Darlings!
The Finish Line is in sight!
It is officially the last week of the 2023 Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Writing Challenge!
All of you have been hard at work over the last 6 weeks writing AMAZING stories, and many of you have managed to post a story for each prompt! Well done!
I apologize for getting behind with last week’s link list. A little bit of life interference, I’m afraid. I will try to catch up and do better this week, but it is likely there will be some lag. Please forgive me.
Meanwhile, you can all have fun writing your Week 7 stories, catching up on any you might have missed if you want to be in the running for a prize, and reading each other’s stories!
All 7 entries must be posted by Sunday June 25th at 11:59PM Eastern to qualify. I will do my best to post prize winners by July 5th.
So now, vroom vroom! Start your engines!!!

Mix ‘n’ Match Mini is a writing challenge for anyone who needs a little boost or a little encouragement to get writing….or maybe just a little fun!
You get to write your own story, enjoy and be entertained by everyone else’s stories, and get yourself in the running for some awesome prizes (please see the end of the blog post for a list of all the prize goodies…which keeps getting added to!)
For a full description of the challenge or to enter your Week #1 entry (or read other people’s entries 😊), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #2 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #3 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #4 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #5 entry (or read other people’s entries), please go HERE.
To enter your Week #6 entry (or read other people’s entries) please go HERE.
Remember, if you’re just stumbling onto this challenge, you can submit your stories for previous weeks any time until Sunday June 25th at 11:59 PM Eastern, so you can still qualify for a prize!
Mix ‘n’ Match Mini Writing Prompt #7 for Week 7
So far we’ve worked with a Character plus an Action, an Origin Story, an Image with a Situation, a List Story, Cause and Effect, and on writing stories that can sometimes tackle for sensitive topics!
This week, we’re just going to have fun 😊 (because, as Dr. Seuss said via the Cat in the Hat, “it is good to have fun” 😊)
So, in a sideways nod to Madlibs, choose a Topic from Column A, an Adjective from Column B, a Verb from Column C, and an Adverb from Column D and write a 100-word story for kids about your topic using your 3 parts of speech words! (e.g. about a family vacation, using goofy, circle, and heartily)
| Column A – Topic | Column B – Adj. | Column C – Verb | Column D – Adverb |
| summer | orange | plunge | heartily |
| family vacation | exploding | flag | generously |
| the ice cream shoppe | dazzling | circle | carefully |
| 4th of July | goofy | rain | dramatically |
| Lake Wanganunga | crooked | bear | successfully |
- Stories can rhyme or not – totally up to you!
- You can go under or over 100 words if you want to – also totally up to you! – 100 is just a guideline.
- If you’re deeply inspired by a topic, adjective, verb or adverb that doesn’t appear above, go for it! – the purpose here is inspiration and to get you writing! Just tell us what you’re using!
- For simplicity’s sake (and to aid skimming readers who might be interested in a particular thing) please say which Topic, Adjective, Verb, and Adverb you’re using at the top of your entry along with your name, title, and word count.
For example:
Car Farts
by Marcia Writer
107 words
Family vacation, goofy, circle, heartily
So come join the fun! Get some writing done! Encourage your kids (or students) to give it a try! Or just have a good time together reading what other folks have written!
Post your Week #7 story in the comment section below, or, if you have trouble for any reason and can’t post yourself you may email it to me using the Contact Form and I will post it for you.
Ready, set, WRITE! 😊
(And remember, for full details on the 7 week challenge you can check HERE.)
Check out the Week #7 stories!
Broken Summer – Julie Hauswirth
To Dive or Not to Dive: A Lake Wanganunga Question – Sally Yorke-Viney
Ice Cream Shoppe Art Class – Lauren N. Simmons
We All Scream for Ice Cream – Elyse Trevers
Summer Lesson – Tomi Rues
Dahlia Porcupine Paints Pictures – Isabel C. Rodriquez
The Legend of Catfish Charlie – Kelly Clasen
Ice Cream Fireworks – Ryann Jones
Celebrate Anyway – Sara Kruger
Summer Means Ice Cream – Lyn Jekowsky
The Orange Bear – Stephanie Maksymiw
Stories from the Blue – Katie McEnaney
Water Fun – Elizabeth Thoms Charles
Corn E. Cones Ice Cream Shoppe – Susan E. Schipper
Family Vacation Woes – Julie Kurtz
Family Vacation – Krithika Santhanam
Summer Polar Bear Swim – Kelly Kates
An Explosive Sneeze – Tiffany Hanson
The Best Part of Summer – Sarah Meade
Ice Cream Drama – Patricia Nozell
Goodbye School Year, Hello Summer! – Jill Lambert
Lake Wanganunga – Michelle S. Kennedy
Bear Surprise – Angel Gantnier
Opa! – Colleen Murphy
The List – Penny Taub
Bears Don’t Have Pockets – Bev Schellenberg
Lick It – B. Holland Paley
Family Reunion – Debbie J. Arnn
First – Linda Schueler
Bad Vacations – Lauri Meyers
It’s Time for Ice Cream! – Dianne Borowski
Sweet Summer – Ashley Sierra
Ice Cream Nightmare – Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
Lake Wanganunga Goes Wild – Deb Buschman
The Summer The Loch Ness Monster Ran Away – Royal Baysinger
Sweet 4th of July – Sara Petersohn
Lily’s First Fourth – Haley Hendrickson
The Big Plunge – Dawn Renee Young
When it comes time for prizes, names of all those who completed the challenge will be drawn randomly and matched with prizes drawn randomly until we run out! 😊
Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, recommending their books for school and library purchases, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! 😊
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Broken Summer
By Julie Hauswirth
147 Words
Summer/Orange/Plunge/Carefully
When it’s the first day of summer and your leg is broken, your mom will let you have an extra orange popsicle. It will be a secret just for the two of you.
When it’s the ninth day of summer and your leg is broken, your sister will dump a bucket of briny sea water over your head. You’ll still feel left out when you watch her plunge into the waves, but you’ll smile.
When it’s the twenty-fifth day of summer and your leg is broken, your dad will carry you very carefully down the trail to the spot where the blueberries are. He’ll let you taste them and they’ll turn your fingertips purple.
When it’s the last day of summer and your leg is healed, you’ll celebrate with s’mores. Your cheeks will be sticky with marshmallow, and it will feel like you didn’t miss a thing.
I loved this, Julie! All of the things you listed are the essence of summer, and I felt the main character’s longing.
Julie! I love this story! So much sensory detail. So much heart. Absolutely wonderful!
Love this creative take on summer vacation, Julie! Nice job! 😊
LOVE this story! It has great flow, wonderful imagery, and family love.
Julie, so well done! It truly describes the woes of having a broken leg and how accommodating family is to you! 🙂
This is fantastic! What a great story to end the MixNMatch prompts with! I loved the ending and the title too!
I could feel the longing & the many kindnesses. I love how you showcased the essence of summer and ended on a sweet & hopeful note.
To Dive or Not to Dive: A Lake Wanganunga Question
By Sally Yorke-Viney
WC 133
Wanganunga Lake will go down in my true life history.
The water’s cold, deep, dark and green and constantly a mystery!
The surface glitters, sparkling, my mother says it’s dazzling!
Below the surface, what lurks there? To me, the lake’s too frazzling!
When ten years old, my big bro asked, “You want to feel alive?”
“Swim to the floating pier, climb on, and do a headfirst dive!”
Now I can swim that’s not a prob, as long as I’m on top.
Wanganunga weirds me out, what if I belly flop?
My brother started teasing me. “Why don’t you take the plunge?
I worried that I’d end up face to face with muskellunge!
Alright I sighed, I’ll do it, but I stated it emphatically!
I will not dive, my cannonball will scare that fish dramatically!
Love this, Sally! Definitely made me remember years of lake swimming in the summer! Great rhymes!
Thanks so much. I was always a swimmer, but liked lakes from a boat or the shore!
Sally, this reminds me so much of where we sometimes hang out with my husband’s family in Maine. Brrrr and a little creepy if you think to much about what you cannot see! Cannonballs are definitely the way to go, LOL.
Thanks Jilanne, I always over thought. Weird I don’t feel the same about an ocean! Haha!
Oh my goodness, Sally! This is so entertaining! Your MC’s voice comes through so well. AND I learned something! I’d never heard of a muskellunge before, so I looked it up and OMG scary fresh water predator fish! 🤣
Thanks so much Susanna! My grandpa used to go fishing for “Muskies” on a lake in Canada. Those fish were huge and looked like they could swallow you whole, and don’t even mention their teeth!
I didn’t know that was the full name for a muskie! Very cool.
Me either! I was using rhymezone for the word plunge and poof (or splash) serendipity!
Nice job! I could picture it all!
Thanks so much! A somewhat biographical story….
Super story! I’m a beach/ocean person! Lakes always scared me a bit, you have explained why! 🙂
Thanks so much! Now if only the weather would warm up I might try a trip to the NJ shore!
Sally, this is the coolest June I remember in quite a while! Now they are predicting rain at the shore for almost a week!
I’m with your MC – always stay on top when you can’t see down! And definitely scare any monster-toothed fish that may be lurking. Great story & love that title, too.
Ice Cream Shoppe Art Class
by Lauren N. Simmons
188 words
Ice cream shoppe/orange/flag/carefully
My mom signed me up for this summer class at the ice cream shoppe to make my own ice cream creations! I cannot wait to start. Let me see… what can I make?
First, I’ll make an orange sherbet with lots of sprinkles. I dream of a tiny unicorn running on this rainbow road, and I top it with some white clouds.
Next, I’ll make a flag for the 4th of July. I’ll use plain vanilla ice cream and drizzle some strawberry syrup on the sides. For the stars, I’ll do something a little different and use blueberries. I like the circles instead of star shapes, just for a change.
For the last one, I make a smores milkshake. I put as many toppings in the shake as I possibly can to get that chocolatey, marshmallowy, graham-crackery goodness… Oh no! The toppings have toppled over! The teacher says it is no problem. I can always start again, and I carefully rebuild the milkshake
They announce that it is time to eat our creations. Now, it’s not easy to eat this artwork, but I can’t wait a minute longer!
Such restraint! I wouldn’t have made it through the whole artwork, LOL. Your story is so very kid-friendly!
Fun story and kids love books about food/treats! Very descriptive, now I’m hungry.
Cute story! My kids (both my own and school kids) love stories about yummy treats! 🙂
Fun! The best reward is eating a tasty creation.
What a fun take on these prompts! And a great activity for rainy summer days.
POSTED FOR ELYSE
#7- We All Scream for Ice Cream
By Elyse Trevers
(ice cream shoppe, goofy, plunge, dramatically)
Selma’s Ice Cream Shoppe had been a tradition in the town ever since Great Grandma started many years before. But now granddaughter Jessie might have to close.
When Marco’s frozen yogurt store opened down the block, ice cream sales plunged dramatically. “Ice cream is too fattening,” said some. “Yogurt is better.”
I have a goofy idea,” announced Jessie. ”We’ll have a taste contest.” People lined up for blocks to vote. Jessie stood with Marco, counting the ballots and gazing at one another lovesick as they tasted the frozen treats.
By the end, a new sign went up. “Selma’s Ice Cream and Yogurt Shoppe: We have something for everyone.“
This is great, Elyse! Sweet little love story!
Susanna, I keep forgetting to mention, I’m happy to donate a first ten pages novel critique if you need more prizes. Sara Kruger
That is so sweet of you, Sara! I really appreciate it and will most likely take you up on it! 😊
What a sweet story 🙂
Ah, yes, compromise brings something for everyone. Well done!
Cute idea! I always love a “love” story! 🙂
What a sweet story & ending!
Sorry, didn’t mean to comment on the story itself! And can’t see a way to delete…
Life does that, sometimes, Susanna. Hang in there!
Thank you for a fun seven weeks of writing and sharing stories!
My pleasure, Tomi! I’m so glad if you’re having fun! 😊
Summer Lesson
by Tomi Rues
WC: 189
summer, orange, plunge, successfully
Summer had finally arrived! Emmy had been waiting for this day her whole life.
“Alright, Emmy, let’s get your sunscreen on,” said Mom.
“I love my new orange swimsuit, and I can’t believe I get to ride my bike to the pool all by myself. And, I am going to plunge right into the deep end!”
“It’s pretty exciting,” said mom.
“Let’s go through your checklist.”
“Goggles, towel, water bottle, snack, extra sunscreen,” said Emmy.
“And?” said Mom.
“Stop on Main Street, look both ways and then call when I get there.”
Thirty minutes went by and when Emmy’s mom didn’t receive a call, she
called the pool.
“Mom, I’m sorry! I forgot to call.”
“I’d like you to come home now, please,” said Mom.
Emmy gathered her things, said goodbye to her friends, and biked home.
Her mom was waiting for her when she got to the door.
“Let’s try this again, okay?” said her mom.
Emmy took off for the pool, but this time and the rest of the summer,
she successfully remembered to call her mom to say she had made it safely to the pool.
An important lesson, for sure!
Yes, and it’s a true story!:)
Such an important lesson, Tomi! Any parent knows how nerve-wracking it is to wonder if their child is safe!!! And every kid needs to learn to be responsible about letting them know!
Indeed, thanks!
Well done, Tomi! So important for kids to learn.
This is so good! I just experienced something similar today! I’m glad Emmy had a chance to redeem herself that same day =)
Great story! Lesson learned! Guess you never stop worrying about the kids! 🙂
I remember the excitement of being big enough to venture off on my own. Love that you also include that great lesson to remember to check in with Mom!
POSTED FOR ISABEL
DAHLIA PORCUPINE PAINTS PICTURES
Author/Illustrator: Isabel C Rodriguez
112 words – Lake Wanganunga, plunge, successfully, orange,
Dahlia Porcupine of Lake Wanganunga
Wants to plunge into a rich art career
Even though they think she’s just a young’un
To successfully paint a red deer
The texture of trees, the skies and the moss
The dazzling colors of early morns
The dew on the leaves with all of its gloss
The deep blue waters, buffalos with horns.
Dahlia continues boasting her talent
“I’m on a roll and will show them my grit”
While mixing colors eager and ardent.
She truly believes that her quills won’t quit.
She successfully painted each picture
Dipping needles in colors galore.
But she had to stop rhyming her story
‘Cause nothing really rhymes with orange.
Love the idea of an artistic porcupine painting with her quills, Isabel! And she is right – nothing rhymes with orange 😊
The texture of trees, the skies and the moss
The dazzling colors of early morns
The dew on the leaves with all of its gloss
This leaped off the page for me. Nice!
I love this! I will always love a story about a porcupine artist. Well done, Isabel!
Love the idea of a porcupine artist =)
Isabel, I love the alliteration, Porcupine Paints Pictures! Nice job! 🙂
A porcupine artist! What fun! And I love that ending!
The Legend of Catfish Charlie
By Kelly Clasen (165 words)
Lake Wanganunga, orange, plunge, carefully
Every camper at Lake Wangamunga knows the legend of Catfish Charlie. He weighs over 300 pounds, and he’s patrolled its emerald waters since my parents were kids, back in the 1900s.
In the olden days, Catfish Charlie would swallow campers’ bobbers whole, just for fun. He’d upset canoes with a swish of his tail, sending kids dog-paddling to shore. One year, he devoured the entire perch population, and the campers had to quit fishing and learn lawn checkers instead.
These days, he doesn’t mess with campers much. He’s too old and too smart to bite on week-old hot dogs or rubbery orange lures. Catfish Charlie eats only the biggest and freshest dragonflies on the lake. Every so often, when the water is perfectly still, he plunges to the surface to dine, startling campers with a giant SPLASH!
We listen carefully for Catfish Charlie to surface every day, and at night, we share wild schemes for reeling him in as we roast marshmallows under the stars.
I hope Catfish Charlie stays wily and keeps outsmarting them! 😊
Clever, fun, and descriptive!
Thank you!
Great descriptions and drama. Ahh, ye olde ancient 1900s … Eep!
Hope Catfish Charlie continues to outsmart everyone! 🙂
Gotta love a legendary, and very smart, fish!
Ice Cream Fireworks
By Ryann Jones
Ice cream shoppe/4th of July, orange, rain, dramatically/successfully
139 Words
When it is hot Hot HOT outside
I want nothing more than to
Kick back,
In silence,
And eat creamy, dreamy
Ice cream.
There is only one problem.
We are out of ice cream.
How can this be?
Now I must go to an ice cream shoppe,
On the 4th of July!
It is going to be soooooo busy!
Yep.
At this rate I will miss the fireworks.
Two hours later . . .
Finally, I can order my orange creamsicle.
But as I turn to leave the store I hear the
BOOM BOOM BOOM of fireworks.
And I wobble, bobble, soar.
My delicious treat rains down on me dramatically.
Oh, what a show!
To this day, anytime anyone asks if I like fireworks
I tell them the same thing.
I love to watch them–
I just don’t want to wear them.
I love the internal rhyme on this one. Nice job!
Oh, no! After all that waiting! 😊
This story kept me reading. I wanted to see what happened!
Perfect punch line, well done!
I love how true to life this is haha. The wait at the ice cream shoppe on the 4th would definitely be long!
Guess melted ice cream becomes part of the 4th of July celelbration! 🙂
Wearing ice cream – so not fun! But this story was, and I loved the punchline at the end!
Celebrate Anyway
By Sara Kruger
Word count: 100
4th of July//exploding//rain//successfully
The forecast called for rain on the fourth of July, But Betsy was determined to celebrate anyway. She pulled on her shirt, smoothing the sequin flag and sequin fireworks exploding behind it. She shimmied into bright red shorts. As she clipped her curls with red, white and blue glittered barrettes, the storm started.
Rumble
Crash
Rain lashed her windows as she dug around in her art supplies.
That evening, as her family watched the fireworks on TV and ate frosted star cookies, Betsy passed out pipe cleaner fireworks. Everyone oohed and ahhed. And Betsy beamed. She’d successfully celebrated Independence Day.
Wow, Sara! Betsy was so clever to make fireworks out of pipe cleaners! I love her positivity and determination to celebrate anyway! 😊
Thank you. I love pipe cleaners haha I’ve used them in a couple stories lately.
I love how this is about using creativity, even during disappointments. Well done, Sara!
Thank you!
What an awesome way to celebrate!
Such a clever way to celebrate 4th of July! 🙂
How resourceful – of Betsy & you! Given how cool & rainy it’s been everywhere I’ve traveled these past few weeks, I think I need some pipe cleaners for the 4th of July!
SUMMER MEANS ICE CREAM
By Lyn Jekowsky
wc 60
summer, dazzling, plunge, dramatically
Summer means ice cream
every Saturday night.
It’s not just a dream,
this yummy treat’s within sight.
The ice cream shoppe sign
dazzling from the next block
draws us into its line,
with impatience, we squawk.
Finally, my treat’s in my hands
with rainbow sprinkles and whipped cream.
I plunge right in, it’s so grand!
I’m dramatically living my dream.
I love that you used “plunge” for diving into the ice cream, Lyn – very creative! And I could well imagine that long line and the impatient youngsters barely able to wait their turn 😊
I love the line “I’m dramatically living my dream.” Nice!
I love your opening line: Summer means ice cream every Saturday night. Yes it does!
Lyn, nice job! Great descriptions! 🙂
Love that title & the awesome descriptions.
The Orange Bear
by Stephanie Maksymiw
90 words
Lake Wanganunga, orange, plunge, carefully
Once there was a bear.
A very hungry bear.
But he only ate…
Carrots.
Pumpkins.
Sweet Potatoes.
Tangerines.
And Cheetos for dessert.
His diet had the oddest effect.
His brown fur turned ORANGE.
What a fright he had when he saw his reflection.
In the clear waters of Lake Wanganunga.
He carefully dipped his orange toe in.
The temperature was just right.
He plunged into the water,
leaving behind an orange trail.
Where was he going?
In search of new foods.
Tomatoes.
Bananas.
Lettuce.
Blueberries.
Eggplants.
And brownies for dessert.
Whole new meaning to “taste the rainbow,” ha! I love how we used nearly the same words with entirely different effect.
It is interesting how different the stories can be (I have to spend the week going back and reading entries). And I almost flubbed, I saw bear and thought of it as a noun and not a verb…lol
What a fun and clever way to encourage young readers to eat a rainbow and maintain a healthy, balanced diet, Stephanie! Nicely done!
Thank you so much for this contest…it really was fun and it’s a nice way to think of an idea without pressure.
I like your story! It was fun to read. I think this would make a good children’s book.
Thank you so much. This may be merged with a draft I have written…thanks for the encouragement
This was so fun! And with a good point about diet, too! Well done, Stephanie!
Love the rainbow diet!
Great job Stephanie! I agree , this has great potential for becoming a PB! 🙂
Smart bear figuring out that eating a rainbow is healthy and fun!
Stories from the Blue
By: Katie McEnaney
145 words
Lake Wanganunga, crooked, plunge, carefully
Wind whipped wee white caps on the surface of Lake Wanganunga. Marine archaeologist Cam Skibo sighed. The dive would have to wait. Again. Another day in another small town on the banks of yet another lake with a fake “Indian” name. If only others realized how far back the true history of these places went.
Finally, conditions were favorable. Cam donned her scuba gear and plunged into the shallow water. An amateur diver had reported a crooked piece of wood on the lake bed that warranted further investigation.
She swam towards the location. Murky, murky, school of fish, then… there! The wind had been busy down below too. The crooked piece of wood was now fully exposed—rounded point, hollowed out form.
Cam carefully brushed sediment from the prow. The ancient dugout canoe shone in the murky light. She smiled. What stories this canoe could tell!
Inspired by recent discoveries of two prehistoric canoes in Madison, WI
https://onwisconsin.uwalumni.com/land-of-the-ho-chunk/
This is fantastic, Katie. I wanted to read more about the ancient canoe!
I love this, Katie! So creative and interesting! You made me laugh out loud with “another lake with a fake “Indian” name” because of course I made it up! 🤣
Hee hee, sorry! Didn’t mean to offend, but most lakes in the Wisconsin area also have faux-Indian names, and I wanted to establish some background with the character. 😉
Well done, Katie! I love stories with a little bit of history sprinkled in. This was wonderful!
Thanks so much! I love bringing history to life – the older, the better.
A history lesson in 145 words! I love it!
Great story! Thanks for including the website that references the ancient canoes! 🙂
Love that you based your story on a real-life discovery and that you featured a female diver.
POSTED FOR ELIZABETH
Water Fun
by Elizabeth Thoms Charles
52 words
Summer, dazzling, plunge, successfully
Summer arrives.
Dazzling long warm days await.
The children plunge into the water.
Splashing, frolicking the fun begins.
One by one they swim out to the wooden raft
supported with large oak pillars.
“Swim. Swim. You can do it.”
Feet kicking and arms stroking
the last child successfully pulls onto the raft.
Nicely done, Elizabeth! A complete story arc using the topic and all 3 words in only 52 words! Plus you get the feeling of being encouraged with the swimming and the sense of accomplishment when the raft is reached 😊
Nicely done!
A quintessential summer moment captured beautifully.
Nice job, Elizabeth! Plus, you did it using only 52 words! 🙂
Lovely to read how encouraging everyone was of one another & how everyone reached the raft.
Corn E. Cones Ice Cream Shoppe
By Susan E. Schipper
WC 137
The ice cream shoppe, yummy, bear, carefully
There was only one ice cream treat that delighted Betty every summer. In fact, it would be her favorite treat all year long.
“That’s the problem,” Betty pouted. “Mommy can only find this yummy creation in the summer. We carefully searched everywhere… while on family vacation at Lake Wanganunga in the Fall, the Christmas Ice Cream Shoppe in Winter, Crooked Lane Creamery in Spring. My special treat wasn’t available until 4th of July at Corn E. Cones!”
Betty couldn’t bear to wait each year for this special treat!
“Why must I wait?”
Mom had a plan.
This summer they would cut corn kernels from the cobs and freeze them. Then they would follow the recipe Mr. Corn E. Cones shared with them.
Betty was thrilled! Now, she could scoop the most delicious ice cream flavor ever, all year long…Sweet Corn Ice Cream!
(The recipe for Sweet Corn Ice Cream is attached😊)
Sweet Corn Ice Cream
Sweet corn is a favorite ice cream flavor in Mexico, where the kernels are usually stirred in whole. We’ve grated them to extract their sweet, milky liquid and used the kernels and liquid as part of the custard base.
Prep: 40 mins
Total: 40 mins
Yield: Makes 8 servings (serving size: 1/2 cup)
Ingredients
• 2 ears corn
• 1 cup heavy whipping cream
• 1 ½ cups milk
• ½ cup sugar
• 4 egg yolks
• ½ teaspoon vanilla extract
Directions
• Step 1
Set a box grater in a large bowl. Using the large holes, grate corn kernels (and their “milk”) off the cobs. Discard cobs.
• Step 2
In a medium saucepan over medium heat, combine cream, milk, and corn. Bring to a simmer. Meanwhile, in a medium bowl, whisk sugar and egg yolks until pale and thick. When cream mixture reaches a simmer, slowly ladle 1/2 cup of it into egg mixture, whisking constantly. Repeat with another 1/2-cup ladleful. Reduce heat to low, whisk warmed egg mixture into saucepan, and cook, whisking, until mixture thickens a bit, about 5 minutes.
• Step 3
Pour mixture into a medium bowl, stir in vanilla, cover with plastic wrap (letting the wrap sit directly on the mixture’s surface), and chill at least 2 hours and up to 1 day.
• Step 4
Freeze in an ice cream maker according to manufacturer’s instructions. Serve immediately or transfer to an airtight plastic container and freeze up to overnight.
Nutrition Facts
Per Serving:
242 calories; calories from fat 60%; protein 4.7g; fat 16g; saturated fat 8.7g; carbohydrates 23g; fiber 1g; sodium 43mg; cholesterol 153mg.
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Great story, Susan! And thank you for the recipe! I look forward to trying it sometime. I love food stories, especially those that include a recipe!
Thank you! I hope to be brave enough to attempt to make the ice cream also! 🙂
Clever title and idea!
Thanks, Tiffany! 🙂
Love that your story is based on a real corn ice cream recipe! You’ve captured the childlike anticipation of a seasonal treat & figured out a way to enjoy it all year! Bravo!
Thanks so much! I had never heard of corn ice cream until I came across this recipe. 🙂
Family Vacation Woes
By Julie Kurtz
176 words
Family vacation, plunge, goofy,successfully
Family Vacation Woes
Are we there yet?
This is the worst family vacation ever!
I have been crammed in the middle of this backseat going who knows where. My one brother’s squirt gun is plunged into my side. I try to ignore the pain and cover my ears as my other brother has been telling goofy knock knock jokes for the last hundred miles at least.
My mother is playing golden oldies on the radio and motioning to the Heavenly Hideaway campground sign that is barely visible in the dark.
My dad swerves into the dirt road driveway and we hit every pot hole on the way to the
Office.
We search for site number 66 as we pass 65 well organized camping families successfully enjoying s’mores around the campfire in front of their neatly arranged tents or campers.
We burst out of the back seat and my dad empties the tent bag and a mess of stakes and pole parts.
Will we ever get to bed?
Day 1, not even close to done!
Only 20 more to go!
AAAAAAARGH!
Well done, Julie! I think this truly describes the experience of traveling with family.
Love any story that works in s’mores!
Guess family vacations can cause “woes”! 🙂
Great job of capturing the downside of family vacations. I hope the next 20 days are better for your MC!
Family Vacation
By Krithika S.
Word Count: 275
family vacation, exploding, plunge, successfully
It started with raindrops on the bed, then puddles on the floor.
Dad called the plumber. Mom put out some pots. And Grandpa suggested we head to Lake Wahanooey for the weekend.
Mom packed my favorite snacks for the car ride. Toby slobbered all over my goldfish. (I snuck him some when Mom wasn’t looking.)
Aria screamed almost the whole way there and didn’t even get into trouble. Babies have it made.
Grandpa slept the entire ride. He sounded like a bear.
It was dark when we got to the lake house, and all of a sudden we heard something exploding!
Toby covered his eyes and tucked his tail. I closed my eyes too.
But Mom said it was just fireworks. I peeked and saw the sky shimmering in all different colors. It was AWESOME!
The next day we woke up early to go swimming. I raced down the bridge and plunged into the water. SPLASH! Dad did a giant belly flop. SPLASH!
Grandpa and Mom gave Aria her first swimming lesson. And Toby chased squirrels all over the lake.
At night we sat around a campfire eating hot dogs and listening to Grandpa’s stories about his summer vacations at Lake Wahanooey.
When it was time for bed, Mom and Dad tucked me in and said we could head back home in the morning because our leaky roof had been successfully fixed.
I gave them my best pouty face and asked if we could pleaseeeeeeeee stay just one more day??
The next morning Dad and I raced each other to the lake. And I was so happy we were staying, that I let him win.
Great unexpected vacation! Great story! 🙂
Ah! Glad they made the best of their leaky roof situation and went to the lake instead!
You’ve captured the excitement & fun of a spontaneous vacation. I love that this is an intergenerational adventure; even the dog had fun.
POSTED FOR KELLY
Summer Polar Bear Swim
summer/exploded/plunge/heartily
by Kelly Kates
WC: 105
Lily dipped her toe into the water. It was summer but the mountain stream was still icy cold. Her younger siblings happily splashed, diving from rock to rock, but she just couldn’ make herself take the plunge. “Come on in, it’s toasty!” her dad called heartily. She wanted to be brave too. 1-2-3 . . . her scream exploded through the air as she hit the water. Frantically, she paddled toward the river’s edge until, finally, her feet reached the stony bottom. She scrambled out onto a large rock and gratefully lay on its warm surface, drinking up the sun. And slowly her skin lost its purple hue.
Way to go, Lily. Very brave.
Lily is much braver than I could ever be when it comes to cold water! 🙂
Love Lily’s bravery! It reminds me of the cold plunges my adult kids are now “enjoying”.
An Explosive Sneeze
By Tiffany Hanson
136 Words
The ice cream shoppe, exploding, rain, generously
For my brother’s birthday we went to the ice cream shoppe. He wanted to see fireworks, but those were rained out. We grabbed our ice cream and sat down. My brother got an extra container of sprinkles to use.
I reached across the table to grab the sprinkles and accidentally knocked over the pepper shaker. The lid came off and pepper sprayed across the table, getting into my eyes and nose.
Oh no.
I felt it coming.
An epic sneeze.
AH-CHOOO!
The sneeze exploded across the table like a firework, upending everything in its path.
My mom was covered in cookies ‘n cream.
My dad was battered in butter pecan.
Sprinkles generously rained down on us like confetti.
I groaned.
My brother grinned.
My parents glared.
I guess we got to see some fireworks after all.
Perfect ending! Great job! 🙂
Thanks!
haha! Fireworks indeed!!! My favorite line: My dad was battered in butter pecan. Great alliteration!
Thanks!
I love your vivid descriptions, and the reactions at the end. Great job!
Thanks!
Ha ha! What a fun mess!
Thanks!
The Best Part of Summer
By Sarah Meade
120 words
summer, family vacation, the ice cream shoppe, 4th of July, Lake Wanganunga, orange, exploding, dazzling, goofy, crooked, plunge, successfully
What was the best part of summer for you, sweetie?
Guess, Grandma!
Okay, was it . . . our family vacation to Orange Beach?
No.
Our pontoon ride on Lake Wanganunga?
Nope.
Trying your first banana split at Ida’s Ice Cream Shoppe?
Nope-aroo!
Watching fireworks on the Fourth of July?
They were dazzling, but that’s not it.
Successfully completing the thousand-piece puzzle the week it rained?
Negative.
Watching goofy movies with Grandpa?
Nope.
Playing Exploding Kittens with Dad?
No.
Plunging into the deep end at the pool?
Nuh-uh.
Mastering the monkey bars at Crooked Creek Park?
Nope again!
Hmmm… I’m stumped, sweetie. What WAS the best part of summer?
Going school shopping with you and Mom. I can’t wait to go to kindergarten!
Great job at using all of those word prompts, Sarah!!!
Thanks for reading, Michelle! Happy summer 🙂
Love the twist ending and your inclusion of so many favorite summer activities.
Thanks for reading! Happy summer 🙂
Ahhh, a teacher’s delight! A little one anxious for school to begin! 🙂
PS I love how you used so many of the suggested words! 😉
ICE CREAM DRAMA
by Patricia Nozell
100 words
(ice cream shoppe, orange, circle, dramatically, plus more!)
On the last day of the family vacation, Terry begged to visit the Lake Wanganunga Lickety-Split Ice Cream Shoppe. Hoisting her cone aloft like a flag, she dramatically circled. She twirled the orange-swirled ice cream drenched in dazzling sprinkles. Then tripped.
SPLAT!
Sprinkles rained down like exploding fireworks on the 4th of July. A torrent of tears splashed into the melting mess.
Goofy Uncle Tom’s silly faces didn’t cheer Terry up. Cousin Jim’s crooked cane tricks didn’t conjure a smile.
But Gran had a plan. She generously shared her s’more sundae.
Terry’s spirits soared as high as the summer sun.
Great story! Grandma’s save the day often! 🙂
Thanks!
I love the name of your ice cream shoppe! And what a disaster, until Gran stepped in! Fun read.
Thanks, Colleen!
Goodbye School Year, Hello Summer!
By Jill Lambert
WC: 147
ice cream shoppe/exploding/circle/dramatically
Ms. Sanford waved goodbye as her students got onto the bus.
She sighed.
It had been a good year, but she was ready for summer vacation.
She skipped across the parking lot, unlocked her car,
and drove to her favorite spot for a well-deserved treat –
an ice cream shoppe called Udder Delights.
Ms. Sandford ordered a jumbo chocolate-vanilla twist cone
with sprinkles exploding down the sides.
She thanked the cashier and headed outside to sit at a picnic table.
“Ahh! This is the life!” she said with her eyes closed.
Giggles erupted. Her eyes flew open.
A circle of students surrounded her.
“You eat ice cream?”
“What kind is that?”
“Can I have a lick?”
Ms. Sanford grinned and dramatically snarfed the remains of her cone.
“Mmm, that was yummy! See you later, alligators!”
She got in her car and waved goodbye.
Next stop? The city pool!
Ah! A teacher is never alone with herself is she?!
Nope! They’re everywhere! Thanks for reading, Michelle!
Great story! I know it is definitely a nonfiction 🙂 The kids are always amazed when they see us “outside” of the classroom!
Yes, we’re supposed to live at school! Thanks for reading, Susan!
I love your choice of MC and the promise of another “chance” meeting with students at the pool.
Thank you, Patricia. No escape for poor Ms. Sanford!
Summer mode! I love it Jill. Great job.
Thanks for reading, Colleen!
Thanks for sharing!
LAKE WANGANUNGA (WC 170)
By Michelle S. Kennedy
(Lake Waganunga, rain, dramatically, exploding)
At Lake Wanganunga, the rain whipped and whistled.
Dramatically, it poured, plopping and plunking until…
It filled the lake to overflowing!
It was as if the exploding clouds were showing off
their power that couldn’t be contained.
Each day we watched in disappointing awe as our visions of summer camp fun
drowned into our now very wet and watery week.
As the water level rose, waves rippled and rushed
across the entire expanse of the lake.
We quietly stood, staring out the windows, waiting…
Hoping and praying for the downpour to finally stop.
Then, as if God Himself heard our silent pleas,
the rain subsided, leaving a sense of wonderment behind.
We eagerly lined up by the door, ready to be set free into the outside world.
After nearly a week of being couped up inside,
we were more than excited to enjoy what time we had left
on Lake Wanganunga.
So much for swimming… The water was too high.
We made the best of it—
A mud run.
SQUISH-SPLAT!
Love the ending! 🙂
Thank you!
Great way to make the best of rain-soaked terrain! Well done.
Thanks, Collen!
I could feel the anticipation of the rain finally ending. And what a terrific ending!
Aw! Thanks!
You have to feel for the camp counselors during this rainy week. So descriptive, Michelle! The mud run at the end is perfect!
Thanks, Jill! I am working on learning how to write more lyrically. I *hope* this poem has that kind of feel to it. ❤
Bear Surprise
by Angel Gantnier
164 words
summer, goofy, bear, carefully
“It’s summer!” announced Todd.
He put on his boots and grabbed his backpack.
“Time to go hiking!”
Todd followed the trail.
“A bunny!”
He opened his backpack carefully.
Todd found his camera.
Snap!
The bunny ran away.
Todd continued to follow the path.
“A fox!”
Snap!
The fox ran away.
Todd continued hiking.
“A deer!”
Snap!
The deer ran away.
Todd followed the trail.
“A bear!”
Snap!
The bear did not run away.
Uh, oh!
The bear looked at Todd.
The bear lumbered towards Todd.
Todd stood still.
All of a sudden, the bear stood on his hind legs and made a goofy face.
Todd carefully raised his camera.
Snap!
The bear did a goofy dance.
Record!
The bear played peek-a-boo behind his paws.
Record!
The bear stood in front of Todd.
The bear reached out and carefully took the camera out of Todd’s hands.
The bear raised the camera.
Snap!
The bear placed the camera carefully on the ground.
The bear ran away.
Love the surprise ending! 🙂
Ha! What a fun story! I love that the bear was playful. What great stories Todd will be able to tell from his encounter.
I didn’t see that ending coming! What a curious & playful bear!
Opa!
by Colleen Murphy
WC: 90!!!
vacation, exploding, plunge, overboard
I’m on probation for our vacation.
It started on the boat.
I tossed a suitcase overboard
to see if it would float.
And then at lunch I had a hunch
about exploding Sprite.
My mom and pop were horrified.
(It turned out I was right.)
Then just before we went ashore,
I plunged into the ocean.
Who knew an after-dinner dip
could stir-up such commotion?
I served some time for every crime,
which meant my folks did too.
But got released because in Greece
there’s way too much to do.
Really nice flow. And I loved all the vacation hijinks.
Thank you Tiffany!
Sounds like a “fun” vacation after all! Nice job! 🙂
Ha ha! Thanks!
I LOVE this! SO funny! And perfect rhyme/meter
Thanks Michelle!!
Wonderful rhyming & a fun series of antics on the high seas.
Thank you Patricia!
What an ordeal for mom and pop! I bet they’ll hire a babysitter next time! Terrific action and rhyme in only 90 words. Wow, Colleen!
Finally made it under the word limit!! Thanks Jill!
THE LIST
By Penny Taub
Family vacation – carefully –crooked — plunge — dramatically
Three days before our family vacation to the Lake, Mom appeared in the playroom with a clipboard and a pencil. Marley and Sam looked at each other.
“We need to make a LIST. Don’t want to forget something important,” she chanted and heartily scribbled on the paper.
The following day at breakfast, Marley noticed the List on the fridge. The List had begun neatly. Mom carefully recorded everything we might need. Clothes. Toys. And beach stuff.
By day three, the List dramatically twisted like a crooked path winding toward the big day.
When the BIG DAY arrived, everyone piled into the car with Mom holding the List.
VROOM! The car zigged and zagged.
“Ice cream Shoppe,” Marley shouted. “Ice cream!”
Mom made a goofy smile and parked the car.
“Summer traditions are important,” Mom said.
Everyone zoomed out of the car.
Marley shook his head while orange ice cream dribbled down his chin.
Everyone piled back into the car for the last part of the drive.
“Next, stop the Lake!” Marley declared.
Marley raced down the hill and plunged into the dazzling water.
Mom checked her List. “Perfect.”
I like the ending 🙂
Love that Mom included fun to-dos on the List, and not just the don’t-forget-essentials stuff.
List always seem to help! 🙂
POSTED FOR BEV
Bears Don’t Have Pockets
By Bev Schellenberg
Summer, orange, plunge, heartily
225 words
The summer the bear came into the ice cream shop, it was boiling hot. You could have toasted cheese sandwiches on the sidewalk. But the bear wanted ice cream, not cheese sandwiches. He tapped his foot and scowled in the long, grumpy queue.
When the line finally snaked into the shop, he stared heartily at the orange and black ice cream. “May I help you, Mister Bear?” I asked.
“I want bear ice cream,” he growled.
“Do you want tiger tail?”
“Nope. I want bear ice cream.”
“Chunky monkey?”
“Nope. I want bear ice cream.”
I got an idea. “You want Berry Bear Delight,” I said. “Right?”
The ends of his jaw turned up.
Now what do bears like? I wondered. I got a scoop of strawberry, a scoop of vanilla for the middle, and a scoop of raspberry.
The bear was so engrossed I thought he might plunge into the tubs of ice cream. But he stayed on his side of the glass.
“There, Mister Bear.”
“Chopped nuts,” he said.
“And a cherry on top,” he said. “Please.”
He didn’t pay but that was okay. Bears don’t have pockets.
The summers are still hot. When it’s boiling, Mister Bear keeps everyone in line, in exchange for Berry Bear Delight, of course.
Bev, this is such a cute story, and Berry Bear Delight sounds delicious! 🙂
Love your inclusion of real animal-named ice cream flavors & your reference to grilled cheese sandwiches on a hot summer sidewalk. Mister Bear’s choice sounds perfect, too. A very sweet story!
Thanks so much!
POSTED FOR HOLLAND
LICK IT
by B. Holland Paley
Ice cream shoppe, goofy, circle, generously
185 Word count
LICK-IT
It was the last day of school! Sammi and Jack knew what that meant. Time to go to LICK IT, everyone’s favorite ice cream shoppe! LICK-IT is a bright, periwinkle-blue and sunny-yellow hut on a round driveway where cars can circle through the drive- thru or you can sit outside on the colorful, wooden benches. Kids can run around on the grass and be goofy for hours.
Sammi and Jack went to LICK-IT on the first day of school, the last day of school and many days in-between.
The friendly owner, Sandy, stood at the window to take orders. The thing that is so special about LICK-IT is that Sandy makes Mickey ears with nonpareils on all the kids’ ice cream cones.
Sammi and Jack’s daddy kneeled at the window pretending he was a kid so he could get two mickey ears, instead of one, on his generously topped, mint-chocolate chip ice cream cone. Sandy laughed! Dad could not fool her. His mustache and deep voice gave him away!
Summertime has begun and LICK-IT is the perfect way to kick-it into gear!
HAPPY SUMMER!
Ice cream certainly makes summer special! Nice job! 🙂
A perfect name for an ice cream shoppe & a sweet story!
Love the title and that would be a GREAT name for an ice cream shop!
I’m embarrassed to say that I started out this challenge just trying to rush through the prompts, so I might be in the running for a prize. Then, I realized that the prize is actually the writing that I’m doing. This challenge has given me more WIPs and opened up my creativity on other projects, too.
So I need to say, “THANK YOU, SUSANNA!”
Here’s my writing for this week’s prompt.
Family Reunion
By Debbie J. Arnn
WC: 153
TOPIC: 4th of July
ADJ: goofy
VERB: rain
ADVERB: generously
Family gathers on 4th of July
At Peg and Charlie’s place.
Carson, Aunt Shirl, Jimmie Lynn,
It’s good to see your face!
Food and drink are generously served
For most of the afternoon.
Music starts and people choose
Their favorite karaoke tune.
Those who want team up to play
A fun game of baseball.
Bases loaded Jackson’s up—
He hits it over the wall!
We gather on the front porch steps
To photograph the fam.
Both smiling pics and goofy ones—
Don’t forget Toby and Sam.
We end the night with fireworks.
The rain was a “no-show!”
We add the patriotic songs
And sing the ones we know.
This annual family gathering
Brings gratefulness each year.
We think of those who’ve come before—
The ones who are not here.
God, bless this family of ours.
We couldn’t be more grateful!
Now bless each one as they go home
With leftovers by the plateful.
I’m so glad if you’ve had fun and are feeling inspired, Debbie! That is the purpose – to remind us that writing IS fun, and that we’re all doing it together! 😊
Debbie, great story! It certainly shows the true meaning of family! 🙂
Lovely 4th of July poetry! And wonderful that you’ve enjoyed the challenge & ended up with new WIPs. I’m looking forward to looking through my entries & seeing which of them I can turn into PB manuscripts or use to flesh out current WIPs.
I’m so glad that you discovered the real prize, Debbie, and that you’re having fun! 😊
Thanks for another great challenge, Susanna!
First
by Linda Schueler
118 words
Lake Wanganunga, dazzling, plunge, carefully
Emma ran to Lake Wanganunga.
She was about to plunge in the dazzling lake when her sister, Katie, yelled, “Stop! Wait up!”
Emma stopped, sighing.
Katie caught up. “You know you’re supposed to go into the water carefully.”
Emma frowned. “Why?”
“Well, what if there are monsters?”
Emma rolled her eyes. “There’s no such thing as monsters.”
“Maybe there are piranhas.”
“Not this far north!”
“Krakens, then.”
“Kat-ie. Stop imagining things.” Emma crossed her arms.
Katie looked at the water. “Do you want to know the truth?”
Emma nodded.
Splash! Katie plunged into the water. When she surfaced, she laughed. “I wanted to be first in!”
Emma frowned, but then laughed and plunged in after her sister.
Great ending, Linda! 🙂
Thank you
Love that surprise ending! Katie is a very smart, and sneaky, sister!
Katie sure is.
Bad Vacations
By Lauri Meyers
149 words
Lake Wanganunga, exploding (verb!), bear (noun!), generously
Every year Mom and Dad take us to Lake Wanganunga. And every year is a disaster.
Once Mom left a watermelon in the sun and when we sat down for lunch… it exploded! I was covered in sticky lava, but too hungry to let it go to waste.
Another year we packed the car for a picnic and a bear joined us. We spent the whole day watching it nap in the back seat. Just when I thought I couldn’t take it anymore, the bear climbed out and scratched its back on the door for five minutes. Unfortunately, it took our lunch with it.
Last year Dad generously applied sunscreen and still burnt red like a tomato. Turns out he used mayo! He smelled like a warm BLT all week.
I don’t know why we keep going. Maybe this year will be fine. Wait, did I forget my trunks?
Some wonderful visuals here. I especially love the image of Dad as a warm BLT! Great job!
It’s Time for Ice Cream! by Diane Borowski
Uncle Mike promised to take me and my three friends to the Ice Cream Shoppe the next time he came to visit us. Today is the big day! Uncle Mike said we could buy anything we wanted. We were going to walk to the Ice Cram Shoppe but it began to rain really hard so Uncle Mike had to flag a taxi.
We were all pretty wet when we arrived. We sat in a big booth which was on the the second floor. We could watch all the little kids who were having birthday parties downstairs. It was fun remembering when we were little and came here for birthday parties.
I ordered a cone with three scoops of a new flavor called wild orange. Joey ordered a chocolate milkshake, Sam ordered a hot fudge sundae and Rich ordered a banana split. Uncle Mike said we should eat carefully so we don’t get ice cream on our clothes. Guess what? We all started acting goofy and ended up with ice cream all over our faces, hands and clothes! That’s OK because we all had a great time, even Uncle Mike.
Thanks for another productive Mix ‘n’ Match Challenge.
Sweet Summer
by Ashley Sierra
135 words
summer, exploding, circle, successfully
Dear Journal,
It’s the last week of summer. Or what I like to call it . . .
Sweet Summer!
So many treats!
Sweet Summer started with a bang: exploding mini chocolate lava cakes for Mom’s birthday!
Then Boston cream doughnuts for Father’s Day.
Ice-cream cake for my little brother’s birthday. And . . . cream cheese carrot cupcakes for Grandma’s birthday. On the same day! They share a birthday.
This was just in June!
In July . . .
It was the fourth of July chocolate
peanut butter cream pie.
Tia’s ice-cream birthday bar. I circled back to the marshmallow table a few times!
Just one week later was Abuela’s bundt cake.
I successfully completed a sweet, sweet summer. I was sad it would be over. But then I remembered . . .
Back-To-School Night!
I can’t wait to see what sweet treats there are to eat!
Yum, Ashley! I’m in charge of desserts at my house, so you’ve given me some ideas for new ones to research. You really captured the sweetness of summer.
Oooohhh! My waistline would be 10x’s bigger after a summer like this one! LOL
Thanks, Michelle, for encouragement during this challenge!
Ice Cream Nightmare
by Elizabeth Meyer zu Heringdorf
90 words
ice cream shoppe, orange, plunge, generously
When Maeve came in
The ice cream shoppe
The list of flavors
Made her stop.
“Chicken Cream”
and “Green Bean Swirl”?
“Alpo Crunch”?
I want to hurl.
But then she saw
a big surprise:
“Eat a Bowl
And Win a Prize!”
Maeve took the plunge,
And ordered quick.
A scoop of orange
“Cheddar Stick.”
She held her breath
And ate it whole.
And generously
Cleaned the bowl.
Then she awoke.
A dream deferred!
Where was the prize?
And then she heard:
“Morning, darling!
Come downstairs!
We’re having scrambled
Earwax hairs!”
Eww! That ending is so deliciously gross! So creative, Elizabeth! Great job writing it in rhyme and in just 90 words.
Oh my! I was riveted to the very end! The last line gave me hee-bee-gee-bees! LOL
Deb Buschman
Week #7
98 Words
Lake Wanganunga/Exploding/Plunge/Carefully
LAKE WANGANUNGA GOES WILD
By Deb Buschman
Willy plunged into Lake Wanganunga. He carefully searched the bottom then exploded through the surface. “Look, I found a treasure!”
“Treasure? Impossible,” said his brother.
“You’re wrong,” said Willy.
Up and down he went. Piece by piece Willy’s pile grew and grew and grew.
No one paid any attention.
“Look!” Willy shouted. “A plug. I wonder what it’s for,”
“Did you say plug? Oh no!” everyone yelled.
As they went wild running around. Lake Wanganunga drained inch by inch.
Willy plunged back in and carefully replaced the plug.
When he exploded through the surface, they all cheered wildly.
Love this, Deb! We lived for many years on a lake that did get drained once in a while, and it was amazing what treasures lay on the bottom! We never got to pull the plug, though 😉 What a fun ending!
Thanks so much! Yikes I never knew lakes were drained. I love learning something new.
Wild! And sorta scary if a simple plug can get pulled to drain a lake!
THE SUMMER THE LOCH NESS MONSTER RAN AWAY
By Royal Baysinger
206 words
Lake Wanganunga / Dazzling / Plunge / Carefully
Summer had come to the Scottish Highlands, and Nessie was busy planning her escape.
She was tired of avoiding the crowds of tourists who flocked to Loch Ness, year after year, trying to get a glimpse of her.
She needed a break!
She pulled out her ancient world map, careful not to smudge the ink as she traced her wet tail to the furthest destination she could find:
Lake Wanganunga, a dazzling mountaintop lake in the hidden kingdom of Kookoomunga!
She packed her things in a fashionable valise and was on her way. But to her dismay, she soon discovered that paranormal investigators are everywhere! It took some fancy flipperwork to avoid them all!
She tiptoed behind tourists tailing werewolves in Hungary.
She hurtled from hunters stalking vampires in Romania.
She slipped by scientists chasing UFOs in Albania.
She edged around enthusiasts pursuing ghosts in Iran.
She crept past climbers tracking yetis in Nepal.
But after weeks of close calls, she finally made it! Lake Wanganunga! She plunged into the safety of the brilliant waters.
And as she floated, enjoying the silence, she knew she would never leave. Pesky humans were everywhere, but not in Kookoomunga. And so, she was never seen in Scotland ever again.
That’s where Nessie went–what a great story idea, Royal! I especially enjoyed the paragraph with all the fabulous verbs describing the paranormal investigators she avoided. Terrific!
What a fun story!
Susanna, thank you so much for inviting us all to this challenge! It’s been helpful and inspiring:)
Sweet 4th of July
by Sara Petersohn
89 words
4th of July, exploding, rain, heartily
This was the best ever
4th of July,
when ice cream bars
fell from the sky.
For all of us kids
it was chocolate bliss.
How did it happen?
It happened like this:
A chopper en route
to the Coast Guard base
was carrying ice cream
treats by the case.
Fireworks went up
from our little Maine town,
exploding near the cargo,
making ice cream treats rain down.
The pilot looked surprised,
then heartily he laughed.
He waved to all us kids
and flew off in his aircraft.
Love the idea of an aerial ice cream man! Well done, Sara!
Christmas in July! Ice-cream style!
You’re so welcome, Sara! I’m glad if you had fun and felt inspired! 😊
Lily’s First Fourth
By Haley Hendrickson
Word Count: 235
4th of July/ dazzling / bear / successfully
All her life (all 5 ½ years of it that is!) Lily had dreamt of the time when she would be old enough to stay up for the fireworks on the 4th of July. She couldn’t bear it if she missed it again this year!
The day started off with the Patriotic Parade. Lily watched the floats and musicians march down Main Street waving her own little red, white & blue. She loved everything about America’s Independence Day.
After the parade, her family invited neighbors and friends over for a big potluck lunch. The kids would all race around the backyard, with watermelon juice dripping off their chins, until the moms and dads would declare it was time for a little rest. Everyone who wanted to stay up late for the fireworks had to take a nap. That was the rule!
Lily thought there was no way she’d be able to snooze even a smidge but next thing she knew- her dad was gently nudging her awake. It was time to go to the lake for the fireworks show!
Laying on their old picnic quilt, Lily gazes up at the darkening sky. Any minute now the dazzling display would begin….BOOM! BOOM! Crackle..whizz! Cheers erupt all around and the National Anthem begins to play. Lily smiles, knowing she has successfully made it to her first 4th of July fireworks. It’s one she will never forget!
Yay for Lily, growing up and able to watch the fireworks! Nice job capturing that wistful feeling of wanting to be big, Haley!
POSTED FOR DAWN
Dawn Renee Young
Mix-n-Match
THE BIG PLUNGE
WC-99
the ice cream shoppe / crooked / plunge / generously
Ginger Giraffe had a new job at the ice cream shoppe.
She was excited to wait on her first customer.
In walked Lilly Lion.
“May I help you?” asked Ginger.
“I’d like a scoop of Moose Tracks,” said Lilly.
Ginger generously scooped a big clump into a cone.
She handed the crooked cone to Lilly.
Lilly stuck out her tongue to taste her yummy treat.
All at once the ice cream took a plunge to the floor.
“Oh no,” cried Ginger. “I guess I need more practice.”
“Try again,” said Lilly. “But I’ll take a bowl and spoon instead.