***FRIDAY NIGHT UPDATE***
Sorry for the delay in posting finalists, everyone! So many great entries – it’s really hard to narrow the field and it’s taking us longer than expected. I will do my best to post them no later than Monday afternoon, sooner if I can. Thank you all so much for your patience, and have a great weekend!
Witch’s wart and wing of bat! It’s time for. . .
The 11th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest!!!
~ for children’s writers ~
THE CONTEST: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in word count) using the words glow-in-the-dark, goosebumps, and goodies.
- Your story can be poetry or prose, scary, funny, sweet, or anything in between, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words. Get it? Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people 😊
- You can go under the word count but not over!
- Title is not included in the word count.
- Also, being super clear for this year, glow-in-the-dark counts as 1 word (even though it looks like 4 😊)
- You may use the words in any form i.e. glowed-in-the-dark, goosebumpley, goody (“Oh, goody!”, goody-two-shoes etc.), whathaveyou 😊
- You are welcome to enter more than one entry – just remember you’ll be competing against yourself 😊
- No illustration notes please!
And yes, I know 100 words is short, but that’s part of the fun and the challenge! We got just shy of 300 fantastic entries last year, so I know you can do it!
POST: your story in the comment section below between right now this very second and Sunday October 31st at Midnight – the witching hour! Please include your title, word count, and byline with your entry so that if your posting handle is MomNeedsAVacation I’ll still be able to tell who wrote your entry 😊
- For those of you who would also like to post on your blogs, please feel free to do so! You are welcome to include the link to your blog with your entry in the comment section below so that people can come visit your blog, but all entries must be posted in the comment section of This Post between now and Sunday October 31st at Midnight.
- If you have difficulty posting your entry to the comments, which unfortunately sometimes happens, you may email your entry to me and I’ll post it for you! Contact button above or [susanna[at]susannahill[dot]com Please place your entry in the body of the email including your title and byline at the top – NO ATTACHMENTS! They will not be opened.
- I know how hard you all work on your entries, and how anxious you are to get them posted, but please try to be a little patient if your entry doesn’t show up immediately. Many comments have to be manually approved, and it sometimes takes me a little while to post entries that come in by email. I promise I will get to everything as soon as I can. I try never to leave my desk during contests, but sometimes it’s unavoidable 😊
- Side Note: WordPress will not properly format entries written in the shape of a pumpkin (or anything else!) or with fancy or colored fonts or unusual spacing. No matter how great it looks in whatever program you compose it in, be forewarned that when you post it in the comment section it is going to be basic and I am not able to change that for you, I’m afraid.
THE JUDGING: in a grueling marathon over the days following the contest close, my devoted assistants and I will read and re-read and narrow down the entries to a finalist field of about 12 which will be posted here for you to vote on I hope by Friday November 5th (though if the judging takes longer than expected it might be a little later – we will do our best!) The winner will be announced Monday November 8th (good lord willin’ and the creek don’t rise 😊)
Judging criteria will be as follows:
- 1. Kid-appeal! – These stories are intended for a young audience (ages 12 and under), so we’re looking for stories that children will enjoy and relate to.
- 2. Halloweeniness – the rules state a Halloween story, so it must be crystal clear that the story is about Halloween, not just some random spooky night.
- 3. Use of all 3 required words and whether you came it at 100 words or less.
- 4. Quality of story – entries must tell a story, including a main character of some kind and a true story arc even if it’s tiny 😊 Entries must not be merely descriptions or mood pieces.
- 5. Quality of Writing: check your spelling, grammar, punctuation etc. If you’re going to rhyme, give us your best 😊 Use and flow of language, correctness of mechanics, excellence of rhyme and meter if you use it, PROOFREADING!
- 6. Originality and creativity – because that is often what sets one story above another.
- 7. How well you followed the Submission Guidelines – agents and editors expect professionalism. This is a chance to practice making sure you read and follow specified guidelines. If you don’t follow agent and editor submission guidelines, they won’t even read your submission.
THE PRIZES: So amazing! What wonderful, generous people we have in our kidlit community! Just wait til you see what you can win!
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique by Dawn Young, author of THE NIGHT BAAFORE CHRISTMAS (WorthyKids, 2019), COUNTING ELEPHANTS (Running Press Kids, 2020), THE NIGHT BAAFORE EASTER (WorthyKids, 2021), THE NIGHT BAAFORE THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL (WorthyKids, 2021), and the brand new ONCE UPON A CHRISTMAS (WorthyKids, October 19, 2021)!
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (nonrhyming) by Janie Reinart, author of WHEN WATER MAKES MUD: A STORY OF REFUGEE CHILDREN (Blue Whale Press, 2021)
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (biography) by Lindsey McDivitt, author of NATURE’S FRIEND: THE GWEN FROSTIC STORY (Sleeping Bear Press, 2018), TRUTH AND HONOR: THE PRESIDENT FORD STORY (Sleeping Bear Press, 2020), and A PLAN FOR THE PEOPLE: NELSON MANDELA’S HOPE FOR HIS NATION (Eerdman’s Books For Young Readers, 2021)
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (rhyming or any) or First 10 Pages of a longer MS (winner’s choice) by Kenda Henthorn, author of the forthcoming BAA, BAA TAP SHEEP (Sleeping Bear Press, April 15, 2022)
Kenda works in the aviation industry now so it’s no surprise that her writing inspirations and aspirations are sky-high, too. She resides in Oklahoma and when the winds aren’t sweepin’ down the plains, Kenda enjoys acting, flying, kayaking and riding horses or her motorcycle. (Vroom-vroom!)She has served as a Regional Coordinator for the Oklahoma SCBWI and a Best in Rhyme Award committee member and judge.
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique (rhyming or lyrical) by Randi Sonenshine, author of THE NEST THAT WREN BUILT (Candlewick March 2020) and the forthcoming THE LODGE THAT BEAVER BUILT (Candlewick Fall 2022)
⭐️ Picture Book Manuscript Critique by Danielle Dufayet, author of YOU ARE YOUR STRONG (Magination Press, March 2019) and FANTASTIC YOU (Magination Press, September 2019)
⭐️ Storyboard Notebook – a great way to draft your picture books! PLUS a deck of What’s The Story Cards to inspire the drafts! PLUS the Making Picture Book Magic Self Study Course to help you craft your draft!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of ONCE UPON A CHRISTMAS by Dawn Young PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of BRANCHES OF HOPE: The 9/11 Survivor Tree by Ann Magee PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of MIMIC MAKERS: Biomimicry Inventors Inspired by Nature by Kristen Nordstrom PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of A PLAN FOR THE PEOPLE: Nelson Mandela’s Hope for His Nation by Lindsey McDivitt PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of THE NEST THAT WREN BUILT by Randi Sonenshine PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Personalized signed copy of 13 WAYS TO EAT A FLY by Sue Heavenrich PLUS your choice of one of the writing craft books listed below!
⭐️ Winners of the 6 signed picture books above may also receive their choice of any one of the following writing craft books to go along with their picture book:
Please join me in thanking these very generous authors and other writing professionals for contributing their books and writing expertise as prizes by visiting their websites and blogs, considering their books and services for birthday, holiday or other gift purchases, rating and/or reviewing their books on GoodReads, Amazon, B&N, or anywhere else if you like them, recommending them for school and library visits, and supporting them in any other way you can dream up! 😊
Happy Writing! Happy Reading! And Happy Halloween!
Now, let the Halloweensie begin!
The 294 entries listed below are linked to where they appear in the comments so you can click on the titles and get right to them! (Assuming WordPress cooperates . . . fingers crossed!) Anyone who feels kind can start at the bottom of the list so those entries get some comments too! 🎃 😊
- Isolated For Halloween – S. J. Little
- A Halloween Time Machine – Sara Kruger
- Weather’s Trick, Witch’s Treat – Abby N. Wooldridge
- Halloween Is LIT! – Anne Lipton
- Kit’s Costume – Kari Ann Gonzalez
- Mean Halloween – Heather Ferranti Kinser
- A Witchy Switch – Katie Schwartz
- The Porchlight – Chris Garcia-Halenar
- Bruce Goose – Jessica Hinrichs
- Undersea Halloween – Vashti Verbowski
- Sweet Swap – Daniella Kaufman-Schloss
- The Halloween Witch – Trista Herring Baughman
- The Lonely Pumpkin Head – Elle Jaufret
- Hallows’ Eve – E. A. Peterson
- Whose Cat Is THAT? – Beth Stillborn
- This Pumpkin’s Not For Picking – Laura Howard
- The Jimjam – Carrie Karnes-Fannin
- Trick Likes Treats, But So Does Swoop – Melissa Valente
- The Haunted House High Up On The Hill – Sue Lancaster
- Tricked The Treats – Katie Fischer
- A Helpful Ghost – Emily Durant
- The Wraith On My Wrist or Ghostie Lost In City Mist – Sally Yorke-Viney
- Three Little Geese Do Halloween – Linda Williams Swanson
- A Glowing Solution – Nicole Loos Miller
- Warning: May Contain Sugar – Amy Leskowski
- How Hannah Saved Halloween – Colleen Murphy
- Double Meaning Halloween Knight – Debbie Meneses
- Untitled – Shariffa
- The Scavenger’s
FeastBall – Sarah Hetu-Radny - ‘Tis The Season, Candy Eaters – Hannah Roy LaGrone
- Greta’s Glow-In-The-Dark Goosebumps – Susan E. Schipper
- Bobbing For Apples – Lyn Jekowsky
- The Perfect Pumpkin – Barbara Kimmel
- No More Sugar! – Sarah K. Rose
- Fairy-Fire – Vanessa Konoval
- Creepy Cook-Off – Sarah Meade
- Macy & Lucy’s Halloween – Sarah Meade
- Ghostly Linens – Stephanie Maksymiw
- Happy HOWL-oween – Lindsey Hobson
- Three Glowing Bats – Sherry Roberts
- Halloween Family Secret – Jennifer Mary Grolemund
- A Sick Day – Jany Campana
- The Pied Pumpkin Of Halloween – Marta Cutler
- Creatures From The Couch – Julie Hansen
- Alligator The Ghost – Marta Cutler
- Goose-Zilla – Linda Staszak
- Welcome To The Skeleton Dance – Sue Heavenrich
- Teal Halloween – Kathleen Lowry
- The Gloves – Stephanie Rondeau
- Ghoulie Rulies – Brenda Whitehead
- Tricky Treaters – P. J. Purtee
- Garth’s Game Changer – Darcee A. Freier
- Nabbed! – Abby Voss
- The Wart-Covered Tree – Danielle Arndt
- The Last Fall Firefly – Meagan T. Gentry
- Who Cares If It’s Cold? – Allison Strick
- Glenda’s Goosebumps – Susan Burd
- The Candy Thief – Meagan T. Gentry
- Halloween Hero – Rose Cappelli
- The Halloween Ball – Marta Cutler
- Scary-Go-Round – Catherine Catcho
- The Scariest Monster – Marty McCormick Bellis
- Fright Night – Marty Findley
- Halloween Eve – Barbara Renner
- Wilbur Werewolf – Deb Buschman
- Teeny Owl’s Spooky Halloween – Janet Parkinson Bryce
- No Room For Monsters – Jill Stuck
- Ghost House – HC Morris
- Boogie Man’s Bright Idea – Jenn Shetsen Wierda
- Swamp Beast Falls For Sweets – Jilanne Hoffman
- Have You Seen My Monster – Alan Elliott
- Halloween Hang-Ups – Russell Wolff
- Mark Lights The Way – Karyn Curtis
- Halloween Pie – Jill Stuck
- The Costume – C. E. King
- I’m Coming To Get You – Pat Holloway
- The Frightmare – Linda Staszak
- Frankie & Gigi: Trick Or Feet – Kira Barrett
- Home For Halloween – Melissa Miles
- Not The Costume I Wanted – Michelle S. Kennedy
- Goosey Glender’s Fall Feast – Bartybear
- Halloween Scavenger Hunt – Denise Seidman
- Stink Fairy’s Hallo-smelly-ween – Stacey Miller
- Hallowmas – Danielle S. Hammelef
- Goosebumps For Mother Goose – Lynne Marie
- How Do You Tickle A Ghost? – Kizzi Hutcheson
- Dragon Magic – Melissa Rotert
- Gretyl Hobbled Into Halloween History – Royal Baysinger
- Shiver And Sugar! – Abby Voss
- Monster Feast – Abby Voss
- Are You Ready To Trick-Or-Treat? – Corine Timmer
- Christmas In October – Vanessa Konoval
- Spooky ABCs – Alan Elliott
- Dragon And Pirate’s Halloween – Alan Elliott
- Tiny’s Halloween Flight – Carolyn C. Snelling
- Rainbow Bridge – Corine Timmer
- Great-Aunt Broomhilda – Josh Cohen
- Cirque Fantome – Kizzi Hutcheson
- A Knock On The Door – Pamela Swanson
- Trick-Or-Treat Nightmare – Cindy Sommer
- Worth The Climb – Armineh Manookian
- Thank You, Trick-Or-Treaters! For Protecting Your Mother – Sharon McCarthy
- Beware, Out There – Julie Lerczak
- The Haunted Bathroom – Jill Lambert
- Plan Bee – Jenny Morales
- “BOO!”K Spooky Halloween – Laura N. Clement
- The Witch’s Mistake – Jennifer Kaap
- Itsy B. Spider – Molly Ippolito
- Too Many Goodies – Rachel Krackeler
- Ghostmetics – Rozana Rajkumari
- Santa’s Halloween – Jen MacGregor
- My Scariest Halloween Night – Les Degnan
- Winnie Trick-Or-Treats – Dorothy Kohrherr
- Camping Surprise – Meredith Flory
- Halloween Hunt – Mary Ann Featherston
- The Glow-In-The-Dark Bowl – Kathy Scott
- The Haunted House – Carmen Castillo Gilbert
- Once Upon A Halloween – Colourbeam
- A Witchy Potion – Susan Summers
- A Giant Surprise – Susan Summers
- Hollow-Eeek! – Karen Keesling
- Once Upon A Halloween – Nadia Ali
- Halloween Battle: (Vampire) Squid vs. (Goblin) Shark – Laura Bower
- Happy, Happy Halloween – Claire Freeland
- Mr. O’Leary’s House – Nina Nolan
- Phantom Festival – Lynn Moore
- The Surprise Halloween Friend – Cindy Greene
- Goosebumps – Amy Flynn
- Ninja Goose And The Halloween Hi-Yah! – Deborah Foster
- Tricky Treat – Patricia Nozell
- A Halloween Snack – Debra Daugherty
- Escaping Planet Taradiddle – Colleen Daugherty
- First Halloween Treat – Natalie Cohn
- My Last Trick-Or-Treat – Reed Hilton-Eddy
- Glowing Ghost – Lauri C. Meyers
- hALLYween SPELL – Paul Roncone
- Halloween Love – Marla Yablon
- Cockroach’s Glowing Problem – Lori Himmel
- Scaredy-Cat Pat And The Haunted House – Sara Dean
- Let The Real Halloween Begin! – Lori Evans
- Ixchel’s Belizean Halloween – Blanca Manzanilla
- Emy Is Always Right – Katharyn R. Benessa
- Tricky Treat – Ann Grilli
- Jack’s Pumpkin Plan – Diana Murrell
- Lights In The Dark – Ivanka Dimitrova
- Fraidy Cat No More – Jennifer Cherry
- Galactic Trick-Or-Treat – Tiffany Hanson
- My Ghost Bubble Friend – Sheila R. Schmotzer
- R-R-R-Rattled – Gennie Gorback
- Glow-In-The-Dark Goodies – Leslie Collins
- Moonlit Love – Liz Kehrli
- Un-Spooky Halloween – Krista Legge
- Stella Shines – Laura Barens
- Tabby The Trouble Maker – Dawn Renee Young
- The Nameless Ghoul – Imelda Taylor
- How The Jack-O-Lantern Found His Real Smile – Sheri Palmer
- Halloween Chase – Connie Newbauer
- Spidey Sparkles – Angelique Lamour
- Never Trick A Witch – Tiffany Hanson
- Halloween Monster – Tiffany Hanson
- The Halloween Sleepover – Kelsey E. Gross
- Goose Bumped – Jen Subra
- The Rock – Trista Herring Baughman
- Halloween Pumpkin – Shariffa
- A Tricky Tattoo – Gregory E. Bray
- Brave, Adalaide – Katie Walsh
- March Of The Skeletons – Jill Richards Proctor
- Little Night Terrors – Obbverse
- The Mansion On Maple – Glenda Roberson
- The Graveyard Picnic – Gabrielle Cardwell
- Halloween Heebie-Jeebies – Karen Pickrell
- A Few Of The Scariest Things: A Parody To The Tune Of My Favorite Things – Ingrid Boydston
- The Witch Of Jekyll Island – Shampa Enayet
- FEELINGUNSEENONHALLOWEEN – Nicola Beach
- Hank’s Halloween Costume? (A Riddle In A Story) – Ken Major
- All Hallow’s Eve – Stacey Miller
- Molly’s Ghost – Hobbo
- The Witch’s House – Emma Wood
- My Word – It’s Halloween! – Jamie Donahoe
- Switched On And Off – Diana Webb
- A Night With Gran – Diana Webb
- Boys Will Be Boys – Matt Snyder
- Flicker Of A Cat’s Tail – Jacqui Boulter
- Pumpkin Train – Kathy Raggio
- The Alien – M. Waknitz
- Jellyfish George’s Halloween – Scott Kinder
- Skeleton’s Halloween – M. Waknitz
- Twyla Z. Witch – Lori Dubbin
- Witch’s Brew – K. Sibilia
- It’s Halloween – Elizabeth Muster
- Capture The Goodies On Halloween – Ames Jegen (age 11)
- (Not) A Very Scary Story – Linda Staszak
- Halloween Helpers – Ellen Seal
- Halloween Warning – Stephanie Henson
- Leaping Lizards! – Sharon Match
- Graveyard Bully – Jean James
- The Greatest Night Of The Year – Krista Harrington
- Halloween Hide And Seek – Melissa Wrex
- Trick Or Treat Night – Emily Keifer
- Oscar’s Irresistible Brew – Lucretia Schafroth
- All Hallow’s Eve At The Roller Rink – Bonnie Kelso
- My Halloween Crew – Alana DeVito
- Post Halloween Goals – Amy Reitz
- The Card Game – Cathy Lee
- Quiet Night – Thelia Hutchinson
- Trick-Or-Treat, Night Animals!: A Halloween Story – Mary Catherine Amadu
- A Halloween Tail – Janice Kay
- An Inch – Susan Leigh Needham
- Underwater Halloween – Judy Sobanski
- The Lonely Scarecrow – Sarah Atherton
- The Little Witch – Deborah Hunt
- Waking The Dead – Nancy Derey Riley
- A Not-So-Sweet Halloween – Erika Romero
- It’s Halloween In Toothytown – Kristen Littlefield
- Until It’s Safe – Brittany Saulnier
- First Halloween – Karen deWilde
- You Are What You Eat – Alexa Tuttle
- Once Upon A Halloween – Carrie O’Leary
- Goodie Ghost’s Halloween Screams – KJ Albright
- A Bunny Can Dream – Becky Walker
- Ogre’s Halloween – Barbara DiMarco
- Monster Lipstick – Kathi Morrison-Taylor
- Ghoulies Grand Soiree – MaryAnn Cortez
- Haunting Gnomes – Lindsay Moretti
- Goosebumped Ghoul And Scattered Skeleton – Sarah Kohls Roberts
- Not This Time – Sandhya Acharya
- How To Sneak A Halloween Treat – Alicia Meyers
- I Wish. . . – Amy Duchene
- Bram’s Hunt – Michaela Almeida
- Terrific Toothpaste! – Heather Gallagher
- The After Party – Samantha Sinclair
- The Final Hour – Ashlee MacCallum
- Halloween Gala – Tonnye Williams Fletcher
- Halloween Bites – Melissa-Jane Nguyen
- Double, Double Toilet Trouble – Stephanie Amargi
- Henley’s Haunted House – Jeannette Suhr
- Disguise Surprise – Nancy Derey Riley
- Enough – David McMullin
- Witches Aren’t Supposed To Be Afraid Of The Dark – Ally Piper
- Frankenpixie – Paul Kurtz
- Scaredy-Monster – Paul Kurtz
- Halloween’s The Worst! – Donna Kurtz
- Bunny’s Bored! – Donna Kurtz
- The Goblin Market – Aly Kenna
- Wilfred The Wizard – Nicola Thackrey
- Halloweenie – Jana Mattern
- The Last House On Halloween – Bru Benson
- Ghostly, Ghastly, Goosebumps – Janet F. Smart
- Astronaut Aidan – Kaye Wright
- The Halloween Dare – Erin Cleary
- Dracula’s First Halloween – Eleanor Cullen
- Pumpkin Dawn – TSW Sharman
- A Southern Halloween – Trista Herring Baughman
- The Candy Monster – Judy Cooper
- The Halloween Potty – Andrew Hacket
- It Absolutely Will Be A Fine Night – Susan Krevat
- Halloween Goodies – Una Belle Townsend
- It’s Dark In Here – Sue Ko
- Eyelashes – Sue Ko
- Fall – Sue Ko
- Too Dark – Rae Harkness
- Boo – Mary Ann Napolitano
- Much Too Goody – Sarah Hawklyn
- Candy Surprise – Julianna Kurtz
- Halloween Surprise – Judy Egan
- Trick-Or-Treat At 20 Below – Matthew Lasley
- Gotcha! – Pat Finnegan
- The House Next Door – Aundra Tomlins
- No Grownups! – Penny McNally
- The Halloween Party – Claire Schlinkert
- Can We Please Skip The Costumes? – JC Kelly
- How Would She Know? – Meredith Adams
- The Day After Halloween – Haven Blough
- Brujita’s Treat – Desi Vee
- Spooky Investigates – Jessica Murray
- The Best Medicine – Becky Falkum
- You Ain’t Nothin’ But A Hot Dog – Joyce Schriebman
- Witches Holiday – Nadia Nakib
- Halloween Hocus Potion – Shelley Kinder
- Goats And Goblins – Briana Joy McCormick
- Next Halloween – JC Kelly
- Pirate’s Halloween – Marjorie David
- Silly Goose – Sarah Marhevsky
- All’s Fair In Spook And Scare – Patricia J. Weaver
- Smartie Treat – Steena Hernandez
- Haunted Hunt – Dea Brayden and Linsday Brayden Ellis
- The Glow-In-The-Dark Goodies – Christopher Singleton, Sr
- Witches Woods – Bevin Rolfs Spencer
- Invite A Witch To Your Halloween Party?! – Holly Vagley
- Pumpkin’s Halloween – Holly Vagley
- Halloween Moon – Martha Holguin
Trick or Treat Night
By: Emily Keifer
Word Count: 85
A spooky and ooky breeze
Gallops through autumn trees
Prickles grow on my arms;
Goosebumps are worn like charms
Glow in the dark bones prowl
Ghouls, ghosts, and werewolves howl
“Trick or treat, smell my feet;
Give me some sweets to eat!”
Goodies fill up my sack;
Sidewalks all cloaked in black
Pumpkins grin, filled with light
Children shriek, filled with fright
Knock, knock, there’s one last door
“Please, can we have some more?”
Fun-sized squares crowd my dreams
Can’t wait ‘til next year‘s screams!
Nice. You captured the essence of a child’s Halloween. Great descriptive language.
I felt like I was taking a Halloween stroll with your narrator – What a great job setting the scene of a Halloween night:-)
Very evocative description of the holiday! 🎃
Oscar’s Irresistible Brew
by Lucretia Schafroth
KABOOM!
“Ugh!” Slime slid down his cheek.
“Oscaaar!” she shrieked.
“Sorry!“
Try again! She’d insisted— their Halloween goodies and decorations had to be irresistible.
Oscar resumed crafting his special concoction. As he mixed and measured, he wondered if she’d adopted him out of kindness— or something else.
Soon, the pot bubbled with an enticing smell.
Mmm! This will attract trick-or-treaters!
Grabbing a paintbrush and his multi-purpose, pumpkin-spice brew, Oscar rushed outside to finish decorating.
“…glow-in-the-dark house!” squealed a kid, racing up their stairs.
“Trick-or…”
“Cahhh-min,” invited Oscar.
“…TREAT!” she cackled gleefully behind the door.
“Ahhh–wiiitch!”
Oscar sprouted goosebumps instantly.
SLAM!
Word count: 100
Great job! I loved “sprouted goosebumps instantly”! 🙂
Thanks!
Oh no!! Poor kid! But well done Oscar. LOL. Good job building this story Lucretia.
Thank you, Colleen!
Uh-oh! But the witch can’t be that bad, right? Well done!
That depends on what (or who) the treat turns out to be! ; )
I’d be curious to find out who or what
So much emotion in 100 words. Great job!
Thank you, Barbara!
Fun! I didn’t see that witch coming! Good job!
Opened with a KABOOM and ended with a SLAM and lots more going on in between – Nice job packing so much action into this short story.
Yikes! Very scary! 🎃
A truly creepy Halloween tale that leaves us in suspense. I love Oscar’s “multi-purpose pumpkin spice brew.”
All Hallow’s Eve at the Roller Rink
By Bonnie Kelso
98 words
Glow-in-the-dark ghosts dangle from dingy drop ceilings.
THRILLER thrums through skull-shaped speakers.
A Vincent Price voice commands the session.
“Creatures of the night, take to your wheels and GLIDE!”
Tiny Fairy Princess runs on her skates.
CLICKETY CLUNK-CLUNK CLACK!
Colliding with a wall-hugging werewolf.
BUMPITY BUMP-BUMP BANG!
Speed-demon Grim Reaper’s tattered black robe flutters.
Pumpkin-headed gargoyle grapevines backwards.
Skeletons scissor and spin sporadically inspiring goosebumps.
Zealous Zombies dip and moan to the monstrous music.
Goblins gobble down goodies.
CRUNCHITY CHOMP-CHOMP CRUNCH!
Bone-brittle cotton candy and paprika-peppered popcorn.
HOPPITY HOOT-HOOT HOWL!
It’s All Hallow’s Eve at the roller rink!
yes yes yes!
Thanks, Alicia!
Love this vibe!
Thanks, Amy!
Very fun! You described it perfectly!
Thanks, Nancy!
Enjoyed your story, Bonnie! I love the onomotopoeia in it. Good luck in the contest.
Ken
Thank you, Ken!
Enjoyed your story, Bonnie!!! 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
The CLICKETY CLACKING and BUMPITY BUMPING
Sorry, somehow I pressed POST without knowing in the previous comment (Spooks in my keyboard I guess:-)
I was going to write that the CLICKETY CLACKING and BUMPITY BUMPING, etc. really drew me into your story, as did the unique setting.
Miss roller rinks! Very fun! 🎃
MY HALLOWEEN CREW
by Alana DeVito
Word Count: 99
Glow-in-the-dark necklace? Check.
Pillowcase for goodies? Check.
Friends? Nowhere in sight.
My family’s in costume, but they aren’t superheroes like me…
“Where’re my friends?” I ask Mom.
“Not sure…” she says, “but we’ll have our own fun.”
Would Batman really have fun with a witch, a farmer, and… a pirate?
I trudge down the street, kicking leaves. Suddenly —
“I need BATMAN!” the farmer screeches. “That witch stole my—“
“Seeds,” cackles the witch, “for my Halloween brew!”
“Walk da plank!” the tiny pirate shouts.
We speed after the seed theif.
With goosebumps, shreiks, and smiles, my Halloween crew heads out.
https://alanadevito.wixsite.com/kidlitartclass/post/happy-halloweensie-from-my-crew-to-yours
Love, “I need BATMAN!” Very cute. Good luck!
This story of a family (including the mom and dad) outt having fun together on Halloween was really appealing to me – This superhero has an awesome crew!
This gave me warm fuzzies!🎃
Post Halloween Goals, by Amy Reitz
(100 words)
On Halloween,
all the best things
glow-in-the-dark,
or lurk in the shadows
waiting to surprise
normal, nice, people
who want goodies
not goosebumps.
But my dream is to
glow-in-the-light
without my costume to protect me
To stand right out in the open
and give goosebumps with my words
(the good kind)
Normally, it feels impossible
because normal, nice, people
look like ghostly goblins
when I’m standing up in front of them.
So tonight will be my practice,
all dressed up as someone else
reciting my poems to anyone who will listen.
And maybe tomorrow,
I will try again,
as me.
Ooh, love this, Amy!
This is very cool! Great job!
Yes! Your words led me to imagine the very real possibility that somebody can build self-confidence and courage when protected by a costume – Your story is thought provoking.
I want to glow in the light! What a wonderful sentiment! 🧡
The Card Game
By Cathy Lee
100 Words
The skeletons played a game of cards.
Halloween just wasn’t fun anymore.
They remembered a time when they chased kids, played tricks on them,
had real tummies and could eat tons of goodies.
Now they were old bones, and everything fell to the ground.
Pandemonium! Shouted the littlest skeleton.
Their glowing in the dark and headed this way!
If skeletons could get goosebumps, they surely would.
They formed a circle and came up with the perfect plan.
A knock at the door; Trick or Treat!
A trick, of course.
Little, slowly opened the door.
Who’s ready for some card tricks?
Very fun. Love the ending.
Hahaha – I thought of myself because I used to be able to eat “tons of goodies” but now everything “fell to the ground” 🙂 Loved the clever twist of the card trick ending.
I related to this too much! 😂🎃
QUIET NIGHT
By Thelia Hutchinson
(98 words)
The night before Halloween felt chilling.
The fog was thick, and the full moon glowed.
The wind rustled the branches against the window, giving me goosebumps.
I held teddy tight.
There was a loud thump.
I jumped.
My door creaked open.
“Mom?” I shrieked.
Something scurried out.
“Teddy?” I whispered.
“Give me all your goodies” a voice boomed.
“I don’t have any, tomorrow we go trick or treating” I said shakily. “Who’s there?”.
Standing at the door is teddy, his eyes glowed-in-the-dark.
“Oh, my bad” he cackled “I got my days mixed up. Same time tomorrow? Sweet dreams”.
Ooh, creepy Teddy!
Great goosebumpy set up with the chilling night air, thick fog, and rustling tree branches, and I never suspected that the cuddly teddy bear would turn out to be the scary character in your story.
Nightmare fuel! Well done! 🎃
Trick-or-Treat, Night Animals!: A Holloween Story
By: Mary Catherine Amadu
Word Count: 98 Words
Coyote was first to spot the stampede.
“Trick-or-Treaters! Hide!” he yelped with alarm,
hurrying into the big tree’s hollow.
Goose heard Coyote.
If Trick-or-Treaters scared fierce Coyote,
they must be goosebump worthy.
She honked and joined Coyote inside the tree.
Racoon heard Goose.
If Goose and Coyote feared Trick-or-Treaters,
Racoon couldn’t mask his nerves.
He chattered, then crammed into the hollow.
Cat heard Racoon.
She didn’t fancy herself a fraidy-cat,
but Trick-or-Treaters sounded ferocious.
She hissed, then jammed into the tree with the others.
Deep in the hollow, Coyote’s sharp teeth glowed-in-the-dark.
“Goody,” he drooled.
“Trick AND treats.”
Great twist at the end for the unsuspecting! Good job!
Thank you Nancy! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
I was imagining the cozy story of THE MITTEN, so I fell for Coyote’s trick hook, line, and sinker – What a great twist in the end.
I love this! Very fun and spooky. 🙂
Very twisty and lots of fun! 🎃🧡
A Halloween Tail
By Janice Kay
(WC 99)
Tonight is Halloween. Dressed as witch sisters, we need a black cat.
Bribing Sammy, our fluffy schipperke into dressing like a cat will require lots of goodies.
Sammy does NOT like cats!
“Stay still, Sammy”.
Yellow glasses, glow-in-the-dark collar, long tail and whiskers complete his costume.
Mortified is too small a word for Sammy’s feelings.
“Come Sammy, we have an important mission.”
The hospital lobby is full of tiny wheelchairs. Spidermen, ghosts, princesses, and Avengers all squeal with delight as we enter.
Goosebumps raise over Sammy’s spine as he cuddles up to each child.
Maybe cats aren’t so bad.
Sammy got a chance to walk a mile in someone else’s shoes and he discovered an appreciation for those kitty cats. Now if only we humans could do that more often! Good job, Janice!!
Oh so sweet. Halloween for the service dog. Nicely done!
I do a little volunteering with puppies at Guiding Eyes for Blind, and this story definitely struck a chord with me. I liked the sense of mystery you created by not revealing the “important mission” until the end of the story.
Now that’s an altogether different type of Halloween spirit! 🧡
AN INCH
By: Susan Leigh Needham
Word Count: 99
I’m stuck inside once again, sprawled on this cold, hard floor.
Waiting for my favorite humans to return with their “don’t let the dog eat any” goodies.
But how can a disguise and a bucket protect them out there at night?
All the glow-in-the-dark accessories in the world won’t scare off the spookies.
No one on our block growls louder than I.
What’s that? Footsteps on the porch?
Goosebumps prickle and hair rises. It’s time.
I’m stealthy and invisible to my human’s eye.
Ding dong!
The door cracks.
I need only an inch and — I’m free!
Happy Howlloween!
Such a great doggo perspective, Susan! Love it!
Thank you Karyn
unexpected and fun!
The end could be the start of another adventure! Nicely done!
Hahaha – Love this dog’s sense of concern for his “favorite humans” and his craftiness in planning in Howllwoween escape.
Pooch point of view, cute! 🎃
UNDERWATER HALLOWEEN
by Judy Sobanski
[95 words]
It’s an underwater Halloween,
for whales to snails and in-between.
Coral to cave they trick-or-treat
for salty goodies, fun to eat.
Orcas dress like panda bears,
Clownfish wearing underwear!
Electric eels glow-in-the-dark,
and seals dress up like cats that…bark?
Blowfish is a porcupine,
Walrus now is Frankenstein.
A costume isn’t necessary—
for Shark’s already way too scary,
giving goosebumps to the seals
while he scouts for his next meal!
Wolf fish howls up at the moon.
The party will be over soon.
Then back to waters calm, care-free,
but now it’s one big spooky sea!
Hi Judy,
I enjoyed your story! Good luck in the contest.
This is so fresh Judy! I love your take on this. The sea and its inhabitants. Well done!
So clever! I really enjoyed your unique Halloween story.
Great minds think alike;) I love your Underwater Halloween… a spooky sea indeed!
Well done, Judy! Really enjoyed this!
Nice! Love all the different costumes for the animals. Very fun!
Loved how the sea creatures celebrated Halloween in a way appropriate to their true selves: the orca as a panda, blowfish as porcupine, electric eels that glow in the dark, etc.
A playful and inventive poem with fantastic—and fantastical—STEM elements. I love “Orcas dress like panda bears” and “Blowfish is a porcupine.”
Love the juxtaposition of sea critters and Halloween trick-or-treating! Great idea! And the cats that bark line was hilarious! Good luck!
You are amazing- a true wordsmith!
Very well-written, including all the undersea creatures! Great descriptions, I can picture all of them! Good luck!
The Lonely Scarecrow
By Sarah Atherton (@Sarah_A_Author)
Word Count: 99
“Trick or treat?”
Sammy sighed miserably.
No one could hear his timid voice or see him in the dark.
“Woohoo!”
Delighted children followed the Halloween trail, their path lit by lanterns.
“This way!”
CREAK, CLANG, BOO!
“Aaahh! That skeleton gave me goosebumps!”
“Come and see me next,” pleaded Sammy.
Chirp! Flutter!
Little robin was back. Sammy’s friend at night-time – a stranger during the day.
The farmer made sure of that.
“Any luck?”
“Tweet. They’re on their way.”
A swarm of fireflies surrounded Sammy, who instantly glowed-in-the-dark.
“Hey! Look!”
“Goody! A scarecrow!”
The trick-or-treaters surrounded Sammy, who instantly glowed inside.
I’m so glad that Sammy got to show off for the kids. Nice friends too. Good job!
Making Sammy glow in the dark via the light of fireflies was such a clever resolution to Sammy’s lonely Halloween dilemma.
I love the internal echo of Sammy’s external glow at the end. Your story of friendship and coming together made me glow inside, too.
I love the scare crow and crow working together behind the scenes. So sweet!🎃
The Little Witch
by Deborah Hunt
97 words
The little witch rubbed her goosebumps.
She grabbed her glow-in-the-dark pumpkin.
She flew out the door.
Being a witch, she could conjure up all kinds of treats.
But trick or treating was much more fun.
“Trick or treat,” she cackled.
Mrs. Wolf smiled. “Hello little witch. I have some goodies.”
“Thank you! I have a trick for you.” The little witch waved her magic wand.
A puff of purple smoke surrounded them.
“Meow, meow.” The black cat purred.
Mrs. Wolf gasped. “How did you do that?”
“I’m a witch.” She hopped on her broom and flew away.
Very fun.
Thanks, Nancy!
That was an unexpected trick that the little witch played on the wolf!
Thank you!
Puts the trick in trick or treat for sure! 🎃
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WAKING THE DEAD
By Nancy Derey Riley – 100 words
On Halloween night when the moon’s on the rise,
the bugs throw a wild jamboree.
There’s music and dancing—goodies galore
and a Luna moth party emcee.
The rasp of the crickets and whine of the flies
raise goosebumps so ghoulishly fine.
While high in the trees there’s a glow-in-the-dark
from the glow-worms that’s simply divine.
At midnight the symphony reaches its peak;
the ground starts to rumble and sway.
Up from the earth with a rattle of bones—
skeletons come out to play.
They leap and they whirl to the bugs’ serenade
‘til the dawn ends their ghostly ballet.
I like this one!! Pretty poetry.
Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Very creative.
Great job! I like ” skeletons come out to play “! 🙂
Thanks!
I love it!
Thanks!
This is one jamboree to which I do NOT want to be invited, but great use of images to create your story.
Thanks, Colleen. It started out as a fun bug story, but took a turn . . . bahaha!
These stories do seem to have a mind of their own!
Yep! LOL!
I love this and especially the bugs midnight symphony.
Thanks!
Such beautiful language in this buggy ballet. Terrific!
Thanks, Jill. It started as a fun bug story and then took an unexpected turn! LOL!
Unique. I love this, the sights and sounds. Lyrical and lovely. Well done!
Thanks so much!
Fun and very visual. I love the idea of an insect symphony and celebration on Halloween night!
Thanks!
Love this ghostly ballet!
Thanks for reading!
Very nice! I like the lyricism. My favorite part is, “Up from the earth with a rattle of bones–
skeletons come out to play.” Spooky. 🙂
Thanks so much!
Love this Nancy! Such wonderful word choices, well done!
Thanks so much!
I love the imagery and rhyme in your poem! Love the ending too 🙂
Thanks for reading!
Oh I love that there’s a creepy but still fun ending! Skeletons dancing a ‘ghostly ballet’ is the perfect way to end ❤
Thanks. Glad you liked it!
A bug symphony? How fun! And what a creepy plot twist at the end!
Thanks! It was fun to write.
Love your title – It’s easy to imagine this “wild jamboree” “waking the dead.”
Thanks so much for reading!
Wildly inventive poem with wonderful STEAM elements and a spooktacular twist ending!
Wow, thanks for the glowing comments!
Oh, I would love to this illustrated! So many sensory details made it come alive and it just begs to be read out loud! 🧡🧡🧡
“See this” illustrated…
Thanks so much! I’m a retired wildlife biologist so most of my stories involve animals.
This is very evocative with fabulous rhyme! Love it!
Thanks so much!
Love the sensory details, I can just see the party, especially the skeletons dancing to the music! Good job!
Thanks! It was fun to write!
A Not-So-Sweet Halloween
By: Erika Romero (98 words)
“Which snack is better?” Charlotte asked. “Glow-in-the-dark cupcakes or goosebumps-and-screams ice cream sundaes?”
Frankie sneezed.
“What’s with the cinnamon? It’s hard to make a choice without smelling them.”
“Drake got a fang cavity at last year’s Halloween party. He hates garlic and cinnamon, so I made cinnamon frosting and syrup to stop his snacking.”
Frankie laughed.
“I’m glad I don’t have any blood in my veins.”
Charlotte smiled.
“Cinnamon is Plan B. Pick the snack so I can start spinning Drake’s timeout web.”
Frankie laughed. “Glowy cupcakes. We’ll get enough screams from the children running away from our party.”
Love the goosebumps and screams sundaes! Very cute.
Hahaha – The web is such an original timeout location!
Plotting for time outs, that’s funny! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR KRISTEN
It’s Halloween in Toothytown
By Kristen Littlefield
Word Count: 100
It’s Halloween in Toothytown,
The ghouls and goblins gather ‘round.
Their trays arranged with cakes and pies,
In hopes of grabbing this year’s prize.
Miss Dragon’s Breath, the crusty judge,
Turns up her snout at Franky’s fudge.
She sneers at Ogre’s goosebump blintz,
And gags on Troll’s toejam with lint.
But Gremlin’s spicy pepper bread,
Makes Dragon hold her scaly head.
Her nostrils flare. She starts to wheeze,
And lets out a gigantic…
SNEEZE!
The goodies sizzle, snap, and spark,
Like pumpkins glowing in the dark.
Miss Dragon’s eyes begin to brim,
“Now that’s a treat! Let’s all dig in!”
I really like this one.
This is very fun! LOL at goosebump blintz and toejam with lint! Very fun and nicely done! Good luck!
Miss Dragon’s Breath sizzling and sparking judging standard for what makes a good treat is so appropriate to her . . . and hysterical
Thanks so much!
I had a lot of fun writing this.
I love how you paired so many creatures with their featured treat! Deliciously fun and spooky!
ENTRY POSTED FOR BRITTANY
Until It’s Safe
By Brittany Saulnier
https://brittanysaulnier.weebly.com/
97 Words
Most blew away with the first strong gale; their bags of carefully collected seashells lay shattered along the boardwalk. To a few off-season tourists, the unpredictable water, the moody temperatures and the once beautiful, now gloomy, cliffs were bearable, at least until after the Halloween parade. Afterwards, when the last candy wrapped goodie falls to lay crumpled by the broken shells, an old clam, sheltered by the cliff, hard goosebumps covering its shell, will cast a light strong enough to glow in the dark water through to the darkest depths. A message. It’s safe to come out.
How creative!
Such a great spin on the off-season at the shore – Love that clam sends out the signal that the coast is clear.
You evoked such a specific and unique mood. Well done! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR KAREN
First Halloween
by Karen deWilde
100 words
It was dinner time.
I jumped onto the porch.
Wait. This wasn’t my house!
Cobwebs spanned the columns.
A jack-o’-lantern grinned near a bowl of goodies.
The front door creaked.
Out stepped a witch with a hideous green face.
Next came a vampire with pointy glow-in-the-dark teeth.
“Don’t eat me!” I meowed.
“Look! He has goosebumps!” cried the Witch.
The Vampire bent to pick me up.
“Stop!” I hissed.
The Vampire took out his pointy teeth.
“Don’t be afraid,” he said.
“It’s Halloween,” explained the Witch, peeling off her green skin.
“Silly me!” I purred.
We went inside for dinner.
Very cute from the cat’s POV. Nice. Good luck!
Loved the verbs in the cat’s dialogue – I can just hear it hissing “Stop!” and purring “Silly me!”
Kitty’s first trick or treat! How sweet! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR ALEXA
You Are What You Eat
by Alexa Tuttle
Word Count: 91
Mom said don’t eat too much candy,
but with all these goodies handy…
I’ll start with tasting just one bite.
Yum! That flavor’s quite alright!
I’m sure it’s fine to have one more…
or two, or three. Hey, why not four?
I feast on taffy, cookies, blow-pops,
even glow-in-the-dark gumdrops!
At breakneck speed, I eat my fill.
Uh oh… my stomach feels quite ill.
A glass of water would be nice,
but I can’t move! I’m stiff as ice!
Goosebumps break out. I feel bizarre…
I’ve turned into a candy bar!
Funny! Well done!
Fun twist!
Very cute! That’s the way with candy–can’t stop with just one! Fun!
LOL – I expected this treat eater to get sick from all that candy, but what a great twist to be turned into a candy bar!
The title is the perfect punchline! Very clever!🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR CARRIE O’LEARY
Once Upon a Halloween
Once upon a halloween,
Kids in costumes could be seen.
Witches and wizards, ghosts and ghouls,
Fairies dressed up in glow-in-the-dark jewels.
Tonight is the night when they go out to play,
Those things that can never go out in the day.
Goosebumps rise in the chilly night air,
As zombies chomp and moan and stare.
Werewolves in packs and gargoyles in gangs,
Vampires bare their super-sharp fangs.
This is the night that they all have some fun,
Trick or treat, shall they wait or run?
Skipping down pavement, knocking on door,
Filling their buckets with goodies galore.
I love the title/opening line (and the whole thing). I can visualize it as a picture book. Good luck!
Thank you, I was visioning a picture book when I wrote it. Good luck to you too
Love, “Werewolves in packs and gargoyles in gangs.” Lots of wonderful imagery with your word choices. Good job!
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. I had fun writing it 🙂
Your story perfectly encapsulated a Halloween evening – I felt like I was looking out my window watching all the fun!
I had to make up my own Halloween evening because I never get any real trick or treaters anymore. 😔 Thank you for your kind comment
You captured the night! Great imagery! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR KJ
Goodie Ghost’s Halloween Screams
By KJ Albright
(99 word acrostic poem)
Goodie the Ghost
Let
Out a
Wickedly scary scream.
It’s Halloween
Night!
Thieving treats,
Hatching tricks, Goodie’s
Eager to begin.
Dressed
As a
Regular
Kid in a sheet,
Goodie heads
Out to scare trick-or-treaters. He leaps
Out of shadows
Screaming “BOO!”
“Eek!” they shriek, leaving their
Bags of candy.
Under his
Mask he
Partakes of Skittles.
“Scrumptious!” He cackles.
Goodie screams “BOO!” One last time when …
One small glow-in-the-dark
Octopus child
Declares, with tentacles on hips and candy bag held tight,
“I’m not scared of you!”
“Eek!!” Goodie
Shrieks, floating right out of his sheet, ghostly goosebumps aplenty.
Brave child! Fun, good luck!
Nice acrostic! What a brave little octopus. 😀 Love the ending.
Wow, well done with the acrostic poem! Very clever. Good luck!
I’m so glad the formatting held up when you posted because your acrostic poem was a WOW!!!
Wow! That worked really well! Fun story and they format made it even more engaging! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR BECKY
A BUNNY CAN DREAM
by
Becky Walker @bwalkerbooks
100 words
“May I speak to the Spooky Committee?” demanded Bunny.
“What for, kiddo?” asked the chairman.
“I want to be an official Halloween spooky animal…
wolves, black cats, bats have all the fun!”
“Hahaha! Cute, kid.”
Bunny’s ears drooped.
“But, it’s my dream.”
“We’ll vote tonight.”
Bunny’s ears perked up.
First, glow-in-the-dark paint.
Next, a prop. Wand? Taken. Broom? Taken.
A-HA! Toilet plunger! Humans seem pretty scared of those.
Goody…a cherry! CHOMP! BLOODY TEETH!
Bunny hid and waited.
He had one shot.
BAM! Out jumped Bunny.
“AAAAAHHHH!” screamed the chairman.
“Goosebumps?” asked Bunny.
“Approved. Now get that plunger outa here!”
Ha hahaha…I love Bunny’s personality.
Haha! I thought for a minute that Bunny was the Easter Bunny! LOL! Very cute. Love the plunger. Good luck!
I was smiling the entire time I read your story. The concept of bunny applying to the Spooky Committee for official status was funny all by itself, and the humor just kept going from there:-)
I can see this particular bunny having a whole series of adventures! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR BARBARA
Ogre’s Halloween
Barbara DiMarco
100 words
No one came to Ogre’s house on Halloween anymore.
Ogre had pumpkins, a corn maze, ghost face painting…his house even glowed-in-the-dark!
Still, after the first Halloween, no one came back.
“We’re moving.” Ogre said, packing his suitcase and cat.
“Again?” said the cat.
The new neighbors were excited for a fun Halloween at Ogre’s house!
He had pumpkins, a sunflower maze, witch face painting…
Ogre’s goosebumps had goosebumps.
The whole neighborhood lined up for the treats.
“One toe nail for you…and two for you.” Ogre said, dropping his goodies into bags and pillowcases.
“Time to move,” said the cat.
Love the ending! Poor Ogre didn’t know his treats were tricks. I hope he figures it out. Nice job!
Thanks Nancy! GAG to toenail treats…maybe cat will kindly let him know one day 🙂
Your story tricked me – I thought people would be scared of Ogre, not upset with his treats:-)
I couldn’t wait to find out what he was doing wrong! What a great ending! 🎃
Monster Lipstick
By Kathi Morrison-Taylor
99 words
I live in Howling Heights so every Halloween
little monsters trick-or-treat, accursed cacophony.
They reject my caramel liver, poo-poo my candied feets.
Squealing, growling, boo-ing while I long to rest-in-peace.
This year will be different. I formulate a plan.
The goody that I’ll offer isn’t edible — it’s glam.
Presenting Monster Lipstick in a plethora of hues:
For Dracula, Glow-in-the-Dark. Vampira? Black-Eye Blue.
Here comes Chupacabra. I offer Goosebump Gold.
The Wolfman wants a classic shade as pink as babies’ toes.
Eagerly they smear their mouths. Then silence. It’s quite funny!
Monsters muted! Lips glued tight. (I used Gorilla-honey.)
Nice job Kathi- I love this- so funny and clever. Well done!
Thanks!
Monster lipstick! Sill and creative. Nice job, Kathi!
Thanks, Katie!
Haha! I adore the lipstick shades. Well done, Kathi!
Thanks! That part was fun. I wanted more words!
This made me laugh. Creative and FUN!
Thank you!
Ha!!! So great, Kathi!
That clever monster devised quite a trick! Fun story, Kathi!
Hilarious! Love the lipstick shades and the whole plan. Well done!
A treat and a trick all rolled into one – Very clever:-)
That’s hysterical and truly original! 🧡🎃!
GHOULIES GRAND SOIREE
by MaryAnn Cortez (word count 100)
Halloween. Time to play.
Ghoulie throws a grand soiree!
Monsters drink the witch’s brew.
Guaranteed to make them BOO.
Zombies slurp eyeball soup.
Mummies gather round in groups.
Wicked fun all around.
Until
Ding-Dong
a dreadful sound.
Monsters gasp. Hurry hide!
It’s Children! Ghoulie’s terrified!
Goblin Goosebumps! Where to run?
Fiendish trouble has begun.
Ghoulie peeks through a shroud;
sizing up the kiddie crowd.
Goodie bags, kids galore
wearing masks, capes, and more.
Glow-in-the-dark costumed clad
horrifying little lad
beckon’s Ghoulie,
“Be my friend?
After all it’s just pretend.”
Ghoulie bends with a grin.
“Trick or treat? Do come in.”
Love this as well.
Love this MaryAnn!!
Thank you!
Very cute!
Thank you!
Just pretend? I wonder?
Glad you got it. Thank you!
Such a fun read, MaryAnn! I love that the monsters are scared of children and the children think it’s all pretend 😀
Thank you!
What a fun read. Great rhymes!
Thank you!
Fun, surprise twist ending!
Thank you!
Ooh, just pretend, right . . . Love it!
Thank you!
Love your snazzy title and, of course, the twist that ghosts and ghouls are scared by the kids.
I love this take on monster parties! Very well done! 🎃🧡
ENTRY POSTED FOR LINDSAY
HAUNTING GNOMES
100 words
By Lindsay Moretti
Gunter’s a gnome with a mischievous mind and he loved to haunt.
Every year on Halloween, he and his friends devised a spooky jaunt.
The scares they prepared to go bump in the night would finally be revealed!
Gunter and friends manned their stations for they were to stay concealed.
Whispers sounded, trick-or-treaters abounded. Operation Goosebump commenced!
Suddenly, woods rustled, shadows flitted and shrieked. Everyone grew tense!
For the finale, Gunter gave the signal and trees glowed-in-the-dark!
The children screeched, dropped all their goodies and sprinted out of the park.
Gunter and friends hurrahed and cheered! T’was another successful haunt!
Very cute! I love Operation Goosebump!
Thank you!
Love your descriptive language. I think you could take this story and turn it into a picture book. Title, Operation Goosebump! Fun!
Thank you so much. I’m loving the title suggestion!
I loved the suspense you created especially in the middle of your story/poem, and a forest of trees suddenly glowing in the dark really would be a grand finale!
Thank you, Patricia!
Operation Goosebumps is a success and so much fun to read! 🎃
Thank you, Ingrid!
GOOSEBUMPED GHOUL AND SCATTERED SKELETON
100 words
Sarah Kohls Roberts
Under the moonless sky, Skeleton’s glow-in-the-dark bones gleamed.
“Halloween’s your time to shine,” Ghoul said.
“And time for goodies—for kids and monsters.”
“Children give me goosebumps.” Ghoul shivered as they joined the trick-or-treaters.
“Cool costumes!” squeaked a pirate.
Suddenly, a costumed zombie grabbed Ghoul’s bag, then knocked into Skeleton, scattering both his bones and Ghoul’s candy.
“Aaahh!” The zombie fled.
The pirate gathered Ghoul’s candy and held out the bag.
“Goosebumps!” Ghoul shouted but stretched timidly to accept it.
Skeleton gathered his bones.
“Do you want to trick-or-treat with me?” the pirate asked.
Ghoul nodded shyly and Skeleton rattled.
So fun, Sarah! Good job! Best line, “Children give me goosebumps.” Good luck!
Sweet! I love how Skeleton rattles at the end!
Fun story, Sarah, with a sweet ending.
Such a nice ending, and I especially liked this funny line: “Skeleton gathered his bones.”
Fun, spooky and sweet all in 100 words! 🎃
NOT THIS TIME
100 words
by Sandhya Acharya @authorsandhya
Last year, I lost the candy contest by one piece to Jai. Not this time.
I clasp my glow-in-the-dark saber and enter the must-avoid scariest house..
alone!
Suddenly – a shadow!
A shadow with a scythe.
A scythe dripping with something wet,
something fresh,
something red,
blood?
Goosebumps rise –
I scream,
I run!
But which way is out?
The shadow comes closer
and closer
Until –
“Veer?”
“Jai?”
I look at Jai’s plastic scythe. It’s dripping with..
“Ketchup, obviously!” says Jay.
“Sorry, I came without you,” I say.
“I am sorry too,” replies Jai as we fill our bag of goodies together.
Fun story! Love how they team up together at the end! (and great detail with the ketchup!)
Scary! Thank goodness they found each other.Well done.
Nice building of tension with spooky imagery!
Great scary feeling and pace and then, friends. Love the nice ending. Good luck!
That whole section about the shadow with the scythe dripping with something was just dripping with . . . tension – Loved it!
aw, friends reunited, forgiveness, and continuing on together. A sweet Halloween story, including the ketchup, LOL. Good luck!
C.R.E.E.P.Y! 🎃😂
HOW TO SNEAK A HALLOWEEN TREAT
By: Alicia Meyers
WC: 97
Let’s creep it real this Halloween.
There’s only one thing standing between me and my bucket of goodies…
MOM.
Apparently, she’s the “hallow-queen” of the candy.
So, how does one sneak a Halloween treat?
First, don’t jump the gum.
Be prepared to stay up late and wait.
When it’s time, put on a glow-in-the-dark costume to help light the way.
Bump!
“Ouch!”
Next, give yourself a pep talk.
Any noise could give you goosebumps.
RUFF!!
“AHHHH!”
Last, when you’ve finally finished your mission to the kitchen,
Quickly turn on the lights and…
“MOM!!!!!!
That’s MY candy!!!”
“…Oops?”
LOL! How fun! I love the wordplay of “creep it real” and “don’t jump the gum”. And I may be that mom at the end…
Oh! Mom!!! Lovely!
LOL hilarious! I enjoyed your use of wordplay and the funny ending. Nice work!
Well done! I enjoyed your fun word play and unexpected ending.
Hahaha! HIlarious. Yes, I’ve been that mom. Good job! Love the word play.
A “How To” guide for stealing candy – All by itself, the idea is comical, and I love how you injected even more humor throughout the story – So funny:-)
So much fun wordplay in this one, and a great twist at the end! 🧡🎃
I WISH…
By Amy Duchene, @amydishes
Word count: 100!
Wish my birthday was a different day.
Can Halloween please go away?
This year I have a secret plan:
Throw a scary party. Make everyone understand.
I’ll create an atmosphere that’s moody;
Give away spooky goodies.
No ice cream nor cake to eat. Want some candy? Do a trick for a treat.
No blowing candles nor twinkling lights; instead get goosebumps from glow-in-the-dark frights.
No balloons nor streamers please; instead enjoy spiderwebs and ghosts in trees.
But, wait.
This decoration
Deserves celebration.
Perhaps October 31 is a good day to party…
Want to come to my birthday? It’s just starting!
It never occurred to me that children born on Halloween could feel the same way about their birthdays as the children born on December 25th – Great concept for a Halloween story
I was really sympathetic at the beginning and therefore SO happy at the ending! Nicely done! 🎃
BRAM’S HUNT
100 words
by Michaela Almeida
https://www.michaelaalmeida.com/post/halloweensie-2021
Bram despises Halloween.
Trick-or-treaters with plastic fangs, fake blood, and cheap capes, mocking him.
A true vampire would never reveal his identity for some goodies.
Only for…
Blood.
The anticipation sends goosebumps down his spine.
The time has come.
POOF!
In bat form, Bram soars over the treetops, looking for his next victim.
He spies a trick-or-treater, cape flowing, glow-in-the-dark necklace illuminating his face.
Bram swoops, cutting through the dark sky like a knife.
He unfurls his wings, transforming before the child’s eyes.
Fangs gleaming in the moonlight.
“Finally, something I can sink my teeth into.”
“NOOOO!”
And then,
silence.
Scary! I hope the child had a good trick up his or her sleeve.
Very scary. I like your adjectives POOF! is fun. I can visualize his transformation.
Yikes! A truly scary story. Great descriptive language and suspense.
Love this vampire’s name – Is his last name Stoker?
Yikes! 😱 You nailed scary! 🎃
Terrific Toothpaste!
By Heather Gallagher
99 words
“Glow in the dark toothpaste!” Jacob whooped. “Cool!”
“Yes,” said Mom. “It’s my attempt to beat the goodies!”
It was Halloween eve. We were finishing our costumes and looking forward to trading sweets. Mum was having a nervy about decay.
Halloween night, she made us brush our teeth before we left.
“Make sure you look after Jacob,” she warned. “I’m counting on you, Hannah.”
But of course, one street in, Jacob disappeared.
Goosebumps sprang up along my arms. Where was he? Mum would flip.
Then, across the road, someone flashed me a grin. A giant, toothy glow-in-the-dark grin.
Phew!
This made me smile. Love the ending.
Haha! Clever story with a great ending.
Love the ending. Never saw it coming, LOL! Good job!
Glow-in-the-dark toothpaste – I loved this fun resolution to the problem in your story:-)
That’s a super fun idea! 😁🎃!
Love it, Mia! Such a cute ending, and I love the fun details in the second stanza. Nicely done.
THE AFTER PARTY
by Samantha Sinclair
WC: 97
Rudolph’s red nose that glows-in-the-dark makes “Ruddo” a radiant clown.
“The Fang Fairy” drapes a black, hooded cape over her tutu and crown.
Cupid is “Boo!-pid” while under his sheet. Turkey claims he is a-“Gobblin‘”.
Frightfully bound and knockin’ things down, poor “Easter Mummy” is wobblin’!
Dear “Mrs. Claws” brings goodies and treats. “Mother Goosebump” makes a sign.
They hang it with care and seconds to spare. “He’s home!” yells “Leprechaun-stein”.
Ol’ Jack O’Lantern rolls through the door, enchanted to see what’s within.
The whole party screams “Happy Halloween!” Jack’s grimace is finally a grin!
I love the name transformations in this one. How fun!
Very creative approach to including a whole year’s worth of festive/holiday representatives at the Halloween after-party–well done! Wonderful name modifications.
Very fun. Love the name changes and their costumes. Very creative. Good luck!
The costumes for the holiday characters are so clever. One of my favorites is the one that transforms the Tooth Fairy into “The Fang Fairy.”
I love this concept! And it was so fun to read aloud- Well done! 🧡🎃🧡
THE FINAL HOUR
Ashlee MacCallum
Word Count: 95
You’re walking down a dark street as your glow-in-the-dark shoes light the way.
You take in the scene ahead of you.
It’s the final hour of Halloween night.
You see wrappers on the floor from goodies long gone and a package on a porch that reads “Amazon”.
There’s pumpkins smashed along the side of the road,
You peek inside your candy bag- you hit the motherload.
A breeze blows by and goosebumps spread across your back,
You walk until you reach your quiet cul-de-sac.
It’s 11:59, the hour is gone.
Next Halloween won’t be long.
Blog- http://ashleemaccallum.weebly.com/blog/halloweensie-entry
Twitter- _ashleedani
Great description to set the mood and scene. Very cool.
Hahaha – Love how this main character is looking forward to next year as soon as “the hour is gone.”
Awww, the final minute of the final hour. One to savor! 🎃
HALLOWEEN GALA
By Tonnye Williams Fletcher
100 words
Green and gold glimmers grow
from glow-in-the-dark gourds.
Guests with goosebumps gather —
Gaggles of giggly girls and gangly guys,
Gussied up in grisly or glittery garb.
Glamorous ghosts and garish ghouls
glide among games,
Vying for gallons of goodies.
Then. . .
Glimmering lights go out!!
The sudden dark hides thievery.
When the glow resumes,
Goodies have disappeared!
“Whodunnit?”
Gumshoes on the job!
A clue:
Grunts and groans grow,
from Angel Gabriel and Gladys Gladiator,
from gobbling
goodies galore!
Looking green,
grasping their bellies,
Gabriel and Gladys go.
Later. . .
Goodies eaten,
Games won.
Glimmers ungleam.
Gourds unlit.
Guests ungather
Until next Halloween.
This is delightful, Tonnye! I love the ending stanza and the G tongue twisters are fun.
LOVE the lovely lyrical and alliterative language, Tonnye!
Fantastic job, Tonya. Love all the G words.
Such a fun read, Tonnye, as I knew it would be after our G discussion on Twitter! 😀 (50 by my count haha!) Love it!
“Glimmers ungleam”– brilliant
Loved all the alliteration, the pacing, and the action. This was a fun read.
I love this! So much fun alliterative language and a mystery to solve. Great job, good luck in the contest!
A very clever, alliterative Halloween whodunnit!
Girl, this was great! 😀 I love alliteration and whodunnits. Very fun read.
Love the alliteration and the way you built the story up and then how it all settled down to the end. Very nice!
Alliteration always appeals – It must have been a fun challenge crafting a story with all of those Gs!
What a great, good time! Gotta love a who-dunnit!
HALLOWEEN BITES
By Melissa-Jane Nguyen
89 words
Blog link: https://melissajane.substack.com/p/halloweensie-entry-2021
Two witches were mixing up potions
All on a halloween night,
Unaware that somebody was watching,
A creature well-known for its bite.
Goodies were thrown in a cauldron,
A glow-in-the-dark delight.
The beastie was lurking around,
But buzzing about out of sight.
‘I’ve got tiny goosebumps,’ said Sybil,
‘It must be this blustery night.’
The beastie was ready to strike,
About to relish a bite.
THWACK! ‘You hit me?!’ said Agnes.
It almost started a fight.
‘Sorry! There was a mosquito on you,
‘And no time to be polite.’
Funny twist ending. Great job concealing who the beastie was until the end. Good luck!
Thank you so much! 😀
Love this and that surprise ending! Vampire has competition 😀 Well done!
Haha! Thank you, Rozana! 😀
A mosquito! I love it. Those can really be scary down here in the South. 😀
Hehe! Thanks Trista! ❤
Hilarious! Now for mosquito facts: Mosquitoes cause at least 2.7 million deaths every year.
About 500 million cases of mosquito-borne diseases occur annually. Good thing Sybil smacked it! LOL!
Thank you, Nancy! Yes, they really are scary despite their tiny size haha!
Those little clues you wove into your story (ex. “a creature well-known for its bite,” “buzzing about”) should have tipped me off, but I was still surprised by your funny ending
Haha! I’m happy to hear that my clues didn’t give it away too soon 😀 Thanks so much for your comment, Patricia!
I did not see that coming, lol! 🎃
I’m so glad to hear that, Ingrid! Haha! 😀
Double, Double Toilet Trouble
by Stephanie Amargi
77 words
Double, double toilet trouble,
Up at night with tummy grumble.
Potty too far down the hall,
Creeping shadows on the wall.
What has caused this tummy fright?
(Many goodies Hallows’ night.)
Cry for Mama, Papa Witch?
Cast a spell to flip a switch?
Sweat and goosebumps on my skin,
Must be brave, can’t hold it in.
Double, double toilet trouble,
Up at night with tummy grumble…
Out of my bed without a spark:
Glad my pj’s glow-in-the-dark.
This was fun to read and made me smile. Original and fun. Good luck!
Thank you!
Very cute! I bet there are a few kids who can relate on Halloween night! Good job and good luck!
Thank you!
LOL – Love how those glow-in-the-dark pj’s guided the way since this over-eater trick-or-treater had toilet trouble
Thanks for your laughter!
Lol! It’s tragic but too often true! 😂🎃!
Henley’s Haunted House w/c 99
Jeannette Suhr
Henley visited his first Haunted House.
Eerie music and moans filled the air.
“Glow-in-the-dark” bugs shined a path.
A vampire, drooling blood, sat up in his coffin.
A witch CACKLED and shook her broom.
Henley got goosebumps.
His flashlight reflected zombies in a mirror.
He found a hidden prop room filled with body parts and makeup.
“So this is how the magic is made,” said Henley.
He created a monster costume.
“No one will recognize me.”
He frightened the mummy following behind him.
At the exit were cauldrons filled with goodies.
Henley stuffed his pillowcase and left feeling brave.
Hooray for brave Henley!
Thanks Rose!
Sweet story. Love how Henley was brave enough to discover the magic behind the haunted house. Nice job!
Thanks Nancy!
Henley’s discovery reminds a bit of when the Wizard of Oz was exposed for what he really was. My favorite part was when Henley’s discovery didn’t spoil the night for him and that he even made his own costume.
Thanks Patricia!
Evokes the memories of my first haunted house! I wanted to know how everything was done, it made it more fun and less scary. 🎃😊
Thanks Ingrid!
Disguise Surprise
By Nancy Derey Riley, 98 words
“I have a plan,” said Don. “This year, we’re sneaking out. We’ll get a barn full of goodies. Got your disguises, ur—costumes, right?”
The gang nodded. Minutes later, they tiptoed from their home. Goosebumps prickled their backs. They dashed around, mingling with all the Halloween trick-or-treaters.
“We better get back,” whispered Don.
“But we’re having fun,” whined the others.
“Okay, just one more house.”
They trotted up, smelling gingerbread and peppermint.
A plump, bearded man, dressed in a glow-in-the-dark Hawaiian shirt, opened the door.
“Trick-or—.” The gang stared.
“Donner?”
“Santa?”
The man chuckled.
“Ho-ho-ho, Happy Halloween.”
What an unexpected twist at the end. Well done!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Ha ha ha! Uh-oh, caught in the act! Great job!
What a fun new way to imagine “reindeer games!”
Haha, thanks!
Fun story! Totally unexpected ending!
I love this… it’s SO clever! Good luck!
Thanks so much!
I was totally clueless until 2/3 of the way through the story! Ha ha! Great job using Don for Donner until the end. Love it, Nancy!
Glad I kept you in the dark for the joke! Thanks!
LOL! That was awesome! Can’t wait to read it to my boys before bedtime. Very clever, Nancy! 🙂
Thanks so much. Hope your boys like it!
Lol! Very clever and funny with a wonderful surprise ending!
Thanks for reading!
I guess even Santa celebrates Halloween! My favorite line is, they trotted up, smelling gingerbread and peppermint.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Don and friends didn’t trick Santa, but they sure tricked me – Even though the clues were right there in your story, they all flew right over my head:-)
Haha! Thanks! This one just flew out of my head.
Delicious holiday mash-up! Can’t wait to see this as a picture book! The glow-in-the-dark Hawaiian shirt is everything.
Thanks, I’m beginning to brainstorm on it!
Wow! Christmas is big this Halloween! This was very fun! 🎃
Thanks! That’s my 1st holiday mash up.
Love when Santa shows up in another holiday! And Santa is wearing a super costume, love the glow-in-the- dark Hawaiian shirt! Good luck!
Thanks for reading!
Enough
By David McMullin
96 words
Axton was a bundle of goosebumpy skin, wobbly knees, and chattery teeth.
Would his costume be enough?
He only wondered because he never felt like enough—not good enough, cool enough, popular enough.
To make up for his not-enoughness, he found ways to stand out. His daily outfits were a flamboyant collage of shimmery-shinies, and color-bursts, and other show-offy goodies.
But these daily “costumes” were exhausting!
So today for Halloween—
simply jeans and a t-shirt.
During the costume parade Axton stood out like he was glowing-in-the-dark.
“What are you?” everyone asked.
“I am,” he answered, “…enough.”
Love this message. Nicely done, David.
The last sentence says it all. Well done.
So sweet. Love that last line.
Unique. I enjoyed reading your story. It seems like Axton will stand out no matter what. I’m glad he found his comfort zone, though.
Love the message, David. 🙂 Nicely done.
Awww, love the message. Something everyone should learn very early and some never do. Nicely done!
Powerful story in just 96 words.
Love, love, love this, David!!! Combining the “enough” theme with Halloween is pure genius. Good luck!
Oh! Right in the heart! 🧡
Witches Aren’t Supposed to be Afraid of the Dark
By Ally Piper
Word Count: 99
Beatrice gulped; the telltale tingle of goosebumps was hard to ignore.
She was determined not to miss another Halloween. While her friends were collecting goodies, she was always home — with the lights on — well before sunset. Witches aren’t supposed to be afraid of the dark they teased.
This year was going to be different. Beatrice had a plan. While others wore sensible black shoes, she had ordered a special pair.
Beatrice cringed, closing her eyes before she stepped into the dark. She opened one eye slightly…and sighed. The dark wasn’t so scary anymore thanks to her new glow-in-the-dark shoes.
So much fun! Love the glow-in-the-dark shoes!!
Fun story! I like your MC’s approach to problem-solving and the mood you set with “the telltale tingle of goosebumps.”
I’d love glow-in-the-dark shoes! So glad that Beatrice was able to solve her problem. Good job and good luck!
I was wondering what plan Beatrice had up her sleeve – The glow-in-the-dark shoes were a funny, and clever, resolution to your story.
Even witches have fears to overcome! Good thing there’s Amazon! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR PAUL
Frankenpixie
by Paul Kurtz
100 words
Itsy-bitsy Petey Pixie sighs. “No one notices me—I’m lonesome. Maybe my awesome new costume will help me make friends at the Halloween party.”
Glow-in-the-dark Frankenpixie-Petey clomps into the party on towering stilts.
“Wow!” Fayette Fairy drops her plate of goodies.Petey teeters side-to-side.
Goosebumps spike across Larry Leprechaun’s green skin. “He’ll fall and CRUSH us!”
Everyone stampedes—
“HELP!”
“EEYAHH!”
Petey tilts, and—
KA-SPLASSH
—belly-flops into the punch bowl.
In the emergency-room, Pixie-Doctor Penelope wraps Petey’s sprained nose.
“Super-awesome costume, Petey. Come to our hospital Halloween party?”
“Sure!”
Petey dances all night with Penelope and new friends—
“HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYONE!”
Poor Petey but love how he makes the most of his situation!
Nice, satisfying ending, Paul! So glad Petey’s belly-flop doesn’t prevent him from enjoying Halloween night and making new friends!
Sprained nose, haha! Glad that Petey was fine after his splash in the punch bowl. Clever and cute!
The Pixie-Doctor invitation to Petey took me completely by surprise – What a clever resolution!
I’m always happy for a happy ending! Cute and original! 🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR PAUL
Scaredy-Monster
by Paul Kurtz
100 words
“My job is frightening everyone on Halloween.” Goody Monster trembles. “I’m too scared!”
A fluffy bunny hops by.
“EEEKKK!” Goody shrieks.
Goody zooms into the woods.
“It’s scary here!”
Branches rustle.
“HELP!” Another monster struggles in a glowing-in-the-dark humongous spiderweb.
“I’ll save you!” Goody yanks the monster out, but—
AAGGHH!”
—tumbles into the web.
The other monster tugs Goody free.
“Thanks!” Goody says.
“Thank-you too. I’m Goosebumps.”
“I’m Goody.”
A mouse dozes nearby.
Grinning, Goody and Goosebumps sneak up.
“Boo!” the mouse squeaks.
“EEYOWW!” yell both monsters, hiding together.
Goody laughs. “Being scared is lots more fun with a friend!”
Love the twist with the monsters being scared – and how they bond over it!
Goody and Goosebumps make great scaredy-monsters and friends. Nice twist having a fluffy bunny scare Goody 🙂
Very cute. Goody and Goosebump are kindred spirits, LOL! Good job!
I never expected that the mouse would scare Goody and Goosebumps – Nice surprise ending!
Goody Goosebumps go together like goody goody gumdrops! Glad the friends found each other.🎃
ENTRY POSTED FOR DONNA
Halloween’s the Worst!
by Donna Kurtz
92 words
“Halloween—it’s the worst!” I groan, trying to hide.
“Don’t be scared,” calls a witch from her broom. “Come and ride!”
Skimming treetops and clouds, we zoom into the night,
Where the chilly fall breeze gives me goosebumps that bite!
We play tag with two werewolves and hide-and-ghost-seek,
Then I’m tickled by zombies and laugh till I’m weak!
We find candy-corn fields fenced by chocolate bars,
And catch caramel glow-in-the-dark shooting stars.
Munching lots of great goodies, we share all the rest—
“Like I said at the start, Halloween—it’s the BEST!”
Very clever – I love the change of heart! (and also wouldn’t mind a candy-corn field fenced by chocolate! 😉
How fun! Chasing werewolves and hide-and-ghost-seek sound awesome. I would head for the fences. 😀 Very nice details.
My favorites: “goosebumps that bite!” and “hide-and-ghost-seek,” not to mention, “candy-corn fields fenced by chocolate bars!!!” What a wonderful Halloween poem with a change-of-heart twist at the end, Donna!
Love the hide-and-ghost-seek and goosebumps that bite. Very imaginative. Love the change of heart at the end. Good job!
Donna, as always yours is a fun, clever story! Fantastic job!!
Your story made me feel like I was taking a magical ride through Candyland. I like how the ending line echoed back to the start of the story.
I love the wordplay, the imagery and the 180 twist at the end! 🎃🧡
ENTRY POSTED FOR DONNA
Bunny’s Bored!
by Donna Kurtz
98 words
“Won’t Easter ever come?” sighs Bunny. “I’m bored.”
He checks his calendar.
“Yay! Tonight’s Halloween—I’ll hide yummy glow-in-the-dark goodies.”
Hopping through creepy woods, Bunny hears branches shake.
“What’s that?” Goosebumps spike up his back.
“ROARR!” Out jumps Monster.
“Eee-yoww!” Bunny dashes.
“Wait!” Laughing, Monster removes his mask.
“Santa?”
“I got bored waiting for Christmas.”
The ground trembles—
Killer-Robot clanks from the dark.
“Great costume!” cheer Bunny and Santa.
Red beams shoot from Killer-Robot’s eyes—
ZAAPPP!
Bushes explode into flames.
“Eee-yahh—he’s real!” Bunny and Santa skedaddle.
Killer-Robot’s head slides off.
“Tee-hee-hee!” Ms. Claus grins—
“HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYONE!”
Love the combination of 3 holidays and the surprise ending! (go Mrs. Claus!)
Cute! I love that you brought the Easter bunny in on the fun. Fun story. Good luck!
Love that the Robot is really Ms Claus. Nice ending that I didn’t see coming!
Haha! Now that’s a surprise ending! “Sweet” Mrs Claus spooks them all–quite a Halloween trick!
Hahaha, go Ms. Claus! Love the twist at the end and the blending of 3 holidays. Good luck!
LOL – Totally unexpected ending, and it was PERFECT:-)
Wow, a villainous Mrs. Claus! THAT’s a surprise ending! 😂🎃
The Goblin Market
99 words
By Aly Kenna
Open one night a year on All Hallows Eve
the glow-in-the-dark market takes shape.
Once you’re inside, it’s too late to leave.
So, for Stanley there was no escape.
All out of tricks and a bag full of candy,
Stanley bartered his goodies away –
Got some eyes from a zombie who had a pair handy
and a bone from a werewolf at play.
Then he got a goosebump when the clock struck midnight,
for the market would soon disappear.
By the first ray of light, Stanley was all out of fight
tucked in bed – goblins sleep for a year.
That’s so cool!
Nice! Glad Stanley was back in his bed by the end. Nicely done!
What a creepy place, even if it is open only for one night a year. My favorite was this one: “Once you’re inside, it’s too late to leave.”
I can imagine all kinds of cool illustrations for this one! 🎃
WILFRED THE WIZARD
93 words
Wilfred the wizard was greedy and mean,
He once cast a spell that would wreck Halloween.
“When children go tricking and treating,” he said,
“Their goodies will land in my cauldron instead!”
The potion turned purple, it fizzled and popped,
It glowed-in-the-dark and it bubbled then…
STOPPED!
A shadowy vision appeared in the air,
Of children who CARE and who GIGGLE and SHARE.
Wilfred got goosebumps, “Oh, horrible sight!”
His magic was broken by kindness and light.
So every October, you know what to do,
Have lots of fun, but be generous too!
That’s so weird. I thought I commented on your story and the comment isn’t there now. Anyway, I like it! Good luck!
Ooh that’s strange! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment again. 🙂
Fun, rhyming story with a lovely message and perfect meter! Delightful.
Thanks so much. 🙂
Wilfred is the Halloween Grinch! Nice meter and rhyme. Great job!
Love this! Lots of fun.
You seamlessly changed the tone of your story from spooky and scary to a story with a valuable message. I thought that was so well done without being preachy.
It’s like the Grinch who stole… Halloween and all in 100 words! Impressive! 🧡🎃🧡
So the witch took a break! Good for her and especially for the kids. Good Luck!
I like that it’s a wizard named Wilfred and that kindness broke the spell! Good luck!