Hi there!
It’s Tuesday, and you know what that means!
It’s the day to remember all the things you didn’t get done Monday. . .
. . .and push them off until Wednesday! đ
It’s also time to meet a brand new author!
Today, I’m thrilled to introduce you to Nell Cross Beckerman and her wonderful debut picture book Down Under The Pier!
DOWN UNDER THE PIER
By Nell Cross Beckerman
Illustrated by Rachell Sumpter
Publishing House: Cameron Kids
Date of PublicationL April 7, 2020
Fiction with non fiction back matter
Age range: 5-7 years
Thereâs lots of fun to be had up on the pierâthe Ferris wheel, cotton candy, the carouselâbut itâs down under the pier, at low tide, where the real magic can be found.
SUSANNA: Welcome, Nell! Thank you so much for joining us today to share your journey to publication! Where did the idea for this book come from?
NELL: I was taking a picture book writing class at UCLA Extension taught by writer Michelle Markel. At the very last class, we did an in-class writing prompt that was a âHow toâ format. On a whim, I thought of, âHow to have fun at the pier,â thinking of my hometown Santa Monica Pier, where I spent a lot of time with my kids. As I was writing about all the fun stuff to do on top of the pier with the thrill rides and arcade games, the words just flowed, going from how to have fun ON the pier, to have to have fun UNDER the pier. I shared it out loud with the class and another student whose opinion I respected gave me a deep look and said, âThatâs a really good idea.â I got goosebumps because I felt it, too.
SUSANNA: How long did it take you to write this book?
NELL: The first draft came very quickly, but it did not have the same structure or format that the finished book does. After my UCLA class ended, I realized I craved even more instructor attention. Rather than signing up for more classes where you only get perhaps one or two chances to get feedback, I decided it would be smarter to spend my money and time working directly with a freelance editor. She helped me with the structure and format and I learned a lot about picture book writing in general from her.
SUSANNA: Did you go through many revisions?
NELL: Yes, I went through a bajillion revisionsâŠeven after final illustrations came in, I tweaked some words! I previously worked in television so Iâm very used to having to make tons of revisions and incorporate notes from other people. I donât take it personally at all and (especially at this point) feel like Iâve developed a good sense of what notes to listen to and what notes to ignore. Itâs hard when you are starting out and try to please any reader who has an opinionâthat can lead your to spiral out and lose track of your original vision and intention.
SUSANNA: When did you know your manuscript was ready for submission?
NELL: After a few rounds with my freelance editor, she said something to the effect of, âI feel good about this manuscriptâs marketability.â And I agreedâI was happy with it!

Nell’s writing nook
SUSANNA: When and how did you submit?
NELL: From all the classes and the research I had done, it looked like the best way to start a career was to have three polished manuscripts before you start querying or submitting. So, I just put it aside and started to work on other stories. I went to my first summer SCBWI conference and I didnât even bring it to my manuscript consultation (in retrospect: bad move! Send your best stuff!) because I wanted notes on my work in progress.
Coincidentally, I noticed that an old friend from college was now an agent who was on a panel at the conference. We caught up and she invited me to send her my story for notes. I was thrilled to get notes from a professional, of course. After we did a little back and forth with notes, she offered to start sending it out. It was not the path I had planned, but I was grateful for the opportunity and took the plunge!
SUSANNA: When did you get “the call”? (Best moment ever! âș)
NELL: Pretty early on an editor at Chronicle took it to acquisitions, but it was ultimately a pass. That was still so excitingâI felt truly legit! In the meantime, my agent and I started submitting another MS, but then she did another round for PIER about seven months later, and about a month after that she got the email from Cameron Kids that the editor loved it and would be taking it to the publisher in a few weeks. It was hard to be patient but it was worth it! I got âthe emailâ on our way to the waterslide park. It was a great way to celebrate the good news.
SUSANNA: How did you celebrate signing your contract?
NELL: I bought my family presents.
SUSANNA: Was the contract what you expected in terms of advance, royalty percentage, publication timeline, author copies etc.?
NELL: My agent helped put the offer in context for me, saying it was normal for a publisher the size of Cameron Kids. I was just happy to have my first book sold, to be honest!
SUSANNA: Can you tell us a little about the editorial process?
NELL: I loved working with Amy Novesky (who is an accomplished picture book writer, herself!) We did some notes over email, then we spent a good hour going through it line by line. It felt like a good collaboration.

text copyright Nell Cross Beckerman 2020, illustration copyright Rachell Sumpter 2020 Cameron Kids Publishing
SUSANNA: What was your experience of the illustration process like?
NELL: Last summer, the illustrator, Rachell Sumpter, started to post her progress in Instagram StoriesâI became addicted to checking for new videos! It was thrilling to see it all come to life. Her evocative, dreamy, style really felt like a good fit for my words. The schedule was a bit in flux but I ultimately respected and trusted that they had a vision and a process that worked for them. If you have seen any Cameron Kids books, they are all unbelievably gorgeous, so I focused on knowing that whatever happened, there would be a beautiful book at the end. And I was right! I was happy they included back matter to address some of the scientific education concerns I had, as well. It felt like a great way to accommodate everyoneâs visions.

text copyright Nell Cross Beckerman 2020, illustration copyright Rachell Sumpter 2020 Cameron Kids Publishing
SUSANNA: That’s really cool that Rachell posted her progress in Instagram stories – that must have been such fun to watch! Did you get to see advance reviews from Kirkus, SLJ, etc?
NELL: The first advance review I saw was from Kirkus. I was thrilled! They were very complimentary and âgotâ the book.
SUSANNA: How long did it take from offer to having the first copy in your hand?
NELL: I got the offer in August 2017 and had a copy in my hand Dec 2019. I got super silly and slaphappy when I got my author copiesâvideo evidence can be found on my Instagram page @NellCrossBeckerman if you click on âAuthor copiesâ.
SUSANNA: What kind of marketing and promotion has your publisher done for this book?
NELL: They have sent it for reviews and assisted in planning some events. They post on Instagram as well.
SUSANNA: Describe any marketing/promotion you did for this book.
NELL: I helped plan events and partnered with the Heal the Bay Aquarium to do joint events and have them sell my book on site. I also made flyers for the events and promoted them through email and social media. I did a Twitter giveaway. I hired my daughter to make a book trailer. I am sort of haphazardly doing a blog tour and approached some big blogs, one of whom requested a review copy. I am trying to pivot to online events for the book launch, but it has been hard to muster the energy after putting so much into events that are now canceled. Iâve decided I have to just stretch it out over the coming months because we are in the middle of a global pandemic for crying out loudâI can only ask myself to do so much!
SUSANNA: How long was it between the time you started writing seriously and the time you sold your first picture book?
NELL: There are different ways to answer this question, of course. I started my first picture book class in Jan 2016 and sold it by Aug 2017. HOWEVER, over a decade ago I was serious about writing middle grade, got an agent, and then could never do the revisions and basically quit writing for 10 years and focused on raising my kids. As I read and read to them, I kept having this feelingâŠI could do this (especially after the 30th Rainbow Magic Fairy book!). I tried again, and failed. Finally, I found my way to a creative painting class that followed along the book, THE ARTISTâS WAY by Julia Cameron. This class and book changed everything for me. It put all my creative struggles into perspective and gave me tools to nurture my inner artist. At the same time, I got to paint freely, being fully playful and creative in my class. Without this class and the book, I would have remained creatively frustrated. BIG MAGIC by Elizabeth Gilbert was also wonderfulâthe idea of âgetting downâ stories rather than âmaking them upâ resonates with me. I love the images of stories buzzing around, looking for a portal to come though. That has been my experience. My art teacher, Helen Bradley, from The Playful Art Studio, pushed me to carve out early mornings for myself, which was also a huge step in taking myself and and my work seriously.
SUSANNA: Anything else you’d like to share about your book’s journey from inspiration to publication?
NELL: Iâd like to mention that although my original goal was to publish a book, I now find that my writing community is the real prize. I am lucky enough to be part of an in-person writing group that is incredibly supportive and filled with growth. I have truly found my tribe, and when we all get together at conferences, I feel even more connection with âmy people.â Even now that we all can only connect online, the kid lit community continues to fill me up. This was not something I expected to find as a writer!
Also, Iâm grateful that I have the privilege of taking classes, going to conferences, etc. and try to give back to the writing community any way I can.
Please go to my website and join my mailing listâIâm planning on writing a series of newsletters DEMYSTIFYING THE DEBUT where Iâll share more in depth about all the different things I learned writing, selling, and promoting my book that I wish I had known before! Plus Iâll be sending out a full read-aloud video of the book to share with children as well, all free for newsletter subscribers.
Thanks so much for having me!

Author Nell Cross Beckerman
www.nellcrossbeckerman.com
IG @NellCrossBeckerman
Twitter @NellBeckerman
Watch the book trailer at https://youtu.be/PLenD_075j0
Playful Art Studio http://www.playfulartstudio.com
SUSANNA: Thank you so much for taking the time to participate in this series and paying it forward to other writers, Nell! We so appreciate you sharing your expertise and experience and wish you all the best with this and future books!
Readers, if you have questions for Nell, please post them in the comments below and if she has time I’m sure she’ll respond!
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Thank you all for stopping by to read today! Â Have a lovely, inspiration-filled Tuesday! Â Maybe today is the day you’ll write your debut picture book đ
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Beautiful book. Thank you for sharing your story and helping the environment.
I love the idea behind this book, Deb! I’m glad you like the sound of it too! Thanks for coming by to read and support Nell!
Oh thank you so much, Deb! It’s a thrill to see it out in the world and hopefully inspiring others.
Congratulations Nell! Eager to read this and dive into the back matter too!
I love the idea of juxtaposing the arcade-type fun on top of the pier with the free, natural world fun of life under the pier, Cathy! I hope you enjoy it when you get a chance to read it!
Thank you, Cathy! My father is a scientist and helped fact-check my back matter. It was fun working with him!
Congratulations, Nell! Looking forward to reading this beautiful book!
Isn’t the cover captivating, Rose? I think it calls to anyone who has ever spent time at the beach (or ever wanted to!) đ
Thank you, Rose. As a writer, you hope for a good match with your illustrator–I could not even believe how lucky I was when I saw Rachel’s work.
I love the story of how your idea was born. I love the change in venue from on the pier to under the pier. Yay! Congratulations!
I always love hearing about the ideas that sparked books, Angie! There are so many – all kinds, everywhere! It’s very inspiring. You never know what thing you might see, hear or experience that will lead you to a fantastic story!
I totally agree! That’s something I always want to know about a book. HOW did you come up with this? đ
Thanks so much, Angie. I don’t think I mentioned in the interview, but it should come as no surprise that I was influenced by Kate Messner’s Over/Under series đ
Love that book! đ I actually just watched a webinar she did and she was talking about how she had the idea for that book.
Wonderful story. I agree the real prize is the writing community and support. But a book is awesome. Thanks for sharing.
We certainly are lucky to be part of such an amazing, kind, and supportive community Carole!
Right, Carole??? Love this community!!
I love this beautiful book. Congrats, Nell!
It’s such a wonderful idea, isn’t it Gabi?! đ
Thanks for all your support on every single platform, Gabi, LOL! Can’t wait to celebrate YOUR book, so soon!
Thanks, Nell! đ
What a beautiful book! You and Rachell have created some magical scenes. I look forward to seeing the entire story.
I hope you enjoy it when you get a chance to read it, Janet! Thank you for stopping by to read and support Nell and Rachell!
Thank you, Janet. “Magic” is one of my theme words so it means a lot that you used that word too đ
Congratulations, Nell! The books looks so beautiful and engaging. I’m looking forward to reading it to my little ones. I love the book trailer too and “fun is free.” Thanks, Susanna, for another great post. I love reading about debut authors’ journeys to publication.
Thank you! I really sweated about the book trailer–I could *not* figure how to make it. Then I realized the answer was in the room next door–my14 year old daughter! She did a great job and it was fun working on a project with her.
I love this book so much – I bought 2 copies! Thanks for sharing your book’s journey.
Ahhh..2 copies, thank you! At the end of the day that is what will keep the book industry going–book sales! I appreciate it very much.