rough words….)
my teacher/ tiny
If my teacher was tiny like me,
She would offer a stool at the board,
She wouldn’t expect us to hang up our coats,
She wouldn’t use words like “consequences” and “self-control.”
She might not be able to reach the box with prizes.
She might not be able to sing so high.
I would still look up to her, but…
It wouldn’t hurt my neck.
You really captured a little child’s point of view, Lauri. Well written and great food for thought!
Well done in so few words! 🙂
If I Were My Baby Brother
by Ashley Sierra
57 words
I, baby brother
If I were my baby brother, I wouldn’t have to do math.
No multiplication.
No division.
And the worst, no fractions!
I could just lounge anywhere.
Play.
Sleep.
Eat.
Drink milk. Then . . .
Uh, oh.
I didn’t think this through.
I’ll have to go to the bathroom in . . . DIAPERS!
On second thought . . . where are my multiplication flash cards?
Ashley, this came out so cute! Love the brevity, the pacing, and the funny ending.
Thanks for your feedback and reading!
Hilarious, Ashley!
Thanks for reading, Jill!
So funny! 🙂
Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
If You Were a Mayfly
By Sarah Meade
115 words
If you were a mayfly,
you would begin
as a little underwater egg.
(Tip: keep away from hungry fish!)
If you were a mayfly,
you would hatch
into a larva,
also known as
a nymph.
(Tip: Hide in sediment to stay safe.)
If you were a mayfly,
you would pull yourself
out of the water
and emerge
as a sub-imago,
also known as
a dun.
(Tip: Dry your wings quickly.)
If you were a mayfly,
you would molt
and become
an imago,
an adult,
also known as
a spinner.
(Tip: Lay your eggs quickly!)
If you were a mayfly,
you would only live
mere minutes to one day.
I’m so glad you’re not a mayfly!
Oh goodness! Poor mayfly! But what an informative short story!!!
Thank you, Michelle!
So interesting, Sarah, and conveys so much in 115 words. Well done!
Thank you, Jill!
Super science lesson in just 115 words! 🙂
Thank you for reading!
IF MY TEACHER WAS INVISIBLE (WC 187)
By Michelle S. Kennedy
If my teacher was invisible,
I’d shriek out loud with glee!
I wouldn’t see her roll her eyes,
or when she glared at me.
She’d wander through the classroom—
but all I’d do is PLAY!
I’d never even see her,
(So how would I obey?!)
If my teacher was invisible,
well, would she even teach?
She might decide to trick us all
and move things out of reach!
Or would she have some magic power,
to keep us in our chair?
And if we screamed, would she be steamed,
or would she even care?
If my teacher was invisible,
perhaps I’d soon be bored…
‘cause every day she calls my name—
Right now, I’m not ignored.
In fact, she knows me very well,
And says my name—a LOT!
I guess I’d miss her frowning face,
That look that says, ‘I’m caught.’
If my teacher was invisible,
her life would be carefree…
And I don’t think that’d work at all—
She likes harassing me!
Okay, I guess I like her too,
I love to get attention…
But I’ll stop my dreaming now,
since time’s up in detention!
Great job with this prompt, Michelle! I especially love the ending and the line (So how would I obey?)
Thanks, Jill!
Great story!! Love the ending! 🙂
Thank you!
Love this, it definitely made me giggle 🙂
So glad you enjoyed it, Katie! Thaks for reading it!
Julie Kurtz
If My Teacher Was Invisible
115 words
If My Teacher Was Invisible
If my teacher was invisible then I wouldn’t get to see
The many different looks that she gives to me:
Her smile that greets me every morning,
Her finger that points a warning.
Her nod when I am on the right track,
Her shrug when there is something I lack.
Her raised eyebrows when my too full lunch bag rips,
The “I’ll wait until you are done talking” hands on the hips.
Or the puffed up chest that makes me feel all warm inside
As she hands back an A paper with genuine pride.
If my teacher were invisible, she would be totally unheard
Because so much of what she says doesn’t use a single word!
I think you and I were on the same page with our stories! Nice job!
You know all the teacher mannerisms, Julie. Nailed it!
Nice job, Julie! 🙂
POSTED FOR HOLLAND
Mix’nMatch Week 5
I, worm
176 words
IF I WAS A WORM
B. Holland Paley
If I was a worm, I could squirm my way through the dirt and check out all the really, cool roots.
If I was a worm, I could squiggle around and scare all the people who hate worms.
If I was a worm, I could see what it’s like to hang out on a leaf all day long!
If I was a worm, I could be with my favorite flowers, forever.
But…
If I was a worm, I could get squashed by a the giant foot of a gardener!
If I was a worm, I could get hooked and fed to a hungry fish!
If I was a worm, I could get picked up by a mama bird feeding her little baby birdies!
If I was a worm, a little kid could think I was a gummy and eat me!
I am happy I am not a worm so I don’t get squashed or eaten.
And I am most happy I am not a worm because I never want to go through life without a backbone.
THE END
If I Were Invisible
By Ryann Jones
I, Invisible
84 Words
If I were invisible,
Here’s what I’d do
I’d turn into “Treat Thief”
And come visit you.
I’d pilfer the pantry,
The snacks would be mine.
Your Oreos, brownies,
and Ritz taste divine.
Nobody can stop me,
I’ll take my sweet time
Munching and crunching
Is so not a crime.
Hey, who put this lock on?
How dare you intrude.
My powers are useless
And you are so rude!
These days I’m forced
To use manners instead.
My being invisible
trick is now dead.
Bwwwahhhh! Cute!
If I Learn To Ride My Bike With One Hand
By Sally Yorke-Viney
WC 107
If I learn to ride my bike with one hand…
I can wave to my friends!
And if I wave to my friends…
They can ride to the ice cream shop with me!
And if they ride with me,
We can put our money together to get a sundae!
And if we get a sundae,
We will ask for four spoons.
And with our spoons we will eat it so fast that we’ll get a brain freeze!
And if we get a brain freeze…
I will need one hand for my head and one for my bike…
If I learn to ride my bike with one hand!
Great job channeling the ‘IF YOU GIVE A MOOSE A MUFFIN’ story premise! Well done!
If You Were a Unicorn
By Haley Hendrickson
Word Count: 107
You, Unicorn
If you were a unicorn you’d probably be pink
And eat rainbows for breakfast and lunch.
Your friends would be fairies and mermaids and sprites.
Your life would be magical and fun!
But..you might get annoyed with the glitter and glam
And just wish for some sweatpants and ‘sneaks’.
It’d probably get boring just frolicking ‘round
Keeping out of the mud to stay clean.
With hooves, it’d be hard to play baseball or knit.
Your horn would just be in the way.
Forget climbing trees or riding a bike,
I guess what I’m trying to say is..
Maybe it’s best if you just stay a kid!
These prompts really get the imagination going – thanks, Susanna!
Sister Snail
by Sara Petersohn
104 words
my sister, snail
If my sister was a snail,
I would leave her on the trail.
She would never win a race –
I would always have first place!
Mom and Dad would like me best.
(After all, a snail’s a pest!)
I’d not have to share my toys,
or listen to her banjo noise.
If my sister was a snail…
who would help me paint my nails?
Who’d swim with me in the creek,
or play a game of hide-and-seek?
I’m glad my sister’s not a snail,
all by herself out on the trail.
I’m pretty sure I’d really miss her.
Snails are nothing like a sister!
Aw! Sister love wins in the end! YAY!
I’m so glad, Sara! 😊😊😊
Teeny Tiny Me by Dianne Borowski
If I was teeny Tiny I could hitch a ride on a friendly bird and fly up to the sky. I could touch the moon and stars and skip from cloud to cloud. The wind would be my friend. I would visit with butterflies and take a nap under a lilac tree. I would watch the sunset and dance with the fireflies lighting up the night sky.
It would be so much fun to be teeny tiny me except how would I play with my friends, sing in the choir, play soccer, tennis and volley ball? I would be too small! I guess being teeny tiny wouldn’t be so much fun after all.
My Buddy Rusty by Dianne Borowski
If my dog was invisible I would write a story about him. My dog’s name is Rusty; He is a Cocker Spaniel with big floppy ears. His fur is light red and that’s why I named him Rusty.
If Rusty was invisible he would be my partner. I would be a detective. Our office would be the shed in our back yard. Lots of people would call us. We would solve crimes like who took Ben’s bike and who stole Tommy’s lunch money. Rusty and I would work really hard to save up for a trip to Texas.
I know everyone would like to read about an invisible dog. We would have many fun adventures too but since Rusty isn’t really invisible I’ll have to think up a better way to earn money for our trip to Texas. Really, I’m glad Rusty is a regular dog. He’s my best buddy and I love him just the way he is.
Deb Buschman
Week #5
My Dog/Invisible
94 Words
IF MY DOG WERE INVISIBLE
By Deb Buschman
If my dog were invisible, then I could take him everywhere with me.
When we got to school, he would want to be petted by everyone.
But because he was invisible, they would be frightened and runaway.
If everyone ran away then we wouldn’t have school and I would take my dog home.
My dog would be hungry and make a mess and mom would blame me.
When I said it was my dog, she would send me to my room.
Then I would be alone with my invisible dog and couldn’t go anywhere.
MY PERFECT LIFE AS AN EARTHWORM
By Royal Baysinger
214 words
I / worm
If I were an earthworm, every day would be perfect!
I would never have to bother getting dressed in the morning. Nobody ever tells an earthworm to put some clothes on!
And I would never have to eat vegetables — for breakfast, lunch, or dinner! An earthworm eats what it wants.
Chores would be a thing of the past. I wouldn’t have to clean my room, or take out the trash, or take a bath. Every part of an earthworm’s burrow is covered in filth.
And even if my parents wanted to make me do something, they probably couldn’t. If I were an earthworm, I’d be stronger than my parents. Adult earthworms can only push 10 times their own bodyweight. Recently hatched earthworms, like me, can push up to 500 times their own weight. That’s like mom being able to move a cow, but I’m able to move 3 elephants — all at once.
If my parents told me I was grounded, it wouldn’t mean much. The ground is an earthworm’s playground!
Yes, life as an earthworm would be perfect!
Until I got eaten by a bird. Or stomped on by a human. Or dried up in the sun…
You know, every day isn’t perfect, but life as a little boy isn’t so bad, after all.
I love when the boy realizes that being an earthworm might not be all it’s cracked up to be! LOL